Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Fiery clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Fiery clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
Fiery clouds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
I hold you in thought
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
I hold you in thought
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
I hold you in thought
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is a constant artistic transformation of the past.
A very delicate, melancholic, and surreal poem about memory.
August 23rd, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is a constant artistic transformation of the past.
A very delicate, melancholic, and surreal poem about memory.
August 23rd, 2026 11:54
I hold you in thought
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece
August 23rd, 2026 11:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely flow to this piece
August 23rd, 2026 11:27
Inspiration
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a darkly sensual portrait of inspiration, Lorenz! You transform the creative impulse into an unreliable lover whose appearances consume the poet and whose absences consume him even more. The final devotion feels simultaneously sacred, addictive, and destructive. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a darkly sensual portrait of inspiration, Lorenz! You transform the creative impulse into an unreliable lover whose appearances consume the poet and whose absences consume him even more. The final devotion feels simultaneously sacred, addictive, and destructive. Brilliant work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:52
Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a spiritual archetype and holy temple of the cosmos. Lovely
August 21st, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a spiritual archetype and holy temple of the cosmos. Lovely
August 21st, 2026 12:42
Insomnia street
NafisaSB said:
on a shadowed journey like this, expect the unexpected...
August 21st, 2026 01:55
NafisaSB said:
on a shadowed journey like this, expect the unexpected...
August 21st, 2026 01:55
Inner landscapes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a richly atmospheric piece, Lorenz. Youth, age, grief, love, and mortality gather within the same dreamlike terrain, while memory becomes both refuge and passage. This carries a beautiful melancholy throughout. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a richly atmospheric piece, Lorenz. Youth, age, grief, love, and mortality gather within the same dreamlike terrain, while memory becomes both refuge and passage. This carries a beautiful melancholy throughout. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:30
Inner landscapes
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem offers a beautiful understanding of memory: the past is not a place we can return to, but a space that continues to exist within us.
August 19th, 2026 12:55
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem offers a beautiful understanding of memory: the past is not a place we can return to, but a space that continues to exist within us.
August 19th, 2026 12:55
Inner landscapes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the surreal and natural world and in paradox finds truth that resides unseen within the soul. A fave Lorenz
August 19th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the surreal and natural world and in paradox finds truth that resides unseen within the soul. A fave Lorenz
August 19th, 2026 11:07
Aquarium
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is dark, theatrical, and suffocating. Society becomes a performance staged inside an enclosure no one recognizes, while the poet remains painfully conscious of every wall. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is dark, theatrical, and suffocating. Society becomes a performance staged inside an enclosure no one recognizes, while the poet remains painfully conscious of every wall. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:02
Melancholic realm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a haunting journey through grief and memory. The cosmic, fairy-tale, and domestic images merge into a realm where absence distorts everything it touches. This stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a haunting journey through grief and memory. The cosmic, fairy-tale, and domestic images merge into a realm where absence distorts everything it touches. This stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:57
Aquarium
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of psychotherapeutic diagnosis of this world: the chronic trauma of alienation, where we are prisoners, actors, and victims of our own helplessness, applauding the curtain as it falls over the void. That’s how I see it.
August 17th, 2026 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of psychotherapeutic diagnosis of this world: the chronic trauma of alienation, where we are prisoners, actors, and victims of our own helplessness, applauding the curtain as it falls over the void. That’s how I see it.
August 17th, 2026 12:08
Aquarium
sorenbarrett said:
Do fish in an aquarium think that they are safe behind glass to observe wild humans in their habitat?
August 17th, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
Do fish in an aquarium think that they are safe behind glass to observe wild humans in their habitat?
August 17th, 2026 11:16
Melancholic realm
Sealgair said:
Saturn does not bring the past back. It merely keeps circling around it.
Always an enjoyable read.
August 16th, 2026 13:30
Sealgair said:
Saturn does not bring the past back. It merely keeps circling around it.
Always an enjoyable read.
August 16th, 2026 13:30
Melancholic realm
Ellen Marsell said:
Some presences now belong to our inner world...
August 16th, 2026 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Some presences now belong to our inner world...
August 16th, 2026 11:58
Melancholic realm
sorenbarrett said:
Cinderella burned and turned to cinders put in the coffin coach and would reawaken after midnight. Oh yes she wore one of those Saturn rings.
August 16th, 2026 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Cinderella burned and turned to cinders put in the coffin coach and would reawaken after midnight. Oh yes she wore one of those Saturn rings.
August 16th, 2026 11:42
Ambivalence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz...this is dark, theatrical, and psychologically charged. It feels like a struggle between longing, memory, shame, and desire, all refusing to let the other win. That ambivalence is everywhere. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz...this is dark, theatrical, and psychologically charged. It feels like a struggle between longing, memory, shame, and desire, all refusing to let the other win. That ambivalence is everywhere. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:51
Ambivalence
sorenbarrett said:
Plastic fruit hangs from the tree of knowledge where a rubber snake sits in the grass. Fine write my friend watch out for those nun\'s habits if not dirty at least perverse.
August 14th, 2026 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Plastic fruit hangs from the tree of knowledge where a rubber snake sits in the grass. Fine write my friend watch out for those nun\'s habits if not dirty at least perverse.
August 14th, 2026 12:55
Ambivalence
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The Gothic drips from it as the scarlet upon white satin
August 14th, 2026 12:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The Gothic drips from it as the scarlet upon white satin
August 14th, 2026 12:37
Ambivalence
Ellen Marsell said:
A philosophical dreamscape, steeped in Gothic shadows and psychological ambiguity.
August 14th, 2026 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
A philosophical dreamscape, steeped in Gothic shadows and psychological ambiguity.
August 14th, 2026 12:02
Insomnia street
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully macabre. The jester, tarot, devil, scaffold, death row…it all builds this surreal midnight world where the poet feels simultaneously condemned, prophetic, and completely lost. Definitely my kind of darkness. Excellent write, Lorenz! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully macabre. The jester, tarot, devil, scaffold, death row…it all builds this surreal midnight world where the poet feels simultaneously condemned, prophetic, and completely lost. Definitely my kind of darkness. Excellent write, Lorenz! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:17
Insomnia street
Ellen Marsell said:
Gothic in atmosphere, this poem is a labyrinth that invites reflection.
August 12th, 2026 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Gothic in atmosphere, this poem is a labyrinth that invites reflection.
August 12th, 2026 12:08
Insomnia street
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected bends and incongruent dead ends lead one on a dark but colored journey through maze of terms straight to the heart above the gut of meaning. Lovely
August 12th, 2026 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Unexpected bends and incongruent dead ends lead one on a dark but colored journey through maze of terms straight to the heart above the gut of meaning. Lovely
August 12th, 2026 11:42
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