Comments received on poems by Lorenz
A pet world
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, deeply symbolic poem in which playfulness is combined with profound thought. Beautifully written!
January 31st, 2026 14:17
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, deeply symbolic poem in which playfulness is combined with profound thought. Beautifully written!
January 31st, 2026 14:17
A pet world
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted tales or tails result in angry lions or liars. The garden of earthly delights was not what I had in mind for a good time. This poem shook my mind and now the coin slot works again. It is an absolute corker and I\'ll have a second expresso please.
January 31st, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted tales or tails result in angry lions or liars. The garden of earthly delights was not what I had in mind for a good time. This poem shook my mind and now the coin slot works again. It is an absolute corker and I\'ll have a second expresso please.
January 31st, 2026 12:14
Waiting
Ellen Marsell said:
Poetry of mature waiting, without illusions and without renouncing feelings.
January 30th, 2026 13:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Poetry of mature waiting, without illusions and without renouncing feelings.
January 30th, 2026 13:36
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
There is a pause in the circus atmosphere where nothing seems certain only that something is coming. A wonderful surrealistic poem.
January 30th, 2026 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
There is a pause in the circus atmosphere where nothing seems certain only that something is coming. A wonderful surrealistic poem.
January 30th, 2026 12:20
Megapolar blues
Ellen Marsell said:
Here we encounter a poetics of tectonic plates: sentences collide like continents, giving birth to tension. It is a seismograph of an era’s mind. The text records catastrophe.
January 29th, 2026 14:12
Ellen Marsell said:
Here we encounter a poetics of tectonic plates: sentences collide like continents, giving birth to tension. It is a seismograph of an era’s mind. The text records catastrophe.
January 29th, 2026 14:12
Megapolar blues
sorenbarrett said:
Colors from blue, black, white, grey, green, bloody (red) colors of decay. The very mention of rotten. Such word play as well Lorenz leaves this a fave
January 29th, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Colors from blue, black, white, grey, green, bloody (red) colors of decay. The very mention of rotten. Such word play as well Lorenz leaves this a fave
January 29th, 2026 14:03
My daily madness
Ellen Marsell said:
An unusual poem that feels like an inner monologue under pressure, when the mind is working at its limit but still keeping control. There’s fatigue, there’s irony, and an intellectual distance. Well written!
January 28th, 2026 13:44
Ellen Marsell said:
An unusual poem that feels like an inner monologue under pressure, when the mind is working at its limit but still keeping control. There’s fatigue, there’s irony, and an intellectual distance. Well written!
January 28th, 2026 13:44
My daily madness
sorenbarrett said:
Mayhem no doubt a derivative of May hymn a sacred right of spring the rebirth of the Phoenix that suicided in flames. A most interesting write Lorenz where dr. Kevorkian should be cited if not receive a medal of honor. Well done
January 28th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Mayhem no doubt a derivative of May hymn a sacred right of spring the rebirth of the Phoenix that suicided in flames. A most interesting write Lorenz where dr. Kevorkian should be cited if not receive a medal of honor. Well done
January 28th, 2026 12:05
The gardens of Babylon
sorenbarrett said:
On clay tablets copper is sold a deal poorly made. In Gobekli Tepe people gathered to celebrate gods of sun. A wonderful write or maybe rite Lorenz
January 27th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
On clay tablets copper is sold a deal poorly made. In Gobekli Tepe people gathered to celebrate gods of sun. A wonderful write or maybe rite Lorenz
January 27th, 2026 13:12
The gardens of Babylon
Ellen Marsell said:
A secret inner garden, where poetry is still alive, where desire and memory do not submit to history. A beautiful poem.
January 27th, 2026 12:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A secret inner garden, where poetry is still alive, where desire and memory do not submit to history. A beautiful poem.
January 27th, 2026 12:37
A flight to New York
sorenbarrett said:
New York becomes Minnesota in a craps shoot where two bullets give snake eyes and two sixes ride box cars. Surreal Lorenz and the mayor says you need to surrender your gun.
January 26th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
New York becomes Minnesota in a craps shoot where two bullets give snake eyes and two sixes ride box cars. Surreal Lorenz and the mayor says you need to surrender your gun.
January 26th, 2026 13:52
A flight to New York
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem that does not promise New York but reveals what we are fleeing by going there.
January 26th, 2026 13:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem that does not promise New York but reveals what we are fleeing by going there.
January 26th, 2026 13:29
Interior night
sorenbarrett said:
Demonic possession for a schizophrenic child or dementia stricken old man. Let angels fly form such doors and trephine their skulls with stone chisels and wooden mallets.
January 24th, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Demonic possession for a schizophrenic child or dementia stricken old man. Let angels fly form such doors and trephine their skulls with stone chisels and wooden mallets.
January 24th, 2026 12:33
A world beyond men
Sealgair said:
In this world, social roles, dreams, and fears no longer matter. What remains is a single human being facing the void and his decision.
A superb poem.
January 22nd, 2026 16:07
Sealgair said:
In this world, social roles, dreams, and fears no longer matter. What remains is a single human being facing the void and his decision.
A superb poem.
January 22nd, 2026 16:07
A world beyond men
Lorenz said:
Never such a personality have accepted to end his life as a cripple .His tortured feet carried him until the very last moment .
January 22nd, 2026 14:07
Lorenz said:
Never such a personality have accepted to end his life as a cripple .His tortured feet carried him until the very last moment .
January 22nd, 2026 14:07
A world beyond men
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a moral exploration of the form of human dignity under inhuman conditions. An impressive text.
January 22nd, 2026 13:55
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a moral exploration of the form of human dignity under inhuman conditions. An impressive text.
January 22nd, 2026 13:55
A world beyond men
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Lorenz it reads as journal entries in a way and feels like a voice from the past. Well done.
January 22nd, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Lorenz it reads as journal entries in a way and feels like a voice from the past. Well done.
January 22nd, 2026 13:07
Critical Threshold
Ellen Marsell said:
Do we know at all that the play is already over, or are we still seated in the hall, applauding the void? A striking piece, Lorenz.
January 21st, 2026 12:45
Ellen Marsell said:
Do we know at all that the play is already over, or are we still seated in the hall, applauding the void? A striking piece, Lorenz.
January 21st, 2026 12:45
Critical Threshold
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Bosch paintings had several prints of his framed and gave them to my son. Like a fever dream they tell the story in a dark surreal world and not only is everything visible in the hidden but much is hidden in the visible. Well done Lorenz
January 21st, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Bosch paintings had several prints of his framed and gave them to my son. Like a fever dream they tell the story in a dark surreal world and not only is everything visible in the hidden but much is hidden in the visible. Well done Lorenz
January 21st, 2026 12:13
Acta est fabula
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark, ironic satire of desacralized times. Impressive!
January 19th, 2026 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark, ironic satire of desacralized times. Impressive!
January 19th, 2026 13:15
Acta est fabula
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s all a fable of folly, mirthful magic, a laughing joke of the gods. Black humor they say. Never the less in the Eden of the ignorant there is plenty of fruit on the tree, no matter that it is forbidden. What are they going to do shoot you in the head for noncompliance? Jokes on them then they have to support you and put up with your horseshit in paradise of hell. Would be a shame to fuck those two places up.
January 19th, 2026 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s all a fable of folly, mirthful magic, a laughing joke of the gods. Black humor they say. Never the less in the Eden of the ignorant there is plenty of fruit on the tree, no matter that it is forbidden. What are they going to do shoot you in the head for noncompliance? Jokes on them then they have to support you and put up with your horseshit in paradise of hell. Would be a shame to fuck those two places up.
January 19th, 2026 12:51
Toba
Paul Bell said:
I think when Toba gets angry we all see the consequences.
Now, a super Toba, whose impact lasted years, that\'s a real impact.
Nature at work, we live in awe.
January 17th, 2026 06:19
Paul Bell said:
I think when Toba gets angry we all see the consequences.
Now, a super Toba, whose impact lasted years, that\'s a real impact.
Nature at work, we live in awe.
January 17th, 2026 06:19
Toba
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful metaphors and a rare sense of the ancient spirit!
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful metaphors and a rare sense of the ancient spirit!
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Toba
sorenbarrett said:
This seems nature turned to myth and myth to reality. A lovely poem of metaphor with significant vibrant power. Viril I would call it
January 16th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
This seems nature turned to myth and myth to reality. A lovely poem of metaphor with significant vibrant power. Viril I would call it
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Ä Summersmorge
Ellen Marsell said:
A rare poem, beautiful in its darkness and honesty.
January 13th, 2026 13:28
Ellen Marsell said:
A rare poem, beautiful in its darkness and honesty.
January 13th, 2026 13:28
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