I don't understand the point in living a long life
Let's be honest most poeples end with a knife
I mean at my age everyone is just poping pills
Just so that they can feel the thrill
Loads of people are to scared to end it
So they cut themselves bit by bit
Your parents say that therapy will fix you
But let's be honest we all know it's not true
It's just so that they can stall for time
But we're just waiting for the clock to chime
No one wants to leave their friends behind
Coz all this time they've been so kind
The quicker its done
The quicker people can move on
To be honest I don't think I would even be missed
All the memories of me wil be dismissed
If I asked I would probably be assisted
It would be like I never existed
So why do I always make the decission to stay
Like if I try hard enough I will be okay
So maybe I should give in
And let them all win
I will leave with a smile on my face
Hopefully I will go to a better place.
- Author: Bellbell (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 17th, 2023 11:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Contemplating Suicde.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 11
Comments3
Relatable....
I hope you stay! F*%$# everyone else. Yes, easier said than done, but trust me, the world wouldn't be the same without you! There's only one of you!
That is really great. Written like you’ve been at it for 20 years. Excellent phrasing nice chyme scheme some dramatic tension and an ending one could take as hope for next. I really liked hit. Hope you follow the link I offered as it covers how I think about relationships. You Go Girl!!
Thank you so much. To be hones I wasn't sure if I was any good. I just wanted to put my feelings out there.
Keep on keeping on. If you like Hip Hop I also posted a piece that speaks to how Jazz and Hip Hop are intertwined. It’s actually a video presentation
THELONIOUS REBORN AS THE
Dee Oh Double G
I’d be honored if you were to give it a look.
Many many props yo you
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