Comments received on poems by Lorenz
the fertile womb
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Lorenz. This went somewhere genuinely disturbing, especially once the religious imagery started colliding with all that brutality. Quite a ride. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Lorenz. This went somewhere genuinely disturbing, especially once the religious imagery started colliding with all that brutality. Quite a ride. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:12
the fertile womb
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like AI has escaped and is on the loose. A surrealistic read of a rampage gone berserk. Well done Lorenz
October 6th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like AI has escaped and is on the loose. A surrealistic read of a rampage gone berserk. Well done Lorenz
October 6th, 2026 12:14
the fertile womb
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a dark philosophical mystery. I like it!
October 6th, 2026 11:18
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a dark philosophical mystery. I like it!
October 6th, 2026 11:18
the fertile womb
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most passionate write. much enjoyed
October 6th, 2026 11:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most passionate write. much enjoyed
October 6th, 2026 11:04
My neurotic journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Lorenz...“Prophet of the craziest gospel” sounds like one hell of a job title. 😂 Whatever is happening around that messy desk, I\'d say the journey is producing something worthwhile. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Lorenz...“Prophet of the craziest gospel” sounds like one hell of a job title. 😂 Whatever is happening around that messy desk, I\'d say the journey is producing something worthwhile. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:11
My neurotic journey
Ellen Marsell said:
The journey back to oneself here is far from a beautiful pilgrimage toward the light. It is made of wandering, doubt, returning, mistakes, inner voices, and the attempt to piece oneself together from the fragments left behind.
October 4th, 2026 12:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The journey back to oneself here is far from a beautiful pilgrimage toward the light. It is made of wandering, doubt, returning, mistakes, inner voices, and the attempt to piece oneself together from the fragments left behind.
October 4th, 2026 12:12
My neurotic journey
sorenbarrett said:
I too missed the road sign and have gone too far to turn back. Nicely done Lorenz it gives the feel of lost and turned around.
October 4th, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
I too missed the road sign and have gone too far to turn back. Nicely done Lorenz it gives the feel of lost and turned around.
October 4th, 2026 11:57
My neurotic journey
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
neurotic but most enjoyable journey in this piece my friend
October 4th, 2026 11:45
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
neurotic but most enjoyable journey in this piece my friend
October 4th, 2026 11:45
Timeless ambiguity
Ellen Marsell said:
Between the memory of what is gone and the expectation of what is yet to come, trying to understand whether we are really free to shape our lives, or whether we are just a part of some vast, unfathomable mechanism of time.
October 3rd, 2026 11:27
Ellen Marsell said:
Between the memory of what is gone and the expectation of what is yet to come, trying to understand whether we are really free to shape our lives, or whether we are just a part of some vast, unfathomable mechanism of time.
October 3rd, 2026 11:27
Timeless ambiguity
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguity is great you don\'t have to make a choice and if you do you can\'t be blamed. Better yet if in a dream where you can step away when you awake.
October 2nd, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguity is great you don\'t have to make a choice and if you do you can\'t be blamed. Better yet if in a dream where you can step away when you awake.
October 2nd, 2026 13:20
Timeless ambiguity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece asks many questions
October 2nd, 2026 11:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece asks many questions
October 2nd, 2026 11:36
Timeless ambiguity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the “golden puppets” image got me. Are we actually creating what comes next, or just performing something already cast while convincing ourselves we’re improvising? That question hangs beautifully over the ending. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 2nd, 2026 11:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the “golden puppets” image got me. Are we actually creating what comes next, or just performing something already cast while convincing ourselves we’re improvising? That question hangs beautifully over the ending. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 2nd, 2026 11:26
Urban dissonance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a strange trip this was…dark streets, music, lost people, depression, death, and then somehow a little warmth still waiting somewhere. Hell of a journey. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a strange trip this was…dark streets, music, lost people, depression, death, and then somehow a little warmth still waiting somewhere. Hell of a journey. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:23
Urban dissonance
Ellen Marsell said:
Flawless exploration of the geometry of an existential dead end.
September 29th, 2026 13:13
Ellen Marsell said:
Flawless exploration of the geometry of an existential dead end.
September 29th, 2026 13:13
Urban dissonance
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem again with the feel of childhood when I used to play the violin and the mad hatter was my favorite character.
September 29th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem again with the feel of childhood when I used to play the violin and the mad hatter was my favorite character.
September 29th, 2026 12:07
The night of the Orionids
turningpoint said:
real sense of amazing things and movement
September 26th, 2026 16:41
turningpoint said:
real sense of amazing things and movement
September 26th, 2026 16:41
The night of the Orionids
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really enjoyed this, Lorenz. There is so much night-sky wonder in it that I could almost feel myself looking up while reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really enjoyed this, Lorenz. There is so much night-sky wonder in it that I could almost feel myself looking up while reading. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:20
The night of the Orionids
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like an Impressionist symphony. Music lives in these lines.
September 25th, 2026 13:57
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem feels like an Impressionist symphony. Music lives in these lines.
September 25th, 2026 13:57
The night of the Orionids
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A meteoric fav my friend
September 25th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A meteoric fav my friend
September 25th, 2026 11:20
The night of the Orionids
sorenbarrett said:
It is the first two lines that caught me Lorenz. Well said. the cosmic feel of this poem was surreal but then so is the cosmos. Loved it
September 25th, 2026 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is the first two lines that caught me Lorenz. Well said. the cosmic feel of this poem was surreal but then so is the cosmos. Loved it
September 25th, 2026 11:18
Sacred spiral
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is massive, Lorenz...God, space, death, poetry, all spinning together. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is massive, Lorenz...God, space, death, poetry, all spinning together. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:11
Sacred spiral
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic expression of spiritual and philosophical alchemy. A profound work.
September 22nd, 2026 13:19
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic expression of spiritual and philosophical alchemy. A profound work.
September 22nd, 2026 13:19
Sacred spiral
sorenbarrett said:
Time and dimensions across space. Well done
September 22nd, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Time and dimensions across space. Well done
September 22nd, 2026 11:47
Sacred spiral
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful fiery piece my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful fiery piece my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:42
dead nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. I’ve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this brought to mind all those old portraits of people whose names have been lost. I’ve always found them fascinating and a little sad. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:04
dead nature
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Lorenz a definite fave my friend it speaks to me. Female Dorian Grey.
September 19th, 2026 11:20
unformal jazz
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through 👍
September 18th, 2026 01:11
NafisaSB said:
Your love for music and jazz shines through 👍
September 18th, 2026 01:11
The eye of the history
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
I love the name I thought it was assumed from death itself but then he must be in the same family since all die. Well done Lorenz
September 17th, 2026 12:29
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