Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Scripture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz! The poet appears as performer, wounded child, mystic, and restless creator...turning inner torment into something ceremonial while remaining unsettled by its power. Brilliantly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz! The poet appears as performer, wounded child, mystic, and restless creator...turning inner torment into something ceremonial while remaining unsettled by its power. Brilliantly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:21
Scripture
Ellen Marsell said:
Art does not destroy the inner monster. It learns to speak with it and gives it a name.
A surreal poem with a strong inner musicality.
September 2nd, 2026 16:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Art does not destroy the inner monster. It learns to speak with it and gives it a name.
A surreal poem with a strong inner musicality.
September 2nd, 2026 16:01
Scripture
sorenbarrett said:
I was scared too by the hieroglyphics of scripture that only the learned could interpret. Later I found it was just pig Latin invented by old men. Well done Lorenz
September 2nd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
I was scared too by the hieroglyphics of scripture that only the learned could interpret. Later I found it was just pig Latin invented by old men. Well done Lorenz
September 2nd, 2026 11:24
Vesuvio
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wild and unsettling piece, Lorenz. Naples, Vesuvius, myth, Catholic imagery, lust, sacrifice, and decay all crash together into something almost hallucinatory. Dark, excessive, and completely committed to its vision. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wild and unsettling piece, Lorenz. Naples, Vesuvius, myth, Catholic imagery, lust, sacrifice, and decay all crash together into something almost hallucinatory. Dark, excessive, and completely committed to its vision. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:44
Vesuvio
Ellen Marsell said:
The more dangerous the volcano, the stronger its pull.
September 1st, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The more dangerous the volcano, the stronger its pull.
September 1st, 2026 12:43
Vesuvio
sorenbarrett said:
If this is a metaphor for a female relationship stay away it may be hot but you\'ll get burned. I moved away from close to Mt. St. Helens just a few months before it blew and where I lived six inches of ash fell
September 1st, 2026 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
If this is a metaphor for a female relationship stay away it may be hot but you\'ll get burned. I moved away from close to Mt. St. Helens just a few months before it blew and where I lived six inches of ash fell
September 1st, 2026 12:08
A matter of time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this speaks to me. I have always found time to be one of the strangest parts of being alive…sometimes racing, sometimes crawling, sometimes carrying us backward without warning. You captured that beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 30th, 2026 20:39
A matter of time
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
Ellen Marsell said:
\"That was just a play...\"
But who said the performance is over? Perhaps, for us, the curtain has fallen.
And somewhere — in another branch of reality, in another state of matter, in another form of time — this very scene is still unfolding.
August 29th, 2026 12:09
A matter of time
sorenbarrett said:
Our toys age poorly in the attic where rats abound. Memory polishes the silver and repaints the colors. Digging in the attic one finds defects never seen.
August 29th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Our toys age poorly in the attic where rats abound. Memory polishes the silver and repaints the colors. Digging in the attic one finds defects never seen.
August 29th, 2026 11:21
A matter of time
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mystery of time and life
August 29th, 2026 11:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mystery of time and life
August 29th, 2026 11:17
Berliner Nacht
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a dark and intoxicating piece! Berlin becomes a fever dream where decadence, history, desire, and violence stumble through the same night. Absolutely riveting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a dark and intoxicating piece! Berlin becomes a fever dream where decadence, history, desire, and violence stumble through the same night. Absolutely riveting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:43
Berliner Nacht
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the dark, nocturnal side of humanity.
August 28th, 2026 12:03
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the dark, nocturnal side of humanity.
August 28th, 2026 12:03
Berliner Nacht
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautifully dark and alluring
August 28th, 2026 11:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautifully dark and alluring
August 28th, 2026 11:37
Berliner Nacht
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark feel, slippery as oil it comes out of the cobwebs like a spider after a fly. Well said in the last lines where the lord of the flies appears. Well done Lorenz
August 28th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark feel, slippery as oil it comes out of the cobwebs like a spider after a fly. Well said in the last lines where the lord of the flies appears. Well done Lorenz
August 28th, 2026 11:36
Simulacrum
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I deeply relate to the tension between the self presented to the world and the stranger encountered within. Sometimes what society calls normal feels like the greater disguise. This gave me plenty to contemplate, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 17:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I deeply relate to the tension between the self presented to the world and the stranger encountered within. Sometimes what society calls normal feels like the greater disguise. This gave me plenty to contemplate, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 17:02
Simulacrum
Ellen Marsell said:
The main mystery is whether a true \"self\" exists.
August 27th, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The main mystery is whether a true \"self\" exists.
August 27th, 2026 12:43
Simulacrum
sorenbarrett said:
This could be confused with sacrum (always thought that was a sacred crumb.) This one had my head spinning you might say I got wound up.
August 27th, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
This could be confused with sacrum (always thought that was a sacred crumb.) This one had my head spinning you might say I got wound up.
August 27th, 2026 12:13
Poetic galaxy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a ferocious descent into the torment of creation. Astronomical vastness collides with bodily violence as language becomes both injury and necessity…beautiful, consuming, and dangerously unstable. Brilliant work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is a ferocious descent into the torment of creation. Astronomical vastness collides with bodily violence as language becomes both injury and necessity…beautiful, consuming, and dangerously unstable. Brilliant work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 16:07
Poetic galaxy
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic poem, steeped in gothic melancholy and dreamlike imagery.
August 26th, 2026 11:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic poem, steeped in gothic melancholy and dreamlike imagery.
August 26th, 2026 11:48
Poetic galaxy
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is surreal and dream like which is not much different than a good psychosis. Nicely penned but I wouldn\'t stir my coffee with my pen, don\'t like the taste of ink.
August 26th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
The poem is surreal and dream like which is not much different than a good psychosis. Nicely penned but I wouldn\'t stir my coffee with my pen, don\'t like the taste of ink.
August 26th, 2026 11:21
Poetic galaxy
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such a rich galaxy, much enjoyed
August 26th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Such a rich galaxy, much enjoyed
August 26th, 2026 11:20
Fiery clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and seek something spiritually uncorrupted. This connected with my own mystical searching. Wonderful piece, Lorenz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 19:04
Fiery clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Eating the flesh of the gods for redemption and we call the Aztecs barbarians. Well done my friend
August 25th, 2026 11:47
Fiery clouds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write Lorenz, much enjoyed
August 25th, 2026 11:20
I hold you in thought
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a dreamlike gallery where remembrance keeps repainting what can no longer be reached. Lush, aching, and deeply haunting, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 13:01
I hold you in thought
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
An impressionist painting that verges on post modern. Nicely tinted with pastels
August 23rd, 2026 12:39
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