Comments received on poems by Lorenz



My farewell letter
Priya Tomar said:

A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .


October 16th, 2025 11:38

My farewell letter
Lorenz said:

I turned the rhapsody in blue into a poem !

October 16th, 2025 11:34

My farewell letter
Ellen Marsell said:

A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.

October 16th, 2025 11:29

My farewell letter
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

another fine write

October 16th, 2025 11:25

My farewell letter
sorenbarrett said:

Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.

October 16th, 2025 10:58

Manhattan solo
Sealgair said:

A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.


October 14th, 2025 12:44

Manhattan solo
Priya Tomar said:

My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !

October 14th, 2025 12:23

Manhattan solo
sorenbarrett said:

A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write

October 14th, 2025 12:07

Manhattan solo
Ellen Marsell said:

One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.

October 14th, 2025 11:44

The point of no return
Ellen Marsell said:

A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.

October 13th, 2025 13:50

The point of no return
Priya Tomar said:

Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .



October 13th, 2025 13:03

The point of no return
sorenbarrett said:

Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.

October 13th, 2025 11:49

Purgatory bar
Priya Tomar said:

Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .

October 12th, 2025 11:01

Purgatory bar
Ellen Marsell said:

Time has stopped.
A slight madness and thick smoke in an old bar, where we all sooner or later order our last drink.
A powerful piece.
Black humor and existential sorrow dance a slow waltz here.

October 12th, 2025 10:59

Purgatory bar
sorenbarrett said:

Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the same. A fun write reminded me of the star wars bar.

October 12th, 2025 10:50

The voice of the rubble
Ellen Marsell said:

This is an ironic and philosophical text of rare power.

October 11th, 2025 11:14

The voice of the rubble
sorenbarrett said:

Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and slashes its feeling in broad strokes and slashed brush marks on a white canvas. Well done Lorenz

October 11th, 2025 11:13

The voice of the rubble
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I love the powerful imagery

October 11th, 2025 11:09

Prophecy of the times
Ellen Marsell said:

A dark prophecy, where sacred images are woven into a sense of impending downfall. A powerful and profound work, full of symbolism.

October 10th, 2025 13:35

Prophecy of the times
Priya Tomar said:

Well woven !
A spiritual indictment .....
Wonderful biblical imagery .....
Your grand style like John Milton ....

October 10th, 2025 12:41

Prophecy of the times
sorenbarrett said:

David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by Solomon is cut in two to be divided. Pull Moses\'s beard to see the red sea part then comb it back together. A scriptural puzzle to assemble in this poem of the sacred and the obscene. Lovely Lorenz a fave

October 10th, 2025 11:09

My old Germany
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Great write my friend

October 9th, 2025 01:57

My old Germany
Ellen Marsell said:

This poem is full of cultural, historical, and philosophical references. It is multifaceted and complex, like a living archive of the German soul, from which ghosts of the past peer out.

October 8th, 2025 13:39

My old Germany
sorenbarrett said:

A satire to be proud of Lorenz. Most wonderfully articulated and I am used to being an annoying big brother. I recognize my irritating qualities and renounce my leader the orange haired fellow. Good write and fave my friend

October 8th, 2025 10:55

ciao amore
Ellen Marsell said:

A bittersweet poem — the magnificence of melancholy and irony.

October 7th, 2025 13:30

ciao amore
sorenbarrett said:

This sings and rings it has charm and an old world feel. By old world I mean the atmosphere and the home like feel of the familiar. But at the same time it says good bye to all this in a recognition that the world has changed and the need for acceptance. Lovely

October 7th, 2025 12:15

ciao amore
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

enjoyed this immensely

October 7th, 2025 11:05

Rule Britannia
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds more like Hail to the Chief with orange hair. Good one Lorenz

October 6th, 2025 14:37

Rule Britannia
Lorenz said:

Ach ! Winston hat einen tollen Sinn für Humor !

October 6th, 2025 14:34

Rule Britannia
Ellen Marsell said:

Powerful, provocative political satire!

October 6th, 2025 14:14

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