Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Melancholic realm
Sealgair said:
Saturn does not bring the past back. It merely keeps circling around it.
Always an enjoyable read.
August 16th, 2026 13:30
Sealgair said:
Saturn does not bring the past back. It merely keeps circling around it.
Always an enjoyable read.
August 16th, 2026 13:30
Melancholic realm
Ellen Marsell said:
Some presences now belong to our inner world...
August 16th, 2026 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Some presences now belong to our inner world...
August 16th, 2026 11:58
Melancholic realm
sorenbarrett said:
Cinderella burned and turned to cinders put in the coffin coach and would reawaken after midnight. Oh yes she wore one of those Saturn rings.
August 16th, 2026 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cinderella burned and turned to cinders put in the coffin coach and would reawaken after midnight. Oh yes she wore one of those Saturn rings.
August 16th, 2026 11:42
Ambivalence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz...this is dark, theatrical, and psychologically charged. It feels like a struggle between longing, memory, shame, and desire, all refusing to let the other win. That ambivalence is everywhere. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz...this is dark, theatrical, and psychologically charged. It feels like a struggle between longing, memory, shame, and desire, all refusing to let the other win. That ambivalence is everywhere. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:51
Ambivalence
sorenbarrett said:
Plastic fruit hangs from the tree of knowledge where a rubber snake sits in the grass. Fine write my friend watch out for those nun\'s habits if not dirty at least perverse.
August 14th, 2026 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Plastic fruit hangs from the tree of knowledge where a rubber snake sits in the grass. Fine write my friend watch out for those nun\'s habits if not dirty at least perverse.
August 14th, 2026 12:55
Ambivalence
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The Gothic drips from it as the scarlet upon white satin
August 14th, 2026 12:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The Gothic drips from it as the scarlet upon white satin
August 14th, 2026 12:37
Ambivalence
Ellen Marsell said:
A philosophical dreamscape, steeped in Gothic shadows and psychological ambiguity.
August 14th, 2026 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
A philosophical dreamscape, steeped in Gothic shadows and psychological ambiguity.
August 14th, 2026 12:02
Insomnia street
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully macabre. The jester, tarot, devil, scaffold, death row…it all builds this surreal midnight world where the poet feels simultaneously condemned, prophetic, and completely lost. Definitely my kind of darkness. Excellent write, Lorenz! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully macabre. The jester, tarot, devil, scaffold, death row…it all builds this surreal midnight world where the poet feels simultaneously condemned, prophetic, and completely lost. Definitely my kind of darkness. Excellent write, Lorenz! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:17
Insomnia street
Ellen Marsell said:
Gothic in atmosphere, this poem is a labyrinth that invites reflection.
August 12th, 2026 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Gothic in atmosphere, this poem is a labyrinth that invites reflection.
August 12th, 2026 12:08
Insomnia street
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected bends and incongruent dead ends lead one on a dark but colored journey through maze of terms straight to the heart above the gut of meaning. Lovely
August 12th, 2026 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected bends and incongruent dead ends lead one on a dark but colored journey through maze of terms straight to the heart above the gut of meaning. Lovely
August 12th, 2026 11:42
Anatomy of death
NafisaSB said:
Regret, shame and remorse all synced together to convey your message 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:39
NafisaSB said:
Regret, shame and remorse all synced together to convey your message 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:39
wild sarabande
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That collision of Mondrian and Kandinsky really grabbed me, Lorenz. Order and geometry crashing into color and chaos feels perfectly at home in this sleepless wandering. Fantastic imagery, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That collision of Mondrian and Kandinsky really grabbed me, Lorenz. Order and geometry crashing into color and chaos feels perfectly at home in this sleepless wandering. Fantastic imagery, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:31
wild sarabande
Ellen Marsell said:
Music allows the listener to experience another’s consciousness as their own flow through time.
August 8th, 2026 12:14
Ellen Marsell said:
Music allows the listener to experience another’s consciousness as their own flow through time.
August 8th, 2026 12:14
wild sarabande
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful this poem struts across the stage of the sky. Well done Lovenz
August 8th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful this poem struts across the stage of the sky. Well done Lovenz
August 8th, 2026 11:39
Synesthaesia in love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Lorenz...there’s something wonderfully spectral about this woman drifting through memory, longing, and imagination without ever being possessed by any of them. And that feline comparison is delightfully strange and somehow perfectly at home here. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Lorenz...there’s something wonderfully spectral about this woman drifting through memory, longing, and imagination without ever being possessed by any of them. And that feline comparison is delightfully strange and somehow perfectly at home here. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:28
Synesthaesia in love
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is very nearly intoxicating. Deliciously rendered with an exquisite sense of closeness [but how?!], excellent imagery and a lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 16:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is very nearly intoxicating. Deliciously rendered with an exquisite sense of closeness [but how?!], excellent imagery and a lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 16:53
Synesthaesia in love
sorenbarrett said:
I think you should make a duplicate of the key. Nice one Lorenz
August 6th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
I think you should make a duplicate of the key. Nice one Lorenz
August 6th, 2026 12:07
Synesthaesia in love
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful blend of sensual, spatial, and musical imagery.
August 6th, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful blend of sensual, spatial, and musical imagery.
August 6th, 2026 11:54
A bittersweet stroll
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this really pulled me in…it feels like wandering through memory where decades, music, and dreams all blur into one long walk beside the ocean. There’s a beautiful wistfulness running through the whole piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this really pulled me in…it feels like wandering through memory where decades, music, and dreams all blur into one long walk beside the ocean. There’s a beautiful wistfulness running through the whole piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:18
A bittersweet stroll
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
recollections running parallel
August 4th, 2026 12:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
recollections running parallel
August 4th, 2026 12:58
A bittersweet stroll
sorenbarrett said:
Love the use of music to describe the era and how even song titles are misinterpreted to become history. Well done my friend
August 4th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love the use of music to describe the era and how even song titles are misinterpreted to become history. Well done my friend
August 4th, 2026 12:53
A bittersweet stroll
Ellen Marsell said:
This stroll did not take place through space, but through the meteorology of memory, where decades have a scent and maps suffer from chronic nostalgia.
August 4th, 2026 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
This stroll did not take place through space, but through the meteorology of memory, where decades have a scent and maps suffer from chronic nostalgia.
August 4th, 2026 11:49
My solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one speaks to me. There are seasons when solitude becomes so familiar that it almost feels safer than the unknown, even when we know it comes at a cost. I could really feel that tension throughout this piece. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one speaks to me. There are seasons when solitude becomes so familiar that it almost feels safer than the unknown, even when we know it comes at a cost. I could really feel that tension throughout this piece. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:50
My solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
My solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
The night of the giants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Inspired vertigo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
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