Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Self portraits
sorenbarrett said:
What is of importance? Whatever blows your hair back. A fun read full of more metaphor than I could keep track of
May 22nd, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
What is of importance? Whatever blows your hair back. A fun read full of more metaphor than I could keep track of
May 22nd, 2025 10:55
Incarnation
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of mystical autobiography of the soul.
A brilliant poem where the soul wanders between reincarnations, dissolving into images and eras.
May 21st, 2025 13:19
Ellen Marsell said:
A kind of mystical autobiography of the soul.
A brilliant poem where the soul wanders between reincarnations, dissolving into images and eras.
May 21st, 2025 13:19
The return of the lamb
Ellen Marsell said:
An apocalyptic satire with a philosophical undertone. A powerful text.
May 21st, 2025 10:52
Ellen Marsell said:
An apocalyptic satire with a philosophical undertone. A powerful text.
May 21st, 2025 10:52
The return of the lamb
Cheeky Missy said:
You DO know what you\'re saying, don\'t you? Fascinating and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Gorgeous. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2025 10:12
Cheeky Missy said:
You DO know what you\'re saying, don\'t you? Fascinating and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Gorgeous. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2025 10:12
The return of the lamb
sorenbarrett said:
Catholic images pervade this poem and certainly must unlock the meaning hidden beneath the layers. Love the symbolism.
May 21st, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Catholic images pervade this poem and certainly must unlock the meaning hidden beneath the layers. Love the symbolism.
May 21st, 2025 08:09
Incarnation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is another mind provoking one. Some great lines.
May 20th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is another mind provoking one. Some great lines.
May 20th, 2025 15:51
Bug
Ellen Marsell said:
Love turned into poison?
A poetic mini-drama laced with humor... The imagery borders on surreal, yet remains emotionally recognizable.
May 19th, 2025 10:41
Ellen Marsell said:
Love turned into poison?
A poetic mini-drama laced with humor... The imagery borders on surreal, yet remains emotionally recognizable.
May 19th, 2025 10:41
Bug
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of some I have know and of me at times. A very nicely written poem with so many great lines and images. Poignant and felt.
May 19th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of some I have know and of me at times. A very nicely written poem with so many great lines and images. Poignant and felt.
May 19th, 2025 08:32
Retro
Ellen Marsell said:
A light, slightly rebellious poem, saturated with the cultural imagery of the 20th century. A journey through worlds of memory, across the associative maps of eras, along the winding paths of scattered feelings... Touching. Playful. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A light, slightly rebellious poem, saturated with the cultural imagery of the 20th century. A journey through worlds of memory, across the associative maps of eras, along the winding paths of scattered feelings... Touching. Playful. Well written.
May 18th, 2025 13:48
Retro
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A fun read
May 18th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A fun read
May 18th, 2025 09:07
The magician\'s dawn
Ellen Marsell said:
In the stream of images, amid metaphors and symbols, lingers a thick smoke of decadence and postmodern irony.
May 16th, 2025 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
In the stream of images, amid metaphors and symbols, lingers a thick smoke of decadence and postmodern irony.
May 16th, 2025 11:11
The magician\'s dawn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the feel of music song titles. I know that they are not but even so it feels like something right out of an album. This has so many metaphors applied all that I can get is a feel of frustration and anger. It emotes. Nicely done Lorez
May 16th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the feel of music song titles. I know that they are not but even so it feels like something right out of an album. This has so many metaphors applied all that I can get is a feel of frustration and anger. It emotes. Nicely done Lorez
May 16th, 2025 09:03
The magician\'s dawn
Libellule said:
Has such a timeless... LOTR feel to it... well done... carried me along
May 16th, 2025 08:09
Libellule said:
Has such a timeless... LOTR feel to it... well done... carried me along
May 16th, 2025 08:09
Sunset visitors
Ellen Marsell said:
A reflection on eternal themes of loneliness, freedom, memory, and the end. An excellent poem!
May 14th, 2025 13:12
Ellen Marsell said:
A reflection on eternal themes of loneliness, freedom, memory, and the end. An excellent poem!
May 14th, 2025 13:12
Sunset visitors
sorenbarrett said:
Once again filled with metaphor and symbolism this poem speaks to me of questions of faith in love and religion, trust in what is said. Innocence is dismissed and a good question would we want to return if we could. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Once again filled with metaphor and symbolism this poem speaks to me of questions of faith in love and religion, trust in what is said. Innocence is dismissed and a good question would we want to return if we could. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 06:51
Redemption
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Redemption
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Manifesto of ordinary madness
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
Solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
The text deeply moves me. It pays tribute to the quiet tragedy that artists sometimes endure.
May 11th, 2025 15:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The text deeply moves me. It pays tribute to the quiet tragedy that artists sometimes endure.
May 11th, 2025 15:43
Solitude
Cheeky Missy said:
Tales of Hoffman rears its head, only wearing nary smile on his face, the ghastly, macabre face of reality fewer know so well as the artist delineated to rather exquisite perfection on one angle, that emptiness which haunts our driven pursuit unmasques itself herein and we recognize each other in a glance. If only Sigmund hadn\'t been so rebellious he might give a satisfactory reply. Oh, I love how capably you\'ve woven so much into this swatch, making it a keeper. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 10:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Tales of Hoffman rears its head, only wearing nary smile on his face, the ghastly, macabre face of reality fewer know so well as the artist delineated to rather exquisite perfection on one angle, that emptiness which haunts our driven pursuit unmasques itself herein and we recognize each other in a glance. If only Sigmund hadn\'t been so rebellious he might give a satisfactory reply. Oh, I love how capably you\'ve woven so much into this swatch, making it a keeper. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 10:55
Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz a powerful poem with many great lines and images. It speaks dissolution, manipulation, delusion and a world where they all exist. A fave
May 11th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz a powerful poem with many great lines and images. It speaks dissolution, manipulation, delusion and a world where they all exist. A fave
May 11th, 2025 09:39
A few musical notes
Sealgair said:
Doesn’t matter how many years go by — music just opens up the past, like lifting the lid on an old memory box.
May 10th, 2025 12:59
Sealgair said:
Doesn’t matter how many years go by — music just opens up the past, like lifting the lid on an old memory box.
May 10th, 2025 12:59
A few musical notes
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is literally woven from cultural and musical references... Like an improvisation on the theme of passing time. Beautifully written.
May 10th, 2025 11:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is literally woven from cultural and musical references... Like an improvisation on the theme of passing time. Beautifully written.
May 10th, 2025 11:12
A few musical notes
sorenbarrett said:
Loved all the musical hints woven into this piece and each seemed to evoke nostalgia and memories of the past. Lovely
May 10th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Loved all the musical hints woven into this piece and each seemed to evoke nostalgia and memories of the past. Lovely
May 10th, 2025 04:17
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