Comments received on poems by Lorenz
I\'m the intelligence
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
I\'m the intelligence
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
Lethal jingle
Ellen Marsell said:
You’re looking back at the \'80s — at pop culture, at those deceptive sparkles that once seemed like real magic but now feel like a masquerade. Very vivid...
July 4th, 2025 12:35
Ellen Marsell said:
You’re looking back at the \'80s — at pop culture, at those deceptive sparkles that once seemed like real magic but now feel like a masquerade. Very vivid...
July 4th, 2025 12:35
Lethal jingle
sorenbarrett said:
Madonna twice and her butt too. I get a postmodern feeling of a Salvador Dali painting mixed with Harmonious Bosch and a dab of Bob Dylan. An intriguing write.
July 4th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Madonna twice and her butt too. I get a postmodern feeling of a Salvador Dali painting mixed with Harmonious Bosch and a dab of Bob Dylan. An intriguing write.
July 4th, 2025 10:54
Lili
Ellen Marsell said:
What remains of a man when he becomes part of the war machine?
This is a drama of consciousness — one that sees the absurdity and injustice of what is happening, yet is powerless to change the course.
July 1st, 2025 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
What remains of a man when he becomes part of the war machine?
This is a drama of consciousness — one that sees the absurdity and injustice of what is happening, yet is powerless to change the course.
July 1st, 2025 13:15
Lili
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamy, mythical, romantic but with the lust of man it now becomes quizzical and calls for reflection. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dreamy, mythical, romantic but with the lust of man it now becomes quizzical and calls for reflection. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 10:49
The rain manifesto.
Ellen Marsell said:
A whole parade of images and references passes through the poem like a procession of shadows. Here we find artists, poets, politicians, and urban phantoms. In each image — something familiar, but reimagined, ironic... Excellent work!
June 30th, 2025 09:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A whole parade of images and references passes through the poem like a procession of shadows. Here we find artists, poets, politicians, and urban phantoms. In each image — something familiar, but reimagined, ironic... Excellent work!
June 30th, 2025 09:58
The rain manifesto.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a modern Hieronymus Bosch is what comes to mind. Very nice Lorenz
June 30th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem by a modern Hieronymus Bosch is what comes to mind. Very nice Lorenz
June 30th, 2025 06:55
The clash of civilizations
Lorenz said:
\'\' Civilization is not a comfort but a requirement ! \'\' ( Charles De Gaulle )
June 27th, 2025 13:25
Lorenz said:
\'\' Civilization is not a comfort but a requirement ! \'\' ( Charles De Gaulle )
June 27th, 2025 13:25
The clash of civilizations
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep reflection on the clash of two worldviews.
June 27th, 2025 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
A deep reflection on the clash of two worldviews.
June 27th, 2025 11:41
The clash of civilizations
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts, different beliefs east to west. Could the belief in reincarnation make a difference in how death and war are handled? There are different forms of stoic the eastern different than the western. the Spartan or the Samurai. A thought provoking poem Lorenz
June 27th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts, different beliefs east to west. Could the belief in reincarnation make a difference in how death and war are handled? There are different forms of stoic the eastern different than the western. the Spartan or the Samurai. A thought provoking poem Lorenz
June 27th, 2025 10:59
The poem
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a rare thing — remarkable for its honesty, grim irony, and intellectual despair.
June 27th, 2025 10:34
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a rare thing — remarkable for its honesty, grim irony, and intellectual despair.
June 27th, 2025 10:34
The poem
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go but their memory lives on in the minds of the reader. A poignant write for the poet. Very nicely done
June 26th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go but their memory lives on in the minds of the reader. A poignant write for the poet. Very nicely done
June 26th, 2025 13:08
One morning a beach
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, sensual vignette — a space of images, sensations, and memories. The poem breathes music and gentle melancholy. So beautiful, so delicate!
June 26th, 2025 10:56
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, sensual vignette — a space of images, sensations, and memories. The poem breathes music and gentle melancholy. So beautiful, so delicate!
June 26th, 2025 10:56
One morning a beach
sorenbarrett said:
Que poema mais bonita. Gostei era uma poema de beleza de natrueza, praia e mulher. Loved your poem very nice.
June 25th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Que poema mais bonita. Gostei era uma poema de beleza de natrueza, praia e mulher. Loved your poem very nice.
June 25th, 2025 17:44
The clowns
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Lorenz clowns never scared me but they did make me laugh and so they still do. Their buffoonery and slap stick antics painted faces overly dramatic and strange orange hair could there be a better model of a world leader? Well said
June 23rd, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Lorenz clowns never scared me but they did make me laugh and so they still do. Their buffoonery and slap stick antics painted faces overly dramatic and strange orange hair could there be a better model of a world leader? Well said
June 23rd, 2025 13:12
The clowns
Ellen Marsell said:
A portrait of modern political rhetoric — empty, loud, gesticulating, designed to entertain and lull vigilance. They are the \"Clowns of a new era\", turning governance into a spectacle.
It’s an impressive piece of work!
June 23rd, 2025 11:02
Ellen Marsell said:
A portrait of modern political rhetoric — empty, loud, gesticulating, designed to entertain and lull vigilance. They are the \"Clowns of a new era\", turning governance into a spectacle.
It’s an impressive piece of work!
June 23rd, 2025 11:02
The clowns
nephilim56 said:
its the clowns running the world sadly, great write
June 23rd, 2025 07:46
nephilim56 said:
its the clowns running the world sadly, great write
June 23rd, 2025 07:46
Little father
Ellen Marsell said:
The strength of this poem lies in its ambiguity — in that delicate space between reverence and doubt. If you trust the voice, you hear a hymn to labor and tradition. But if you begin to question it, the silence turns unsettling.
June 21st, 2025 11:25
Ellen Marsell said:
The strength of this poem lies in its ambiguity — in that delicate space between reverence and doubt. If you trust the voice, you hear a hymn to labor and tradition. But if you begin to question it, the silence turns unsettling.
June 21st, 2025 11:25
Little father
sorenbarrett said:
At first this seemed such a vivid portrayal of a man well pictured but then I wondered if it were a metaphor of political leadership. Nicely done
June 21st, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
At first this seemed such a vivid portrayal of a man well pictured but then I wondered if it were a metaphor of political leadership. Nicely done
June 21st, 2025 06:39
Roma
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, allusion-rich poem where Rome becomes a symbol of decline, beauty, and the blending of times and cultures.
The final line feels like a closing note of a new era — one that’s foreign to the Rome of the past.
June 19th, 2025 14:19
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, allusion-rich poem where Rome becomes a symbol of decline, beauty, and the blending of times and cultures.
The final line feels like a closing note of a new era — one that’s foreign to the Rome of the past.
June 19th, 2025 14:19
Roma
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz what a most interesting mix in this poem all surrounding the setting of Rome. Religion, to art to women to location and back to God is great
June 19th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz what a most interesting mix in this poem all surrounding the setting of Rome. Religion, to art to women to location and back to God is great
June 19th, 2025 09:54
I am waiting your return
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the Little Prince and Alice in Wonderland. The second from childhood and the first from adulthood. They are used so cleverly in this poem to enhance the meaning and well done too. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the Little Prince and Alice in Wonderland. The second from childhood and the first from adulthood. They are used so cleverly in this poem to enhance the meaning and well done too. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 11:28
I am waiting your return
Ellen Marsell said:
A tender, ironic, and profound monologue of a soul that has slipped away into a world of dreams...
June 18th, 2025 11:08
Ellen Marsell said:
A tender, ironic, and profound monologue of a soul that has slipped away into a world of dreams...
June 18th, 2025 11:08
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