Comments received on poems by Lorenz
When the city sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz...I’m fascinated, but I’d be checking behind me every few steps. Definitely keeping my keys in my hand! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Lorenz...I’m fascinated, but I’d be checking behind me every few steps. Definitely keeping my keys in my hand! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:30
Whisper of times
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A screaming darkness abounds
October 23rd, 2026 11:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A screaming darkness abounds
October 23rd, 2026 11:31
Whisper of times
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark poem about a time that has lost its moral compass.
October 23rd, 2026 11:30
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark poem about a time that has lost its moral compass.
October 23rd, 2026 11:30
Whisper of times
sorenbarrett said:
This sounded like some boss\' and teachers that I have had in the past. It is an astounding list of epitaphs that ring in the ear like curses. Well done my friend a fave
October 23rd, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This sounded like some boss\' and teachers that I have had in the past. It is an astounding list of epitaphs that ring in the ear like curses. Well done my friend a fave
October 23rd, 2026 11:27
When the city sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
Is that watchman from the book of Enoch? Their baby giants ran out of food and started eating men. A dazzling read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
Is that watchman from the book of Enoch? Their baby giants ran out of food and started eating men. A dazzling read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:47
When the city sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a night that turns out to be much more than the interval between sunset and sunrise. The images seem to exist on the threshold between two states, between worlds.
October 22nd, 2026 11:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a night that turns out to be much more than the interval between sunset and sunrise. The images seem to exist on the threshold between two states, between worlds.
October 22nd, 2026 11:48
Poetic curse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I absolutely lost it when you brought Nero into the proceedings! LOL! At that point, I figured we\'d abandoned any hope of a civilized evening. Magnificent! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I absolutely lost it when you brought Nero into the proceedings! LOL! At that point, I figured we\'d abandoned any hope of a civilized evening. Magnificent! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:54
Poetic curse
Sealgair said:
The saints have lost their faces, the jester has inherited the pulpit, and even the ashes seem to have something left to confess.
October 19th, 2026 16:03
Sealgair said:
The saints have lost their faces, the jester has inherited the pulpit, and even the ashes seem to have something left to confess.
October 19th, 2026 16:03
Poetic curse
sorenbarrett said:
From Rome to today a Baccalaurean party a toast to Diocese
October 19th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
From Rome to today a Baccalaurean party a toast to Diocese
October 19th, 2026 13:30
Poetic curse
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem has a temperament of its own. It’s anarchic, politically embittered. It seems determined to desecrate the very idea of beauty when beauty becomes a cover for cruelty. What’s fascinating is that the poem barely lets you catch your breath.
October 19th, 2026 11:59
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem has a temperament of its own. It’s anarchic, politically embittered. It seems determined to desecrate the very idea of beauty when beauty becomes a cover for cruelty. What’s fascinating is that the poem barely lets you catch your breath.
October 19th, 2026 11:59
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine piece my friend, much enjoyed read
October 17th, 2026 11:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine piece my friend, much enjoyed read
October 17th, 2026 11:48
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
Ellen Marsell said:
He wanted to be the author of his own legend, but ended up a character in someone else’s story.
October 17th, 2026 11:43
Ellen Marsell said:
He wanted to be the author of his own legend, but ended up a character in someone else’s story.
October 17th, 2026 11:43
You\'re just \'\' That \'\'
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a clown never scared me but left me laughing a wonderful image here my friend and now I play the jester
October 17th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a clown never scared me but left me laughing a wonderful image here my friend and now I play the jester
October 17th, 2026 11:35
The digital flowers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! Between the religious profiteers, political opportunists, and technological madness, humanity seems determined to engineer its own destruction. And we\'ll probably find a way to monetize the apocalypse before it arrives! LOL! Quite the indictment, my friend. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good grief, Lorenz! Between the religious profiteers, political opportunists, and technological madness, humanity seems determined to engineer its own destruction. And we\'ll probably find a way to monetize the apocalypse before it arrives! LOL! Quite the indictment, my friend. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2026 23:34
The digital flowers
Ellen Marsell said:
Will we be able to preserve the living flower without letting it become yet another symbol in whose name the entire garden may one day be burned to the ground?
October 13th, 2026 13:11
Ellen Marsell said:
Will we be able to preserve the living flower without letting it become yet another symbol in whose name the entire garden may one day be burned to the ground?
October 13th, 2026 13:11
The digital flowers
sorenbarrett said:
When you spoke of wooden horses I thought of a rocking horse but then came the Trojan horse and of course then the gold plated calf from a bible in gold leaf. Well I\'ll bet those digital flowers don\'t wilt. Good on my friend
October 13th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
When you spoke of wooden horses I thought of a rocking horse but then came the Trojan horse and of course then the gold plated calf from a bible in gold leaf. Well I\'ll bet those digital flowers don\'t wilt. Good on my friend
October 13th, 2026 12:14
The digital flowers
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such wonderful vibes this piece gives off, much enjoyed
October 13th, 2026 11:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such wonderful vibes this piece gives off, much enjoyed
October 13th, 2026 11:58
The november rains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz! I was picturing an old romantic film while reading this, and by the time I finished, I was thinking about people I\'ve lost touch with over the years. There are some I\'d dearly love to see again. Really enjoyed spending a little time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz! I was picturing an old romantic film while reading this, and by the time I finished, I was thinking about people I\'ve lost touch with over the years. There are some I\'d dearly love to see again. Really enjoyed spending a little time with this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 23:30
The november rains
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything that passes disappears; not everything that remains is eternal.
October 11th, 2026 13:25
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything that passes disappears; not everything that remains is eternal.
October 11th, 2026 13:25
The november rains
sorenbarrett said:
Absence makes the heart grow fonder they say. That is a scary thing if t\'wer so all romantics would be hermits. Good write my friend
October 11th, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
Absence makes the heart grow fonder they say. That is a scary thing if t\'wer so all romantics would be hermits. Good write my friend
October 11th, 2026 11:28
Fragments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
November gets to me too, Lorenz…I struggle with the shorter days, and I write through some of that myself. This was an uncomfortable read for me, but I’m glad I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
November gets to me too, Lorenz…I struggle with the shorter days, and I write through some of that myself. This was an uncomfortable read for me, but I’m glad I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:35
Fragments
sorenbarrett said:
Now orgasmic marble sounds like a whole new meaning to a hard on and what of those stones. A mystical read my friend
October 10th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
Now orgasmic marble sounds like a whole new meaning to a hard on and what of those stones. A mystical read my friend
October 10th, 2026 12:16
Fragments
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this poem swept me up and I enjoyed journey
October 10th, 2026 12:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this poem swept me up and I enjoyed journey
October 10th, 2026 12:08
Fragments
Ellen Marsell said:
We live in an ever-changing world, yet we seem to need the belief that some things are not destined to perish. We create illusions of permanence, dreams that might outlive their creators…
October 10th, 2026 11:38
Ellen Marsell said:
We live in an ever-changing world, yet we seem to need the belief that some things are not destined to perish. We create illusions of permanence, dreams that might outlive their creators…
October 10th, 2026 11:38
the fertile womb
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Lorenz. This went somewhere genuinely disturbing, especially once the religious imagery started colliding with all that brutality. Quite a ride. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whew, Lorenz. This went somewhere genuinely disturbing, especially once the religious imagery started colliding with all that brutality. Quite a ride. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:12
the fertile womb
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like AI has escaped and is on the loose. A surrealistic read of a rampage gone berserk. Well done Lorenz
October 6th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like AI has escaped and is on the loose. A surrealistic read of a rampage gone berserk. Well done Lorenz
October 6th, 2026 12:14
the fertile womb
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a dark philosophical mystery. I like it!
October 6th, 2026 11:18
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a dark philosophical mystery. I like it!
October 6th, 2026 11:18
the fertile womb
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most passionate write. much enjoyed
October 6th, 2026 11:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most passionate write. much enjoyed
October 6th, 2026 11:04
My neurotic journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Lorenz...“Prophet of the craziest gospel” sounds like one hell of a job title. 😂 Whatever is happening around that messy desk, I\'d say the journey is producing something worthwhile. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, Lorenz...“Prophet of the craziest gospel” sounds like one hell of a job title. 😂 Whatever is happening around that messy desk, I\'d say the journey is producing something worthwhile. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 00:11
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