Comments received on poems by Bellbell_060609

Look for the light
rhmn_7 said:

I real like your poem with a hopeful ending!

October 22nd, 2023 09:38

Look for the light
Lorenz said:

Light and darkness are inseparable.
You need to find a balance to travel from one to other with the power of your words.

October 22nd, 2023 08:06

Look for the light
Thomas W Case said:

Great use of rhyme. I like that your poem is filled with hope.

October 22nd, 2023 07:51

This Chaotic World
lenore_inNeverland said:

Beautiful wording Bell! Especially \"Your laughter, like music, dances in the air,

It\'s melody of joy that washes away despair.\" I love it!✨

September 4th, 2023 23:04

This Chaotic World
orchidee said:

Good write B.

September 4th, 2023 10:54

Please come back
lenore_inNeverland said:

Hi Bellbell...the poem and your story reminded me of my Grandpa who was probably the only person who understood me and well- he lives in the stars now..Keep it up Bells! I loved it

September 4th, 2023 07:35

My time has come
Bobby O said:

That is really great. Written like you’ve been at it for 20 years. Excellent phrasing nice chyme scheme some dramatic tension and an ending one could take as hope for next. I really liked hit. Hope you follow the link I offered as it covers how I think about relationships. You Go Girl!!

August 18th, 2023 11:09

My time has come
LIZ said:

I hope you stay! F*%$# everyone else. Yes, easier said than done, but trust me, the world wouldn\'t be the same without you! There\'s only one of you!

August 17th, 2023 11:28

My time has come
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August 17th, 2023 11:13

I\'m okay
hollyv88 said:

I really relate to this poem at this moment in my life!

August 9th, 2023 13:38

I\'m okay
peto said:

Excellent rhyme and content
Keep writing
You have an obvious talent for it
Look forward to reading more from you

August 9th, 2023 12:57

Forgotten Farewell
Neville said:

One day your prince will come .. don’t rush into anything but keep writing at all costs .. I think you may have a gift … All good things your new literary friend, Neville 😎👍

August 9th, 2023 11:46

I\'m okay
vividvoid14 said:

hey, really cool poem i feel like it really captures the true meaning of depression and anxiety. please keep up the good work and feel better

August 9th, 2023 11:45