Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Not guilty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a nightmare, Lorenz…I’d be asking this fellow a few more questions before letting him anywhere near the exit. You’ve certainly got my suspicions up! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a nightmare, Lorenz…I’d be asking this fellow a few more questions before letting him anywhere near the exit. You’ve certainly got my suspicions up! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:28
Not guilty
Ellen Marsell said:
The text has a certain subtlety in its grotesque mix of styles, its play with fairy-tale and cultural imagery, and the character himself, who stubbornly insists on his innocence in a rather comical way. Interesting work!
October 27th, 2026 12:28
Ellen Marsell said:
The text has a certain subtlety in its grotesque mix of styles, its play with fairy-tale and cultural imagery, and the character himself, who stubbornly insists on his innocence in a rather comical way. Interesting work!
October 27th, 2026 12:28
Not guilty
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I sometimes wonder if life is an ironic cartoon
October 27th, 2026 11:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I sometimes wonder if life is an ironic cartoon
October 27th, 2026 11:55
Not guilty
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a world where people tell fairytales and want you to believe them. Don\'t worry Santa will soon be here. Good write Lorenz
October 27th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a world where people tell fairytales and want you to believe them. Don\'t worry Santa will soon be here. Good write Lorenz
October 27th, 2026 11:40
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the snow, the clock, the frozen river, and that letter from another planet all arrived carrying the same absence...I stayed with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the snow, the clock, the frozen river, and that letter from another planet all arrived carrying the same absence...I stayed with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:34
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about love as a letter you can\'t send to anyone but yourself.
October 26th, 2026 03:38
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about love as a letter you can\'t send to anyone but yourself.
October 26th, 2026 03:38
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh. Winter. I dread that season every single year. Fascinating vision thou seer.
October 25th, 2026 19:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh. Winter. I dread that season every single year. Fascinating vision thou seer.
October 25th, 2026 19:20
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
sorenbarrett said:
All of my existence is a dream. A lovely write my friend but I have never been to that river. I have been to the Amazon and its not frozen
October 25th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
All of my existence is a dream. A lovely write my friend but I have never been to that river. I have been to the Amazon and its not frozen
October 25th, 2026 14:28
Antisocially yours
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow. They\'ve self-respect the canines most pitifully lack and they\'re not stupid. Charming and rather esoteric, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Meow.
October 24th, 2026 15:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow. They\'ve self-respect the canines most pitifully lack and they\'re not stupid. Charming and rather esoteric, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Meow.
October 24th, 2026 15:30
Antisocially yours
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic hermit in a cat’s disguise, entertaining ghosts, mocking the gods, and keeping one small corner of the universe warm for someone who feels like home 🐈
October 24th, 2026 12:05
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic hermit in a cat’s disguise, entertaining ghosts, mocking the gods, and keeping one small corner of the universe warm for someone who feels like home 🐈
October 24th, 2026 12:05
Antisocially yours
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most entertaining piece my friend
October 24th, 2026 11:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most entertaining piece my friend
October 24th, 2026 11:44
Antisocially yours
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several cats Lorenz one that learned how to jump grab the door knob twist it at the same time pushed off with its feet on the door jam, out for a stroll the dog took a liking to him and licked all his fur off the bottom half so he went around like a man without pants. Took up moving to the neighbor\'s house. His angel was asleep during these episodes. Good write my friend
October 24th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several cats Lorenz one that learned how to jump grab the door knob twist it at the same time pushed off with its feet on the door jam, out for a stroll the dog took a liking to him and licked all his fur off the bottom half so he went around like a man without pants. Took up moving to the neighbor\'s house. His angel was asleep during these episodes. Good write my friend
October 24th, 2026 11:39
Antisocially yours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHAHA! Lorenz, I believe you\'ve found the perfect arrangement! Let the world carry on with its nonsense while we entertain the occasional supernatural visitor and enjoy a little creative madness. Just don\'t let the cats charge admission! LOL! 🐈⬛🌙👻🙏
October 24th, 2026 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHAHA! Lorenz, I believe you\'ve found the perfect arrangement! Let the world carry on with its nonsense while we entertain the occasional supernatural visitor and enjoy a little creative madness. Just don\'t let the cats charge admission! LOL! 🐈⬛🌙👻🙏
October 24th, 2026 11:06
Whisper of times
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’d come looking for horror, Lorenz...then find myself recognizing people I’ve heard promising a better world. That bothers me considerably more than the cadavers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 17:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’d come looking for horror, Lorenz...then find myself recognizing people I’ve heard promising a better world. That bothers me considerably more than the cadavers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 17:52
When the city sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz...I’m fascinated, but I’d be checking behind me every few steps. Definitely keeping my keys in my hand! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz...I’m fascinated, but I’d be checking behind me every few steps. Definitely keeping my keys in my hand! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:30
Whisper of times
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A screaming darkness abounds
October 23rd, 2026 11:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A screaming darkness abounds
October 23rd, 2026 11:31
Whisper of times
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark poem about a time that has lost its moral compass.
October 23rd, 2026 11:30
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark poem about a time that has lost its moral compass.
October 23rd, 2026 11:30
Whisper of times
sorenbarrett said:
This sounded like some boss\' and teachers that I have had in the past. It is an astounding list of epitaphs that ring in the ear like curses. Well done my friend a fave
October 23rd, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This sounded like some boss\' and teachers that I have had in the past. It is an astounding list of epitaphs that ring in the ear like curses. Well done my friend a fave
October 23rd, 2026 11:27
When the city sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
Is that watchman from the book of Enoch? Their baby giants ran out of food and started eating men. A dazzling read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
Is that watchman from the book of Enoch? Their baby giants ran out of food and started eating men. A dazzling read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:47
When the city sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a night that turns out to be much more than the interval between sunset and sunrise. The images seem to exist on the threshold between two states, between worlds.
October 22nd, 2026 11:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a night that turns out to be much more than the interval between sunset and sunrise. The images seem to exist on the threshold between two states, between worlds.
October 22nd, 2026 11:48
Poetic curse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I absolutely lost it when you brought Nero into the proceedings! LOL! At that point, I figured we\'d abandoned any hope of a civilized evening. Magnificent! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I absolutely lost it when you brought Nero into the proceedings! LOL! At that point, I figured we\'d abandoned any hope of a civilized evening. Magnificent! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:54
Poetic curse
Sealgair said:
The saints have lost their faces, the jester has inherited the pulpit, and even the ashes seem to have something left to confess.
October 19th, 2026 16:03
Sealgair said:
The saints have lost their faces, the jester has inherited the pulpit, and even the ashes seem to have something left to confess.
October 19th, 2026 16:03
Poetic curse
sorenbarrett said:
From Rome to today a Baccalaurean party a toast to Diocese
October 19th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
From Rome to today a Baccalaurean party a toast to Diocese
October 19th, 2026 13:30
Poetic curse
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem has a temperament of its own. It’s anarchic, politically embittered. It seems determined to desecrate the very idea of beauty when beauty becomes a cover for cruelty. What’s fascinating is that the poem barely lets you catch your breath.
October 19th, 2026 11:59
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem has a temperament of its own. It’s anarchic, politically embittered. It seems determined to desecrate the very idea of beauty when beauty becomes a cover for cruelty. What’s fascinating is that the poem barely lets you catch your breath.
October 19th, 2026 11:59
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine piece my friend, much enjoyed read
October 17th, 2026 11:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine piece my friend, much enjoyed read
October 17th, 2026 11:48
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
Ellen Marsell said:
He wanted to be the author of his own legend, but ended up a character in someone else’s story.
October 17th, 2026 11:43
Ellen Marsell said:
He wanted to be the author of his own legend, but ended up a character in someone else’s story.
October 17th, 2026 11:43
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a clown never scared me but left me laughing a wonderful image here my friend and now I play the jester
October 17th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a clown never scared me but left me laughing a wonderful image here my friend and now I play the jester
October 17th, 2026 11:35
The digital flowers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! Between the religious profiteers, political opportunists, and technological madness, humanity seems determined to engineer its own destruction. And we\'ll probably find a way to monetize the apocalypse before it arrives! LOL! Quite the indictment, my friend. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! Between the religious profiteers, political opportunists, and technological madness, humanity seems determined to engineer its own destruction. And we\'ll probably find a way to monetize the apocalypse before it arrives! LOL! Quite the indictment, my friend. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:34
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