Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Paradox box
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Paradox box
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard...dark, surreal, and brutally sad, yet threaded with the kind of humor that makes the horror feel even sharper. What a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard...dark, surreal, and brutally sad, yet threaded with the kind of humor that makes the horror feel even sharper. What a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:09
Home
Cheeky Missy said:
You adroitly pull off rendering the ghastly reality whose macabre essence clings like foundling mud ever does, with a lofty touch, that conclusion a killer. My, I do love how well you penned this! Superb imagery with a damning poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 18:46
Cheeky Missy said:
You adroitly pull off rendering the ghastly reality whose macabre essence clings like foundling mud ever does, with a lofty touch, that conclusion a killer. My, I do love how well you penned this! Superb imagery with a damning poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 18:46
Home
sorenbarrett said:
Existential surrealism put in a pipe bender and worshiped as a god. Love it
July 24th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Existential surrealism put in a pipe bender and worshiped as a god. Love it
July 24th, 2026 14:17
Home
Ellen Marsell said:
He becomes the keeper of his own hell, its last ghost and only witness. Only a part of his soul is able, from time to time, to leave that place and tell us its story. A brilliant psychological poem.
July 24th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
He becomes the keeper of his own hell, its last ghost and only witness. Only a part of his soul is able, from time to time, to leave that place and tell us its story. A brilliant psychological poem.
July 24th, 2026 11:36
Between Armorica and Atlantis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The atmosphere really caught me here, Lorenz. Every passage adds another layer of mystery until the entire piece feels almost enchanted…richly textured and wonderfully immersive. Beautifully written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The atmosphere really caught me here, Lorenz. Every passage adds another layer of mystery until the entire piece feels almost enchanted…richly textured and wonderfully immersive. Beautifully written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 08:41
Between Armorica and Atlantis
sorenbarrett said:
Land and water from shipwrecks to lullabies a mystical write of surreal lands. Well written my friend
July 23rd, 2026 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Land and water from shipwrecks to lullabies a mystical write of surreal lands. Well written my friend
July 23rd, 2026 11:58
Between Armorica and Atlantis
Ellen Marsell said:
\"We do not come into this world; we come out of it, as leaves from a tree and waves from the ocean.\" — Alan Watts.
What a beautiful poem, Lorenz!
July 23rd, 2026 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
\"We do not come into this world; we come out of it, as leaves from a tree and waves from the ocean.\" — Alan Watts.
What a beautiful poem, Lorenz!
July 23rd, 2026 11:44
Between Armorica and Atlantis
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece
July 23rd, 2026 11:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece
July 23rd, 2026 11:02
Lethal smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one heck of a poem! I love how a harmless human interaction becomes an existential emergency for someone perfectly content with his misery. Dark, witty, and wonderfully strange, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one heck of a poem! I love how a harmless human interaction becomes an existential emergency for someone perfectly content with his misery. Dark, witty, and wonderfully strange, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:11
Lethal smile
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so very capable with words and expression, am I allowed to smirk or laugh because it seems hilarious in a darker sense? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:24
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so very capable with words and expression, am I allowed to smirk or laugh because it seems hilarious in a darker sense? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:24
Lethal smile
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an enchanting piece my friend, much enjoyed
July 22nd, 2026 12:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an enchanting piece my friend, much enjoyed
July 22nd, 2026 12:32
Lethal smile
Ellen Marsell said:
A little existential drama unfolding against the backdrop of an ordinary morning. I love it!
July 22nd, 2026 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
A little existential drama unfolding against the backdrop of an ordinary morning. I love it!
July 22nd, 2026 12:06
Lethal smile
sorenbarrett said:
Those smiles wear different masks some a smirk others a grin while yet others a guffaw. Well done Lorenz made me smile
July 22nd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Those smiles wear different masks some a smirk others a grin while yet others a guffaw. Well done Lorenz made me smile
July 22nd, 2026 11:24
The queen\'s pawn saga
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Van Gogh poisoning the sunrise really caught me, Lorenz. That image is grotesque, beautiful, and apocalyptic all at once…art itself appears to suffer a complete nervous breakdown. Brilliantly vivid work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Van Gogh poisoning the sunrise really caught me, Lorenz. That image is grotesque, beautiful, and apocalyptic all at once…art itself appears to suffer a complete nervous breakdown. Brilliantly vivid work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 20:28
The queen\'s pawn saga
Ellen Marsell said:
The most dangerous pieces are the ones that aren\'t in the rules of the game.
July 21st, 2026 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
The most dangerous pieces are the ones that aren\'t in the rules of the game.
July 21st, 2026 12:30
The queen\'s pawn saga
sorenbarrett said:
The queen\'s pawn not Fredy but Brian maybe. Astrophysicist on a guitar now that\'s bizarre. Maybe this is the bizarre you are talking about. No I think more Conrad and the Heart of Darkness that plays a fine tune with King Leopold of Belgium dancing a jig.
July 21st, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
The queen\'s pawn not Fredy but Brian maybe. Astrophysicist on a guitar now that\'s bizarre. Maybe this is the bizarre you are talking about. No I think more Conrad and the Heart of Darkness that plays a fine tune with King Leopold of Belgium dancing a jig.
July 21st, 2026 12:27
The time of dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is an exquisitely gothic meditation on time, death, and whatever waits beyond them. The dreamlike imagery carries us across that shadowed threshold without pretending to reveal what lies there. Truly sublime, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is an exquisitely gothic meditation on time, death, and whatever waits beyond them. The dreamlike imagery carries us across that shadowed threshold without pretending to reveal what lies there. Truly sublime, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
The time of dreams
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey of the soul through the music of time, leading to that mysterious hour of dreams when the boundaries between past, present, and future simply dissolve.
July 16th, 2026 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey of the soul through the music of time, leading to that mysterious hour of dreams when the boundaries between past, present, and future simply dissolve.
July 16th, 2026 11:39
The skin of shagreen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one wild, surreal journey. Every stanza feels like stepping into another dream where nothing behaves the way you expect, yet somehow it all holds together. Wonderfully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one wild, surreal journey. Every stanza feels like stepping into another dream where nothing behaves the way you expect, yet somehow it all holds together. Wonderfully imaginative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:43
The skin of shagreen
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and erotically dark a poem of a death dance where death is late for his appointment. Actually I have been waiting for him for some time.
July 15th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and erotically dark a poem of a death dance where death is late for his appointment. Actually I have been waiting for him for some time.
July 15th, 2026 12:05
The skin of shagreen
Sealgair said:
We are all, in our own way, exiles from a place that never existed.
July 15th, 2026 11:59
Sealgair said:
We are all, in our own way, exiles from a place that never existed.
July 15th, 2026 11:59
The children of Eridan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most is how naturally the cosmic imagery becomes a metaphor for love, memory, and what outlives us. The children of Eridan, the stellar flowers, the amber tear...each image expands the emotional landscape while keeping the poem wonderfully human. A beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what I enjoyed most is how naturally the cosmic imagery becomes a metaphor for love, memory, and what outlives us. The children of Eridan, the stellar flowers, the amber tear...each image expands the emotional landscape while keeping the poem wonderfully human. A beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 15:29
The children of Eridan
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and mythological it has a futuristic feel. Nicely done Lorenz
July 13th, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and mythological it has a futuristic feel. Nicely done Lorenz
July 13th, 2026 14:16
The children of Eridan
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is not read in the usual sense of the word—it is contemplated. That\'s lovely!
July 13th, 2026 11:22
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is not read in the usual sense of the word—it is contemplated. That\'s lovely!
July 13th, 2026 11:22
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