Comments received on poems by Lorenz
A matter of time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
A matter of time
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
A matter of time
sorenbarrett said:
Our toys age poorly in the attic where rats abound. Memory polishes the silver and repaints the colors. Digging in the attic one finds defects never seen.
August 29th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Our toys age poorly in the attic where rats abound. Memory polishes the silver and repaints the colors. Digging in the attic one finds defects never seen.
August 29th, 2026 11:21
A matter of time
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mystery of time and life
August 29th, 2026 11:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mystery of time and life
August 29th, 2026 11:17
Berliner Nacht
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a dark and intoxicating piece! Berlin becomes a fever dream where decadence, history, desire, and violence stumble through the same night. Absolutely riveting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a dark and intoxicating piece! Berlin becomes a fever dream where decadence, history, desire, and violence stumble through the same night. Absolutely riveting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:43
Berliner Nacht
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the dark, nocturnal side of humanity.
August 28th, 2026 12:03
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the dark, nocturnal side of humanity.
August 28th, 2026 12:03
Berliner Nacht
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautifully dark and alluring
August 28th, 2026 11:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautifully dark and alluring
August 28th, 2026 11:37
Berliner Nacht
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark feel, slippery as oil it comes out of the cobwebs like a spider after a fly. Well said in the last lines where the lord of the flies appears. Well done Lorenz
August 28th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark feel, slippery as oil it comes out of the cobwebs like a spider after a fly. Well said in the last lines where the lord of the flies appears. Well done Lorenz
August 28th, 2026 11:36
Simulacrum
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I deeply relate to the tension between the self presented to the world and the stranger encountered within. Sometimes what society calls normal feels like the greater disguise. This gave me plenty to contemplate, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 17:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I deeply relate to the tension between the self presented to the world and the stranger encountered within. Sometimes what society calls normal feels like the greater disguise. This gave me plenty to contemplate, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 17:02
Simulacrum
Ellen Marsell said:
The main mystery is whether a true \"self\" exists.
August 27th, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The main mystery is whether a true \"self\" exists.
August 27th, 2026 12:43
Simulacrum
sorenbarrett said:
This could be confused with sacrum (always thought that was a sacred crumb.) This one had my head spinning you might say I got wound up.
August 27th, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
This could be confused with sacrum (always thought that was a sacred crumb.) This one had my head spinning you might say I got wound up.
August 27th, 2026 12:13
Poetic galaxy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a ferocious descent into the torment of creation. Astronomical vastness collides with bodily violence as language becomes both injury and necessity…beautiful, consuming, and dangerously unstable. Brilliant work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a ferocious descent into the torment of creation. Astronomical vastness collides with bodily violence as language becomes both injury and necessity…beautiful, consuming, and dangerously unstable. Brilliant work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 16:07
Poetic galaxy
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic poem, steeped in gothic melancholy and dreamlike imagery.
August 26th, 2026 11:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic poem, steeped in gothic melancholy and dreamlike imagery.
August 26th, 2026 11:48
Poetic galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is surreal and dream like which is not much different than a good psychosis. Nicely penned but I wouldn\'t stir my coffee with my pen, don\'t like the taste of ink.
August 26th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is surreal and dream like which is not much different than a good psychosis. Nicely penned but I wouldn\'t stir my coffee with my pen, don\'t like the taste of ink.
August 26th, 2026 11:21
Poetic galaxy
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such a rich galaxy, much enjoyed
August 26th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such a rich galaxy, much enjoyed
August 26th, 2026 11:20
Fiery clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Fiery clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
Fiery clouds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
I hold you in thought
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
I hold you in thought
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
I hold you in thought
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is a constant artistic transformation of the past.
A very delicate, melancholic, and surreal poem about memory.
August 23rd, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is a constant artistic transformation of the past.
A very delicate, melancholic, and surreal poem about memory.
August 23rd, 2026 11:54
I hold you in thought
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece
August 23rd, 2026 11:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece
August 23rd, 2026 11:27
Inspiration
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a darkly sensual portrait of inspiration, Lorenz! You transform the creative impulse into an unreliable lover whose appearances consume the poet and whose absences consume him even more. The final devotion feels simultaneously sacred, addictive, and destructive. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a darkly sensual portrait of inspiration, Lorenz! You transform the creative impulse into an unreliable lover whose appearances consume the poet and whose absences consume him even more. The final devotion feels simultaneously sacred, addictive, and destructive. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:52
Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a spiritual archetype and holy temple of the cosmos. Lovely
August 21st, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a spiritual archetype and holy temple of the cosmos. Lovely
August 21st, 2026 12:42
Insomnia street
NafisaSB said:
on a shadowed journey like this, expect the unexpected...
August 21st, 2026 01:55
NafisaSB said:
on a shadowed journey like this, expect the unexpected...
August 21st, 2026 01:55
Inner landscapes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a richly atmospheric piece, Lorenz. Youth, age, grief, love, and mortality gather within the same dreamlike terrain, while memory becomes both refuge and passage. This carries a beautiful melancholy throughout. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a richly atmospheric piece, Lorenz. Youth, age, grief, love, and mortality gather within the same dreamlike terrain, while memory becomes both refuge and passage. This carries a beautiful melancholy throughout. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:30
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