Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Symbiosis
Ma5on said:
Your poem is beautifully meditative, rich with philosophical depth & Zen-like reflections on impermanence, identity, & interconnectedness. The whole piece has a mystical, almost transcendental quality.
Enjoying the vibe,
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Ma5on said:
Your poem is beautifully meditative, rich with philosophical depth & Zen-like reflections on impermanence, identity, & interconnectedness. The whole piece has a mystical, almost transcendental quality.
Enjoying the vibe,
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Dawn
Ma5on said:
Lorenz,
I really like how you evoke this primal world, raw, ancient, & in a constant state of flux. The poem\'s gritty descriptions are strong, & the sense of mystery & survival is gripping. The atmosphere of struggle is harsh & your imagery is second to none!
Most enjoyed & escaped into your world for a while.
regards
Ma5on
February 15th, 2025 07:21
Ma5on said:
Lorenz,
I really like how you evoke this primal world, raw, ancient, & in a constant state of flux. The poem\'s gritty descriptions are strong, & the sense of mystery & survival is gripping. The atmosphere of struggle is harsh & your imagery is second to none!
Most enjoyed & escaped into your world for a while.
regards
Ma5on
February 15th, 2025 07:21
Symbiosis
Ellen Marsell said:
Wisdom is changeable, identity is illusory, and true being is not subject to logic, but is felt in a symbiotic fusion with the world. Excellent!
February 9th, 2025 13:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Wisdom is changeable, identity is illusory, and true being is not subject to logic, but is felt in a symbiotic fusion with the world. Excellent!
February 9th, 2025 13:53
Symbiosis
sorenbarrett said:
So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for them and how we are nothing more than our part of a larger process. Lovely
February 9th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for them and how we are nothing more than our part of a larger process. Lovely
February 9th, 2025 12:31
Symbiosis
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Will I have time ?
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Will I have time ?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Will I have time ?
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Will I have time ?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
Old rucksack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
Old rucksack
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Old rucksack
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
Old rucksack
LP2187 said:
A trustworthy rucksack who goes everywhere with us and witnesses all the adventures, a great poem which shows that objects can hold so much value. Very nice to read.
January 17th, 2025 12:27
LP2187 said:
A trustworthy rucksack who goes everywhere with us and witnesses all the adventures, a great poem which shows that objects can hold so much value. Very nice to read.
January 17th, 2025 12:27
The evening angel
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Dawn
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
The evening angel
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
Mother waters
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Mother waters
LP2187 said:
A mystical and emotional poem about connections between souls I love this poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:11
LP2187 said:
A mystical and emotional poem about connections between souls I love this poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:11
Mother waters
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
Klaus Kinsky .
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Klaus Kinsky .
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Klaus Kinsky .
LP2187 said:
An amazing poem of torment and inner demons, I loved reading this!
January 9th, 2025 11:53
LP2187 said:
An amazing poem of torment and inner demons, I loved reading this!
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Dawn
LP2187 said:
The struggle for survival in humanity\'s early days, such powerful imagery of chaos and facing the unknown. Loved reading this!
January 7th, 2025 11:46
LP2187 said:
The struggle for survival in humanity\'s early days, such powerful imagery of chaos and facing the unknown. Loved reading this!
January 7th, 2025 11:46
Dawn
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
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