Comments received on poems by Lorenz
wild sarabande
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That collision of Mondrian and Kandinsky really grabbed me, Lorenz. Order and geometry crashing into color and chaos feels perfectly at home in this sleepless wandering. Fantastic imagery, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That collision of Mondrian and Kandinsky really grabbed me, Lorenz. Order and geometry crashing into color and chaos feels perfectly at home in this sleepless wandering. Fantastic imagery, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:31
wild sarabande
Ellen Marsell said:
Music allows the listener to experience another’s consciousness as their own flow through time.
August 8th, 2026 12:14
Ellen Marsell said:
Music allows the listener to experience another’s consciousness as their own flow through time.
August 8th, 2026 12:14
wild sarabande
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful this poem struts across the stage of the sky. Well done Lovenz
August 8th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful this poem struts across the stage of the sky. Well done Lovenz
August 8th, 2026 11:39
Synesthaesia in love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Lorenz...there’s something wonderfully spectral about this woman drifting through memory, longing, and imagination without ever being possessed by any of them. And that feline comparison is delightfully strange and somehow perfectly at home here. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, Lorenz...there’s something wonderfully spectral about this woman drifting through memory, longing, and imagination without ever being possessed by any of them. And that feline comparison is delightfully strange and somehow perfectly at home here. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:28
Synesthaesia in love
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is very nearly intoxicating. Deliciously rendered with an exquisite sense of closeness [but how?!], excellent imagery and a lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 16:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is very nearly intoxicating. Deliciously rendered with an exquisite sense of closeness [but how?!], excellent imagery and a lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 16:53
Synesthaesia in love
sorenbarrett said:
I think you should make a duplicate of the key. Nice one Lorenz
August 6th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
I think you should make a duplicate of the key. Nice one Lorenz
August 6th, 2026 12:07
Synesthaesia in love
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful blend of sensual, spatial, and musical imagery.
August 6th, 2026 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful blend of sensual, spatial, and musical imagery.
August 6th, 2026 11:54
A bittersweet stroll
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this really pulled me in…it feels like wandering through memory where decades, music, and dreams all blur into one long walk beside the ocean. There’s a beautiful wistfulness running through the whole piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this really pulled me in…it feels like wandering through memory where decades, music, and dreams all blur into one long walk beside the ocean. There’s a beautiful wistfulness running through the whole piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:18
A bittersweet stroll
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
recollections running parallel
August 4th, 2026 12:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
recollections running parallel
August 4th, 2026 12:58
A bittersweet stroll
sorenbarrett said:
Love the use of music to describe the era and how even song titles are misinterpreted to become history. Well done my friend
August 4th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love the use of music to describe the era and how even song titles are misinterpreted to become history. Well done my friend
August 4th, 2026 12:53
A bittersweet stroll
Ellen Marsell said:
This stroll did not take place through space, but through the meteorology of memory, where decades have a scent and maps suffer from chronic nostalgia.
August 4th, 2026 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
This stroll did not take place through space, but through the meteorology of memory, where decades have a scent and maps suffer from chronic nostalgia.
August 4th, 2026 11:49
My solitude
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one speaks to me. There are seasons when solitude becomes so familiar that it almost feels safer than the unknown, even when we know it comes at a cost. I could really feel that tension throughout this piece. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one speaks to me. There are seasons when solitude becomes so familiar that it almost feels safer than the unknown, even when we know it comes at a cost. I could really feel that tension throughout this piece. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:50
My solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz I feel this one I think your unfaithful solitude has been having an affair with me and confession is good for my soul.
August 2nd, 2026 12:10
My solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a love affair in which it\'s impossible to tell who is holding on to whom more tightly: the person to their solitude, or solitude to the person.
August 2nd, 2026 11:33
The night of the giants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Lorenz, this is one hell of an existential meditation. It confronts human smallness without surrendering its sense of wonder…dark, searching, and deeply affecting. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:46
Inspired vertigo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a mesmerizing piece. The dreamlike movement from image to image keeps the poem alive, while that unfinished portrait gives all the longing a fitting home. It embraces mystery instead of resolving it, and I think that’s exactly where its beauty lies. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:13
The night of the giants
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent, contemplative cosmic poem!
August 1st, 2026 11:56
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent, contemplative cosmic poem!
August 1st, 2026 11:56
The night of the giants
sorenbarrett said:
As cryptic as a compass that points to the hour not the direction. Nice Lorenz
August 1st, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
As cryptic as a compass that points to the hour not the direction. Nice Lorenz
August 1st, 2026 11:41
Inspired vertigo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most wonderful write and a fav my friend
July 31st, 2026 13:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most wonderful write and a fav my friend
July 31st, 2026 13:55
Inspired vertigo
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that DaVinci hauled the painting with him everywhere constantly fiddling with it until he died. I think that he was just economizing using a already used canvass
July 31st, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that DaVinci hauled the painting with him everywhere constantly fiddling with it until he died. I think that he was just economizing using a already used canvass
July 31st, 2026 11:41
Instructions for use
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
Instructions for use
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
Instructions for use
Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Tectonic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tectonic
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
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