Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The sea of trees
aDarkerMind said:
impressive stuff here. the more i read it the better it gets.
September 3rd, 2023 15:43
aDarkerMind said:
impressive stuff here. the more i read it the better it gets.
September 3rd, 2023 15:43
Clouds
L. B. Mek said:
transformative vividity, utilising
such majestic imagery
a throwback thread to a Time, stolen
by tyrannical greed
still, we\'re gifted a glimpse
in a passing cloud or two
and the hills, still remember
those galloping drums
we just have to be ready
for when that gust of wind
offers us a sample of what was
once...
(thanks for sharing)
September 1st, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
transformative vividity, utilising
such majestic imagery
a throwback thread to a Time, stolen
by tyrannical greed
still, we\'re gifted a glimpse
in a passing cloud or two
and the hills, still remember
those galloping drums
we just have to be ready
for when that gust of wind
offers us a sample of what was
once...
(thanks for sharing)
September 1st, 2023 05:35
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