Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Timeless ambiguity
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguity is great you don\'t have to make a choice and if you do you can\'t be blamed. Better yet if in a dream where you can step away when you awake.
October 2nd, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguity is great you don\'t have to make a choice and if you do you can\'t be blamed. Better yet if in a dream where you can step away when you awake.
October 2nd, 2026 13:20
Timeless ambiguity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece asks many questions
October 2nd, 2026 11:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece asks many questions
October 2nd, 2026 11:36
Timeless ambiguity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the βgolden puppetsβ image got me. Are we actually creating what comes next, or just performing something already cast while convincing ourselves weβre improvising? That question hangs beautifully over the ending. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
October 2nd, 2026 11:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the βgolden puppetsβ image got me. Are we actually creating what comes next, or just performing something already cast while convincing ourselves weβre improvising? That question hangs beautifully over the ending. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
October 2nd, 2026 11:26
Urban dissonance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a strange trip this wasβ¦dark streets, music, lost people, depression, death, and then somehow a little warmth still waiting somewhere. Hell of a journey. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 29th, 2026 20:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a strange trip this wasβ¦dark streets, music, lost people, depression, death, and then somehow a little warmth still waiting somewhere. Hell of a journey. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 29th, 2026 20:23
Urban dissonance
Ellen Marsell said:
Flawless exploration of the geometry of an existential dead end.
September 29th, 2026 13:13
Ellen Marsell said:
Flawless exploration of the geometry of an existential dead end.
September 29th, 2026 13:13
Urban dissonance
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem again with the feel of childhood when I used to play the violin and the mad hatter was my favorite character.
September 29th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem again with the feel of childhood when I used to play the violin and the mad hatter was my favorite character.
September 29th, 2026 12:07
The night of the Orionids
turningpoint said:
real sense of amazing things and movement
September 26th, 2026 16:41
turningpoint said:
real sense of amazing things and movement
September 26th, 2026 16:41
The night of the Orionids
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really enjoyed this, Lorenz. There is so much night-sky wonder in it that I could almost feel myself looking up while reading. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 25th, 2026 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really enjoyed this, Lorenz. There is so much night-sky wonder in it that I could almost feel myself looking up while reading. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 25th, 2026 22:20
The night of the Orionids
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like an Impressionist symphony. Music lives in these lines.
September 25th, 2026 13:57
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like an Impressionist symphony. Music lives in these lines.
September 25th, 2026 13:57
The night of the Orionids
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A meteoric fav my friend
September 25th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A meteoric fav my friend
September 25th, 2026 11:20
The night of the Orionids
sorenbarrett said:
It is the first two lines that caught me Lorenz. Well said. the cosmic feel of this poem was surreal but then so is the cosmos. Loved it
September 25th, 2026 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is the first two lines that caught me Lorenz. Well said. the cosmic feel of this poem was surreal but then so is the cosmos. Loved it
September 25th, 2026 11:18
Sacred spiral
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is massive, Lorenz...God, space, death, poetry, all spinning together. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2026 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is massive, Lorenz...God, space, death, poetry, all spinning together. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 22nd, 2026 22:11
Sacred spiral
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic expression of spiritual and philosophical alchemy. A profound work.
September 22nd, 2026 13:19
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic expression of spiritual and philosophical alchemy. A profound work.
September 22nd, 2026 13:19
Sacred spiral
sorenbarrett said:
Time and dimensions across space. Well done
September 22nd, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Time and dimensions across space. Well done
September 22nd, 2026 11:47
Sacred spiral
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful fiery piece my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful fiery piece my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:42
dead nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. Iβve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. Iβve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 19th, 2026 15:04
dead nature
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
unformal jazz
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through π
September 18th, 2026 01:11
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through π
September 18th, 2026 01:11
The eye of the history
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
The eye of the history
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The Eye of History\" is a higher and merciless force that exposes the illusion of human power and sanctity, transforming the history of civilization into an endless, dark ritual of downfall.
September 17th, 2026 12:13
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The Eye of History\" is a higher and merciless force that exposes the illusion of human power and sanctity, transforming the history of civilization into an endless, dark ritual of downfall.
September 17th, 2026 12:13
The eye of the history
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 17th, 2026 11:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 17th, 2026 11:32
The eye of the history
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I have little patience left for leaders who wrap cruelty in sacred language. This goes straight at that hypocrisy, and I am here for it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I have little patience left for leaders who wrap cruelty in sacred language. This goes straight at that hypocrisy, and I am here for it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 17th, 2026 11:08
Melancholic realm
α΄α΄α΄Ι΄ said:
amazing poetry but just wanted to say the use of ai (as you used for the image) is threatening the creative works of art that are meant for humans! I would advice you use human made art with credits to support real humans and boycott the use of ai in creative fields!! have a nice day (Reply to your reply) Oh! so fyi that\'s not an opinion that\'s a fact, the use of AI is killing polar bears and contributing to global warming greatly, AI models scrape online portfolios and images to learn styles, which causes copyright issues. Also AI art is a straight up insult to human emotion, art depth. You don\'t generate art. You create it. Art isn\'t crated to \"look cool\" ITS HUMAN EXPERIENCE, HUMAN EMOTION, HUMAN DEPTH. sick of people who act like the use of AI isn\'t threatening the creative fields of humans, \"leave me alone !\" my foot man you are going to hear the truth whether you like it or not !
September 15th, 2026 10:52
α΄α΄α΄Ι΄ said:
amazing poetry but just wanted to say the use of ai (as you used for the image) is threatening the creative works of art that are meant for humans! I would advice you use human made art with credits to support real humans and boycott the use of ai in creative fields!! have a nice day (Reply to your reply) Oh! so fyi that\'s not an opinion that\'s a fact, the use of AI is killing polar bears and contributing to global warming greatly, AI models scrape online portfolios and images to learn styles, which causes copyright issues. Also AI art is a straight up insult to human emotion, art depth. You don\'t generate art. You create it. Art isn\'t crated to \"look cool\" ITS HUMAN EXPERIENCE, HUMAN EMOTION, HUMAN DEPTH. sick of people who act like the use of AI isn\'t threatening the creative fields of humans, \"leave me alone !\" my foot man you are going to hear the truth whether you like it or not !
September 15th, 2026 10:52
Cosmic agony
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you write and how you question the very fabric of what\'s happening very well put
September 15th, 2026 08:07
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you write and how you question the very fabric of what\'s happening very well put
September 15th, 2026 08:07
Cosmic agony
sorenbarrett said:
Lost a black hole of entropy where all is dragged. According to interstellar love overcomes all dimensions
September 14th, 2026 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Lost a black hole of entropy where all is dragged. According to interstellar love overcomes all dimensions
September 14th, 2026 12:11
Cosmic agony
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The endless universe and a fav
September 14th, 2026 11:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The endless universe and a fav
September 14th, 2026 11:53
Cosmic agony
Ellen Marsell said:
You write the cosmos as a free cosmic improvisation: a theme appears, transforms, disappears, and returns in an altered form.
September 14th, 2026 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
You write the cosmos as a free cosmic improvisation: a theme appears, transforms, disappears, and returns in an altered form.
September 14th, 2026 11:44
Cosmic agony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an intoxicating piece, Lorenz. Myth, desire, music, and mortality spiral together until the universe itself becomes a vanished beloved whose radiance still reaches us. Surreal, sensual, and deeply haunting, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an intoxicating piece, Lorenz. Myth, desire, music, and mortality spiral together until the universe itself becomes a vanished beloved whose radiance still reaches us. Surreal, sensual, and deeply haunting, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 14th, 2026 11:28
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