Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Pyres
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet, stripped of illusions, becomes a prophet, and poetry - a revelation.
An excellent, deeply philosophical text!
February 27th, 2026 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
The poet, stripped of illusions, becomes a prophet, and poetry - a revelation.
An excellent, deeply philosophical text!
February 27th, 2026 11:51
Pyres
sorenbarrett said:
Was not Abraham to offer up his son Isaac on the alter, a burnt offering and who would pick those bones? A family picknick perchance? Greasy smoke indeed if in his laziness he had grown fat off too many video games. A prophetic poem that seems a revelation but may be a book of acts or even a genesis if not an exodus. Heaven help us.
February 27th, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Was not Abraham to offer up his son Isaac on the alter, a burnt offering and who would pick those bones? A family picknick perchance? Greasy smoke indeed if in his laziness he had grown fat off too many video games. A prophetic poem that seems a revelation but may be a book of acts or even a genesis if not an exodus. Heaven help us.
February 27th, 2026 11:33
Pyres
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write Lorenz, a definite like
February 27th, 2026 11:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write Lorenz, a definite like
February 27th, 2026 11:32
Ibiza
Ellen Marsell said:
The youth of the characters lives as if existence could be turned into an endless summer. But the world does not owe them their utopia. It is a clash between hedonism and time and time inevitably wins.
February 26th, 2026 13:26
Ellen Marsell said:
The youth of the characters lives as if existence could be turned into an endless summer. But the world does not owe them their utopia. It is a clash between hedonism and time and time inevitably wins.
February 26th, 2026 13:26
Ibiza
sorenbarrett said:
The Grand Budapest Hotel a movie.....Bollywood ? Fun read
February 26th, 2026 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
The Grand Budapest Hotel a movie.....Bollywood ? Fun read
February 26th, 2026 13:02
Ibiza
isa kemmy said:
i really like the picture, and also ur art of expression
February 26th, 2026 11:21
isa kemmy said:
i really like the picture, and also ur art of expression
February 26th, 2026 11:21
Traveler
HerTime said:
As a permanent wandering soul, this was a great read 👏
February 25th, 2026 16:21
HerTime said:
As a permanent wandering soul, this was a great read 👏
February 25th, 2026 16:21
Traveler
sorenbarrett said:
We all think we travel but there is no such thing for all time is one instant and all places are one as all things are unified into one singularity. A wonderful write my friend that within that singularity this poem exists
February 25th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
We all think we travel but there is no such thing for all time is one instant and all places are one as all things are unified into one singularity. A wonderful write my friend that within that singularity this poem exists
February 25th, 2026 12:27
Traveler
Ellen Marsell said:
Truth does not reside in the grand constructions of the world. It is born through personal effort, despite doubt and solitude.
Beautifully written!
February 25th, 2026 12:16
Ellen Marsell said:
Truth does not reside in the grand constructions of the world. It is born through personal effort, despite doubt and solitude.
Beautifully written!
February 25th, 2026 12:16
The world keeps turning
sorenbarrett said:
I can only imagine that the spirit of Mt. Fuji would question the hanged men since Taro was not known there till modern times. The Beatles on Abbey road have my album used to be a favorite of mine. Nicely written Lorenz
February 24th, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
I can only imagine that the spirit of Mt. Fuji would question the hanged men since Taro was not known there till modern times. The Beatles on Abbey road have my album used to be a favorite of mine. Nicely written Lorenz
February 24th, 2026 14:16
The world keeps turning
Ellen Marsell said:
Death as the hidden axis of the world, and life as an endless rotation around it.
Very powerful imagery!
February 24th, 2026 13:32
Ellen Marsell said:
Death as the hidden axis of the world, and life as an endless rotation around it.
Very powerful imagery!
February 24th, 2026 13:32
Moonwalk step
Ellen Marsell said:
Self-irony turns disillusionment into something graceful and refined. Beautifully written!
February 23rd, 2026 13:57
Ellen Marsell said:
Self-irony turns disillusionment into something graceful and refined. Beautifully written!
February 23rd, 2026 13:57
Moonwalk step
sorenbarrett said:
There is something enchanting about the moon and its light. It casts a dreamer\'s shadow and Dulcinea del Tobosa awaits and waits and waits.
February 23rd, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is something enchanting about the moon and its light. It casts a dreamer\'s shadow and Dulcinea del Tobosa awaits and waits and waits.
February 23rd, 2026 12:42
The house of lost souls
marissa said:
This was such a complex read,wonderfully written!
February 22nd, 2026 13:39
marissa said:
This was such a complex read,wonderfully written!
February 22nd, 2026 13:39
The house of lost souls
sorenbarrett said:
Harlequins a patched life in a patched suit. The jester rules. Good write my friend
February 22nd, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Harlequins a patched life in a patched suit. The jester rules. Good write my friend
February 22nd, 2026 12:59
The house of lost souls
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a city at dusk, veiled in mist: its contours appear, but what truly matters unfolds between the lines. Its hidden currents run deeper than what is seen. Beautifully written, Lorenz.
February 22nd, 2026 12:10
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a city at dusk, veiled in mist: its contours appear, but what truly matters unfolds between the lines. Its hidden currents run deeper than what is seen. Beautifully written, Lorenz.
February 22nd, 2026 12:10
Epistle to the prince of poets
Ellen Marsell said:
The most ignorant person can, with the help of a machine, produce books… even in the complete absence of talent. Well written.
February 21st, 2026 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
The most ignorant person can, with the help of a machine, produce books… even in the complete absence of talent. Well written.
February 21st, 2026 12:30
Epistle to the prince of poets
sorenbarrett said:
I like a guy with a sense of humor and I heard he has so wicked jokes. I do like apple pie. A good read Lorenz
February 21st, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
I like a guy with a sense of humor and I heard he has so wicked jokes. I do like apple pie. A good read Lorenz
February 21st, 2026 12:16
Dissociation
Ellen Marsell said:
Is there still a dimension where one can be not an image, but a presence?
February 20th, 2026 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Is there still a dimension where one can be not an image, but a presence?
February 20th, 2026 13:20
Dissociation
sorenbarrett said:
Humanity repressed and forced into denial where in that unconscious void Klaus Barbie looks for Ken.
February 20th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Humanity repressed and forced into denial where in that unconscious void Klaus Barbie looks for Ken.
February 20th, 2026 12:21
Beyond Pluto
Ellen Marsell said:
This text is full of extreme tension at the level of imagery, language and symbolism. It does not simply tell a story, it creates a space where you find yourself inside a cosmogonic and intimate act at the same time.
February 19th, 2026 13:18
Ellen Marsell said:
This text is full of extreme tension at the level of imagery, language and symbolism. It does not simply tell a story, it creates a space where you find yourself inside a cosmogonic and intimate act at the same time.
February 19th, 2026 13:18
Beyond Pluto
sorenbarrett said:
It is a reptilian cosmos where the ouroboros swallows its tail. Nicely surreal
February 19th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
It is a reptilian cosmos where the ouroboros swallows its tail. Nicely surreal
February 19th, 2026 12:15
From Brugges to Ghent
Ellen Marsell said:
The world may be immense,
yet the soul dwells within the reach of a few bells,
a handful of fields,
and a ribbon of rain over the canal.
February 18th, 2026 12:54
Ellen Marsell said:
The world may be immense,
yet the soul dwells within the reach of a few bells,
a handful of fields,
and a ribbon of rain over the canal.
February 18th, 2026 12:54
From Brugges to Ghent
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write and a fave
February 18th, 2026 12:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write and a fave
February 18th, 2026 12:09
From Brugges to Ghent
sorenbarrett said:
Home all that we know not heaven or hell here is enough but we love the tales. Born from water buried in dirt we long to live on green pastures.
February 18th, 2026 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
Home all that we know not heaven or hell here is enough but we love the tales. Born from water buried in dirt we long to live on green pastures.
February 18th, 2026 11:52
The song of all possibilities
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmically ironic poem about a fragmented self. It resembles a mirror that reflects a constellation and knows that the lines between the stars are traced by imagination.
February 17th, 2026 12:42
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmically ironic poem about a fragmented self. It resembles a mirror that reflects a constellation and knows that the lines between the stars are traced by imagination.
February 17th, 2026 12:42
The song of all possibilities
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of technology where a TV in a coffin will be the next option available. Nice Lorenz
February 17th, 2026 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of technology where a TV in a coffin will be the next option available. Nice Lorenz
February 17th, 2026 11:49
The curvature of time
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and beautiful I picture a bowling ball placed on a cellophane fabric of time stretching it to the breaking point where the density of a black hole swallows it and no light escapes. Nicely done i recognize some of those tunes
February 16th, 2026 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and beautiful I picture a bowling ball placed on a cellophane fabric of time stretching it to the breaking point where the density of a black hole swallows it and no light escapes. Nicely done i recognize some of those tunes
February 16th, 2026 13:28
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