Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The old grimoire
sorenbarrett said:
It seems a day of ups and downs, sensual delights and nocturnal frights, appointments with disappointments. Another day. Nicely written Lorenz
November 13th, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
It seems a day of ups and downs, sensual delights and nocturnal frights, appointments with disappointments. Another day. Nicely written Lorenz
November 13th, 2026 11:53
The old grimoire
Ellen Marsell said:
A meeting with the ghosts of one\'s own youth, who still know your address, even though the houses at those addresses have long since disappeared.
November 13th, 2026 11:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A meeting with the ghosts of one\'s own youth, who still know your address, even though the houses at those addresses have long since disappeared.
November 13th, 2026 11:42
Human bestiary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! I think you\'ve just given Darwin enough material for another three volumes. Although I suspect he\'d take one look at humanity today and ask to be returned to the Galápagos Islands immediately! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2026 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! I think you\'ve just given Darwin enough material for another three volumes. Although I suspect he\'d take one look at humanity today and ask to be returned to the Galápagos Islands immediately! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2026 21:19
Human bestiary
Ellen Marsell said:
A carnival staged inside an animal cage, where a philosopher suddenly discovers that he, too, is part of the exhibit.
November 12th, 2026 11:43
Ellen Marsell said:
A carnival staged inside an animal cage, where a philosopher suddenly discovers that he, too, is part of the exhibit.
November 12th, 2026 11:43
Human bestiary
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most interesting write my friend
November 12th, 2026 11:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most interesting write my friend
November 12th, 2026 11:16
Human bestiary
sorenbarrett said:
A petting zoo for adults where one pays to put their head in a crocodiles mouth
November 12th, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
A petting zoo for adults where one pays to put their head in a crocodiles mouth
November 12th, 2026 11:16
Lost children\'s street
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz! This is a grim journey through humanity\'s capacity for destruction. And the thought of all those young lives sacrificed for causes they barely understood makes me angry as hell! Powerful poem! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2026 23:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz! This is a grim journey through humanity\'s capacity for destruction. And the thought of all those young lives sacrificed for causes they barely understood makes me angry as hell! Powerful poem! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 11th, 2026 23:33
Lost children\'s street
Sealgair said:
Memory blends the beautiful with the terrible, transforming the past into a dream that the world continues to dream.
November 11th, 2026 12:48
Sealgair said:
Memory blends the beautiful with the terrible, transforming the past into a dream that the world continues to dream.
November 11th, 2026 12:48
Lost children\'s street
Ellen Marsell said:
“Lost children”... To me, they are lost generations, victims of wars, forgotten people, lost dreams, poets, lovers, soldiers — all those whom history once carried away and never brought back.
November 11th, 2026 11:28
Ellen Marsell said:
“Lost children”... To me, they are lost generations, victims of wars, forgotten people, lost dreams, poets, lovers, soldiers — all those whom history once carried away and never brought back.
November 11th, 2026 11:28
Lost children\'s street
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and somewhat dark this poem takes me down back allies to the river Styx and there Charon awaits hand out for the fare. Nicely done Lorenz
November 11th, 2026 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and somewhat dark this poem takes me down back allies to the river Styx and there Charon awaits hand out for the fare. Nicely done Lorenz
November 11th, 2026 11:17
Lost children\'s street
Lorenz said:
A text in the style of postwar french singer-songwriters !
November 11th, 2026 11:07
Lorenz said:
A text in the style of postwar french singer-songwriters !
November 11th, 2026 11:07
Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like you opened every locked room in yourself and invited me to wander through. I’m still in there somewhere. Thanks, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2026 20:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like you opened every locked room in yourself and invited me to wander through. I’m still in there somewhere. Thanks, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2026 20:45
Three little musical notes
kiko said:
a cosy poem with a twisted, tragic meaning
November 10th, 2026 14:16
kiko said:
a cosy poem with a twisted, tragic meaning
November 10th, 2026 14:16
Soul
Ellen Marsell said:
To be free sometimes means being chained to one\'s own freedom.
November 10th, 2026 12:07
Ellen Marsell said:
To be free sometimes means being chained to one\'s own freedom.
November 10th, 2026 12:07
Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Awaiting Hercules to free you, dust off the tarnish and reemerge as the Phoenix.
November 10th, 2026 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Awaiting Hercules to free you, dust off the tarnish and reemerge as the Phoenix.
November 10th, 2026 11:55
Three little musical notes
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful and touching piece of verse👍
November 10th, 2026 11:30
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful and touching piece of verse👍
November 10th, 2026 11:30
My solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz, the heart doesn\'t always make peace with the choices the soul has made. And perhaps that\'s part of what makes us poets. This one leaves me thinking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2026 22:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz, the heart doesn\'t always make peace with the choices the soul has made. And perhaps that\'s part of what makes us poets. This one leaves me thinking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2026 22:36
My solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to reconcile human finitude with the immortality of the inner world.
November 9th, 2026 12:26
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to reconcile human finitude with the immortality of the inner world.
November 9th, 2026 12:26
My solitude
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We write better in solitude, much enjoyed read my friend
November 9th, 2026 11:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We write better in solitude, much enjoyed read my friend
November 9th, 2026 11:47
My solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes better alone. There are no one else\'s feet to trip over.
November 9th, 2026 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes better alone. There are no one else\'s feet to trip over.
November 9th, 2026 11:10
Fellows of the gallows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHA! Lorenz, apparently we both decided the gallows deserved some attention today! Between the two of us, I doubt the hangman is getting much sleep tonight! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2026 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
HAHA! Lorenz, apparently we both decided the gallows deserved some attention today! Between the two of us, I doubt the hangman is getting much sleep tonight! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 8th, 2026 22:23
Fellows of the gallows
Ellen Marsell said:
Vultures, carrion crows, and stray dogs converged on Montfaucon Hill from across the surrounding countryside, turning the foot of the gallows into a macabre banquet for scavengers.
November 8th, 2026 12:11
Ellen Marsell said:
Vultures, carrion crows, and stray dogs converged on Montfaucon Hill from across the surrounding countryside, turning the foot of the gallows into a macabre banquet for scavengers.
November 8th, 2026 12:11
Fellows of the gallows
Lorenz said:
The gallows of Montfaucon in Paris.A squalid place symbol of an unforgiving justice system .
November 8th, 2026 11:38
Lorenz said:
The gallows of Montfaucon in Paris.A squalid place symbol of an unforgiving justice system .
November 8th, 2026 11:38
Fellows of the gallows
sorenbarrett said:
Flesh doomed to rot are souls hung also and with what rope that will bind them. Bodies eaten by worm and crows what beast will devorar the soul. It\'s dark in this poem I need a flashlight.
November 8th, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Flesh doomed to rot are souls hung also and with what rope that will bind them. Bodies eaten by worm and crows what beast will devorar the soul. It\'s dark in this poem I need a flashlight.
November 8th, 2026 11:33
Three little musical notes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I can picture somebody sitting down at the piano late at night and starting the same tune twice. The second time, they leave a little room where someone else used to come in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I can picture somebody sitting down at the piano late at night and starting the same tune twice. The second time, they leave a little room where someone else used to come in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2026 18:50
Three little musical notes
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play in this one my man. I would choose belladona or bella Donna either would do. A pretty woman is a drug of a sort. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the play in this one my man. I would choose belladona or bella Donna either would do. A pretty woman is a drug of a sort. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2026 11:39
Three little musical notes
Ellen Marsell said:
A fragile musical monument to a bygone time, people, and dreams.
November 6th, 2026 11:26
Ellen Marsell said:
A fragile musical monument to a bygone time, people, and dreams.
November 6th, 2026 11:26
Three little musical notes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful, a favourite
November 6th, 2026 11:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful, a favourite
November 6th, 2026 11:10
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