Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Cosmic insomnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’m right there with you...still asking, still angry, still wanting there to be someone listening. This gets under my skin, my friend. 🌌🖤🙏🕯️
November 5th, 2026 22:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, I’m right there with you...still asking, still angry, still wanting there to be someone listening. This gets under my skin, my friend. 🌌🖤🙏🕯️
November 5th, 2026 22:37
Cosmic insomnia
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Insomnia is but to dream while awake
November 5th, 2026 02:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Insomnia is but to dream while awake
November 5th, 2026 02:38
Cosmic insomnia
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a consciousness that has become too vast for its own human existence.
November 4th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about a consciousness that has become too vast for its own human existence.
November 4th, 2026 11:36
Cosmic insomnia
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in any form is but reality\'s nightmare and to awake is but to dream. Good write my friend
November 4th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in any form is but reality\'s nightmare and to awake is but to dream. Good write my friend
November 4th, 2026 11:35
Not guilty
NafisaSB said:
As usual a write that makes one sit up and ponder🤔
November 4th, 2026 09:44
NafisaSB said:
As usual a write that makes one sit up and ponder🤔
November 4th, 2026 09:44
Voice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That’s a hell of a laugh in the middle of all this, Lorenz...then the loneliness hits again. I appreciate you keeping the absurdity alive even there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 18:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That’s a hell of a laugh in the middle of all this, Lorenz...then the loneliness hits again. I appreciate you keeping the absurdity alive even there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2026 18:03
Voice
sorenbarrett said:
This the cry of panic on an airliner plummeting toward earth. Now straight down to fast for sound.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
This the cry of panic on an airliner plummeting toward earth. Now straight down to fast for sound.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
Voice
Lorenz said:
finding your voice doesn\'t necessiraly mean finding others,it means first and foremost not losing yourself !
November 2nd, 2026 11:52
Lorenz said:
finding your voice doesn\'t necessiraly mean finding others,it means first and foremost not losing yourself !
November 2nd, 2026 11:52
Voice
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the tragic divide between the ability to express oneself and the possibility of being truly understood.
November 2nd, 2026 11:47
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the tragic divide between the ability to express oneself and the possibility of being truly understood.
November 2nd, 2026 11:47
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
kiko said:
I like the dream like quality of nostalgia :)
November 2nd, 2026 10:23
kiko said:
I like the dream like quality of nostalgia :)
November 2nd, 2026 10:23
Difference
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz! Your wonderfully twisted imagination never disappoints! LOL! And as someone who\'s never quite fit the mold myself, I understand that desire to reclaim your own voice. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 19:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Lorenz! Your wonderfully twisted imagination never disappoints! LOL! And as someone who\'s never quite fit the mold myself, I understand that desire to reclaim your own voice. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 19:08
Difference
sorenbarrett said:
If ghosts are supposed to be white and angels too I would think that Satan being in such a hot place would not opt for white summer wear. Nicely done My friend.
November 1st, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
If ghosts are supposed to be white and angels too I would think that Satan being in such a hot place would not opt for white summer wear. Nicely done My friend.
November 1st, 2026 13:26
Difference
Ellen Marsell said:
Having survived the seraphim, Mercury, the devil, hysterical groupies, and a hostile elephant, one finally realizes: the apple pie is what comes closest to a human truth.
The universe is cruel, identity is fragmented, and the poet is lost somewhere in a cosmos of symbols.
But somewhere, someone has still baked an apple pie.
November 1st, 2026 11:46
Ellen Marsell said:
Having survived the seraphim, Mercury, the devil, hysterical groupies, and a hostile elephant, one finally realizes: the apple pie is what comes closest to a human truth.
The universe is cruel, identity is fragmented, and the poet is lost somewhere in a cosmos of symbols.
But somewhere, someone has still baked an apple pie.
November 1st, 2026 11:46
Technological nightmare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bugs Bunny, Lorenz?! Eh...what\'s up, doc? Now I can’t even trust the cartoons to give me a break! Thoroughly unsettling stuff. Happy Halloween, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bugs Bunny, Lorenz?! Eh...what\'s up, doc? Now I can’t even trust the cartoons to give me a break! Thoroughly unsettling stuff. Happy Halloween, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 22:32
Technological nightmare
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a kind of technological metaphysics, but perhaps it was born out of a much simpler and more human situation. 🙂
October 31st, 2026 11:27
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a kind of technological metaphysics, but perhaps it was born out of a much simpler and more human situation. 🙂
October 31st, 2026 11:27
Technological nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Down the rabbit hole with a different rabbit not wonderland but Warner Brothers. I think The Jetsons might fit here. Certainly not Disney but maybe Ren and Stimpy
October 31st, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Down the rabbit hole with a different rabbit not wonderland but Warner Brothers. I think The Jetsons might fit here. Certainly not Disney but maybe Ren and Stimpy
October 31st, 2026 11:14
Not guilty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a nightmare, Lorenz…I’d be asking this fellow a few more questions before letting him anywhere near the exit. You’ve certainly got my suspicions up! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a nightmare, Lorenz…I’d be asking this fellow a few more questions before letting him anywhere near the exit. You’ve certainly got my suspicions up! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:28
Not guilty
Ellen Marsell said:
The text has a certain subtlety in its grotesque mix of styles, its play with fairy-tale and cultural imagery, and the character himself, who stubbornly insists on his innocence in a rather comical way. Interesting work!
October 27th, 2026 12:28
Ellen Marsell said:
The text has a certain subtlety in its grotesque mix of styles, its play with fairy-tale and cultural imagery, and the character himself, who stubbornly insists on his innocence in a rather comical way. Interesting work!
October 27th, 2026 12:28
Not guilty
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I sometimes wonder if life is an ironic cartoon
October 27th, 2026 11:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I sometimes wonder if life is an ironic cartoon
October 27th, 2026 11:55
Not guilty
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a world where people tell fairytales and want you to believe them. Don\'t worry Santa will soon be here. Good write Lorenz
October 27th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a world where people tell fairytales and want you to believe them. Don\'t worry Santa will soon be here. Good write Lorenz
October 27th, 2026 11:40
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the snow, the clock, the frozen river, and that letter from another planet all arrived carrying the same absence...I stayed with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, the snow, the clock, the frozen river, and that letter from another planet all arrived carrying the same absence...I stayed with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:34
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about love as a letter you can\'t send to anyone but yourself.
October 26th, 2026 03:38
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about love as a letter you can\'t send to anyone but yourself.
October 26th, 2026 03:38
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh. Winter. I dread that season every single year. Fascinating vision thou seer.
October 25th, 2026 19:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Ugh. Winter. I dread that season every single year. Fascinating vision thou seer.
October 25th, 2026 19:20
It\'s snowing in Ottawa
sorenbarrett said:
All of my existence is a dream. A lovely write my friend but I have never been to that river. I have been to the Amazon and its not frozen
October 25th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
All of my existence is a dream. A lovely write my friend but I have never been to that river. I have been to the Amazon and its not frozen
October 25th, 2026 14:28
Antisocially yours
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow. They\'ve self-respect the canines most pitifully lack and they\'re not stupid. Charming and rather esoteric, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Meow.
October 24th, 2026 15:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow. They\'ve self-respect the canines most pitifully lack and they\'re not stupid. Charming and rather esoteric, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Meow.
October 24th, 2026 15:30
Antisocially yours
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic hermit in a cat’s disguise, entertaining ghosts, mocking the gods, and keeping one small corner of the universe warm for someone who feels like home 🐈
October 24th, 2026 12:05
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic hermit in a cat’s disguise, entertaining ghosts, mocking the gods, and keeping one small corner of the universe warm for someone who feels like home 🐈
October 24th, 2026 12:05
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