Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Digital nirvana
Ellen Marsell said:
We become what we behold. We shape our tools, and thereafter our tools shape us. A powerful and impressive poem.
October 25th, 2025 14:53
Ellen Marsell said:
We become what we behold. We shape our tools, and thereafter our tools shape us. A powerful and impressive poem.
October 25th, 2025 14:53
Digital nirvana
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe AI is the answer. Do technology and dreams sleep and dream? Maybe the universe in its interconnected atomic structure dreams too. If so are we mear figments of its dream? A mind provoking write Lorenz
October 25th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe AI is the answer. Do technology and dreams sleep and dream? Maybe the universe in its interconnected atomic structure dreams too. If so are we mear figments of its dream? A mind provoking write Lorenz
October 25th, 2025 12:04
The sands of time
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the existential struggle of the individual in a world that feels trapped in the past and burdened by the weight of memories and experiences. The subject matter includes themes of death, the passage of time, the search for meaning, and a critique of philosophical constructs that attempt to define or confine human experience.
October 24th, 2025 17:05
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the existential struggle of the individual in a world that feels trapped in the past and burdened by the weight of memories and experiences. The subject matter includes themes of death, the passage of time, the search for meaning, and a critique of philosophical constructs that attempt to define or confine human experience.
October 24th, 2025 17:05
The sands of time
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of “the sands flowing upward” is magnificent!
This text is a philosophical pantomime, an intellectual surrealism with a touch of subtle humor.
Beautifully written!
October 24th, 2025 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of “the sands flowing upward” is magnificent!
This text is a philosophical pantomime, an intellectual surrealism with a touch of subtle humor.
Beautifully written!
October 24th, 2025 13:15
The sands of time
sorenbarrett said:
A dyslexic speaks truth with a twisted tongue. An upside down hourglass is but the same when turned over, what does it do for plumbing problems? Freud arm wrestling Jung stuck in mortal combat the archetype gains ground but sex comes from behind. Ford was a Nazi in better times and Engles left Marx on is car.
October 24th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A dyslexic speaks truth with a twisted tongue. An upside down hourglass is but the same when turned over, what does it do for plumbing problems? Freud arm wrestling Jung stuck in mortal combat the archetype gains ground but sex comes from behind. Ford was a Nazi in better times and Engles left Marx on is car.
October 24th, 2025 11:04
The sands of time
Priya Tomar said:
Meditation on mortality and memory .
Nice !
October 24th, 2025 11:00
Priya Tomar said:
Meditation on mortality and memory .
Nice !
October 24th, 2025 11:00
My farewell letter
Lorenz said:
Ochre and rust
settle on our words in blues
but don\'t believe what I say .
October 24th, 2025 03:42
Lorenz said:
Ochre and rust
settle on our words in blues
but don\'t believe what I say .
October 24th, 2025 03:42
My farewell letter
NafisaSB said:
a blue verse - i like the way the lament is done with dignity and style...enjoyed reading it
October 24th, 2025 01:18
NafisaSB said:
a blue verse - i like the way the lament is done with dignity and style...enjoyed reading it
October 24th, 2025 01:18
Central station
Paul Bell said:
At some point, they all passed through the station of despair.
Some may have asked, where does the death go, and the conductor laughed, even I don\'t know.
October 23rd, 2025 14:14
Paul Bell said:
At some point, they all passed through the station of despair.
Some may have asked, where does the death go, and the conductor laughed, even I don\'t know.
October 23rd, 2025 14:14
Central station
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever mixed up two jigsaw puzzles then taken out half the pieces. A game of eight ball without the eight ball or pool and a billiards table. A wild read.
October 23rd, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever mixed up two jigsaw puzzles then taken out half the pieces. A game of eight ball without the eight ball or pool and a billiards table. A wild read.
October 23rd, 2025 12:25
Central station
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
thoroughly enjoyed this, bravo
October 23rd, 2025 11:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
thoroughly enjoyed this, bravo
October 23rd, 2025 11:17
Central station
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a ghost train that doesn’t follow a schedule, but moves along the tracks of hopelessness.
It smells of wet asphalt, night coffee, cheap rum, and that special kind of sadness that lives somewhere between cynicism and compassion.
Once again, you write like a noir director and an underground philosopher, dear Lorenz.
October 23rd, 2025 11:13
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a ghost train that doesn’t follow a schedule, but moves along the tracks of hopelessness.
It smells of wet asphalt, night coffee, cheap rum, and that special kind of sadness that lives somewhere between cynicism and compassion.
Once again, you write like a noir director and an underground philosopher, dear Lorenz.
October 23rd, 2025 11:13
The curl of time
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
It blends sin , sacrament and sensuality .
Clever use of irony .
October 23rd, 2025 00:29
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
It blends sin , sacrament and sensuality .
Clever use of irony .
October 23rd, 2025 00:29
The curl of time
Sealgair said:
The world devours itself and vanishes into the curl of time...
Reading this felt like sipping madness too delicious to be sober.
October 22nd, 2025 14:21
Sealgair said:
The world devours itself and vanishes into the curl of time...
Reading this felt like sipping madness too delicious to be sober.
October 22nd, 2025 14:21
The curl of time
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
The curl of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Im Café der Inspiration
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
Im Café der Inspiration
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Im Café der Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
Im Café der Inspiration
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
I can\'t imagine
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
I can\'t imagine
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
I can\'t imagine
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Nanga Parbat
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
Nanga Parbat
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Nanga Parbat
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Nanga Parbat
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
My farewell letter
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
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