Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Inspired oblivion
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
Inspired oblivion
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ballade cosmique
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
My desorganizer
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
My desorganizer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of incompletions and negations that makes sense in a surreal world.
April 8th, 2026 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of incompletions and negations that makes sense in a surreal world.
April 8th, 2026 15:31
My desorganizer
Ellen Marsell said:
To wait endlessly for one who will never come, and to hold a strange loyalty to someone never encountered...
Your poem leaves behind the lingering scent of a \'fragranced promise\' that dissolves into ash as soon as the last line is read.
April 8th, 2026 11:52
Ellen Marsell said:
To wait endlessly for one who will never come, and to hold a strange loyalty to someone never encountered...
Your poem leaves behind the lingering scent of a \'fragranced promise\' that dissolves into ash as soon as the last line is read.
April 8th, 2026 11:52
Sad hill cemetary ballad
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Hemingway but at Key West and there I had breakfast at his house a lobster omelet. The tomb of god is empty because he is on vacation, had breakfast with him and Hemingway\'s
April 7th, 2026 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Hemingway but at Key West and there I had breakfast at his house a lobster omelet. The tomb of god is empty because he is on vacation, had breakfast with him and Hemingway\'s
April 7th, 2026 19:20
Sad hill cemetary ballad
Ellen Marsell said:
This feels like infernal jazz played on a broken piano in a bar at the edge of the universe.
April 7th, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
This feels like infernal jazz played on a broken piano in a bar at the edge of the universe.
April 7th, 2026 11:56
Sad hill cemetary ballad
Abdullah123 said:
When I think ballad, I automatically (for whatever reason) think: fairytale and rainbows😂. But THIS... this made me think again. And I love that
Also, maybe it\'s just because of the mind space which I\'m currently in, but the last two lines remind me of some particular politicians in some part of the world. I would love to know if that\'s the inspiration, or it just me ifyk what i mean.
Either way, great write
April 7th, 2026 11:41
Abdullah123 said:
When I think ballad, I automatically (for whatever reason) think: fairytale and rainbows😂. But THIS... this made me think again. And I love that
Also, maybe it\'s just because of the mind space which I\'m currently in, but the last two lines remind me of some particular politicians in some part of the world. I would love to know if that\'s the inspiration, or it just me ifyk what i mean.
Either way, great write
April 7th, 2026 11:41
Autistic translator
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and autism really are two sides of the same coin called Detachment. If the world is a hologram, you have to be \'outside the norm\' to see what’s actually happening behind the scenes.
April 5th, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and autism really are two sides of the same coin called Detachment. If the world is a hologram, you have to be \'outside the norm\' to see what’s actually happening behind the scenes.
April 5th, 2026 11:56
Autistic translator
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal even for the surreal this poem dances with dreams and sings with hallucinatory power. It is a sorcerers pocket guide. Nicely written my friend
April 5th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal even for the surreal this poem dances with dreams and sings with hallucinatory power. It is a sorcerers pocket guide. Nicely written my friend
April 5th, 2026 11:54
Not a trace will remain
Ellen Marsell said:
To leave no trace is the ultimate freedom, found only when we cast off the yoke of existence and merge with the \"mystery of the void\".
April 2nd, 2026 12:57
Ellen Marsell said:
To leave no trace is the ultimate freedom, found only when we cast off the yoke of existence and merge with the \"mystery of the void\".
April 2nd, 2026 12:57
Not a trace will remain
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the mix of this one Lorenz from Bible to Star Wars and what could be Mad Max. A good read my friend
April 2nd, 2026 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the mix of this one Lorenz from Bible to Star Wars and what could be Mad Max. A good read my friend
April 2nd, 2026 12:06
My dear self
sorenbarrett said:
A soliloquy maybe self reflection where the reflection is not wanted to be seen. Vampires have no reflection but here it even has a shadow.
March 29th, 2026 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
A soliloquy maybe self reflection where the reflection is not wanted to be seen. Vampires have no reflection but here it even has a shadow.
March 29th, 2026 11:59
My dear self
Ellen Marsell said:
As long as the music sounds and the words are written, this \'marriage of convenience\' shall endure.
March 29th, 2026 11:57
Ellen Marsell said:
As long as the music sounds and the words are written, this \'marriage of convenience\' shall endure.
March 29th, 2026 11:57
Terminal exit
Sealgair said:
The idea of eternity beginning in an airport terminal feels strangely right, a place where time stretches, destinies cross, and no one is entirely sure when their flight will be called.
Beautifully unsettling!
March 28th, 2026 12:34
Sealgair said:
The idea of eternity beginning in an airport terminal feels strangely right, a place where time stretches, destinies cross, and no one is entirely sure when their flight will be called.
Beautifully unsettling!
March 28th, 2026 12:34
Terminal exit
sorenbarrett said:
I have had this flight canceled and delayed many times and I think they lost my luggage. When I arrive the immigration is run by flames (Furious leftist anarchists mobilizing extreme satanism) Then melted the ICE and left only drips behind.
March 28th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
I have had this flight canceled and delayed many times and I think they lost my luggage. When I arrive the immigration is run by flames (Furious leftist anarchists mobilizing extreme satanism) Then melted the ICE and left only drips behind.
March 28th, 2026 12:21
Terminal exit
Ellen Marsell said:
It feels as though the person in this poem is an eternal transit passenger, whose flight to paradise (666) is constantly delayed, forcing them to endlessly pace the cold tiles of oblivion.
March 28th, 2026 11:55
Ellen Marsell said:
It feels as though the person in this poem is an eternal transit passenger, whose flight to paradise (666) is constantly delayed, forcing them to endlessly pace the cold tiles of oblivion.
March 28th, 2026 11:55
The poet\'s shadow
Uncle Adolf said:
When even your own shadow frightens you, you know you\'ve reached peak poetic self-awareness. Harlequin, please pass the ink — and maybe a little emotional stability too.
March 27th, 2026 12:23
Uncle Adolf said:
When even your own shadow frightens you, you know you\'ve reached peak poetic self-awareness. Harlequin, please pass the ink — and maybe a little emotional stability too.
March 27th, 2026 12:23
The poet\'s shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal is an understatement of this poem. It echoes through dimensions and resounds in a black hole. There is mirth in the jester but ink is on ration so how do you paint the shadow of a poet? Very nice Lorenz
March 27th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal is an understatement of this poem. It echoes through dimensions and resounds in a black hole. There is mirth in the jester but ink is on ration so how do you paint the shadow of a poet? Very nice Lorenz
March 27th, 2026 11:47
The poet\'s shadow
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet is left only to wander among the masks of the commedia dell\'arte, trying to hold onto the slipping ink of life.
March 27th, 2026 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet is left only to wander among the masks of the commedia dell\'arte, trying to hold onto the slipping ink of life.
March 27th, 2026 11:39
The return of Apophis
Priya Tomar said:
Eternal chaos beneath fragile beauty .
I missed your verses .
March 27th, 2026 10:24
Priya Tomar said:
Eternal chaos beneath fragile beauty .
I missed your verses .
March 27th, 2026 10:24
The return of Apophis
Ellen Marsell said:
When hope disappears, fear disappears as well. Only the pure contemplation of the approaching Serpent remains.
March 25th, 2026 12:12
Ellen Marsell said:
When hope disappears, fear disappears as well. Only the pure contemplation of the approaching Serpent remains.
March 25th, 2026 12:12
The return of Apophis
sorenbarrett said:
Some wait for Christ others for Apophis I am waiting for a flight. Well done check your watch see if he is overdue.
March 25th, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some wait for Christ others for Apophis I am waiting for a flight. Well done check your watch see if he is overdue.
March 25th, 2026 11:48
Unfolded time
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Epic muse well expressed eloquently woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Epic muse well expressed eloquently woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:25
Unfolded time
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created one of the most poignant reflections on the nature of human presence in the world.
March 23rd, 2026 13:55
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created one of the most poignant reflections on the nature of human presence in the world.
March 23rd, 2026 13:55
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