Comments received on poems by The Fife Wanderer
Let Go
2781 said:
Beloved, think it not strange concerning the fiery trial which is to try you, as if some strange thing happen to you.
December 4th, 2023 06:42
2781 said:
Beloved, think it not strange concerning the fiery trial which is to try you, as if some strange thing happen to you.
December 4th, 2023 06:42
My Thoughts
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing this short but stirring little soliloquy. I love your pen name... I read and studied Greek pastoral poetry back in the day, so any hint of a flute, syrinx, tin whistle, ocarina, pan pipe, or fife brings back those days of discovery.
November 18th, 2023 19:24
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing this short but stirring little soliloquy. I love your pen name... I read and studied Greek pastoral poetry back in the day, so any hint of a flute, syrinx, tin whistle, ocarina, pan pipe, or fife brings back those days of discovery.
November 18th, 2023 19:24
Tired
Parisab said:
Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be with sunflowers …
November 17th, 2023 22:26
Parisab said:
Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be with sunflowers …
November 17th, 2023 22:26
mental illness
Ma5on said:
Competed 4 tasks; awesome start! Do that everyday for a week and build!
M
November 6th, 2023 14:58
Ma5on said:
Competed 4 tasks; awesome start! Do that everyday for a week and build!
M
November 6th, 2023 14:58
Oswald Garden
The Fife Wanderer said:
This is a poem I wrote about my local park how it was many many years ago, sadly over the last 30 years it has become nothing more than a unused green space. We formed the development group in 2022 to bring the park back to its former glory and are now well on the way to doing so.
Thank you for your kind comments, I will most certainty have a read of your work 🙏
October 30th, 2023 02:10
The Fife Wanderer said:
This is a poem I wrote about my local park how it was many many years ago, sadly over the last 30 years it has become nothing more than a unused green space. We formed the development group in 2022 to bring the park back to its former glory and are now well on the way to doing so.
Thank you for your kind comments, I will most certainty have a read of your work 🙏
October 30th, 2023 02:10
Oswald Garden
Parisab said:
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully details…You may enjoy visiting my poem, Summer Feast…
October 30th, 2023 00:11
Parisab said:
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully details…You may enjoy visiting my poem, Summer Feast…
October 30th, 2023 00:11
Oswald Garden
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I think nature is God\'s candy.
October 23rd, 2023 00:39
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I think nature is God\'s candy.
October 23rd, 2023 00:39
Adoption
Bobby O said:
A beautiful commemoration in the great tribute for the ages
October 22nd, 2023 22:27
Bobby O said:
A beautiful commemoration in the great tribute for the ages
October 22nd, 2023 22:27
Time of Death
Arastu Goyal said:
I enjoyed reading this, very vivid image and a very clever way to end. Enjoyed it -AG
October 14th, 2023 09:09
Arastu Goyal said:
I enjoyed reading this, very vivid image and a very clever way to end. Enjoyed it -AG
October 14th, 2023 09:09
You, Me, Everyone
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then sound advice for all. Wonderful!
September 22nd, 2023 14:33
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then sound advice for all. Wonderful!
September 22nd, 2023 14:33
You, Me, Everyone
Teddy.15 said:
Yes it is ........ such a lovely message 💓
September 21st, 2023 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
Yes it is ........ such a lovely message 💓
September 21st, 2023 16:46
Eagle Eye
Teddy.15 said:
Well I find the Eagle to be a magnificent bird and your poem is beautiful. 💖
September 21st, 2023 01:23
Teddy.15 said:
Well I find the Eagle to be a magnificent bird and your poem is beautiful. 💖
September 21st, 2023 01:23
Alcohol Free
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, so easy to lose control
pints with friends
turning to a few more at home
to keep that warm feeling alive
then its gets a hold on people
they stay home, drink alone
now alcohol is anchor to all that
cold and barren in their lives..
such a scary, stealthy poison
wouldn\'t wish it on my worst enemy
but it seems like you stopped early
before it got too out of control
you must be proud
such a hard thing to achieve,
wish you the best!
thanks for sharing dear poet
September 8th, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, so easy to lose control
pints with friends
turning to a few more at home
to keep that warm feeling alive
then its gets a hold on people
they stay home, drink alone
now alcohol is anchor to all that
cold and barren in their lives..
such a scary, stealthy poison
wouldn\'t wish it on my worst enemy
but it seems like you stopped early
before it got too out of control
you must be proud
such a hard thing to achieve,
wish you the best!
thanks for sharing dear poet
September 8th, 2023 05:09
Scotch Mist
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk unquestioningly. Malt, drops of clear water if you must, no ice.
September 7th, 2023 04:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk unquestioningly. Malt, drops of clear water if you must, no ice.
September 7th, 2023 04:53
When A Wiz A Lad
Doggerel Dave said:
A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.. Cheers.
September 6th, 2023 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.. Cheers.
September 6th, 2023 17:42
Sweet 16
L. B. Mek said:
\'16 years and growing old\'
this might just be the saddest line
I have read all year..
most, are striving to ink:
61 and wishing, young!
(thanks for sharing these thought provoking words)
September 4th, 2023 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'16 years and growing old\'
this might just be the saddest line
I have read all year..
most, are striving to ink:
61 and wishing, young!
(thanks for sharing these thought provoking words)
September 4th, 2023 05:53
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