Comments received on poems by buzzybee4you
Stop, you\'re awesome!
Sophenia said:
I wish you all the best dear writer!
Thank you for sharing your poem.
February 11th, 2024 05:15
Sophenia said:
I wish you all the best dear writer!
Thank you for sharing your poem.
February 11th, 2024 05:15
The Human Heart
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The human heart” by buzzybee4you
“My phone? Never does anyone of interest call.”
It is amazing that the mobile has turned into something that has profound effects on us. Over time we accumulate many contacts in the Phone book. Little by little our contacts stop calling us. Though we still see those names and numbers on our phone, the people have stopped calling for some reason. This turns us lonelier. It is sad to see so many names of people you know, but they don’t care to call. Thus, the mobile has turned into an instrument that increases our loneliness or sadness, though it still has value by enabling us to call for help when needed.
“Water, water everywhere
Nor any drop to drink…”
S. T. Coleridge: “The rime of the ancient mariner.” (1772-1834)
So many names on the mobile, no one calls…
I also have a poem called “The heart, that wonder…” on this site.
Have a nice day. Soman Ragavan. 11 September, 2023. //
September 10th, 2023 21:31
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The human heart” by buzzybee4you
“My phone? Never does anyone of interest call.”
It is amazing that the mobile has turned into something that has profound effects on us. Over time we accumulate many contacts in the Phone book. Little by little our contacts stop calling us. Though we still see those names and numbers on our phone, the people have stopped calling for some reason. This turns us lonelier. It is sad to see so many names of people you know, but they don’t care to call. Thus, the mobile has turned into an instrument that increases our loneliness or sadness, though it still has value by enabling us to call for help when needed.
“Water, water everywhere
Nor any drop to drink…”
S. T. Coleridge: “The rime of the ancient mariner.” (1772-1834)
So many names on the mobile, no one calls…
I also have a poem called “The heart, that wonder…” on this site.
Have a nice day. Soman Ragavan. 11 September, 2023. //
September 10th, 2023 21:31
The Human Heart
peto said:
Hi buzzy
When you want to write do it
Look what came from this
A well structured enjoyable read
Keep em coming
September 10th, 2023 12:18
peto said:
Hi buzzy
When you want to write do it
Look what came from this
A well structured enjoyable read
Keep em coming
September 10th, 2023 12:18
Lonely Heroes
peto said:
Excellent rhyme
Particularly enjoyed the skeleton lines
And the entire room screaming
Looking forward to reading more from you
August 30th, 2023 05:15
peto said:
Excellent rhyme
Particularly enjoyed the skeleton lines
And the entire room screaming
Looking forward to reading more from you
August 30th, 2023 05:15
