Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Poem at low tide
sorenbarrett said:
Dysphoric and yet not sad this poem paints a gray picture that is somber. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Dysphoric and yet not sad this poem paints a gray picture that is somber. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:57
Kafka
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark poetry about life, madness, death, and the illusion of meaning, embodied in images inspired by Franz Kafka and his world.
You weave philosophy, surrealism, and sharp poetic intuition into a single burning thread of thought.
Wonderfully written!
July 31st, 2025 05:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark poetry about life, madness, death, and the illusion of meaning, embodied in images inspired by Franz Kafka and his world.
You weave philosophy, surrealism, and sharp poetic intuition into a single burning thread of thought.
Wonderfully written!
July 31st, 2025 05:53
Kafka
sorenbarrett said:
Some most interesting combinations here that paint a modern Hieronymus Bosch Garden of Earthly Delights. Very nicely done
July 31st, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Some most interesting combinations here that paint a modern Hieronymus Bosch Garden of Earthly Delights. Very nicely done
July 31st, 2025 04:05
Hobson\'s choice
Priya Tomar said:
A flight feels less about travel more about inner escape.....
Last line caught my eyes....
Brilliant creation.
July 29th, 2025 23:26
Priya Tomar said:
A flight feels less about travel more about inner escape.....
Last line caught my eyes....
Brilliant creation.
July 29th, 2025 23:26
Hobson\'s choice
Sealgair said:
The world teems with symbols and shadows, yet all is fleeting. Choice is but an illusion.
Brilliant work!
July 29th, 2025 13:37
Sealgair said:
The world teems with symbols and shadows, yet all is fleeting. Choice is but an illusion.
Brilliant work!
July 29th, 2025 13:37
Hobson\'s choice
sorenbarrett said:
Flying by instruments can be a test of faith and only works as long as the instruments are reliable and you have a good map. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
Flying by instruments can be a test of faith and only works as long as the instruments are reliable and you have a good map. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 11:59
Hobson\'s choice
Ellen Marsell said:
We think we are steering fate, but more often we simply surrender to its mystique.
July 29th, 2025 09:52
Ellen Marsell said:
We think we are steering fate, but more often we simply surrender to its mystique.
July 29th, 2025 09:52
Jump into the afterdeath
Ellen Marsell said:
Noir aesthetics, postmodern play with imagery, and poetic intensity — in this poem, they intertwine into dark yet mesmerizing lines.
July 29th, 2025 04:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Noir aesthetics, postmodern play with imagery, and poetic intensity — in this poem, they intertwine into dark yet mesmerizing lines.
July 29th, 2025 04:22
The poet\'s soul
NafisaSB said:
deep musings that demand an answer that will reveal itself only at the end
inspired poem
July 29th, 2025 00:52
NafisaSB said:
deep musings that demand an answer that will reveal itself only at the end
inspired poem
July 29th, 2025 00:52
Jump into the afterdeath
Lorenz said:
A descent into the mental night between urban nightmare and poetic thanatos .
July 28th, 2025 19:47
Lorenz said:
A descent into the mental night between urban nightmare and poetic thanatos .
July 28th, 2025 19:47
Jump into the afterdeath
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and noir it plays like a black and white movie. A death ritual maybe. Nicely written
July 28th, 2025 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and noir it plays like a black and white movie. A death ritual maybe. Nicely written
July 28th, 2025 15:10
The poet\'s soul
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetry blends pain and irony. And this poem — a black pearl — strikes with its subtlety and depth.
July 27th, 2025 13:17
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetry blends pain and irony. And this poem — a black pearl — strikes with its subtlety and depth.
July 27th, 2025 13:17
The poet\'s soul
sorenbarrett said:
It is dark even black at places this poem speaks in symbols and metaphor and speaks of death and maybe in that sense change. Well written Lorenz
July 27th, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
It is dark even black at places this poem speaks in symbols and metaphor and speaks of death and maybe in that sense change. Well written Lorenz
July 27th, 2025 11:02
The poet\'s soul
Justina said:
Moved by the dramatic tension in the dialogue section
July 27th, 2025 10:41
Justina said:
Moved by the dramatic tension in the dialogue section
July 27th, 2025 10:41
History
Ellen Marsell said:
History as a being - tired, tragic, searching for a place to rest from its own burden. An impressive piece.
July 26th, 2025 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
History as a being - tired, tragic, searching for a place to rest from its own burden. An impressive piece.
July 26th, 2025 11:06
History
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved history and as I grew older became disenchanted finding that it is a changing picture that was first written by the conqueror from their point of view and distorted through the years by each dynasty that had their own needs, often the original no longer available. Or it was assembled from pieces of pottery and chard bones by the surmises of archeologists as a jigsaw puzzle missing pieces and with some that don\'t fit. No longer the romantic thing it once was I see it as swimming in murky waters poorly defined some say it is a behemoth, others a mermaid. Maybe it is just an old submerged log. The poem is beautiful and so well worded it is a fave
July 26th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved history and as I grew older became disenchanted finding that it is a changing picture that was first written by the conqueror from their point of view and distorted through the years by each dynasty that had their own needs, often the original no longer available. Or it was assembled from pieces of pottery and chard bones by the surmises of archeologists as a jigsaw puzzle missing pieces and with some that don\'t fit. No longer the romantic thing it once was I see it as swimming in murky waters poorly defined some say it is a behemoth, others a mermaid. Maybe it is just an old submerged log. The poem is beautiful and so well worded it is a fave
July 26th, 2025 04:42
Licence to kill
sorenbarrett said:
Those who dream die faster .
Don\'t think I\'m afraid .
Fear is for those who doubt .
Great lines that sink deep into the mind. This poem is full of them and the last line
You\'re only a ink maker ,
And I don\'t like amateur killer...
is most powerful. A fave
July 25th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Those who dream die faster .
Don\'t think I\'m afraid .
Fear is for those who doubt .
Great lines that sink deep into the mind. This poem is full of them and the last line
You\'re only a ink maker ,
And I don\'t like amateur killer...
is most powerful. A fave
July 25th, 2025 04:44
Licence to kill
Ellen Marsell said:
This is poetry of alienation, written by a sniper at the dusk of modernity.
No love, no hatred — only an algorithm.
July 25th, 2025 04:02
Ellen Marsell said:
This is poetry of alienation, written by a sniper at the dusk of modernity.
No love, no hatred — only an algorithm.
July 25th, 2025 04:02
Licence to kill
Priya Tomar said:
Well written poem
The poem has haunting tone that explores death, worrier , war and loss of innocence.
Cold teddy.. nice imagery
July 25th, 2025 03:26
Priya Tomar said:
Well written poem
The poem has haunting tone that explores death, worrier , war and loss of innocence.
Cold teddy.. nice imagery
July 25th, 2025 03:26
The last poet
Damaso said:
Wow, splendid. Exquisite writing in an incredible text. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 09:00
Damaso said:
Wow, splendid. Exquisite writing in an incredible text. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 09:00
The century
Ellen Marsell said:
The century gazes into the mirror of its own memory.
A confession of time that reflected upon itself - and shuddered.
A powerful poem: profound, haunting, rich in broken, iconic, and painterly metaphors.
July 21st, 2025 10:11
Ellen Marsell said:
The century gazes into the mirror of its own memory.
A confession of time that reflected upon itself - and shuddered.
A powerful poem: profound, haunting, rich in broken, iconic, and painterly metaphors.
July 21st, 2025 10:11
The century
sorenbarrett said:
There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written Lorenz with significant cryptic symbolism my friend
July 21st, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written Lorenz with significant cryptic symbolism my friend
July 21st, 2025 07:04
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