Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Brown plague
Lorenz said:
I guess I won\'t be invited to the feast .( and I\'m worried about fido ! ) . But she can always share recipes with GeekSusie !
June 13th, 2026 12:46
Lorenz said:
I guess I won\'t be invited to the feast .( and I\'m worried about fido ! ) . But she can always share recipes with GeekSusie !
June 13th, 2026 12:46
Brown plague
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god it wasn\'t black. This one is just a bit of a downer. Sex, death, pestilence tombs, body fluids. This one will give Orchi all kinds of recipe ideas. Good thing I already had lunch. Well written Lorenz
June 13th, 2026 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god it wasn\'t black. This one is just a bit of a downer. Sex, death, pestilence tombs, body fluids. This one will give Orchi all kinds of recipe ideas. Good thing I already had lunch. Well written Lorenz
June 13th, 2026 12:28
Brown plague
Ellen Marsell said:
The confession of a mind locked between the \"crematorium of autumn and winter’s sputum .\" Poetry here becomes a final, desperate act of auto-psychoanalysis.
June 13th, 2026 11:31
Ellen Marsell said:
The confession of a mind locked between the \"crematorium of autumn and winter’s sputum .\" Poetry here becomes a final, desperate act of auto-psychoanalysis.
June 13th, 2026 11:31
The blue lotus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back memories of those conversations that seem to arrive out of nowhere...a train ride, a café, a chance encounter, and suddenly an ordinary day becomes something you\'ll remember years later. I found myself smiling through this one. Beautifully done, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back memories of those conversations that seem to arrive out of nowhere...a train ride, a café, a chance encounter, and suddenly an ordinary day becomes something you\'ll remember years later. I found myself smiling through this one. Beautifully done, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:30
The blue lotus
sorenbarrett said:
Sei la amor A beautiful piece my friend a fave
June 12th, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
Sei la amor A beautiful piece my friend a fave
June 12th, 2026 13:24
Diary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like a fever dream stitched together from mythology, psychiatry, religion, and surreal self-examination. 😄 The poem moves with a kind of deliberate instability that keeps the reader off balance in fascinating ways. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🦋🙏🌌🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like a fever dream stitched together from mythology, psychiatry, religion, and surreal self-examination. 😄 The poem moves with a kind of deliberate instability that keeps the reader off balance in fascinating ways. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🦋🙏🌌🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:00
The blue lotus
Ellen Marsell said:
An unfulfilled romance is sometimes more beautiful and profound than mundane reality, for it remains to live in the realm of pure art.
June 12th, 2026 11:33
Ellen Marsell said:
An unfulfilled romance is sometimes more beautiful and profound than mundane reality, for it remains to live in the realm of pure art.
June 12th, 2026 11:33
Diary
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the most mysterious book in the world is not fate, nor history, nor a diary, but human consciousness trying to understand itself, turning its own pages down to the very last blank page.
June 11th, 2026 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the most mysterious book in the world is not fate, nor history, nor a diary, but human consciousness trying to understand itself, turning its own pages down to the very last blank page.
June 11th, 2026 13:20
Diary
sorenbarrett said:
With a golden blade on a scythe cut the golden bough or mistletoe caught before it hits the ground. Druid sacrifice. Good write my friend
June 11th, 2026 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
With a golden blade on a scythe cut the golden bough or mistletoe caught before it hits the ground. Druid sacrifice. Good write my friend
June 11th, 2026 11:18
Prayers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a beautiful meditation, my friend. There is a wistfulness running through this from beginning to end...a sense of life passing through the seasons while we try to make peace with what remains and what slips away. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a beautiful meditation, my friend. There is a wistfulness running through this from beginning to end...a sense of life passing through the seasons while we try to make peace with what remains and what slips away. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:21
Prayers
Sealgair said:
A journey through a lifetime. Beautiful poetry, beautiful music!
June 10th, 2026 15:02
Sealgair said:
A journey through a lifetime. Beautiful poetry, beautiful music!
June 10th, 2026 15:02
Prayers
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem reads like a pilgrimage through memory. Every image seems touched by nostalgia, yet the tone remains remarkably serene and wise.
June 10th, 2026 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem reads like a pilgrimage through memory. Every image seems touched by nostalgia, yet the tone remains remarkably serene and wise.
June 10th, 2026 12:08
Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
Seasons are easy to predict but the weather ask any weatherman unless of the underground sort they will tell you how they freed Timothy Leary.
June 10th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
Seasons are easy to predict but the weather ask any weatherman unless of the underground sort they will tell you how they freed Timothy Leary.
June 10th, 2026 11:32
Dystopia
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian dystopia painted neon. Here women wear satire dresses and men pants that are felt. A good one that took me to Oz and back. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian dystopia painted neon. Here women wear satire dresses and men pants that are felt. A good one that took me to Oz and back. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:07
Dystopia
Sealgair said:
The scary thing about this world is that on the outside, everything looks flawless, but on the inside, you can\'t even breathe. It’s a society of victorious \"design\" and ruined \"meaning.\"
Nicely written!
June 8th, 2026 12:17
Sealgair said:
The scary thing about this world is that on the outside, everything looks flawless, but on the inside, you can\'t even breathe. It’s a society of victorious \"design\" and ruined \"meaning.\"
Nicely written!
June 8th, 2026 12:17
Dystopia
Ellen Marsell said:
A dystopia is a world that believes itself to be a utopia. You are the one who can still tell the difference.
June 8th, 2026 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A dystopia is a world that believes itself to be a utopia. You are the one who can still tell the difference.
June 8th, 2026 12:00
Dystopia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I\'ve always been drawn to works that blur the line between satire, philosophy, and surrealism. The references to avatars, algorithms, normality, and Phobos create a world that feels strange while remaining uncomfortably familiar. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I\'ve always been drawn to works that blur the line between satire, philosophy, and surrealism. The references to avatars, algorithms, normality, and Phobos create a world that feels strange while remaining uncomfortably familiar. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 11:03
The survivor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this reminds me of those late-night thoughts where one idea tumbles into another with no concern for borders or chronology. History, music, myth, weather, and personal reflection all end up sharing the same deck. I found myself happily carried along by the current. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this reminds me of those late-night thoughts where one idea tumbles into another with no concern for borders or chronology. History, music, myth, weather, and personal reflection all end up sharing the same deck. I found myself happily carried along by the current. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:20
The survivor
Ellen Marsell said:
Before us unfolds a chronicle of catastrophe, yet one written with the soul-chilling calm of an observer. It is the journal of a man sitting within the storm as if enclosed in a glass cube, studying the geometry of lightning and recording every movement of the surrounding chaos. There is something here that speaks of the absolute autonomy of the human spirit.
June 4th, 2026 12:27
Ellen Marsell said:
Before us unfolds a chronicle of catastrophe, yet one written with the soul-chilling calm of an observer. It is the journal of a man sitting within the storm as if enclosed in a glass cube, studying the geometry of lightning and recording every movement of the surrounding chaos. There is something here that speaks of the absolute autonomy of the human spirit.
June 4th, 2026 12:27
The survivor
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an engaging write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 12:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an engaging write my friend, much enjoyed
June 4th, 2026 12:05
Alternate history
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. I love how the poem moves effortlessly between the sacred, the cosmic, and the fantastical...from the stable and galactic dust to Alice, Leia, quasars, and gods. Yet beneath all those images, I hear a deeper desire to escape prescribed roles and imagined destinies in search of something more authentic and expansive. The closing image of a god longing for a little blue planet is especially striking. Thought-provoking and beautifully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 22:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. I love how the poem moves effortlessly between the sacred, the cosmic, and the fantastical...from the stable and galactic dust to Alice, Leia, quasars, and gods. Yet beneath all those images, I hear a deeper desire to escape prescribed roles and imagined destinies in search of something more authentic and expansive. The closing image of a god longing for a little blue planet is especially striking. Thought-provoking and beautifully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 22:00
Alternate history
sorenbarrett said:
Alice what of the snarks and boojums? Oh yea forgot about the snark that was a boojum.
June 2nd, 2026 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
Alice what of the snarks and boojums? Oh yea forgot about the snark that was a boojum.
June 2nd, 2026 13:09
Alternate history
Ellen Marsell said:
The finale hints that the longing for another world never ends: man yearns for the sky, and God yearns for the Earth. There is a wonderful existential irony in this. A beautiful poem!
June 2nd, 2026 12:23
Ellen Marsell said:
The finale hints that the longing for another world never ends: man yearns for the sky, and God yearns for the Earth. There is a wonderful existential irony in this. A beautiful poem!
June 2nd, 2026 12:23
The new era
rhmn_7 said:
Poets are, from time to time, rascals indeed, Great write!
May 31st, 2026 01:23
rhmn_7 said:
Poets are, from time to time, rascals indeed, Great write!
May 31st, 2026 01:23
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