Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The lady of the lake
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words make for a dream like image in this painting of words. Well done my friend
May 16th, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words make for a dream like image in this painting of words. Well done my friend
May 16th, 2026 13:36
The funeral of poetry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I really enjoyed how the poem keeps mocking poetry and artistic vanity while simultaneously creating something vividly poetic from that very critique. That contradiction gives the piece real bite. Love this. A fave for sure. 🖤🙏🌹🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I really enjoyed how the poem keeps mocking poetry and artistic vanity while simultaneously creating something vividly poetic from that very critique. That contradiction gives the piece real bite. Love this. A fave for sure. 🖤🙏🌹🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:11
The funeral of poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz this poem holds true to the paintings of Bosch with its surreal and twisted images. The metaphors match as well and it was a delight to read. Well done and a fave my friend
May 15th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz this poem holds true to the paintings of Bosch with its surreal and twisted images. The metaphors match as well and it was a delight to read. Well done and a fave my friend
May 15th, 2026 13:31
The funeral of poetry
Ellen Marsell said:
An eschatological vision of the \'end of art. The grand sacrament of the word has been turned into a \"pumpkin ritual,\" and poets into marionettes. The surreal atmosphere and ironic tone of the poem. I loved it.
May 15th, 2026 12:16
Ellen Marsell said:
An eschatological vision of the \'end of art. The grand sacrament of the word has been turned into a \"pumpkin ritual,\" and poets into marionettes. The surreal atmosphere and ironic tone of the poem. I loved it.
May 15th, 2026 12:16
My melody
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I really connected with the idea of an inner melody that both escapes and returns…something tied to memory, longing, and the self all at once. The poem feels deeply intimate without forcing itself. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I really connected with the idea of an inner melody that both escapes and returns…something tied to memory, longing, and the self all at once. The poem feels deeply intimate without forcing itself. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:21
My melody
sorenbarrett said:
We are all nothing but music vibrations of the universe.
May 13th, 2026 16:28
sorenbarrett said:
We are all nothing but music vibrations of the universe.
May 13th, 2026 16:28
My melody
Ellen Marsell said:
The chill of the North Sea is warmed by the Italian sun, and the austerity of German classics suddenly breaks into a dance to the rhythm of Brazilian streets.
May 13th, 2026 12:35
Ellen Marsell said:
The chill of the North Sea is warmed by the Italian sun, and the austerity of German classics suddenly breaks into a dance to the rhythm of Brazilian streets.
May 13th, 2026 12:35
Social distress
Dan Williams said:
The butler/ executioner offering life in a closet character conjures a great image. I was afraid as a boy of my closet and had to have the door completely closed. Then \"I don\'t believe a word you\'re saying and yet I know you\'re right\" is perfect. Nice
May 13th, 2026 02:37
Dan Williams said:
The butler/ executioner offering life in a closet character conjures a great image. I was afraid as a boy of my closet and had to have the door completely closed. Then \"I don\'t believe a word you\'re saying and yet I know you\'re right\" is perfect. Nice
May 13th, 2026 02:37
Social distress
Priya Tomar said:
An inner monologue of alienation .
Well written .
May 12th, 2026 04:38
Priya Tomar said:
An inner monologue of alienation .
Well written .
May 12th, 2026 04:38
Social distress
sorenbarrett said:
Again a surreal journey through the underworld. Well worded and nicely composed
May 11th, 2026 21:44
sorenbarrett said:
Again a surreal journey through the underworld. Well worded and nicely composed
May 11th, 2026 21:44
Social distress
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is deeply unsettling in the best way. The poem moves like a surreal spiritual autopsy…cold, symbolic, intimate, and relentlessly inward. I especially loved the tension between monstrous imagery and vulnerable confession throughout the piece. “Love me and you\'ll no longer be / a stranger in your own home !” lands with chilling force after everything that precedes it. Extraordinary work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is deeply unsettling in the best way. The poem moves like a surreal spiritual autopsy…cold, symbolic, intimate, and relentlessly inward. I especially loved the tension between monstrous imagery and vulnerable confession throughout the piece. “Love me and you\'ll no longer be / a stranger in your own home !” lands with chilling force after everything that precedes it. Extraordinary work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:21
Social distress
Ellen Marsell said:
A hauntingly beautiful exploration of darkness!
May 11th, 2026 11:28
Ellen Marsell said:
A hauntingly beautiful exploration of darkness!
May 11th, 2026 11:28
Sublime dance
sorenbarrett said:
All dance from pure energy to matter. Well written
May 9th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
All dance from pure energy to matter. Well written
May 9th, 2026 19:11
Sublime dance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is deeply contemplative and luminous. The poem moves through cosmic loneliness, awe, mortality, and spiritual continuity with a dreamlike fluidity that feels almost visionary. I especially loved the idea of becoming stardust from which a wild flower blooms…that transformation carries both humility and transcendence together. Truly beautiful and expansive writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is deeply contemplative and luminous. The poem moves through cosmic loneliness, awe, mortality, and spiritual continuity with a dreamlike fluidity that feels almost visionary. I especially loved the idea of becoming stardust from which a wild flower blooms…that transformation carries both humility and transcendence together. Truly beautiful and expansive writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:03
Sublime dance
Ellen Marsell said:
Infinity briefly passes through mortal consciousness before returning to the silence of the stars.
May 9th, 2026 13:49
Ellen Marsell said:
Infinity briefly passes through mortal consciousness before returning to the silence of the stars.
May 9th, 2026 13:49
Bipolar metaverse
Sofia HT said:
I like and relate to this line:
\" Am I really this madman at noon
and this lucid thinker at midnight ?\"
at midnight it\'s easier to think well
May 6th, 2026 09:50
Sofia HT said:
I like and relate to this line:
\" Am I really this madman at noon
and this lucid thinker at midnight ?\"
at midnight it\'s easier to think well
May 6th, 2026 09:50
The envelope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels dreamlike and haunted all at once...like wandering through memory, longing, and dread without ever fully knowing which door has actually been opened. The atmosphere here really lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels dreamlike and haunted all at once...like wandering through memory, longing, and dread without ever fully knowing which door has actually been opened. The atmosphere here really lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:52
The envelope
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about silence\'s mercy, shielding us from existence\'s unbearable clarity.
May 5th, 2026 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about silence\'s mercy, shielding us from existence\'s unbearable clarity.
May 5th, 2026 11:41
The envelope
sorenbarrett said:
Better sealed than not I say. Secrets I don\'t know, ignorance is bliss
May 5th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Better sealed than not I say. Secrets I don\'t know, ignorance is bliss
May 5th, 2026 11:14
Summer of \' 36
sorenbarrett said:
It is those times that we were not there for that are the brightest and those days past that memories warm the most. A lovely write of nostalgia never experienced in this life.
May 1st, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
It is those times that we were not there for that are the brightest and those days past that memories warm the most. A lovely write of nostalgia never experienced in this life.
May 1st, 2026 16:35
Summer of \' 36
Ellen Marsell said:
A disembodied infatuation that lacks a \'destination,\' as the recipient dwells in another dimension.
May 1st, 2026 12:45
Ellen Marsell said:
A disembodied infatuation that lacks a \'destination,\' as the recipient dwells in another dimension.
May 1st, 2026 12:45
Rendezvous with the artist .
sorenbarrett said:
This one I see in pastels of pink and blues with just a hint of green. It is a sunset or sunrise depending on what side of the bed you get out of. Nicely done Lorenz and a fave
April 29th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
This one I see in pastels of pink and blues with just a hint of green. It is a sunset or sunrise depending on what side of the bed you get out of. Nicely done Lorenz and a fave
April 29th, 2026 13:43
Rendezvous with the artist .
Ellen Marsell said:
A graceful confession of the burden of talent. Creativity is not only a blessing, but an inevitable cohabitation with the eccentric being within oneself.
April 29th, 2026 11:13
Ellen Marsell said:
A graceful confession of the burden of talent. Creativity is not only a blessing, but an inevitable cohabitation with the eccentric being within oneself.
April 29th, 2026 11:13
Rendezvous with the artist .
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
flows beautifully
April 29th, 2026 10:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
flows beautifully
April 29th, 2026 10:59
A little pale note of blues
Priya Tomar said:
Tragedy of human existence is not ignorance but awareness of our own smallness in an infinite universe.
Nicely done .
April 27th, 2026 22:13
Priya Tomar said:
Tragedy of human existence is not ignorance but awareness of our own smallness in an infinite universe.
Nicely done .
April 27th, 2026 22:13
A little pale note of blues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’ve always connected with that Sagan sense of scale…how small we are, but still searching anyway. This brought that feeling right back for me. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 12:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’ve always connected with that Sagan sense of scale…how small we are, but still searching anyway. This brought that feeling right back for me. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 12:50
A little pale note of blues
Ellen Marsell said:
Earth is the only place we can survive, but it remains our prison. We\'re caught in the \"sealed bottle\" of our own consciousness, drifting across a shoreless ocean.
Beautiful poem!
April 27th, 2026 12:16
Ellen Marsell said:
Earth is the only place we can survive, but it remains our prison. We\'re caught in the \"sealed bottle\" of our own consciousness, drifting across a shoreless ocean.
Beautiful poem!
April 27th, 2026 12:16
A little pale note of blues
sorenbarrett said:
Sagan would love this my friend
April 27th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sagan would love this my friend
April 27th, 2026 11:29
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