Comments received on poems by The Fife Wanderer
My Way
Doggerel Dave said:
Orright, I promise not to be rude....go for it...!
December 21st, 2024 21:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Orright, I promise not to be rude....go for it...!
December 21st, 2024 21:51
My Way
TobaniNataiella said:
Very honest poem, everyone writes in a different way, myself just pen, paper and what ever comes out, comes out. There are people who will say what is poetry and what is not, and that is good and that is not, just ignore it. They are your writings, feelings, thoughts etc and you are happy with them, that is enough. Also a lot people do use writing as a way of releasing the pressure of the mind, it can be a life saver, keep writing.
December 21st, 2024 10:54
TobaniNataiella said:
Very honest poem, everyone writes in a different way, myself just pen, paper and what ever comes out, comes out. There are people who will say what is poetry and what is not, and that is good and that is not, just ignore it. They are your writings, feelings, thoughts etc and you are happy with them, that is enough. Also a lot people do use writing as a way of releasing the pressure of the mind, it can be a life saver, keep writing.
December 21st, 2024 10:54
My Way
Melancholic~Onion said:
We all have doubts about our writing, especially when you re-read it. I’m impressed with the rhyming and how you kept it along, and my head would also explode if i didn’t write.
December 21st, 2024 10:34
Melancholic~Onion said:
We all have doubts about our writing, especially when you re-read it. I’m impressed with the rhyming and how you kept it along, and my head would also explode if i didn’t write.
December 21st, 2024 10:34
The Tree Of Life
arqios said:
Now there’s a thought always nascent and ever present: we breathe in trees and they breathe us in, what symbiosis, what organic unity. And yet… here we all are, not so much them but 8B of us… self strangulation perhaps?
December 19th, 2024 01:27
arqios said:
Now there’s a thought always nascent and ever present: we breathe in trees and they breathe us in, what symbiosis, what organic unity. And yet… here we all are, not so much them but 8B of us… self strangulation perhaps?
December 19th, 2024 01:27
The Tree Of Life
TobaniNataiella said:
I really like this, we humans and nature are so interconnected and we need each other, but sadly humans are increasingly destroying nature, which without the beauty of, we cannot survive. A really good read, Thank you
December 18th, 2024 10:33
TobaniNataiella said:
I really like this, we humans and nature are so interconnected and we need each other, but sadly humans are increasingly destroying nature, which without the beauty of, we cannot survive. A really good read, Thank you
December 18th, 2024 10:33
The Tree Of Life
Cassie58 said:
My finger prints and your tree rings
provide our identity and uniqueness
A much enjoyed nature write. I have always had an affinity with trees. A lovely composition.
December 18th, 2024 10:25
Cassie58 said:
My finger prints and your tree rings
provide our identity and uniqueness
A much enjoyed nature write. I have always had an affinity with trees. A lovely composition.
December 18th, 2024 10:25
Guilty
TobaniNataiella said:
We are all probably guilty as charged and should follow advice given at the end, very enjoyable read, thank you
December 17th, 2024 16:39
TobaniNataiella said:
We are all probably guilty as charged and should follow advice given at the end, very enjoyable read, thank you
December 17th, 2024 16:39
Scottish Sendoff
Kevin Hulme said:
Beautiful Words for a send-off .
Nice One.
December 16th, 2024 19:42
Kevin Hulme said:
Beautiful Words for a send-off .
Nice One.
December 16th, 2024 19:42
Scottish Sendoff
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written tribute to some one, full of friendship, compassion and love, good read
December 16th, 2024 03:52
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written tribute to some one, full of friendship, compassion and love, good read
December 16th, 2024 03:52
Let Go
2781 said:
Beloved, think it not strange concerning the fiery trial which is to try you, as if some strange thing happen to you.
December 4th, 2023 06:42
2781 said:
Beloved, think it not strange concerning the fiery trial which is to try you, as if some strange thing happen to you.
December 4th, 2023 06:42
My Thoughts
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing this short but stirring little soliloquy. I love your pen name... I read and studied Greek pastoral poetry back in the day, so any hint of a flute, syrinx, tin whistle, ocarina, pan pipe, or fife brings back those days of discovery.
November 18th, 2023 19:24
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing this short but stirring little soliloquy. I love your pen name... I read and studied Greek pastoral poetry back in the day, so any hint of a flute, syrinx, tin whistle, ocarina, pan pipe, or fife brings back those days of discovery.
November 18th, 2023 19:24
Tired
Parisab said:
Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be with sunflowers …
November 17th, 2023 22:26
Parisab said:
Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be with sunflowers …
November 17th, 2023 22:26
mental illness
Ma5on said:
Competed 4 tasks; awesome start! Do that everyday for a week and build!
M
November 6th, 2023 14:58
Ma5on said:
Competed 4 tasks; awesome start! Do that everyday for a week and build!
M
November 6th, 2023 14:58
Oswald Garden
The Fife Wanderer said:
This is a poem I wrote about my local park how it was many many years ago, sadly over the last 30 years it has become nothing more than a unused green space. We formed the development group in 2022 to bring the park back to its former glory and are now well on the way to doing so.
Thank you for your kind comments, I will most certainty have a read of your work 🙏
October 30th, 2023 02:10
The Fife Wanderer said:
This is a poem I wrote about my local park how it was many many years ago, sadly over the last 30 years it has become nothing more than a unused green space. We formed the development group in 2022 to bring the park back to its former glory and are now well on the way to doing so.
Thank you for your kind comments, I will most certainty have a read of your work 🙏
October 30th, 2023 02:10
Oswald Garden
Parisab said:
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully details…You may enjoy visiting my poem, Summer Feast…
October 30th, 2023 00:11
Parisab said:
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully details…You may enjoy visiting my poem, Summer Feast…
October 30th, 2023 00:11
Oswald Garden
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I think nature is God\'s candy.
October 23rd, 2023 00:39
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I think nature is God\'s candy.
October 23rd, 2023 00:39
Adoption
Bobby O said:
A beautiful commemoration in the great tribute for the ages
October 22nd, 2023 22:27
Bobby O said:
A beautiful commemoration in the great tribute for the ages
October 22nd, 2023 22:27
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