Comments received on poems by Lorenz
unformal jazz
Sealgair said:
This prose poem feels like a jam session stretching all the way until dawn. The text sounds so authentic and deep. I love it!
September 11th, 2026 14:24
Sealgair said:
This prose poem feels like a jam session stretching all the way until dawn. The text sounds so authentic and deep. I love it!
September 11th, 2026 14:24
unformal jazz
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s amazing how the poem itself is written according to the principles of jazz! It feels like a kind of musical biography of the 20th century.
September 11th, 2026 13:08
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s amazing how the poem itself is written according to the principles of jazz! It feels like a kind of musical biography of the 20th century.
September 11th, 2026 13:08
unformal jazz
sorenbarrett said:
A who\'s who of blue with so many names, songs and lines stuffed in this pillow of a poem. A fave Lorenz
September 11th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A who\'s who of blue with so many names, songs and lines stuffed in this pillow of a poem. A fave Lorenz
September 11th, 2026 12:57
The good old days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a wild and incisive journey through the mythology of yesterday. History, faith, consumerism, and culture all crash together until the comforting illusion cannot survive. Darkly funny, painfully honest, and brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a wild and incisive journey through the mythology of yesterday. History, faith, consumerism, and culture all crash together until the comforting illusion cannot survive. Darkly funny, painfully honest, and brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:21
The good old days
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the rose tinted glasses of the good old days
September 9th, 2026 12:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the rose tinted glasses of the good old days
September 9th, 2026 12:52
The good old days
Sealgair said:
The “good old days” never really existed in the strictest sense. There is only the past we have edited so that we can live with it.
I enjoyed reading it
September 9th, 2026 12:08
Sealgair said:
The “good old days” never really existed in the strictest sense. There is only the past we have edited so that we can live with it.
I enjoyed reading it
September 9th, 2026 12:08
The good old days
Ellen Marsell said:
Can we trust our memory of the past when it keeps turning a complicated history into a beautiful legend?
September 9th, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Can we trust our memory of the past when it keeps turning a complicated history into a beautiful legend?
September 9th, 2026 11:54
The good old days
sorenbarrett said:
Dappled words painted with stripes flow into this poem of names famous and infamous all make a pond still and calm. Nice my friend
September 9th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Dappled words painted with stripes flow into this poem of names famous and infamous all make a pond still and calm. Nice my friend
September 9th, 2026 11:41
Wandering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I connect with writing that lets wandering be its own form of truth rather than treating it as failure. There’s something deeply human in refusing easy certainty and continuing on anyway. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I connect with writing that lets wandering be its own form of truth rather than treating it as failure. There’s something deeply human in refusing easy certainty and continuing on anyway. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:48
Wandering
sorenbarrett said:
Divine words of a cosmic traveler washed in the tides of time.
September 7th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Divine words of a cosmic traveler washed in the tides of time.
September 7th, 2026 14:34
Wandering
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of inner pilgrimage, where each image leads to another, tracing a path through a vast landscape of associations.
September 7th, 2026 12:34
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of inner pilgrimage, where each image leads to another, tracing a path through a vast landscape of associations.
September 7th, 2026 12:34
Auto-da-fé
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Lorenz. The whole poem feels like a ritual of burning away one self while another struggles toward the light…death, memory, madness, and transcendence all circling the same flame. Dark, strange, and compelling, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Lorenz. The whole poem feels like a ritual of burning away one self while another struggles toward the light…death, memory, madness, and transcendence all circling the same flame. Dark, strange, and compelling, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:20
Auto-da-fé
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes, all it takes is a single spark to start living again.
September 6th, 2026 12:21
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes, all it takes is a single spark to start living again.
September 6th, 2026 12:21
Auto-da-fé
sorenbarrett said:
Encrypted in the surreal it oozes out through the cracks of poetry. Nicely done Lorez
September 6th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Encrypted in the surreal it oozes out through the cracks of poetry. Nicely done Lorez
September 6th, 2026 11:21
Invitation in the hereafter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of a cosmic cocktail. Physics, philosophy, Hendrix, rabbits, angels, tequila, and the devil all somehow belong at the same table…absurd, imaginative, and genuinely fun from beginning to end. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 5th, 2026 20:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of a cosmic cocktail. Physics, philosophy, Hendrix, rabbits, angels, tequila, and the devil all somehow belong at the same table…absurd, imaginative, and genuinely fun from beginning to end. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 5th, 2026 20:09
Invitation in the hereafter
Ellen Marsell said:
The curiosity of human consciousness refuses to accept that the last door must truly be the last one.
September 4th, 2026 13:28
Ellen Marsell said:
The curiosity of human consciousness refuses to accept that the last door must truly be the last one.
September 4th, 2026 13:28
Invitation in the hereafter
sorenbarrett said:
He has orange hair and looks older now. A fun read of mishmash taking absurdity to the science of the past where Abbot and Costello meet Newton and Clifford meets Garfield. A fun read my friend
September 4th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
He has orange hair and looks older now. A fun read of mishmash taking absurdity to the science of the past where Abbot and Costello meet Newton and Clifford meets Garfield. A fun read my friend
September 4th, 2026 11:44
Scripture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz! The poet appears as performer, wounded child, mystic, and restless creator...turning inner torment into something ceremonial while remaining unsettled by its power. Brilliantly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz! The poet appears as performer, wounded child, mystic, and restless creator...turning inner torment into something ceremonial while remaining unsettled by its power. Brilliantly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:21
Scripture
Ellen Marsell said:
Art does not destroy the inner monster. It learns to speak with it and gives it a name.
A surreal poem with a strong inner musicality.
September 2nd, 2026 16:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Art does not destroy the inner monster. It learns to speak with it and gives it a name.
A surreal poem with a strong inner musicality.
September 2nd, 2026 16:01
Scripture
sorenbarrett said:
I was scared too by the hieroglyphics of scripture that only the learned could interpret. Later I found it was just pig Latin invented by old men. Well done Lorenz
September 2nd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
I was scared too by the hieroglyphics of scripture that only the learned could interpret. Later I found it was just pig Latin invented by old men. Well done Lorenz
September 2nd, 2026 11:24
Vesuvio
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wild and unsettling piece, Lorenz. Naples, Vesuvius, myth, Catholic imagery, lust, sacrifice, and decay all crash together into something almost hallucinatory. Dark, excessive, and completely committed to its vision. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wild and unsettling piece, Lorenz. Naples, Vesuvius, myth, Catholic imagery, lust, sacrifice, and decay all crash together into something almost hallucinatory. Dark, excessive, and completely committed to its vision. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:44
Vesuvio
Ellen Marsell said:
The more dangerous the volcano, the stronger its pull.
September 1st, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The more dangerous the volcano, the stronger its pull.
September 1st, 2026 12:43
Vesuvio
sorenbarrett said:
If this is a metaphor for a female relationship stay away it may be hot but you\'ll get burned. I moved away from close to Mt. St. Helens just a few months before it blew and where I lived six inches of ash fell
September 1st, 2026 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
If this is a metaphor for a female relationship stay away it may be hot but you\'ll get burned. I moved away from close to Mt. St. Helens just a few months before it blew and where I lived six inches of ash fell
September 1st, 2026 12:08
A matter of time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
A matter of time
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
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