Comments received on poems by Lorenz
dead nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. Iβve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. Iβve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 15:04
dead nature
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
unformal jazz
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through π
September 18th, 2026 01:11
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through π
September 18th, 2026 01:11
The eye of the history
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
The eye of the history
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The Eye of History\" is a higher and merciless force that exposes the illusion of human power and sanctity, transforming the history of civilization into an endless, dark ritual of downfall.
September 17th, 2026 12:13
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The Eye of History\" is a higher and merciless force that exposes the illusion of human power and sanctity, transforming the history of civilization into an endless, dark ritual of downfall.
September 17th, 2026 12:13
The eye of the history
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 17th, 2026 11:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 17th, 2026 11:32
The eye of the history
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I have little patience left for leaders who wrap cruelty in sacred language. This goes straight at that hypocrisy, and I am here for it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I have little patience left for leaders who wrap cruelty in sacred language. This goes straight at that hypocrisy, and I am here for it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 11:08
Melancholic realm
α΄α΄α΄Ι΄ said:
amazing poetry but just wanted to say the use of ai (as you used for the image) is threatening the creative works of art that are meant for humans! I would advice you use human made art with credits to support real humans and boycott the use of ai in creative fields!! have a nice day (Reply to your reply) Oh! so fyi that\'s not an opinion that\'s a fact, the use of AI is killing polar bears and contributing to global warming greatly, AI models scrape online portfolios and images to learn styles, which causes copyright issues. Also AI art is a straight up insult to human emotion, art depth. You don\'t generate art. You create it. Art isn\'t crated to \"look cool\" ITS HUMAN EXPERIENCE, HUMAN EMOTION, HUMAN DEPTH. sick of people who act like the use of AI isn\'t threatening the creative fields of humans, \"leave me alone !\" my foot man you are going to hear the truth whether you like it or not !
September 15th, 2026 10:52
α΄α΄α΄Ι΄ said:
amazing poetry but just wanted to say the use of ai (as you used for the image) is threatening the creative works of art that are meant for humans! I would advice you use human made art with credits to support real humans and boycott the use of ai in creative fields!! have a nice day (Reply to your reply) Oh! so fyi that\'s not an opinion that\'s a fact, the use of AI is killing polar bears and contributing to global warming greatly, AI models scrape online portfolios and images to learn styles, which causes copyright issues. Also AI art is a straight up insult to human emotion, art depth. You don\'t generate art. You create it. Art isn\'t crated to \"look cool\" ITS HUMAN EXPERIENCE, HUMAN EMOTION, HUMAN DEPTH. sick of people who act like the use of AI isn\'t threatening the creative fields of humans, \"leave me alone !\" my foot man you are going to hear the truth whether you like it or not !
September 15th, 2026 10:52
Cosmic agony
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you write and how you question the very fabric of what\'s happening very well put
September 15th, 2026 08:07
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you write and how you question the very fabric of what\'s happening very well put
September 15th, 2026 08:07
Cosmic agony
sorenbarrett said:
Lost a black hole of entropy where all is dragged. According to interstellar love overcomes all dimensions
September 14th, 2026 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Lost a black hole of entropy where all is dragged. According to interstellar love overcomes all dimensions
September 14th, 2026 12:11
Cosmic agony
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The endless universe and a fav
September 14th, 2026 11:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The endless universe and a fav
September 14th, 2026 11:53
Cosmic agony
Ellen Marsell said:
You write the cosmos as a free cosmic improvisation: a theme appears, transforms, disappears, and returns in an altered form.
September 14th, 2026 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
You write the cosmos as a free cosmic improvisation: a theme appears, transforms, disappears, and returns in an altered form.
September 14th, 2026 11:44
Cosmic agony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an intoxicating piece, Lorenz. Myth, desire, music, and mortality spiral together until the universe itself becomes a vanished beloved whose radiance still reaches us. Surreal, sensual, and deeply haunting, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an intoxicating piece, Lorenz. Myth, desire, music, and mortality spiral together until the universe itself becomes a vanished beloved whose radiance still reaches us. Surreal, sensual, and deeply haunting, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:28
unformal jazz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, music has always felt like one of the ways the dead remain present among usβ¦and this brought an entire history back into the room. I could practically hear the horns and keys speaking. Wonderful work, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, music has always felt like one of the ways the dead remain present among usβ¦and this brought an entire history back into the room. I could practically hear the horns and keys speaking. Wonderful work, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 12th, 2026 09:14
unformal jazz
Sealgair said:
This prose poem feels like a jam session stretching all the way until dawn. The text sounds so authentic and deep. I love it!
September 11th, 2026 14:24
Sealgair said:
This prose poem feels like a jam session stretching all the way until dawn. The text sounds so authentic and deep. I love it!
September 11th, 2026 14:24
unformal jazz
Ellen Marsell said:
Itβs amazing how the poem itself is written according to the principles of jazz! It feels like a kind of musical biography of the 20th century.
September 11th, 2026 13:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Itβs amazing how the poem itself is written according to the principles of jazz! It feels like a kind of musical biography of the 20th century.
September 11th, 2026 13:08
unformal jazz
sorenbarrett said:
A who\'s who of blue with so many names, songs and lines stuffed in this pillow of a poem. A fave Lorenz
September 11th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A who\'s who of blue with so many names, songs and lines stuffed in this pillow of a poem. A fave Lorenz
September 11th, 2026 12:57
The good old days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a wild and incisive journey through the mythology of yesterday. History, faith, consumerism, and culture all crash together until the comforting illusion cannot survive. Darkly funny, painfully honest, and brilliantly done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2026 21:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a wild and incisive journey through the mythology of yesterday. History, faith, consumerism, and culture all crash together until the comforting illusion cannot survive. Darkly funny, painfully honest, and brilliantly done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 10th, 2026 21:21
The good old days
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the rose tinted glasses of the good old days
September 9th, 2026 12:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the rose tinted glasses of the good old days
September 9th, 2026 12:52
The good old days
Sealgair said:
The βgood old daysβ never really existed in the strictest sense. There is only the past we have edited so that we can live with it.
I enjoyed reading it
September 9th, 2026 12:08
Sealgair said:
The βgood old daysβ never really existed in the strictest sense. There is only the past we have edited so that we can live with it.
I enjoyed reading it
September 9th, 2026 12:08
The good old days
Ellen Marsell said:
Can we trust our memory of the past when it keeps turning a complicated history into a beautiful legend?
September 9th, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Can we trust our memory of the past when it keeps turning a complicated history into a beautiful legend?
September 9th, 2026 11:54
The good old days
sorenbarrett said:
Dappled words painted with stripes flow into this poem of names famous and infamous all make a pond still and calm. Nice my friend
September 9th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Dappled words painted with stripes flow into this poem of names famous and infamous all make a pond still and calm. Nice my friend
September 9th, 2026 11:41
Wandering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I connect with writing that lets wandering be its own form of truth rather than treating it as failure. Thereβs something deeply human in refusing easy certainty and continuing on anyway. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 7th, 2026 14:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I connect with writing that lets wandering be its own form of truth rather than treating it as failure. Thereβs something deeply human in refusing easy certainty and continuing on anyway. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 7th, 2026 14:48
Wandering
sorenbarrett said:
Divine words of a cosmic traveler washed in the tides of time.
September 7th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Divine words of a cosmic traveler washed in the tides of time.
September 7th, 2026 14:34
Wandering
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of inner pilgrimage, where each image leads to another, tracing a path through a vast landscape of associations.
September 7th, 2026 12:34
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of inner pilgrimage, where each image leads to another, tracing a path through a vast landscape of associations.
September 7th, 2026 12:34
Auto-da-fΓ©
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Lorenz. The whole poem feels like a ritual of burning away one self while another struggles toward the lightβ¦death, memory, madness, and transcendence all circling the same flame. Dark, strange, and compelling, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 6th, 2026 13:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Lorenz. The whole poem feels like a ritual of burning away one self while another struggles toward the lightβ¦death, memory, madness, and transcendence all circling the same flame. Dark, strange, and compelling, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 6th, 2026 13:20
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