Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz, the heart doesn\'t always make peace with the choices the soul has made. And perhaps that\'s part of what makes us poets. This one leaves me thinking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2026 22:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz, the heart doesn\'t always make peace with the choices the soul has made. And perhaps that\'s part of what makes us poets. This one leaves me thinking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2026 22:36
My solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to reconcile human finitude with the immortality of the inner world.
November 9th, 2026 12:26
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to reconcile human finitude with the immortality of the inner world.
November 9th, 2026 12:26
My solitude
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We write better in solitude, much enjoyed read my friend
November 9th, 2026 11:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We write better in solitude, much enjoyed read my friend
November 9th, 2026 11:47
My solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes better alone. There are no one else\'s feet to trip over.
November 9th, 2026 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes better alone. There are no one else\'s feet to trip over.
November 9th, 2026 11:10
Fellows of the gallows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHA! Lorenz, apparently we both decided the gallows deserved some attention today! Between the two of us, I doubt the hangman is getting much sleep tonight! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2026 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHA! Lorenz, apparently we both decided the gallows deserved some attention today! Between the two of us, I doubt the hangman is getting much sleep tonight! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2026 22:23
Fellows of the gallows
Ellen Marsell said:
Vultures, carrion crows, and stray dogs converged on Montfaucon Hill from across the surrounding countryside, turning the foot of the gallows into a macabre banquet for scavengers.
November 8th, 2026 12:11
Ellen Marsell said:
Vultures, carrion crows, and stray dogs converged on Montfaucon Hill from across the surrounding countryside, turning the foot of the gallows into a macabre banquet for scavengers.
November 8th, 2026 12:11
Fellows of the gallows
Lorenz said:
The gallows of Montfaucon in Paris.A squalid place symbol of an unforgiving justice system .
November 8th, 2026 11:38
Lorenz said:
The gallows of Montfaucon in Paris.A squalid place symbol of an unforgiving justice system .
November 8th, 2026 11:38
Fellows of the gallows
sorenbarrett said:
Flesh doomed to rot are souls hung also and with what rope that will bind them. Bodies eaten by worm and crows what beast will devorar the soul. It\'s dark in this poem I need a flashlight.
November 8th, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Flesh doomed to rot are souls hung also and with what rope that will bind them. Bodies eaten by worm and crows what beast will devorar the soul. It\'s dark in this poem I need a flashlight.
November 8th, 2026 11:33
Three little musical notes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I can picture somebody sitting down at the piano late at night and starting the same tune twice. The second time, they leave a little room where someone else used to come in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I can picture somebody sitting down at the piano late at night and starting the same tune twice. The second time, they leave a little room where someone else used to come in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:50
Three little musical notes
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play in this one my man. I would choose belladona or bella Donna either would do. A pretty woman is a drug of a sort. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play in this one my man. I would choose belladona or bella Donna either would do. A pretty woman is a drug of a sort. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2026 11:39
Three little musical notes
Ellen Marsell said:
A fragile musical monument to a bygone time, people, and dreams.
November 6th, 2026 11:26
Ellen Marsell said:
A fragile musical monument to a bygone time, people, and dreams.
November 6th, 2026 11:26
Three little musical notes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful, a favourite
November 6th, 2026 11:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful, a favourite
November 6th, 2026 11:10
Cosmic insomnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’m right there with you...still asking, still angry, still wanting there to be someone listening. This gets under my skin, my friend. 🌌🖤🙏🕯️
November 5th, 2026 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’m right there with you...still asking, still angry, still wanting there to be someone listening. This gets under my skin, my friend. 🌌🖤🙏🕯️
November 5th, 2026 22:37
Cosmic insomnia
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Insomnia is but to dream while awake
November 5th, 2026 02:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Insomnia is but to dream while awake
November 5th, 2026 02:38
Cosmic insomnia
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a consciousness that has become too vast for its own human existence.
November 4th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a consciousness that has become too vast for its own human existence.
November 4th, 2026 11:36
Cosmic insomnia
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in any form is but reality\'s nightmare and to awake is but to dream. Good write my friend
November 4th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in any form is but reality\'s nightmare and to awake is but to dream. Good write my friend
November 4th, 2026 11:35
Not guilty
NafisaSB said:
As usual a write that makes one sit up and ponder🤔
November 4th, 2026 09:44
NafisaSB said:
As usual a write that makes one sit up and ponder🤔
November 4th, 2026 09:44
Voice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That’s a hell of a laugh in the middle of all this, Lorenz...then the loneliness hits again. I appreciate you keeping the absurdity alive even there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 18:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That’s a hell of a laugh in the middle of all this, Lorenz...then the loneliness hits again. I appreciate you keeping the absurdity alive even there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 18:03
Voice
sorenbarrett said:
This the cry of panic on an airliner plummeting toward earth. Now straight down to fast for sound.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
This the cry of panic on an airliner plummeting toward earth. Now straight down to fast for sound.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
Voice
Lorenz said:
finding your voice doesn\'t necessiraly mean finding others,it means first and foremost not losing yourself !
November 2nd, 2026 11:52
Lorenz said:
finding your voice doesn\'t necessiraly mean finding others,it means first and foremost not losing yourself !
November 2nd, 2026 11:52
Voice
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the tragic divide between the ability to express oneself and the possibility of being truly understood.
November 2nd, 2026 11:47
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the tragic divide between the ability to express oneself and the possibility of being truly understood.
November 2nd, 2026 11:47
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
kiko said:
I like the dream like quality of nostalgia :)
November 2nd, 2026 10:23
kiko said:
I like the dream like quality of nostalgia :)
November 2nd, 2026 10:23
Difference
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz! Your wonderfully twisted imagination never disappoints! LOL! And as someone who\'s never quite fit the mold myself, I understand that desire to reclaim your own voice. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 19:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz! Your wonderfully twisted imagination never disappoints! LOL! And as someone who\'s never quite fit the mold myself, I understand that desire to reclaim your own voice. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 19:08
Difference
sorenbarrett said:
If ghosts are supposed to be white and angels too I would think that Satan being in such a hot place would not opt for white summer wear. Nicely done My friend.
November 1st, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
If ghosts are supposed to be white and angels too I would think that Satan being in such a hot place would not opt for white summer wear. Nicely done My friend.
November 1st, 2026 13:26
Difference
Ellen Marsell said:
Having survived the seraphim, Mercury, the devil, hysterical groupies, and a hostile elephant, one finally realizes: the apple pie is what comes closest to a human truth.
The universe is cruel, identity is fragmented, and the poet is lost somewhere in a cosmos of symbols.
But somewhere, someone has still baked an apple pie.
November 1st, 2026 11:46
Ellen Marsell said:
Having survived the seraphim, Mercury, the devil, hysterical groupies, and a hostile elephant, one finally realizes: the apple pie is what comes closest to a human truth.
The universe is cruel, identity is fragmented, and the poet is lost somewhere in a cosmos of symbols.
But somewhere, someone has still baked an apple pie.
November 1st, 2026 11:46
Technological nightmare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bugs Bunny, Lorenz?! Eh...what\'s up, doc? Now I can’t even trust the cartoons to give me a break! Thoroughly unsettling stuff. Happy Halloween, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bugs Bunny, Lorenz?! Eh...what\'s up, doc? Now I can’t even trust the cartoons to give me a break! Thoroughly unsettling stuff. Happy Halloween, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:32
Technological nightmare
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a kind of technological metaphysics, but perhaps it was born out of a much simpler and more human situation. 🙂
October 31st, 2026 11:27
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a kind of technological metaphysics, but perhaps it was born out of a much simpler and more human situation. 🙂
October 31st, 2026 11:27
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