Comments received on poems by carpe4diem
1990 ford laser
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and one might say tragic. The venting may help some but won\'t bring back the car. This poem was nicely written and expressed the rage, that you wished you could have expressed at the time. The most positive thing is that you survived and just maybe if you had that car an even worse accident could have occurred Great write keep it up.
August 19th, 2024 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and one might say tragic. The venting may help some but won\'t bring back the car. This poem was nicely written and expressed the rage, that you wished you could have expressed at the time. The most positive thing is that you survived and just maybe if you had that car an even worse accident could have occurred Great write keep it up.
August 19th, 2024 08:00
tell your family i said hi
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and horrific a dark read. Well expressed the emotion bleeds.
August 14th, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and horrific a dark read. Well expressed the emotion bleeds.
August 14th, 2024 09:02
i wish i could write her a poem
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like you did write her a poem and a nice one too. Very nice.
August 4th, 2024 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like you did write her a poem and a nice one too. Very nice.
August 4th, 2024 09:46
ask a flight attendant
Doggerel Dave said:
A view from the trenches - feels authentic and I\'ve never much thought about it before (too busy admiring your, uh, grace I suppose...š).
Thanks for your revelatory insights.
February 27th, 2024 04:43
Doggerel Dave said:
A view from the trenches - feels authentic and I\'ve never much thought about it before (too busy admiring your, uh, grace I suppose...š).
Thanks for your revelatory insights.
February 27th, 2024 04:43
ask a flight attendant
Cassie58 said:
There is so much positive in your lines stemming from sadness. Having a job you love can open all sorts of avenues.The outlook looks good. I enjoyed reading you this morning.
February 27th, 2024 03:58
Cassie58 said:
There is so much positive in your lines stemming from sadness. Having a job you love can open all sorts of avenues.The outlook looks good. I enjoyed reading you this morning.
February 27th, 2024 03:58
Calculations
orchidee said:
Now look here, I spent so much time \'calculating\', finding out, what carpe diem meant, that by the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize - it was night time! lol.
August 20th, 2023 09:21
orchidee said:
Now look here, I spent so much time \'calculating\', finding out, what carpe diem meant, that by the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize - it was night time! lol.
August 20th, 2023 09:21
Calculations
2781 said:
For this shall everyone that is godly pray unto thee in a time when thou may be found; surely in the floods of great waters they shall not come nigh unto you.
August 20th, 2023 07:50
2781 said:
For this shall everyone that is godly pray unto thee in a time when thou may be found; surely in the floods of great waters they shall not come nigh unto you.
August 20th, 2023 07:50
The Universe
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels to me as if you have erected a straw man argument there.
Apologies in advance for my pedantry.
Letās try to define terms so that I might better understand you.
Universe ā The suns planets galaxies which are everywhere and apparently originated with the big bang.
Science (in this instance astronomy) studies this and all other physical phenomena etc.
If you donāt like the āpatriarchal, economy where we have no purpose but to educate, work and repopulateā, then find purpose in trying to change it for the better.
It maybe we have no purpose at all ā āweāre here because weāre hereā
So just avoid vampires and mermaids and get out and enjoy (or improve) your life if you can.
August 19th, 2023 20:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels to me as if you have erected a straw man argument there.
Apologies in advance for my pedantry.
Letās try to define terms so that I might better understand you.
Universe ā The suns planets galaxies which are everywhere and apparently originated with the big bang.
Science (in this instance astronomy) studies this and all other physical phenomena etc.
If you donāt like the āpatriarchal, economy where we have no purpose but to educate, work and repopulateā, then find purpose in trying to change it for the better.
It maybe we have no purpose at all ā āweāre here because weāre hereā
So just avoid vampires and mermaids and get out and enjoy (or improve) your life if you can.
August 19th, 2023 20:50
The Universe
jarcher54 said:
I am not religious, but respecting and yes embracing the faith of others is a much-forgotten trait. It is easy to get frustrated by and end up dismissing the inner lives of others. None of us knows for sure, but we have to make sense of it for ourselves. Peace to you brother!
August 19th, 2023 09:54
jarcher54 said:
I am not religious, but respecting and yes embracing the faith of others is a much-forgotten trait. It is easy to get frustrated by and end up dismissing the inner lives of others. None of us knows for sure, but we have to make sense of it for ourselves. Peace to you brother!
August 19th, 2023 09:54
i want to be beautiful
2781 said:
Who is as the wise man? and who knows the interpretation of a thing? a person\'s wisdom makes their face to shine, and the boldness of their face shall be changed.
August 17th, 2023 07:39
2781 said:
Who is as the wise man? and who knows the interpretation of a thing? a person\'s wisdom makes their face to shine, and the boldness of their face shall be changed.
August 17th, 2023 07:39
