Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Planetarium in love
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent fantasy. Artful realization of love experiences through astronomical imagery. This was an enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 10:44
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent fantasy. Artful realization of love experiences through astronomical imagery. This was an enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 10:44
Planetarium in love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but so well aligned with the stars and astrology that it brought me back to earth. A lovely write of skill.
December 21st, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but so well aligned with the stars and astrology that it brought me back to earth. A lovely write of skill.
December 21st, 2024 08:58
Droplets
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! some great lines here (White hairs have no compassion for dead leaves ) and the great use of a homophone in liars. Nicely worded
December 19th, 2024 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! some great lines here (White hairs have no compassion for dead leaves ) and the great use of a homophone in liars. Nicely worded
December 19th, 2024 10:06
Droplets
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is deeply touching, like a quiet conversation with the soul. Strong, impressive images.
December 19th, 2024 09:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is deeply touching, like a quiet conversation with the soul. Strong, impressive images.
December 19th, 2024 09:36
Memory of absence
teardrop said:
I\'m sorry for the grief you feel here. Very deep write. Beautifully written!
December 19th, 2024 05:49
teardrop said:
I\'m sorry for the grief you feel here. Very deep write. Beautifully written!
December 19th, 2024 05:49
Sublime landscapes
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey beyond the familiar, a dive into the mystery, to the very core of being. 💫🌠
December 18th, 2024 10:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey beyond the familiar, a dive into the mystery, to the very core of being. 💫🌠
December 18th, 2024 10:42
Sublime landscapes
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper than the ocean mentioned, more vast than the skies, this poem has so much meaning and it returns on itself as you mention the waves and their journey in the begining and return to the calm ocean at the end. Journey completed.
December 18th, 2024 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper than the ocean mentioned, more vast than the skies, this poem has so much meaning and it returns on itself as you mention the waves and their journey in the begining and return to the calm ocean at the end. Journey completed.
December 18th, 2024 09:34
Memory of absence
sorenbarrett said:
\"your fingers touching me
through the cold mirror ...\"
a most wonderful line
\'I ache for this painful trace of your \"was\"...\'
Such an identifiable line. Loved it all
December 17th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
\"your fingers touching me
through the cold mirror ...\"
a most wonderful line
\'I ache for this painful trace of your \"was\"...\'
Such an identifiable line. Loved it all
December 17th, 2024 10:14
Memory of absence
Ellen Marsell said:
The human ability to become attached to the past and remain a prisoner of those moments that cannot be returned. A very beautiful, extremely imaginative piece.
December 17th, 2024 10:00
Ellen Marsell said:
The human ability to become attached to the past and remain a prisoner of those moments that cannot be returned. A very beautiful, extremely imaginative piece.
December 17th, 2024 10:00
The twilight of time
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is filled with wisdom and sounds like a warning, like the voice of a prophet speaking from the very heart of eternity.
December 16th, 2024 12:11
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is filled with wisdom and sounds like a warning, like the voice of a prophet speaking from the very heart of eternity.
December 16th, 2024 12:11
The twilight of time
sorenbarrett said:
So true when the flow, clocks, traffic all stop you have indeed reached the end. A most interesting write of what is of value is not material things but time itself. It can not be purchased at any cost.
December 16th, 2024 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
So true when the flow, clocks, traffic all stop you have indeed reached the end. A most interesting write of what is of value is not material things but time itself. It can not be purchased at any cost.
December 16th, 2024 11:11
Anagram
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Spirit mickey mouse...\" 😂
I like that. Wonderful rhythm, linguistic play. I think that here everyone will see something different: either the absurdity of the universe, or a caustic mockery of a pseudo-genius.
December 15th, 2024 06:58
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Spirit mickey mouse...\" 😂
I like that. Wonderful rhythm, linguistic play. I think that here everyone will see something different: either the absurdity of the universe, or a caustic mockery of a pseudo-genius.
December 15th, 2024 06:58
Anagram
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the profane against the holy, the absurd against reality and how thine and blurry the line. What is one man\'s god anther\'s devil. The highest is the lowest arrogance vs humility. Lovely poetic lines fill this poem. The setting of old latin gregorian chants come through in blasphemy take it as you will. Anger is the feeling I get.
December 15th, 2024 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sets the profane against the holy, the absurd against reality and how thine and blurry the line. What is one man\'s god anther\'s devil. The highest is the lowest arrogance vs humility. Lovely poetic lines fill this poem. The setting of old latin gregorian chants come through in blasphemy take it as you will. Anger is the feeling I get.
December 15th, 2024 06:46
My kingdoms of legend
Ellen Marsell said:
“My illusions at the stake on the river Ganga banks, freed from its suffering ...” - The lines I like best. Fascinating images.
December 14th, 2024 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
“My illusions at the stake on the river Ganga banks, freed from its suffering ...” - The lines I like best. Fascinating images.
December 14th, 2024 11:06
My kingdoms of legend
sorenbarrett said:
Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an exotic setting surreal. Lovely Lorenz
December 14th, 2024 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an exotic setting surreal. Lovely Lorenz
December 14th, 2024 11:02
The woman inside me
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem! This approach inspires the reader to realize their own inner versatility 😊
December 14th, 2024 04:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful poem! This approach inspires the reader to realize their own inner versatility 😊
December 14th, 2024 04:20
The woman inside me
sorenbarrett said:
You have named many of the archetypes that fill are feminine side. Each of us contain a mixture of these. Beautifully worded and clearly stated it is most poetic.
December 13th, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
You have named many of the archetypes that fill are feminine side. Each of us contain a mixture of these. Beautifully worded and clearly stated it is most poetic.
December 13th, 2024 10:05
Made in Japan
rengoku said:
im going to japan someday
its my favorite place on earth im trying to learn their language
December 12th, 2024 14:49
rengoku said:
im going to japan someday
its my favorite place on earth im trying to learn their language
December 12th, 2024 14:49
Made in Japan
Ellen Marsell said:
A lighthearted look at the characteristics of Japan\'s deep and rich culture. It was a pleasure to read.
December 12th, 2024 10:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A lighthearted look at the characteristics of Japan\'s deep and rich culture. It was a pleasure to read.
December 12th, 2024 10:42
Made in Japan
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply rooted in culture this poem has a sense of cynicism and it comes through in the lines
December 12th, 2024 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply rooted in culture this poem has a sense of cynicism and it comes through in the lines
December 12th, 2024 10:19
Made in Japan
rin said:
You will definitely be resurrected. That\'s what a hero is.
December 12th, 2024 06:03
rin said:
You will definitely be resurrected. That\'s what a hero is.
December 12th, 2024 06:03
Made in Japan
rin said:
I don\'t know that much about America, but I was surprised at how much you know about Japan. Without love and curiosity, we would not be able to obtain this much information about Japanese culture. It\'s especially wonderful that you wrote a poem about kokeshi dolls. I haven\'t written enough yet. Thank you,You called me friend. We are friends!
December 12th, 2024 05:26
rin said:
I don\'t know that much about America, but I was surprised at how much you know about Japan. Without love and curiosity, we would not be able to obtain this much information about Japanese culture. It\'s especially wonderful that you wrote a poem about kokeshi dolls. I haven\'t written enough yet. Thank you,You called me friend. We are friends!
December 12th, 2024 05:26
the death of the star
Ellen Marsell said:
C\'est un brillant exemple de la façon dont la poésie peut être une arme.
I love your poem with these strong images and metaphors!
December 11th, 2024 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
C\'est un brillant exemple de la façon dont la poésie peut être une arme.
I love your poem with these strong images and metaphors!
December 11th, 2024 12:30
the death of the star
sorenbarrett said:
The mind requires absurdities to gain its attention and maintain it. Once gained the stranger the image the greater the metaphor. The mind needs these like crossword puzzles to keep it occupied. Don\'t know where I\'m going but know where I came from. Loved the poem
December 11th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
The mind requires absurdities to gain its attention and maintain it. Once gained the stranger the image the greater the metaphor. The mind needs these like crossword puzzles to keep it occupied. Don\'t know where I\'m going but know where I came from. Loved the poem
December 11th, 2024 08:58
the death of the star
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
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