Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The Mercury plains
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the exploration of identity, love, and the quest for meaning in a surreal, cosmic realm. The poet grapples with existential questions while navigating a landscape filled with celestial imagery, suggesting a search for connection and understanding amidst chaos and uncertainty. The subject matter encompasses themes of love, personal discovery, and the interplay between the earthly and the cosmic.
November 29th, 2025 15:15
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the exploration of identity, love, and the quest for meaning in a surreal, cosmic realm. The poet grapples with existential questions while navigating a landscape filled with celestial imagery, suggesting a search for connection and understanding amidst chaos and uncertainty. The subject matter encompasses themes of love, personal discovery, and the interplay between the earthly and the cosmic.
November 29th, 2025 15:15
The Mercury plains
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic it walks out of another dimension seduces with a synthetic siren screen. Nicely done Lorenz
November 29th, 2025 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic it walks out of another dimension seduces with a synthetic siren screen. Nicely done Lorenz
November 29th, 2025 12:54
The Mercury plains
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic mystery: a hybrid of myth, fantasy, and lyrical self-exploration. Love it!
November 29th, 2025 12:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic mystery: a hybrid of myth, fantasy, and lyrical self-exploration. Love it!
November 29th, 2025 12:37
cyberspeak
Friendship said:
I enjoyed your write. The poem explores the concept of modern communication and creativity in the digital age, characterized by a fragmented and abstract language that reflects the complexities of contemporary existence. It emphasizes the role of artists and poets as interpreters of this new form of expression, operating between clarity and confusion, and highlights the personal journey of the speaker in navigating this cybernetic landscape.
November 29th, 2025 10:36
Friendship said:
I enjoyed your write. The poem explores the concept of modern communication and creativity in the digital age, characterized by a fragmented and abstract language that reflects the complexities of contemporary existence. It emphasizes the role of artists and poets as interpreters of this new form of expression, operating between clarity and confusion, and highlights the personal journey of the speaker in navigating this cybernetic landscape.
November 29th, 2025 10:36
cyberspeak
Lorenz said:
during a trip in the future I learned the concept of \'\' Thinlink \'\' !
November 28th, 2025 15:23
Lorenz said:
during a trip in the future I learned the concept of \'\' Thinlink \'\' !
November 28th, 2025 15:23
cyberspeak
Ellen Marsell said:
Languages are instruments of thought. Creating a new language creates a new possibility to think.
November 28th, 2025 14:26
Ellen Marsell said:
Languages are instruments of thought. Creating a new language creates a new possibility to think.
November 28th, 2025 14:26
cyberspeak
sorenbarrett said:
I swear that there is cyber dementia in that my files at times disappear and are sometimes misplaced while at others are erased
November 28th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
I swear that there is cyber dementia in that my files at times disappear and are sometimes misplaced while at others are erased
November 28th, 2025 12:15
The temple merchants
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem expresses a complex reflection on American society, exploring themes of disillusionment, identity, and the search for belonging. It portrays America as a place of chaos and contradiction, where innocence is lost, and societal structures are questioned. The imagery suggests a struggle between hope and despair, as the speaker navigates through a landscape filled with both despair and the possibility of connection and redemption. The references to cultural icons and personal experiences highlight the juxtaposition of aspiration and reality in the American experience.
November 27th, 2025 17:15
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem expresses a complex reflection on American society, exploring themes of disillusionment, identity, and the search for belonging. It portrays America as a place of chaos and contradiction, where innocence is lost, and societal structures are questioned. The imagery suggests a struggle between hope and despair, as the speaker navigates through a landscape filled with both despair and the possibility of connection and redemption. The references to cultural icons and personal experiences highlight the juxtaposition of aspiration and reality in the American experience.
November 27th, 2025 17:15
The temple merchants
sorenbarrett said:
Love this write Lorenz I heard that Lincoln stepped on ants not caring whether they were red or black. Actually he didn\'t care and took the day off to go to the theater.
November 26th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this write Lorenz I heard that Lincoln stepped on ants not caring whether they were red or black. Actually he didn\'t care and took the day off to go to the theater.
November 26th, 2025 13:46
The temple merchants
Ellen Marsell said:
A complicated America, a violent America, an exhausted America, but also an open, fertile America, a land of escape and of quest, of magnificent illusions and hopes.
November 26th, 2025 12:40
Ellen Marsell said:
A complicated America, a violent America, an exhausted America, but also an open, fertile America, a land of escape and of quest, of magnificent illusions and hopes.
November 26th, 2025 12:40
The madman\'s journey
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a slow, painful, yet cleansing journey of a person moving through the wounds of the past toward forgiveness and inner freedom.
November 26th, 2025 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a slow, painful, yet cleansing journey of a person moving through the wounds of the past toward forgiveness and inner freedom.
November 26th, 2025 11:56
The madman\'s journey
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Lorenz. Madness is denoted by those that call themselves sane but sanity is not defined by the majority but by nature.
November 25th, 2025 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Lorenz. Madness is denoted by those that call themselves sane but sanity is not defined by the majority but by nature.
November 25th, 2025 14:50
Destiny
NafisaSB said:
each word rings true - a good description of destiny
November 25th, 2025 06:46
NafisaSB said:
each word rings true - a good description of destiny
November 25th, 2025 06:46
Eurydice
sorenbarrett said:
The classic Greek story of rescuing from the underworld and what a great musician can accomplish. Think what he could have done with a band and autotune. Then again looking back never worked out for Lot\'s wife either a little salty for my taste. Give me a shot of tequila and lime. Good write Lorenz
November 24th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
The classic Greek story of rescuing from the underworld and what a great musician can accomplish. Think what he could have done with a band and autotune. Then again looking back never worked out for Lot\'s wife either a little salty for my taste. Give me a shot of tequila and lime. Good write Lorenz
November 24th, 2025 15:54
Eurydice
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes you have to “lose” your Eurydice in order to stop being a prisoner of your own desire.
November 24th, 2025 12:50
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes you have to “lose” your Eurydice in order to stop being a prisoner of your own desire.
November 24th, 2025 12:50
Eastern bad trip
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic wandering that reveals the fragility of time, the solitude of the traveler, and the haunting beauty of dreams swallowed by History.
November 23rd, 2025 12:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic wandering that reveals the fragility of time, the solitude of the traveler, and the haunting beauty of dreams swallowed by History.
November 23rd, 2025 12:42
Eastern bad trip
sorenbarrett said:
Dead memories fill the city and past battlefields of love only in old paintings photographs of the past. Here philosophy pervades and even it is dead. There is no nourishment from a closed cafe that only ladles soup for the needy, even drugs will not quell the need so the dance is rejected but the conductor remains
November 23rd, 2025 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
Dead memories fill the city and past battlefields of love only in old paintings photographs of the past. Here philosophy pervades and even it is dead. There is no nourishment from a closed cafe that only ladles soup for the needy, even drugs will not quell the need so the dance is rejected but the conductor remains
November 23rd, 2025 12:32
Celestial mane
sorenbarrett said:
The body comes from dirt but where does consciousness of being come from? Some say neural connections, if so how many are needed. Some say a message transmitted to the body receiver, if so who is sending it and why? Some say it is evolutionary communication. Cosmic or terrestrial it comes and goes and as you say when will it return.
November 22nd, 2025 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
The body comes from dirt but where does consciousness of being come from? Some say neural connections, if so how many are needed. Some say a message transmitted to the body receiver, if so who is sending it and why? Some say it is evolutionary communication. Cosmic or terrestrial it comes and goes and as you say when will it return.
November 22nd, 2025 14:33
Celestial mane
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep text, filled with cosmic mysticism.
November 22nd, 2025 13:10
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep text, filled with cosmic mysticism.
November 22nd, 2025 13:10
Destiny
Friendship said:
Your poem \"I am destiny\" examines the intricate relationship between individuals and the concept of destiny, portraying it as an impartial force that supersedes human emotions, judgments, and moral dichotomies. The poem posits that destiny is an inescapable aspect of life, inextricably linked with love, suffering, and the diverse experiences that define existence. This poem serves to prompt readers to reevaluate their understanding of destiny and acknowledge its presence in their lives, ultimately fostering acceptance of life\'s complexities and uncertainties. It aims to cultivate a sense of serenity regarding the inevitability of fate and the beauty of individual experiences within that framework.
November 21st, 2025 17:25
Friendship said:
Your poem \"I am destiny\" examines the intricate relationship between individuals and the concept of destiny, portraying it as an impartial force that supersedes human emotions, judgments, and moral dichotomies. The poem posits that destiny is an inescapable aspect of life, inextricably linked with love, suffering, and the diverse experiences that define existence. This poem serves to prompt readers to reevaluate their understanding of destiny and acknowledge its presence in their lives, ultimately fostering acceptance of life\'s complexities and uncertainties. It aims to cultivate a sense of serenity regarding the inevitability of fate and the beauty of individual experiences within that framework.
November 21st, 2025 17:25
Destiny
Ellen Marsell said:
We are not prisoners of destiny - we are its material, its voice, its reflection in a mirror that changes along with us. A person discovers their true nature only when faced with what cannot be changed.
A strong and beautiful piece!
November 21st, 2025 15:41
Ellen Marsell said:
We are not prisoners of destiny - we are its material, its voice, its reflection in a mirror that changes along with us. A person discovers their true nature only when faced with what cannot be changed.
A strong and beautiful piece!
November 21st, 2025 15:41
Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz the issue of human values is raised here and who is to say our values are right or even justified. Thought provoking
November 21st, 2025 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz the issue of human values is raised here and who is to say our values are right or even justified. Thought provoking
November 21st, 2025 14:25
It\'s snowing on yesterday
Ellen Marsell said:
In a remarkable way, this text is built around moods, almost like a piece of jazz improvisation. Its emotional, “metaphysical distortion” of reality makes the images come alive. I definitely enjoyed reading it.
November 20th, 2025 12:39
Ellen Marsell said:
In a remarkable way, this text is built around moods, almost like a piece of jazz improvisation. Its emotional, “metaphysical distortion” of reality makes the images come alive. I definitely enjoyed reading it.
November 20th, 2025 12:39
It\'s snowing on yesterday
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of images and some of the past in the present. So many people bring the past into the present which is usually cold water to what ever is in the present. Nice Lorenz
November 20th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of images and some of the past in the present. So many people bring the past into the present which is usually cold water to what ever is in the present. Nice Lorenz
November 20th, 2025 11:58
The running girl
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasies fly reality crawls on the ground and buries itself in the sand. The waters wash all away.
November 17th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasies fly reality crawls on the ground and buries itself in the sand. The waters wash all away.
November 17th, 2025 12:53
The running girl
Ellen Marsell said:
True encounters happen unexpectedly.
Poetry can capture those fleeting moments and grant them a kind of eternal life.
A gentle, melancholic poem. I like it.
November 17th, 2025 12:31
Ellen Marsell said:
True encounters happen unexpectedly.
Poetry can capture those fleeting moments and grant them a kind of eternal life.
A gentle, melancholic poem. I like it.
November 17th, 2025 12:31
Alemanic melancholy
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like a bitter and precise diagonal cut through modernity. The satire, the metaphors, the cultural allusions - everything strikes directly at a deep inner nerve.
November 15th, 2025 14:13
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like a bitter and precise diagonal cut through modernity. The satire, the metaphors, the cultural allusions - everything strikes directly at a deep inner nerve.
November 15th, 2025 14:13
Alemanic melancholy
sorenbarrett said:
Siegfried\'s Rhine journey is one answer but I prefer the Pilgrim\'s chorus.
November 15th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Siegfried\'s Rhine journey is one answer but I prefer the Pilgrim\'s chorus.
November 15th, 2025 13:07
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