Comments received on poems by Steve Goldenfort
The River Inside
Lorenz said:
Here\'s a powerful text that stands out from the surrounding banality !
September 23rd, 2024 13:11
Lorenz said:
Here\'s a powerful text that stands out from the surrounding banality !
September 23rd, 2024 13:11
The Anticringe
Tony36 said:
Excellent write, I could see this being a song
September 16th, 2024 06:20
Tony36 said:
Excellent write, I could see this being a song
September 16th, 2024 06:20
The Anticringe
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang dude! The philosopher has returned to disseminate his gems of sophical heights, and if you will listen obediently, hands folded, you might end up possibly wiser in the end. Lovely and beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang dude! The philosopher has returned to disseminate his gems of sophical heights, and if you will listen obediently, hands folded, you might end up possibly wiser in the end. Lovely and beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 19:27
Love Crashes
Cheeky Missy said:
The experts of whatever wisely forebade us dabbling in distance, but some of us couldn\'t resist. It\'s too enchanting to play with fire, even though you do become badly burned as a result. How beautifully you\'ve rendered this relationship whose time on the rocks was painful but excellently illustrated, proving why it must go thus. Superbly written with an awesome conclusion, I couldn\'t but love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 13th, 2024 14:41
Cheeky Missy said:
The experts of whatever wisely forebade us dabbling in distance, but some of us couldn\'t resist. It\'s too enchanting to play with fire, even though you do become badly burned as a result. How beautifully you\'ve rendered this relationship whose time on the rocks was painful but excellently illustrated, proving why it must go thus. Superbly written with an awesome conclusion, I couldn\'t but love it. Thank you for sharing.
September 13th, 2024 14:41
Soul Glow
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. Pulling off the rare feat of daring to read this aloud as is the proper way with poetry, it\'s a delightful piece charmingly rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. Pulling off the rare feat of daring to read this aloud as is the proper way with poetry, it\'s a delightful piece charmingly rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:38
Affirmative Lament
sorenbarrett said:
I love the first stanza to this poem. Much wisdom is contained in the poem in general. A very enlightening read.
September 5th, 2024 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love the first stanza to this poem. Much wisdom is contained in the poem in general. A very enlightening read.
September 5th, 2024 06:24
Affirmative Lament
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorry, took me too long to realize this was the piece you told me to read. Having finally accomplished that, betwixt Star Trek and I dunno what I\'m mulling what to answer, left in conclusion with the sense you\'ve mixed me up dreadfully, intending I should comprehend, whiles I\'m not lost, but rather, mixed up. Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed it.
September 4th, 2024 19:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorry, took me too long to realize this was the piece you told me to read. Having finally accomplished that, betwixt Star Trek and I dunno what I\'m mulling what to answer, left in conclusion with the sense you\'ve mixed me up dreadfully, intending I should comprehend, whiles I\'m not lost, but rather, mixed up. Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed it.
September 4th, 2024 19:13
Big Wheel
MR.apocalypse said:
not only do i love your rhyming scheme but i love your message i think my favorite line is Knowing deep and truly, the rules to this game.
Accepting there’s darkness without looking for blame.
very insightful
September 3rd, 2024 20:45
MR.apocalypse said:
not only do i love your rhyming scheme but i love your message i think my favorite line is Knowing deep and truly, the rules to this game.
Accepting there’s darkness without looking for blame.
very insightful
September 3rd, 2024 20:45
Big Wheel
Cheeky Missy said:
Argh! You made me laugh too loudly in concluding. Awesome! I love it! The seeming couplet stanzas give it a palatable appeal and the message--oh!
September 3rd, 2024 19:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Argh! You made me laugh too loudly in concluding. Awesome! I love it! The seeming couplet stanzas give it a palatable appeal and the message--oh!
September 3rd, 2024 19:18
Mission
Cheeky Missy said:
Are we having fun yet? Mission Impossible has just left for the stars, and assures humanity they\'ll be in perfect harmony now they\'re no longer on terra firma from whence we came.
August 30th, 2024 10:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Are we having fun yet? Mission Impossible has just left for the stars, and assures humanity they\'ll be in perfect harmony now they\'re no longer on terra firma from whence we came.
August 30th, 2024 10:05
Big Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha you\'re too fun! This was enjoyable to read whilst giving me so much to chew on methinks my mouth is full. Thank you very much!
August 29th, 2024 20:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha you\'re too fun! This was enjoyable to read whilst giving me so much to chew on methinks my mouth is full. Thank you very much!
August 29th, 2024 20:14
Synchronic
Cheeky Missy said:
Having finished, I\'m left mulling what on earth to reply. I read it soto voce since poems are supposed to be read aloud, but I\'m on the clock presently. Much to contemplate or else naught left to add, leave me thinking I\'ll need to return later to mull it again.
Thank you for sharing.
August 25th, 2024 20:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Having finished, I\'m left mulling what on earth to reply. I read it soto voce since poems are supposed to be read aloud, but I\'m on the clock presently. Much to contemplate or else naught left to add, leave me thinking I\'ll need to return later to mull it again.
Thank you for sharing.
August 25th, 2024 20:03
Finding Middle
Cassie58 said:
Finding the middle ground is surely the way to peace? That’s where my mind drifted after reading you. Nice brevity. Thought provoking.
August 25th, 2024 01:11
Cassie58 said:
Finding the middle ground is surely the way to peace? That’s where my mind drifted after reading you. Nice brevity. Thought provoking.
August 25th, 2024 01:11
Progression
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice and while it is well constructed I have no idea what it is about.,I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 5th, 2023 16:58
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice and while it is well constructed I have no idea what it is about.,I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 5th, 2023 16:58
