Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Dispossession
Ellen Marsell said:
A profound and metaphorical poem about the elusive nature of life\'s enchantments, and how they can leave us with nothing in the end.
April 24th, 2026 12:24
Ellen Marsell said:
A profound and metaphorical poem about the elusive nature of life\'s enchantments, and how they can leave us with nothing in the end.
April 24th, 2026 12:24
The café from nowhere
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this pulled me in right away…there’s a strange, dreamlike pull to it that feels both playful and unsettling at the same time. It moves like a place you’ve been before but can’t quite place. Really enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this pulled me in right away…there’s a strange, dreamlike pull to it that feels both playful and unsettling at the same time. It moves like a place you’ve been before but can’t quite place. Really enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:36
The café from nowhere
sorenbarrett said:
Do they serve dos Equis there? If not I\'ll take a couple of shots of tequila and a margarita to go. Oh I forgot one can not go so I\'ll drink in the the front table as I smoke my pipe. Good write my friend
April 22nd, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Do they serve dos Equis there? If not I\'ll take a couple of shots of tequila and a margarita to go. Oh I forgot one can not go so I\'ll drink in the the front table as I smoke my pipe. Good write my friend
April 22nd, 2026 15:59
The café from nowhere
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet conversation with absurdity .
Surreal and deeply hauting ....
April 22nd, 2026 12:11
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet conversation with absurdity .
Surreal and deeply hauting ....
April 22nd, 2026 12:11
The café from nowhere
Ellen Marsell said:
We never leave the Café - not because the doors are locked, but because there is simply nothing left outside. This Café is the world itself, compressed to the size of a cup of cooling coffee.
April 22nd, 2026 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
We never leave the Café - not because the doors are locked, but because there is simply nothing left outside. This Café is the world itself, compressed to the size of a cup of cooling coffee.
April 22nd, 2026 11:49
Logos
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, that mirror of illusions really sticks with me. That moment of offering something to your own reflection…there’s something quietly unsettling and beautiful in that. It lingers. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, that mirror of illusions really sticks with me. That moment of offering something to your own reflection…there’s something quietly unsettling and beautiful in that. It lingers. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:04
Logos
Priya Tomar said:
Thoughtful piece with a clear philosophical depth .
Brilliant write .
April 21st, 2026 21:46
Priya Tomar said:
Thoughtful piece with a clear philosophical depth .
Brilliant write .
April 21st, 2026 21:46
Logos
Abdullah123 said:
The poem bizarrely borders both science and myth, without ever actually touching either! Wonderful, and very complimentary to its content. Brilliant write
April 21st, 2026 11:54
Abdullah123 said:
The poem bizarrely borders both science and myth, without ever actually touching either! Wonderful, and very complimentary to its content. Brilliant write
April 21st, 2026 11:54
Logos
Ellen Marsell said:
Here the scale shifts from the “micro” to the “macro.” Personal suffering fades before the blinding radiance of the universe. A beautiful poem.
April 21st, 2026 11:33
Ellen Marsell said:
Here the scale shifts from the “micro” to the “macro.” Personal suffering fades before the blinding radiance of the universe. A beautiful poem.
April 21st, 2026 11:33
Logos
sorenbarrett said:
This poem as enigmatic as the book mentioned where the face of the logos is invisible and one must remove one\'s shoes on holy ground. Well done a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem as enigmatic as the book mentioned where the face of the logos is invisible and one must remove one\'s shoes on holy ground. Well done a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:25
Urban solitude
Sealgair said:
This is a powerful, deeply atmospheric work, echoing the spirit of the poètes maudits. I like it!
April 17th, 2026 12:00
Sealgair said:
This is a powerful, deeply atmospheric work, echoing the spirit of the poètes maudits. I like it!
April 17th, 2026 12:00
Urban solitude
Priya Tomar said:
Ending is powerful . It leave a sense of unease ...
Good write .
April 16th, 2026 21:19
Priya Tomar said:
Ending is powerful . It leave a sense of unease ...
Good write .
April 16th, 2026 21:19
Urban solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like wandering through a dream you can’t quite leave…strange, haunting, and quietly immersive. It pulls you in without explaining itself, and that gives it real presence. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 16th, 2026 16:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like wandering through a dream you can’t quite leave…strange, haunting, and quietly immersive. It pulls you in without explaining itself, and that gives it real presence. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 16th, 2026 16:31
Urban solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark this poem beckons and calls but does not answer. Nicely done Lorenz
April 16th, 2026 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark this poem beckons and calls but does not answer. Nicely done Lorenz
April 16th, 2026 13:47
Urban solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
We are never fully present, never fully complete; we are always in the process of becoming, always arriving at an address where we do not yet live.
April 16th, 2026 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
We are never fully present, never fully complete; we are always in the process of becoming, always arriving at an address where we do not yet live.
April 16th, 2026 11:51
Icy fire wings
sorenbarrett said:
There are no hitching posts anymore and the anchors have long since rusted away. Adrift in dreams with a blue pill in one pocket and a red in the other
April 14th, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
There are no hitching posts anymore and the anchors have long since rusted away. Adrift in dreams with a blue pill in one pocket and a red in the other
April 14th, 2026 12:58
Icy fire wings
Ellen Marsell said:
The world has ended, utopia has collapsed, and only the ruins of meanings remain, through which this strange subject wanders. He is neither man, nor god, nor machine. He is a point of observation.
April 14th, 2026 12:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The world has ended, utopia has collapsed, and only the ruins of meanings remain, through which this strange subject wanders. He is neither man, nor god, nor machine. He is a point of observation.
April 14th, 2026 12:12
Hajulellah
Priya Tomar said:
The lie disguised as faith beholds its own truth in a deceptive mirror ..... my fav lines .
Nicely done .
April 13th, 2026 21:24
Priya Tomar said:
The lie disguised as faith beholds its own truth in a deceptive mirror ..... my fav lines .
Nicely done .
April 13th, 2026 21:24
Hajulellah
sorenbarrett said:
Hallelujah in Fortran or Cobalt maybe DAS very nice my friend
April 13th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Hallelujah in Fortran or Cobalt maybe DAS very nice my friend
April 13th, 2026 14:17
Hajulellah
Ellen Marsell said:
The boundaries of the soul you shall not find, no matter which path you tread.
April 13th, 2026 11:52
Ellen Marsell said:
The boundaries of the soul you shall not find, no matter which path you tread.
April 13th, 2026 11:52
Inspired oblivion
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
Inspired oblivion
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ballade cosmique
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
My desorganizer
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
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