Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Old rucksack
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Old rucksack
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
Old rucksack
LP2187 said:
A trustworthy rucksack who goes everywhere with us and witnesses all the adventures, a great poem which shows that objects can hold so much value. Very nice to read.
January 17th, 2025 12:27
LP2187 said:
A trustworthy rucksack who goes everywhere with us and witnesses all the adventures, a great poem which shows that objects can hold so much value. Very nice to read.
January 17th, 2025 12:27
The evening angel
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Dawn
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
The evening angel
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
Mother waters
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Mother waters
LP2187 said:
A mystical and emotional poem about connections between souls I love this poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:11
LP2187 said:
A mystical and emotional poem about connections between souls I love this poem.
January 12th, 2025 04:11
Mother waters
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
Klaus Kinsky .
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Klaus Kinsky .
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Klaus Kinsky .
LP2187 said:
An amazing poem of torment and inner demons, I loved reading this!
January 9th, 2025 11:53
LP2187 said:
An amazing poem of torment and inner demons, I loved reading this!
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Dawn
LP2187 said:
The struggle for survival in humanity\'s early days, such powerful imagery of chaos and facing the unknown. Loved reading this!
January 7th, 2025 11:46
LP2187 said:
The struggle for survival in humanity\'s early days, such powerful imagery of chaos and facing the unknown. Loved reading this!
January 7th, 2025 11:46
Dawn
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
Dawn
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
The Herculanum night
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
The Herculanum night
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
The Herculanum night
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
Palermo
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
Palermo
LP2187 said:
Such a nice poem about time and sorrow, and the contrast between life and death. The tragedies and pain are clear. There\'s a big difference between those who cling to life and those who find comfort in death. I loved reading this.
January 5th, 2025 13:01
LP2187 said:
Such a nice poem about time and sorrow, and the contrast between life and death. The tragedies and pain are clear. There\'s a big difference between those who cling to life and those who find comfort in death. I loved reading this.
January 5th, 2025 13:01
Palermo
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Palermo
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
The land of marble statues
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
The land of marble statues
Ellen Marsell said:
Charming Italy with its art, history and vitality is revealed in your poem as a source of inspiration and dreams.
I see references to Fellini\'s movies. Wonderful work!
January 4th, 2025 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
Charming Italy with its art, history and vitality is revealed in your poem as a source of inspiration and dreams.
I see references to Fellini\'s movies. Wonderful work!
January 4th, 2025 11:11
The land of marble statues
rin said:
If Waterloo wasn\'t a battlefield, it was just a plain. However, plains are also an essential place to deploy an army.I would also like to try Italian sparkling wine.It\'s a fun poem with many interesting directions.
January 4th, 2025 07:32
rin said:
If Waterloo wasn\'t a battlefield, it was just a plain. However, plains are also an essential place to deploy an army.I would also like to try Italian sparkling wine.It\'s a fun poem with many interesting directions.
January 4th, 2025 07:32
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