Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Terminal exit
Sealgair said:
The idea of eternity beginning in an airport terminal feels strangely right, a place where time stretches, destinies cross, and no one is entirely sure when their flight will be called.
Beautifully unsettling!
March 28th, 2026 12:34
Sealgair said:
The idea of eternity beginning in an airport terminal feels strangely right, a place where time stretches, destinies cross, and no one is entirely sure when their flight will be called.
Beautifully unsettling!
March 28th, 2026 12:34
Terminal exit
sorenbarrett said:
I have had this flight canceled and delayed many times and I think they lost my luggage. When I arrive the immigration is run by flames (Furious leftist anarchists mobilizing extreme satanism) Then melted the ICE and left only drips behind.
March 28th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
I have had this flight canceled and delayed many times and I think they lost my luggage. When I arrive the immigration is run by flames (Furious leftist anarchists mobilizing extreme satanism) Then melted the ICE and left only drips behind.
March 28th, 2026 12:21
Terminal exit
Ellen Marsell said:
It feels as though the person in this poem is an eternal transit passenger, whose flight to paradise (666) is constantly delayed, forcing them to endlessly pace the cold tiles of oblivion.
March 28th, 2026 11:55
Ellen Marsell said:
It feels as though the person in this poem is an eternal transit passenger, whose flight to paradise (666) is constantly delayed, forcing them to endlessly pace the cold tiles of oblivion.
March 28th, 2026 11:55
The poet\'s shadow
Uncle Adolf said:
When even your own shadow frightens you, you know you\'ve reached peak poetic self-awareness. Harlequin, please pass the ink — and maybe a little emotional stability too.
March 27th, 2026 12:23
Uncle Adolf said:
When even your own shadow frightens you, you know you\'ve reached peak poetic self-awareness. Harlequin, please pass the ink — and maybe a little emotional stability too.
March 27th, 2026 12:23
The poet\'s shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal is an understatement of this poem. It echoes through dimensions and resounds in a black hole. There is mirth in the jester but ink is on ration so how do you paint the shadow of a poet? Very nice Lorenz
March 27th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal is an understatement of this poem. It echoes through dimensions and resounds in a black hole. There is mirth in the jester but ink is on ration so how do you paint the shadow of a poet? Very nice Lorenz
March 27th, 2026 11:47
The poet\'s shadow
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet is left only to wander among the masks of the commedia dell\'arte, trying to hold onto the slipping ink of life.
March 27th, 2026 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet is left only to wander among the masks of the commedia dell\'arte, trying to hold onto the slipping ink of life.
March 27th, 2026 11:39
The return of Apophis
Priya Tomar said:
Eternal chaos beneath fragile beauty .
I missed your verses .
March 27th, 2026 10:24
Priya Tomar said:
Eternal chaos beneath fragile beauty .
I missed your verses .
March 27th, 2026 10:24
The return of Apophis
Ellen Marsell said:
When hope disappears, fear disappears as well. Only the pure contemplation of the approaching Serpent remains.
March 25th, 2026 12:12
Ellen Marsell said:
When hope disappears, fear disappears as well. Only the pure contemplation of the approaching Serpent remains.
March 25th, 2026 12:12
The return of Apophis
sorenbarrett said:
Some wait for Christ others for Apophis I am waiting for a flight. Well done check your watch see if he is overdue.
March 25th, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some wait for Christ others for Apophis I am waiting for a flight. Well done check your watch see if he is overdue.
March 25th, 2026 11:48
Unfolded time
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Epic muse well expressed eloquently woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Epic muse well expressed eloquently woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:25
Unfolded time
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created one of the most poignant reflections on the nature of human presence in the world.
March 23rd, 2026 13:55
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created one of the most poignant reflections on the nature of human presence in the world.
March 23rd, 2026 13:55
Unfolded time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bears the image of a jovial court jester on the hunt for young maidens to entertain. Half bard half joker. Well done Lorenz
March 23rd, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bears the image of a jovial court jester on the hunt for young maidens to entertain. Half bard half joker. Well done Lorenz
March 23rd, 2026 11:57
The universal hourglass
Ellen Marsell said:
Before the face of the universal hourglass, there is no difference between a god and an atom: all are but temporary forms of sand.
March 22nd, 2026 12:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Before the face of the universal hourglass, there is no difference between a god and an atom: all are but temporary forms of sand.
March 22nd, 2026 12:36
The universal hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever tried to count those grains as they fall like counting seconds as they pass. It is hard on the eyes. Good write Lorenz
March 22nd, 2026 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever tried to count those grains as they fall like counting seconds as they pass. It is hard on the eyes. Good write Lorenz
March 22nd, 2026 11:51
The return
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of the ‘Teddy’ waiting on the plains of Mercury is strikingly brilliant - perhaps the poem’s most profound moment of revelation.
March 18th, 2026 12:46
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of the ‘Teddy’ waiting on the plains of Mercury is strikingly brilliant - perhaps the poem’s most profound moment of revelation.
March 18th, 2026 12:46
The return
sorenbarrett said:
How many journeys as a child in daydream and night dreams, in books and in reality. A time that will never be equaled. Take me back but not to stay only memories.
March 18th, 2026 12:01
sorenbarrett said:
How many journeys as a child in daydream and night dreams, in books and in reality. A time that will never be equaled. Take me back but not to stay only memories.
March 18th, 2026 12:01
The shadow of the living
Ellen Marsell said:
Geometry is the language of structure, form, and abstract harmony. Yet here the geometry is shifting. It evokes the sense of a woman who is unpredictable, many-sided, and impossible to fully comprehend like a figure that can never quite be fixed.
March 15th, 2026 11:57
Ellen Marsell said:
Geometry is the language of structure, form, and abstract harmony. Yet here the geometry is shifting. It evokes the sense of a woman who is unpredictable, many-sided, and impossible to fully comprehend like a figure that can never quite be fixed.
March 15th, 2026 11:57
The shadow of the living
sorenbarrett said:
The female cast as a curve which is nothing but segments and from which angles can be drawn a matter of degrees to segment a circle.
March 15th, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
The female cast as a curve which is nothing but segments and from which angles can be drawn a matter of degrees to segment a circle.
March 15th, 2026 11:27
Serendipity
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes we look for the most important things in words, yet we discover them in what cannot be spoken.
March 13th, 2026 13:25
Ellen Marsell said:
Sometimes we look for the most important things in words, yet we discover them in what cannot be spoken.
March 13th, 2026 13:25
Serendipity
sorenbarrett said:
Madness but confused communication in a room of mirrors. The lunatic howls at the sun and the sane make love by the moonlight. All mistranslation.
March 13th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Madness but confused communication in a room of mirrors. The lunatic howls at the sun and the sane make love by the moonlight. All mistranslation.
March 13th, 2026 11:21
My inner fortress
sorenbarrett said:
The pianist was criticized for playing Mendelssohn\'s piano concerto no. 1 in g minor too fast despite his arthritic hands. Nicely written Lorenz
March 12th, 2026 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
The pianist was criticized for playing Mendelssohn\'s piano concerto no. 1 in g minor too fast despite his arthritic hands. Nicely written Lorenz
March 12th, 2026 13:45
My inner fortress
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem wears irony like an armor, but underneath it there is something very vulnerable. Well written!
March 12th, 2026 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem wears irony like an armor, but underneath it there is something very vulnerable. Well written!
March 12th, 2026 13:15
Imaginary journey
Ellen Marsell said:
In a world like this, one can preserve freedom only by creating an inner distance, becoming an observer, an imaginary traveler. I enjoyed the symbolic whirlwind and the touch of surrealism in your poem. Very interesting imagery.
March 11th, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
In a world like this, one can preserve freedom only by creating an inner distance, becoming an observer, an imaginary traveler. I enjoyed the symbolic whirlwind and the touch of surrealism in your poem. Very interesting imagery.
March 11th, 2026 11:54
Imaginary journey
sorenbarrett said:
It is not the belief but what you believe that dictates what you see. We are all travelers. Nice one
March 11th, 2026 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
It is not the belief but what you believe that dictates what you see. We are all travelers. Nice one
March 11th, 2026 11:19
Abnormal family
Ellen Marsell said:
When the whole society loses its compass, even madness loses its direction.
March 9th, 2026 14:01
Ellen Marsell said:
When the whole society loses its compass, even madness loses its direction.
March 9th, 2026 14:01
Abnormal family
sorenbarrett said:
Genius breeds madness as thoughts separate from the normal mass. Other dimensions arise where all a point now there is length and soon height. Fly me to the moon as the Neandertal looks up and the men in white suits run with their butterfly nets rounding up Newton and Einstein sent to the mad house for crimes against humanity. Jung fights Freud for his Oedipus complex after seeing his mother naked. It\'s a nightmare of the mad.
March 9th, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Genius breeds madness as thoughts separate from the normal mass. Other dimensions arise where all a point now there is length and soon height. Fly me to the moon as the Neandertal looks up and the men in white suits run with their butterfly nets rounding up Newton and Einstein sent to the mad house for crimes against humanity. Jung fights Freud for his Oedipus complex after seeing his mother naked. It\'s a nightmare of the mad.
March 9th, 2026 11:48
date with the fall
Sealgair said:
The poem unfolds across multiple layers, like a descent through the stairway of the mind.
Amazing work!
March 5th, 2026 14:15
Sealgair said:
The poem unfolds across multiple layers, like a descent through the stairway of the mind.
Amazing work!
March 5th, 2026 14:15
date with the fall
Ellen Marsell said:
Philosophers would call this radical nihilism.
Congratulations, humanity, we are officially lost.
March 5th, 2026 13:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Philosophers would call this radical nihilism.
Congratulations, humanity, we are officially lost.
March 5th, 2026 13:58
date with the fall
sorenbarrett said:
Paradise has been sold out since two minutes after the tickets went on sale. They need a larger venue but maybe tickets can be bought from scalpers. At twice the good deeds required for entrance the price is set but the tickets are forgeries and one is off to jail.
March 5th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Paradise has been sold out since two minutes after the tickets went on sale. They need a larger venue but maybe tickets can be bought from scalpers. At twice the good deeds required for entrance the price is set but the tickets are forgeries and one is off to jail.
March 5th, 2026 11:25
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