Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The time of dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is an exquisitely gothic meditation on time, death, and whatever waits beyond them. The dreamlike imagery carries us across that shadowed threshold without pretending to reveal what lies there. Truly sublime, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is an exquisitely gothic meditation on time, death, and whatever waits beyond them. The dreamlike imagery carries us across that shadowed threshold without pretending to reveal what lies there. Truly sublime, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
The time of dreams
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey of the soul through the music of time, leading to that mysterious hour of dreams when the boundaries between past, present, and future simply dissolve.
July 16th, 2026 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey of the soul through the music of time, leading to that mysterious hour of dreams when the boundaries between past, present, and future simply dissolve.
July 16th, 2026 11:39
The skin of shagreen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one wild, surreal journey. Every stanza feels like stepping into another dream where nothing behaves the way you expect, yet somehow it all holds together. Wonderfully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one wild, surreal journey. Every stanza feels like stepping into another dream where nothing behaves the way you expect, yet somehow it all holds together. Wonderfully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:43
The skin of shagreen
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and erotically dark a poem of a death dance where death is late for his appointment. Actually I have been waiting for him for some time.
July 15th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and erotically dark a poem of a death dance where death is late for his appointment. Actually I have been waiting for him for some time.
July 15th, 2026 12:05
The skin of shagreen
Sealgair said:
We are all, in our own way, exiles from a place that never existed.
July 15th, 2026 11:59
Sealgair said:
We are all, in our own way, exiles from a place that never existed.
July 15th, 2026 11:59
The children of Eridan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most is how naturally the cosmic imagery becomes a metaphor for love, memory, and what outlives us. The children of Eridan, the stellar flowers, the amber tear...each image expands the emotional landscape while keeping the poem wonderfully human. A beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most is how naturally the cosmic imagery becomes a metaphor for love, memory, and what outlives us. The children of Eridan, the stellar flowers, the amber tear...each image expands the emotional landscape while keeping the poem wonderfully human. A beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:29
The children of Eridan
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and mythological it has a futuristic feel. Nicely done Lorenz
July 13th, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and mythological it has a futuristic feel. Nicely done Lorenz
July 13th, 2026 14:16
The children of Eridan
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is not read in the usual sense of the word—it is contemplated. That\'s lovely!
July 13th, 2026 11:22
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is not read in the usual sense of the word—it is contemplated. That\'s lovely!
July 13th, 2026 11:22
Mental prison
rhmn_7 said:
A haunting illusion of an inescapable mind, where false rewards trap consciousness in cycles of torment. Nice poem dear Lorenz!
July 12th, 2026 07:58
rhmn_7 said:
A haunting illusion of an inescapable mind, where false rewards trap consciousness in cycles of torment. Nice poem dear Lorenz!
July 12th, 2026 07:58
Mental prison
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a powerful piece. \"How to say \'Je t\'aime\' to an empty bottle?\" especially caught me, but the entire poem carries that dreamlike, disorienting atmosphere where one striking image gives way to the next. It left me thinking long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a powerful piece. \"How to say \'Je t\'aime\' to an empty bottle?\" especially caught me, but the entire poem carries that dreamlike, disorienting atmosphere where one striking image gives way to the next. It left me thinking long after I finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:28
Mental prison
sorenbarrett said:
This is a Jackson Pollock word painting in digital display. Well done in this Picasso Guernica mural on a poetic wall.
July 11th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
This is a Jackson Pollock word painting in digital display. Well done in this Picasso Guernica mural on a poetic wall.
July 11th, 2026 14:07
Mental prison
Ellen Marsell said:
The mind longs to make sense of the world, yet the world always resists understanding.
July 11th, 2026 13:37
Ellen Marsell said:
The mind longs to make sense of the world, yet the world always resists understanding.
July 11th, 2026 13:37
sanity mask
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one intense piece. It feels like stepping into a fractured inner landscape where conviction, isolation, and identity are constantly colliding. It certainly held my attention from beginning to end. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one intense piece. It feels like stepping into a fractured inner landscape where conviction, isolation, and identity are constantly colliding. It certainly held my attention from beginning to end. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:56
sanity mask
sorenbarrett said:
A saintly mask is worn by most devils pretending to be holy. A poignant write now that Trump posted himself as pope and God. Well done Lorenz
July 9th, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A saintly mask is worn by most devils pretending to be holy. A poignant write now that Trump posted himself as pope and God. Well done Lorenz
July 9th, 2026 12:57
sanity mask
Ellen Marsell said:
The most dangerous person is the one who comes and says, \"I know how to make you happy.\" Because sooner or later, he always brings an axe to cut away what he considers unnecessary.
July 9th, 2026 12:45
Ellen Marsell said:
The most dangerous person is the one who comes and says, \"I know how to make you happy.\" Because sooner or later, he always brings an axe to cut away what he considers unnecessary.
July 9th, 2026 12:45
Nowhere island
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz what a fascinating piece. I love how you lean fully into the surreal without losing the emotional thread underneath it all. The imagery keeps shifting like a dream, yet certain lines land with real force...especially the longing for eternity and the closing image of that shroud drifting off the coast of nowhere. This one stayed with me. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 21:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz what a fascinating piece. I love how you lean fully into the surreal without losing the emotional thread underneath it all. The imagery keeps shifting like a dream, yet certain lines land with real force...especially the longing for eternity and the closing image of that shroud drifting off the coast of nowhere. This one stayed with me. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 21:03
Nowhere island
Ellen Marsell said:
Everyone finds themselves on such an island at least once in their life — in a moment of profound loneliness, when familiar values no longer seem to work and faith begins to fade... A deeply philosophical poem that I truly enjoyed.
July 8th, 2026 12:44
Ellen Marsell said:
Everyone finds themselves on such an island at least once in their life — in a moment of profound loneliness, when familiar values no longer seem to work and faith begins to fade... A deeply philosophical poem that I truly enjoyed.
July 8th, 2026 12:44
Nowhere island
sorenbarrett said:
Madness drifts in the current circling the earth and in its circling it comes back to where it started starting over again. In such reoccurrences one expects different outcomes but they remain the same. Is this not insanity?
July 8th, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
Madness drifts in the current circling the earth and in its circling it comes back to where it started starting over again. In such reoccurrences one expects different outcomes but they remain the same. Is this not insanity?
July 8th, 2026 11:57
The gospel of the zombies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a fascinating piece. The surreal imagery, dream logic, and constant transformation keep the poem alive from the first line to the last. I never felt like I was meant to stand outside and decode it...I felt invited to step inside and experience it. That\'s exactly where this kind of poetry shines. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a fascinating piece. The surreal imagery, dream logic, and constant transformation keep the poem alive from the first line to the last. I never felt like I was meant to stand outside and decode it...I felt invited to step inside and experience it. That\'s exactly where this kind of poetry shines. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:37
The gospel of the zombies
sorenbarrett said:
This bears the signs of a modern adapted ancient fairytale.
June 26th, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
This bears the signs of a modern adapted ancient fairytale.
June 26th, 2026 12:26
The gospel of the zombies
Ellen Marsell said:
A highly intellectual work, woven from a complex network of symbols. It is a revelation about a world that is growing accustomed to its own inner emptiness.
June 26th, 2026 11:47
Ellen Marsell said:
A highly intellectual work, woven from a complex network of symbols. It is a revelation about a world that is growing accustomed to its own inner emptiness.
June 26th, 2026 11:47
The gospel of the zombies
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, very much enjoyed
June 26th, 2026 10:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, very much enjoyed
June 26th, 2026 10:58
The \'\' Jeff\'s coffee\'\'
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most here is the way observation and longing weave together throughout the piece. The city is full of movement, faces, and chance encounters, yet there is also that quiet search for something deeper beneath it all. Thoughtful and evocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most here is the way observation and longing weave together throughout the piece. The city is full of movement, faces, and chance encounters, yet there is also that quiet search for something deeper beneath it all. Thoughtful and evocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 08:56
The \'\' Jeff\'s coffee\'\'
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem!
After all, not every one of life\'s mysteries is meant to be solved — some are just meant to keep us company over a cup of coffee.
June 20th, 2026 05:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem!
After all, not every one of life\'s mysteries is meant to be solved — some are just meant to keep us company over a cup of coffee.
June 20th, 2026 05:03
The \'\' Jeff\'s coffee\'\'
sorenbarrett said:
Hey Lorenz am I suffering from deja vou?
June 19th, 2026 17:45
sorenbarrett said:
Hey Lorenz am I suffering from deja vou?
June 19th, 2026 17:45
Neurodivergence
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a complex, painful, yet incredibly beautiful lens, translating the static of a broken circuit into pure poetry.
June 18th, 2026 05:54
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a complex, painful, yet incredibly beautiful lens, translating the static of a broken circuit into pure poetry.
June 18th, 2026 05:54
Neurodivergence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this resonated with me. Many creative people eventually discover they spend part of their lives feeling slightly out of step with the systems around them. The challenge then becomes learning not merely to tolerate that difference, but to create from it. This poem brought that thought to mind immediately. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this resonated with me. Many creative people eventually discover they spend part of their lives feeling slightly out of step with the systems around them. The challenge then becomes learning not merely to tolerate that difference, but to create from it. This poem brought that thought to mind immediately. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:57
Neurodivergence
sorenbarrett said:
We are all divergent from the mean with a small standard deviation, the standard error is at p is less than point zero zero one. Significance is established statistics don\'t lie but liars use statistics
June 17th, 2026 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
We are all divergent from the mean with a small standard deviation, the standard error is at p is less than point zero zero one. Significance is established statistics don\'t lie but liars use statistics
June 17th, 2026 10:49
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