Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of deep thoughts bred from images in this poem. A wonderful poem of self reflection and deeply philosophical. A fave
March 28th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of deep thoughts bred from images in this poem. A wonderful poem of self reflection and deeply philosophical. A fave
March 28th, 2025 09:06
Pandora\'s box
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of the eternal repetition of humanity’s mistakes, of power playing with people’s fates, and of the inevitability of self-destruction runs through the entire text. There is no traditional image of hope left at the bottom of Pandora’s box - only inevitability. A striking and powerful work.
March 27th, 2025 10:19
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of the eternal repetition of humanity’s mistakes, of power playing with people’s fates, and of the inevitability of self-destruction runs through the entire text. There is no traditional image of hope left at the bottom of Pandora’s box - only inevitability. A striking and powerful work.
March 27th, 2025 10:19
Pandora\'s box
Friendship said:
poem serves as a cautionary tale, warning against complacency in the face of suffering and injustice. It urges readers to consider the consequences of their choices and the moral implications of societal actions. The use of dark imagery and allusions to myth reinforces the idea that history may repeat itself if lessons are not learned.
March 27th, 2025 07:06
Friendship said:
poem serves as a cautionary tale, warning against complacency in the face of suffering and injustice. It urges readers to consider the consequences of their choices and the moral implications of societal actions. The use of dark imagery and allusions to myth reinforces the idea that history may repeat itself if lessons are not learned.
March 27th, 2025 07:06
Pandora\'s box
sorenbarrett said:
Full of dark images this poem addresses the demonic and how it is presented. Nicely written
March 27th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Full of dark images this poem addresses the demonic and how it is presented. Nicely written
March 27th, 2025 04:48
The word system
Sealgair said:
This piece really gets to the heart of what it means to work with words.
Great work!
March 27th, 2025 00:39
Sealgair said:
This piece really gets to the heart of what it means to work with words.
Great work!
March 27th, 2025 00:39
The word system
Ellen Marsell said:
A remarkable exploration of language, its power, and its treachery. You convey how words take on a life of their own—sometimes obedient, sometimes rebellious, always unpredictable. There is a subtle irony in how the poet, seemingly the master of words, ends up at their mercy, carried away by their flow. Strong, imaginative and profound text!
March 26th, 2025 14:17
Ellen Marsell said:
A remarkable exploration of language, its power, and its treachery. You convey how words take on a life of their own—sometimes obedient, sometimes rebellious, always unpredictable. There is a subtle irony in how the poet, seemingly the master of words, ends up at their mercy, carried away by their flow. Strong, imaginative and profound text!
March 26th, 2025 14:17
The word system
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz you captured me with this poem. The personification of words such a creative idea that fits so well with the complexities of language like the complexities of people that use it. Mistaken, confused, truthful and deceitful it sooths and violates. Well said in such a charming manner. A fave
March 26th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz you captured me with this poem. The personification of words such a creative idea that fits so well with the complexities of language like the complexities of people that use it. Mistaken, confused, truthful and deceitful it sooths and violates. Well said in such a charming manner. A fave
March 26th, 2025 08:40
Cosmic trick
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a real space odyssey - a fast, chaotic, unpredictable flight. Fascinating.
March 25th, 2025 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a real space odyssey - a fast, chaotic, unpredictable flight. Fascinating.
March 25th, 2025 11:56
Cosmic trick
sorenbarrett said:
We are all aliens on a planet that does not deserve us. Not that we are good quite the contrary. I feel the alien nature in this poem. Yet here we are and sometimes it is very good. Lovely
March 25th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all aliens on a planet that does not deserve us. Not that we are good quite the contrary. I feel the alien nature in this poem. Yet here we are and sometimes it is very good. Lovely
March 25th, 2025 08:19
The home of lost souls
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a parody of mankind. A lovely write of how people are all fools and in their wisdom laugh at others and nature itself. A wonderful write of the foibles of man.
March 24th, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a parody of mankind. A lovely write of how people are all fools and in their wisdom laugh at others and nature itself. A wonderful write of the foibles of man.
March 24th, 2025 15:22
Inspired rebel
Sealgair said:
This eternal game, this cycle of ascent and fall - such is the price of true creativity.
Great writing!
March 24th, 2025 11:25
Sealgair said:
This eternal game, this cycle of ascent and fall - such is the price of true creativity.
Great writing!
March 24th, 2025 11:25
The home of lost souls
Sealgair said:
Those who danced were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.
March 24th, 2025 11:20
Sealgair said:
Those who danced were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.
March 24th, 2025 11:20
The home of lost souls
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong images. There is tragedy, irony, and the hidden truth about a world where madness is closer to the truth than so-called normality.
March 24th, 2025 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong images. There is tragedy, irony, and the hidden truth about a world where madness is closer to the truth than so-called normality.
March 24th, 2025 10:58
Inspired rebel
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of inspiration - as a capricious goddess and a relentless storm - conveys the duality of creativity: its tormenting necessity and intoxicating obsession. It arrives and takes control, demands sacrifices, sweeps one into madness, or abandons them in the doldrums of creative despair.
Emotional, powerful, and mesmerizing.
March 23rd, 2025 11:35
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of inspiration - as a capricious goddess and a relentless storm - conveys the duality of creativity: its tormenting necessity and intoxicating obsession. It arrives and takes control, demands sacrifices, sweeps one into madness, or abandons them in the doldrums of creative despair.
Emotional, powerful, and mesmerizing.
March 23rd, 2025 11:35
Inspired rebel
sorenbarrett said:
A siren muse I can imagine So many metaphors in this piece that takes me through so many poems. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A siren muse I can imagine So many metaphors in this piece that takes me through so many poems. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 04:15
Revival
Ellen Marsell said:
This dreamy poem is imbued with deep symbolism and resembles a spiritual journey in search of a lost paradise. It leaves a sense of luminous longing and aspiration for freedom somewhere beyond the material world. Beautifully done.
March 22nd, 2025 10:29
Ellen Marsell said:
This dreamy poem is imbued with deep symbolism and resembles a spiritual journey in search of a lost paradise. It leaves a sense of luminous longing and aspiration for freedom somewhere beyond the material world. Beautifully done.
March 22nd, 2025 10:29
Revival
sorenbarrett said:
Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and on. An invitation to join together in the journey. Very nice
March 22nd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and on. An invitation to join together in the journey. Very nice
March 22nd, 2025 09:50
Fanny
Neville said:
Exquisite ink spilled throughout .. & very much enjoyed .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:50
Neville said:
Exquisite ink spilled throughout .. & very much enjoyed .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:50
Fanny
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching piece that combines sensuality, music, and the history of Berlin after the Wall. Fanny\'s image is incredibly vivid and seems inseparable from the city and its history. Memories tinged with melancholy. I like this poem.
March 20th, 2025 10:49
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching piece that combines sensuality, music, and the history of Berlin after the Wall. Fanny\'s image is incredibly vivid and seems inseparable from the city and its history. Memories tinged with melancholy. I like this poem.
March 20th, 2025 10:49
Fanny
sorenbarrett said:
Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
March 20th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
March 20th, 2025 09:39
The corridor
Sealgair said:
The imagery in your poem gives birth to a powerful visual, like footage from a philosophical sci-fi movie. I\'m impressed.
March 20th, 2025 05:24
Sealgair said:
The imagery in your poem gives birth to a powerful visual, like footage from a philosophical sci-fi movie. I\'m impressed.
March 20th, 2025 05:24
The corridor
Ellen Marsell said:
I like this combination of cyberpunk and philosophy.
March 19th, 2025 15:10
Ellen Marsell said:
I like this combination of cyberpunk and philosophy.
March 19th, 2025 15:10
The corridor
sorenbarrett said:
The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the clash of present day and its stress and the past which at least in the mind is a peaceful place. A thought provoking write Lorez
March 19th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the clash of present day and its stress and the past which at least in the mind is a peaceful place. A thought provoking write Lorez
March 19th, 2025 10:58
Souls
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves to the rhythm of a wandering soul, gathering echoes of past lives, lost melodies, fleeting emotions. There is a deep understanding here of how souls carry history. A beautiful piece!
March 18th, 2025 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves to the rhythm of a wandering soul, gathering echoes of past lives, lost melodies, fleeting emotions. There is a deep understanding here of how souls carry history. A beautiful piece!
March 18th, 2025 11:49
Souls
sorenbarrett said:
Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity of air to today. Most interesting Lorenz.
March 18th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity of air to today. Most interesting Lorenz.
March 18th, 2025 10:50
black desire
Sealgair said:
She was a fire, and I wanted to be burned.
A powerful piece.
March 18th, 2025 06:03
Sealgair said:
She was a fire, and I wanted to be burned.
A powerful piece.
March 18th, 2025 06:03
black desire
Ellen Marsell said:
Feverish confession of desire and torment, where love is both worship and war. The poem pulses with untamed emotion, its imagery oscillating between tenderness and brutality. Dark, mesmerizing...
March 17th, 2025 11:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Feverish confession of desire and torment, where love is both worship and war. The poem pulses with untamed emotion, its imagery oscillating between tenderness and brutality. Dark, mesmerizing...
March 17th, 2025 11:03
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