Comments received on poems by The Fife Wanderer



70’s Kid
Parisab said:

Sweet and free dialect, like a good childhood memory

February 2nd, 2024 01:14

Let Go
2781 said:

Beloved, think it not strange concerning the fiery trial which is to try you, as if some strange thing happen to you.

December 4th, 2023 06:42

My Thoughts
jarcher54 said:

I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing this short but stirring little soliloquy. I love your pen name... I read and studied Greek pastoral poetry back in the day, so any hint of a flute, syrinx, tin whistle, ocarina, pan pipe, or fife brings back those days of discovery.


November 18th, 2023 19:24

Tired
Parisab said:

Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be with sunflowers …

November 17th, 2023 22:26

Tired
Lil said:

Ok ok I just love this.

November 13th, 2023 15:05

mental illness
Ma5on said:

Competed 4 tasks; awesome start! Do that everyday for a week and build!

M

November 6th, 2023 14:58

Day ‘N’ Night
Positive Girl said:

I can relate.

November 4th, 2023 16:16

Day ‘N’ Night
2781 said:

From one shite-stir to another,
Enjoy.

November 4th, 2023 07:59

Lost Memories
Thomas W Case said:

Great advice. Very well done.

November 3rd, 2023 09:06

Eagle Eye
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 30th, 2023 17:04

Oswald Garden
The Fife Wanderer said:

This is a poem I wrote about my local park how it was many many years ago, sadly over the last 30 years it has become nothing more than a unused green space. We formed the development group in 2022 to bring the park back to its former glory and are now well on the way to doing so.

Thank you for your kind comments, I will most certainty have a read of your work 🙏

October 30th, 2023 02:10

Oswald Garden
Parisab said:

intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully details…You may enjoy visiting my poem, Summer Feast…

October 30th, 2023 00:11

Trick or Treat
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

October 28th, 2023 18:38

Trick or Treat
Parisab said:

Charming and stylistic poem…

October 28th, 2023 17:21

Gone Fishing
Thomas W Case said:

Good stuff.

October 23rd, 2023 13:38

Oswald Garden
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. I think nature is God\'s candy.

October 23rd, 2023 00:39

Adoption
Bobby O said:

A beautiful commemoration in the great tribute for the ages

October 22nd, 2023 22:27

Scotch Mist
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 22nd, 2023 13:37

Time of Death
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful and dark. Great job.

October 15th, 2023 12:27

You, Me, Everyone
Pop64 said:

Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then sound advice for all. Wonderful!

September 22nd, 2023 14:33

You, Me, Everyone
Teddy.15 said:

Yes it is ........ such a lovely message 💓

September 21st, 2023 16:46

You, Me, Everyone
David Wakeling said:

Nice guys finish last

September 21st, 2023 16:34

Eagle Eye
Teddy.15 said:

Well I find the Eagle to be a magnificent bird and your poem is beautiful. 💖

September 21st, 2023 01:23

Alcohol Free
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, so easy to lose control
pints with friends
turning to a few more at home
to keep that warm feeling alive
then its gets a hold on people
they stay home, drink alone
now alcohol is anchor to all that
cold and barren in their lives..
such a scary, stealthy poison
wouldn\'t wish it on my worst enemy
but it seems like you stopped early
before it got too out of control
you must be proud
such a hard thing to achieve,
wish you the best!
thanks for sharing dear poet

September 8th, 2023 05:09

Scotch Mist
Doggerel Dave said:

Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk unquestioningly. Malt, drops of clear water if you must, no ice.

September 7th, 2023 04:53

When A Wiz A Lad
Doggerel Dave said:

A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.. Cheers.

September 6th, 2023 17:42

Scotch Mist
2781 said:

I don\'t blame you.

September 6th, 2023 01:36

Sweet 16
L. B. Mek said:

\'16 years and growing old\'
this might just be the saddest line
I have read all year..
most, are striving to ink:
61 and wishing, young!
(thanks for sharing these thought provoking words)

September 4th, 2023 05:53

When A Wiz A Lad
Bobby O said:

Authentic mastery of vernacular.

September 2nd, 2023 07:27

When A Wiz A Lad
2781 said:

At 16 it\'s all fun and games.

Enjoyed the read.

September 2nd, 2023 04:28

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