Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Street princess
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
Street princess
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
Shadows
Ellen Marsell said:
A fascinating philosophical reflection on our unchanging companions that accompany us in every moment.
November 20th, 2024 03:38
Ellen Marsell said:
A fascinating philosophical reflection on our unchanging companions that accompany us in every moment.
November 20th, 2024 03:38
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
I hear voiced the difficulty in understanding others. Very nicely worded in poetic form. The truth lies in do we really understand each other or not.
November 19th, 2024 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
I hear voiced the difficulty in understanding others. Very nicely worded in poetic form. The truth lies in do we really understand each other or not.
November 19th, 2024 14:15
The city
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering expressed very well. Nice.
November 19th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering expressed very well. Nice.
November 19th, 2024 01:20
Praying
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong imagery ranging from religious symbols to revelations about loneliness. And a bit of irony in reflecting on the nature of faith.
November 18th, 2024 11:04
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong imagery ranging from religious symbols to revelations about loneliness. And a bit of irony in reflecting on the nature of faith.
November 18th, 2024 11:04
Praying
2781 said:
\"Therefore pray not thou for these people, neither lift up cry nor prayer for them, neither make intercession to me: for I will not hear thee.\"
November 18th, 2024 08:57
2781 said:
\"Therefore pray not thou for these people, neither lift up cry nor prayer for them, neither make intercession to me: for I will not hear thee.\"
November 18th, 2024 08:57
The city
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
The city
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
Aging
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Aging
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
Silence
Ellen Marsell said:
Something like a cry of the soul, striving for silence, peace and harmony in contrast to the chaos and noise of modernity. A strong and imaginative poem with a pronounced poetic sensibility.
November 15th, 2024 10:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Something like a cry of the soul, striving for silence, peace and harmony in contrast to the chaos and noise of modernity. A strong and imaginative poem with a pronounced poetic sensibility.
November 15th, 2024 10:03
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly written.
November 15th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly written.
November 15th, 2024 09:13
Somewhere along my way
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the 60s even though it speaks of a blue haze may be more modern. I like the last line and it provokes thought about avatars all together
November 14th, 2024 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the 60s even though it speaks of a blue haze may be more modern. I like the last line and it provokes thought about avatars all together
November 14th, 2024 14:34
Somewhere along my way
Lorenz said:
The shipwreck of a generation\'s illusions !
November 14th, 2024 10:32
Lorenz said:
The shipwreck of a generation\'s illusions !
November 14th, 2024 10:32
Somewhere along my way
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem has a rich, reflective character, conveying the spirit of a way that is both physical and existential in nature. A way full of illusions, impermanence and fleeting moments where you encounter different facets of yourself and the world around you, leaving behind a trail of encounters and losses.
November 14th, 2024 10:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem has a rich, reflective character, conveying the spirit of a way that is both physical and existential in nature. A way full of illusions, impermanence and fleeting moments where you encounter different facets of yourself and the world around you, leaving behind a trail of encounters and losses.
November 14th, 2024 10:26
Mystical fluids
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem creates an image of the inextricable link between life and death. It is a lyrical monologue about the coming and going nature of life. Powerful metaphors conjure up the ephemerality of body and soul, weaving an intimate conversation between Eros (love, striving for life) and Thanatos (death, dissolution). The union of these opposing forces creates a mystical atmosphere.
November 13th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem creates an image of the inextricable link between life and death. It is a lyrical monologue about the coming and going nature of life. Powerful metaphors conjure up the ephemerality of body and soul, weaving an intimate conversation between Eros (love, striving for life) and Thanatos (death, dissolution). The union of these opposing forces creates a mystical atmosphere.
November 13th, 2024 12:00
Mystical fluids
sorenbarrett said:
This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first, not a pleasant thought, but with some reflection, it gives new meaning to the old passage, ashes to ashes and dust dust returning to the Earth, maybe returning to the sea a beautiful poem.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first, not a pleasant thought, but with some reflection, it gives new meaning to the old passage, ashes to ashes and dust dust returning to the Earth, maybe returning to the sea a beautiful poem.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
There\'s the one who stays
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
There\'s the one who stays
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
A letter
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
A letter
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
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