Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My farewell letter
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
My farewell letter
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
My farewell letter
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
Manhattan solo
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Manhattan solo
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Manhattan solo
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
Manhattan solo
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
The point of no return
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
The point of no return
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
The point of no return
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
Purgatory bar
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
Purgatory bar
Ellen Marsell said:
Time has stopped.
A slight madness and thick smoke in an old bar, where we all sooner or later order our last drink.
A powerful piece.
Black humor and existential sorrow dance a slow waltz here.
October 12th, 2025 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Time has stopped.
A slight madness and thick smoke in an old bar, where we all sooner or later order our last drink.
A powerful piece.
Black humor and existential sorrow dance a slow waltz here.
October 12th, 2025 10:59
Purgatory bar
sorenbarrett said:
Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the same. A fun write reminded me of the star wars bar.
October 12th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the same. A fun write reminded me of the star wars bar.
October 12th, 2025 10:50
The voice of the rubble
Ellen Marsell said:
This is an ironic and philosophical text of rare power.
October 11th, 2025 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
This is an ironic and philosophical text of rare power.
October 11th, 2025 11:14
The voice of the rubble
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and slashes its feeling in broad strokes and slashed brush marks on a white canvas. Well done Lorenz
October 11th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and slashes its feeling in broad strokes and slashed brush marks on a white canvas. Well done Lorenz
October 11th, 2025 11:13
The voice of the rubble
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I love the powerful imagery
October 11th, 2025 11:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I love the powerful imagery
October 11th, 2025 11:09
Prophecy of the times
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark prophecy, where sacred images are woven into a sense of impending downfall. A powerful and profound work, full of symbolism.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark prophecy, where sacred images are woven into a sense of impending downfall. A powerful and profound work, full of symbolism.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Prophecy of the times
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven !
A spiritual indictment .....
Wonderful biblical imagery .....
Your grand style like John Milton ....
October 10th, 2025 12:41
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven !
A spiritual indictment .....
Wonderful biblical imagery .....
Your grand style like John Milton ....
October 10th, 2025 12:41
Prophecy of the times
sorenbarrett said:
David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by Solomon is cut in two to be divided. Pull Moses\'s beard to see the red sea part then comb it back together. A scriptural puzzle to assemble in this poem of the sacred and the obscene. Lovely Lorenz a fave
October 10th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by Solomon is cut in two to be divided. Pull Moses\'s beard to see the red sea part then comb it back together. A scriptural puzzle to assemble in this poem of the sacred and the obscene. Lovely Lorenz a fave
October 10th, 2025 11:09
My old Germany
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is full of cultural, historical, and philosophical references. It is multifaceted and complex, like a living archive of the German soul, from which ghosts of the past peer out.
October 8th, 2025 13:39
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is full of cultural, historical, and philosophical references. It is multifaceted and complex, like a living archive of the German soul, from which ghosts of the past peer out.
October 8th, 2025 13:39
My old Germany
sorenbarrett said:
A satire to be proud of Lorenz. Most wonderfully articulated and I am used to being an annoying big brother. I recognize my irritating qualities and renounce my leader the orange haired fellow. Good write and fave my friend
October 8th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A satire to be proud of Lorenz. Most wonderfully articulated and I am used to being an annoying big brother. I recognize my irritating qualities and renounce my leader the orange haired fellow. Good write and fave my friend
October 8th, 2025 10:55
ciao amore
Ellen Marsell said:
A bittersweet poem — the magnificence of melancholy and irony.
October 7th, 2025 13:30
Ellen Marsell said:
A bittersweet poem — the magnificence of melancholy and irony.
October 7th, 2025 13:30
ciao amore
sorenbarrett said:
This sings and rings it has charm and an old world feel. By old world I mean the atmosphere and the home like feel of the familiar. But at the same time it says good bye to all this in a recognition that the world has changed and the need for acceptance. Lovely
October 7th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sings and rings it has charm and an old world feel. By old world I mean the atmosphere and the home like feel of the familiar. But at the same time it says good bye to all this in a recognition that the world has changed and the need for acceptance. Lovely
October 7th, 2025 12:15
Rule Britannia
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like Hail to the Chief with orange hair. Good one Lorenz
October 6th, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like Hail to the Chief with orange hair. Good one Lorenz
October 6th, 2025 14:37
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