Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
My solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
The night of the giants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Inspired vertigo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
The night of the giants
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent, contemplative cosmic poem!
August 1st, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent, contemplative cosmic poem!
August 1st, 2026 11:56
The night of the giants
sorenbarrett said:
As cryptic as a compass that points to the hour not the direction. Nice Lorenz
August 1st, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
As cryptic as a compass that points to the hour not the direction. Nice Lorenz
August 1st, 2026 11:41
Inspired vertigo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most wonderful write and a fav my friend
July 31st, 2026 13:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most wonderful write and a fav my friend
July 31st, 2026 13:55
Inspired vertigo
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that DaVinci hauled the painting with him everywhere constantly fiddling with it until he died. I think that he was just economizing using a already used canvass
July 31st, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that DaVinci hauled the painting with him everywhere constantly fiddling with it until he died. I think that he was just economizing using a already used canvass
July 31st, 2026 11:41
Instructions for use
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
Instructions for use
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
Instructions for use
Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Tectonic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tectonic
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
Tectonic
Ellen Marsell said:
We are made of the same processes as the Earth itself. Tectonic plates move within us too. They shift slowly over the years until, one day, they transform our entire inner landscape. Great poem!
July 29th, 2026 12:22
Ellen Marsell said:
We are made of the same processes as the Earth itself. Tectonic plates move within us too. They shift slowly over the years until, one day, they transform our entire inner landscape. Great poem!
July 29th, 2026 12:22
Tectonic
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes tectonic shifts, this poem rocks in its slide. Well done Lorenz
July 29th, 2026 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes tectonic shifts, this poem rocks in its slide. Well done Lorenz
July 29th, 2026 11:52
Anatomy of death
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Sometimes you write too well. La, the imagery, how fantastically rendered, I love your skill. Thank you for sharing.
July 29th, 2026 04:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Sometimes you write too well. La, the imagery, how fantastically rendered, I love your skill. Thank you for sharing.
July 29th, 2026 04:32
Lethal smile
NafisaSB said:
Well I would have welcomed and enjoyed it and passed it on 😋
July 29th, 2026 04:00
NafisaSB said:
Well I would have welcomed and enjoyed it and passed it on 😋
July 29th, 2026 04:00
Anatomy of death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. It feels like consciousness staggering through addiction, violence, spiritual abandonment, and the wreckage left behind…dark, disorienting, and utterly merciless. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. It feels like consciousness staggering through addiction, violence, spiritual abandonment, and the wreckage left behind…dark, disorienting, and utterly merciless. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:07
Anatomy of death
sorenbarrett said:
Lizard and cloud killers, nothing worse than bad booze. Sounds like a desolate place Lorenz. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Lizard and cloud killers, nothing worse than bad booze. Sounds like a desolate place Lorenz. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 11:14
Paradox box
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a brilliantly strange and entertaining piece! This is philosophical absurdity at its finest...dark, mischievous, and wonderfully clever. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 07:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a brilliantly strange and entertaining piece! This is philosophical absurdity at its finest...dark, mischievous, and wonderfully clever. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 07:09
Paradox box
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Paradox box
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
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