Comments received on poems by The Fife Wanderer
You, Me, Everyone
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then sound advice for all. Wonderful!
September 22nd, 2023 14:33
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then sound advice for all. Wonderful!
September 22nd, 2023 14:33
You, Me, Everyone
Teddy.15 said:
Yes it is ........ such a lovely message 💓
September 21st, 2023 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
Yes it is ........ such a lovely message 💓
September 21st, 2023 16:46
Eagle Eye
Teddy.15 said:
Well I find the Eagle to be a magnificent bird and your poem is beautiful. 💖
September 21st, 2023 01:23
Teddy.15 said:
Well I find the Eagle to be a magnificent bird and your poem is beautiful. 💖
September 21st, 2023 01:23
Alcohol Free
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, so easy to lose control
pints with friends
turning to a few more at home
to keep that warm feeling alive
then its gets a hold on people
they stay home, drink alone
now alcohol is anchor to all that
cold and barren in their lives..
such a scary, stealthy poison
wouldn\'t wish it on my worst enemy
but it seems like you stopped early
before it got too out of control
you must be proud
such a hard thing to achieve,
wish you the best!
thanks for sharing dear poet
September 8th, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, so easy to lose control
pints with friends
turning to a few more at home
to keep that warm feeling alive
then its gets a hold on people
they stay home, drink alone
now alcohol is anchor to all that
cold and barren in their lives..
such a scary, stealthy poison
wouldn\'t wish it on my worst enemy
but it seems like you stopped early
before it got too out of control
you must be proud
such a hard thing to achieve,
wish you the best!
thanks for sharing dear poet
September 8th, 2023 05:09
Scotch Mist
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk unquestioningly. Malt, drops of clear water if you must, no ice.
September 7th, 2023 04:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk unquestioningly. Malt, drops of clear water if you must, no ice.
September 7th, 2023 04:53
When A Wiz A Lad
Doggerel Dave said:
A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.. Cheers.
September 6th, 2023 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.. Cheers.
September 6th, 2023 17:42
Sweet 16
L. B. Mek said:
\'16 years and growing old\'
this might just be the saddest line
I have read all year..
most, are striving to ink:
61 and wishing, young!
(thanks for sharing these thought provoking words)
September 4th, 2023 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'16 years and growing old\'
this might just be the saddest line
I have read all year..
most, are striving to ink:
61 and wishing, young!
(thanks for sharing these thought provoking words)
September 4th, 2023 05:53
When A Wiz A Lad
2781 said:
At 16 it\'s all fun and games.
Enjoyed the read.
September 2nd, 2023 04:28
2781 said:
At 16 it\'s all fun and games.
Enjoyed the read.
September 2nd, 2023 04:28
Fall
The Fife Wanderer said:
My favourite time of the year autumn is a season full of colour and creativity.
September 1st, 2023 16:54
The Fife Wanderer said:
My favourite time of the year autumn is a season full of colour and creativity.
September 1st, 2023 16:54
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