Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Urban solitude
Sealgair said:
This is a powerful, deeply atmospheric work, echoing the spirit of the poètes maudits. I like it!
April 17th, 2026 12:00
Sealgair said:
This is a powerful, deeply atmospheric work, echoing the spirit of the poètes maudits. I like it!
April 17th, 2026 12:00
Urban solitude
Priya Tomar said:
Ending is powerful . It leave a sense of unease ...
Good write .
April 16th, 2026 21:19
Priya Tomar said:
Ending is powerful . It leave a sense of unease ...
Good write .
April 16th, 2026 21:19
Urban solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like wandering through a dream you can’t quite leave…strange, haunting, and quietly immersive. It pulls you in without explaining itself, and that gives it real presence. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 16th, 2026 16:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this feels like wandering through a dream you can’t quite leave…strange, haunting, and quietly immersive. It pulls you in without explaining itself, and that gives it real presence. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 16th, 2026 16:31
Urban solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark this poem beckons and calls but does not answer. Nicely done Lorenz
April 16th, 2026 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark this poem beckons and calls but does not answer. Nicely done Lorenz
April 16th, 2026 13:47
Urban solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
We are never fully present, never fully complete; we are always in the process of becoming, always arriving at an address where we do not yet live.
April 16th, 2026 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
We are never fully present, never fully complete; we are always in the process of becoming, always arriving at an address where we do not yet live.
April 16th, 2026 11:51
Icy fire wings
sorenbarrett said:
There are no hitching posts anymore and the anchors have long since rusted away. Adrift in dreams with a blue pill in one pocket and a red in the other
April 14th, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
There are no hitching posts anymore and the anchors have long since rusted away. Adrift in dreams with a blue pill in one pocket and a red in the other
April 14th, 2026 12:58
Icy fire wings
Ellen Marsell said:
The world has ended, utopia has collapsed, and only the ruins of meanings remain, through which this strange subject wanders. He is neither man, nor god, nor machine. He is a point of observation.
April 14th, 2026 12:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The world has ended, utopia has collapsed, and only the ruins of meanings remain, through which this strange subject wanders. He is neither man, nor god, nor machine. He is a point of observation.
April 14th, 2026 12:12
Hajulellah
Priya Tomar said:
The lie disguised as faith beholds its own truth in a deceptive mirror ..... my fav lines .
Nicely done .
April 13th, 2026 21:24
Priya Tomar said:
The lie disguised as faith beholds its own truth in a deceptive mirror ..... my fav lines .
Nicely done .
April 13th, 2026 21:24
Hajulellah
sorenbarrett said:
Hallelujah in Fortran or Cobalt maybe DAS very nice my friend
April 13th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Hallelujah in Fortran or Cobalt maybe DAS very nice my friend
April 13th, 2026 14:17
Hajulellah
Ellen Marsell said:
The boundaries of the soul you shall not find, no matter which path you tread.
April 13th, 2026 11:52
Ellen Marsell said:
The boundaries of the soul you shall not find, no matter which path you tread.
April 13th, 2026 11:52
Inspired oblivion
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
The tree that was cut down because it was a threat to the peace must be the elm on the DMZ that almost caused WWIII when the US cut it down for blocking the view and North Korea killed two American tree cutters and Gerald Ford put the nation on the highest level of alert sending bombers with nuclear weapons to cover the next set of tree cutters. All an unfortunate misunderstanding.
April 10th, 2026 15:29
Inspired oblivion
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poetry of reconciliation with the inevitable, written with filigreed emotional precision.
April 10th, 2026 12:15
Ballade cosmique
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
Sealgair said:
This poem breathes; it is filled with space and stellar winds... It feels like a musical interlude between the madness of earthly existence and the silence of the cosmos.
April 9th, 2026 15:09
My desorganizer
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
Priya Tomar said:
A quiet ache runs through every line .....
Beautifully written .
April 9th, 2026 00:13
My desorganizer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of incompletions and negations that makes sense in a surreal world.
April 8th, 2026 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of incompletions and negations that makes sense in a surreal world.
April 8th, 2026 15:31
My desorganizer
Ellen Marsell said:
To wait endlessly for one who will never come, and to hold a strange loyalty to someone never encountered...
Your poem leaves behind the lingering scent of a \'fragranced promise\' that dissolves into ash as soon as the last line is read.
April 8th, 2026 11:52
Ellen Marsell said:
To wait endlessly for one who will never come, and to hold a strange loyalty to someone never encountered...
Your poem leaves behind the lingering scent of a \'fragranced promise\' that dissolves into ash as soon as the last line is read.
April 8th, 2026 11:52
Sad hill cemetary ballad
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Hemingway but at Key West and there I had breakfast at his house a lobster omelet. The tomb of god is empty because he is on vacation, had breakfast with him and Hemingway\'s
April 7th, 2026 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Hemingway but at Key West and there I had breakfast at his house a lobster omelet. The tomb of god is empty because he is on vacation, had breakfast with him and Hemingway\'s
April 7th, 2026 19:20
Sad hill cemetary ballad
Ellen Marsell said:
This feels like infernal jazz played on a broken piano in a bar at the edge of the universe.
April 7th, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
This feels like infernal jazz played on a broken piano in a bar at the edge of the universe.
April 7th, 2026 11:56
Sad hill cemetary ballad
Abdullah123 said:
When I think ballad, I automatically (for whatever reason) think: fairytale and rainbows😂. But THIS... this made me think again. And I love that
Also, maybe it\'s just because of the mind space which I\'m currently in, but the last two lines remind me of some particular politicians in some part of the world. I would love to know if that\'s the inspiration, or it just me ifyk what i mean.
Either way, great write
April 7th, 2026 11:41
Abdullah123 said:
When I think ballad, I automatically (for whatever reason) think: fairytale and rainbows😂. But THIS... this made me think again. And I love that
Also, maybe it\'s just because of the mind space which I\'m currently in, but the last two lines remind me of some particular politicians in some part of the world. I would love to know if that\'s the inspiration, or it just me ifyk what i mean.
Either way, great write
April 7th, 2026 11:41
Autistic translator
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and autism really are two sides of the same coin called Detachment. If the world is a hologram, you have to be \'outside the norm\' to see what’s actually happening behind the scenes.
April 5th, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and autism really are two sides of the same coin called Detachment. If the world is a hologram, you have to be \'outside the norm\' to see what’s actually happening behind the scenes.
April 5th, 2026 11:56
Autistic translator
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal even for the surreal this poem dances with dreams and sings with hallucinatory power. It is a sorcerers pocket guide. Nicely written my friend
April 5th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal even for the surreal this poem dances with dreams and sings with hallucinatory power. It is a sorcerers pocket guide. Nicely written my friend
April 5th, 2026 11:54
Not a trace will remain
Ellen Marsell said:
To leave no trace is the ultimate freedom, found only when we cast off the yoke of existence and merge with the \"mystery of the void\".
April 2nd, 2026 12:57
Ellen Marsell said:
To leave no trace is the ultimate freedom, found only when we cast off the yoke of existence and merge with the \"mystery of the void\".
April 2nd, 2026 12:57
Not a trace will remain
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the mix of this one Lorenz from Bible to Star Wars and what could be Mad Max. A good read my friend
April 2nd, 2026 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the mix of this one Lorenz from Bible to Star Wars and what could be Mad Max. A good read my friend
April 2nd, 2026 12:06
My dear self
sorenbarrett said:
A soliloquy maybe self reflection where the reflection is not wanted to be seen. Vampires have no reflection but here it even has a shadow.
March 29th, 2026 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
A soliloquy maybe self reflection where the reflection is not wanted to be seen. Vampires have no reflection but here it even has a shadow.
March 29th, 2026 11:59
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