Could cigarettes forget me?
Neville said:


this little gem has more going for it than I have time left to explain .. very deep and elsewise enjoyable .. Neville

November 18th, 2023 01:11

eye bug / I, bug
Neville said:


reads like a Dali but feels like a kidney punch delivered while trying to focus .. and in my book, that makes for good reading ..
write on amysliterature .. Neville

November 18th, 2023 01:05

I am asking for it
peto said:

Keep sharing your literature Amy
I for one enjoy reading it

September 28th, 2023 14:22

one small thing a vulcano
Soman Ragavan said:

Posted on “A small thing a volcano.”
In your profile you say “My English teacher told me she liked my poetry but she hates me secretly.”
It has been said “Love and cough cannot be hid.” To that we can add “hatred.” Indeed, our body language is beyond our control. It betrays the deep thoughts going on in our mind. When the body language contradicts our words, it is the body language that should be believed. It is known that body language cannot lie. Through your teacher’s body language you detected that she hates you. Thus, words can say all they want : body language says the truth that one tries to hide behind the words. Look for the small twitches, involuntary movements, the side glances, the eyes flicking about nervously, hands fidgeting, stammering, etc. The speaker will try to hide their real thoughts, but this is not completely possible. There are signs that betray the deep, real thoughts. We have more control over our words; we have time to rethink them, filter them, tone down, etc. But body language happens fast and we don’t really have time to stop it or alter it. Indeed, when there is some contradiction or lying, the jerks, etc., are a response of the organism.
Soman Ragavan. 16 September, 2023/
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September 15th, 2023 22:30

one small thing a vulcano
peto said:

\"Why should I ever feel proud of myself\"
Talent for writing is a good place to start
I like to think there is no such thing as a failure l

There are quitters though
Your teacher is not the only one who likes your poetry




August 30th, 2023 14:05