Comments received on poems by GeekSusie
They Were Waiting for Me
Paul Bell said:
I had this scene where you told them you were a lesbian, but they were more concerned you weren\'t pregnant.
Great it turned out alright. Now, just to make sure. You\'re definitely not pregnant are you.
January 19th, 2026 14:41
Paul Bell said:
I had this scene where you told them you were a lesbian, but they were more concerned you weren\'t pregnant.
Great it turned out alright. Now, just to make sure. You\'re definitely not pregnant are you.
January 19th, 2026 14:41
They Were Waiting for Me
sorenbarrett said:
Well written the initial fear of rejection for whom one is and the relief at finding that those that do love you will accept you regardless and have probably already known anyway. Nicely written.
January 19th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Well written the initial fear of rejection for whom one is and the relief at finding that those that do love you will accept you regardless and have probably already known anyway. Nicely written.
January 19th, 2026 13:07
They Were Waiting for Me
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the experience of coming out and the contrasting reactions of acceptance versus fear. Your poem delves into the personal journey of self-acceptance, the anxiety surrounding revealing one’s sexual identity, and the significance of unconditional love and support from family. It emphasizes the importance of patience and understanding in the process of self-discovery.
January 19th, 2026 12:40
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the experience of coming out and the contrasting reactions of acceptance versus fear. Your poem delves into the personal journey of self-acceptance, the anxiety surrounding revealing one’s sexual identity, and the significance of unconditional love and support from family. It emphasizes the importance of patience and understanding in the process of self-discovery.
January 19th, 2026 12:40
Where the Ruby Waits
Paul Bell said:
Yes, scratch below the surface and who knows what you\'ll find.
The great saying. Where\'s there\'s muck there\'s brass.
In saying that, the ex did take all my brass.
January 17th, 2026 12:12
Paul Bell said:
Yes, scratch below the surface and who knows what you\'ll find.
The great saying. Where\'s there\'s muck there\'s brass.
In saying that, the ex did take all my brass.
January 17th, 2026 12:12
Where the Ruby Waits
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for the value of each one often hidden beneath grime and dirt awaiting someone to find it and recognize it. Well written
January 17th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for the value of each one often hidden beneath grime and dirt awaiting someone to find it and recognize it. Well written
January 17th, 2026 10:25
Where the Wind Takes Me
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and words in this poem of a relationship. Very nicely done
January 14th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and words in this poem of a relationship. Very nicely done
January 14th, 2026 19:40
Éphémère et éternel
NinjaGirl said:
Bref- je reve de ce type d\'amour ! Belle description avec l\'arbre
January 11th, 2026 23:49
NinjaGirl said:
Bref- je reve de ce type d\'amour ! Belle description avec l\'arbre
January 11th, 2026 23:49
While the Blossoms Fall
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely expression of opening to life and experiencing its wonders. A lovely write
January 10th, 2026 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely expression of opening to life and experiencing its wonders. A lovely write
January 10th, 2026 09:52
Who Should I Believe?
sorenbarrett said:
What can a person believe now days? Yet one must believe something. A wonderful poem that is thought provoking
January 6th, 2026 21:03
sorenbarrett said:
What can a person believe now days? Yet one must believe something. A wonderful poem that is thought provoking
January 6th, 2026 21:03
Full Support
MendedFences27 said:
The best ode to the breasts know\'d. Oh! You meant \"opinions?\" No, I don\'t think so. Unless you are speaking metaphorically, then you\'ve given them wisdom and a life of their own. Or was that just a pair-a-phrase? Well, I read it both ways and chuckled on the journey. A very entertaining piece. I loved it. - Phil A.
January 3rd, 2026 23:35
MendedFences27 said:
The best ode to the breasts know\'d. Oh! You meant \"opinions?\" No, I don\'t think so. Unless you are speaking metaphorically, then you\'ve given them wisdom and a life of their own. Or was that just a pair-a-phrase? Well, I read it both ways and chuckled on the journey. A very entertaining piece. I loved it. - Phil A.
January 3rd, 2026 23:35
Full Support
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, humorous, seductive, sensual are the words that come to mind in this clever poem of rhyme
January 3rd, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, humorous, seductive, sensual are the words that come to mind in this clever poem of rhyme
January 3rd, 2026 12:30
Between Two Shores
sorenbarrett said:
Two different worlds built on two different values one money and the other piece of mind. A lovely write and most thought provoking
December 1st, 2025 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
Two different worlds built on two different values one money and the other piece of mind. A lovely write and most thought provoking
December 1st, 2025 15:50
For My Daughter, Watching the Fires Burn
sorenbarrett said:
A strong presentation in this write and one that seems more fair than most. You make good points and although I don\'t like what the man does I have to agree with you that all deserve the presumption of innocence until proven guilty and a fair trial. As for me I judge no one because I am not in their shoes and feel that no one can now the reasoning if you are not aware of all. Well written
November 21st, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
A strong presentation in this write and one that seems more fair than most. You make good points and although I don\'t like what the man does I have to agree with you that all deserve the presumption of innocence until proven guilty and a fair trial. As for me I judge no one because I am not in their shoes and feel that no one can now the reasoning if you are not aware of all. Well written
November 21st, 2025 14:37
We All Lose
sorenbarrett said:
Well written it is easy for those that don\'t suffer to hold the line. All should be equal in such a fight. A powerful poem
November 11th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Well written it is easy for those that don\'t suffer to hold the line. All should be equal in such a fight. A powerful poem
November 11th, 2025 10:05
Snap the Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece of critique lambasting government officials that don\'t seem to do their job of representation. Elected officials should represent the people and therefore should be made up of such people, let then not receive pay more than an average public servant and be the first to have pay cut or halted and last to have it restored as well as no exemptions for their family at times of war. A good write
November 10th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece of critique lambasting government officials that don\'t seem to do their job of representation. Elected officials should represent the people and therefore should be made up of such people, let then not receive pay more than an average public servant and be the first to have pay cut or halted and last to have it restored as well as no exemptions for their family at times of war. A good write
November 10th, 2025 04:15
Innocence and Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful personal disclosure in poetic form with great rhyme and meter. Very nicely done
October 30th, 2025 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful personal disclosure in poetic form with great rhyme and meter. Very nicely done
October 30th, 2025 19:32
Touching the Real
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that ties this together for me. Machine versus human. To keep going. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that ties this together for me. Machine versus human. To keep going. Nicely done
October 12th, 2025 19:07
Clarity Among the Stones
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done with poetic metaphor it speak of tending the garden pruning clarity and getting to the root.
October 9th, 2025 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done with poetic metaphor it speak of tending the garden pruning clarity and getting to the root.
October 9th, 2025 20:22
Her Wings in My Sky
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of freedom in this poem where the openness of the sky and soaring hawk leave me feeling free. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of freedom in this poem where the openness of the sky and soaring hawk leave me feeling free. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 12:20
The Yoke and I
sorenbarrett said:
There are several reflections in this poem. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
There are several reflections in this poem. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 12:52
The Stillness That Sees
sorenbarrett said:
Body language, actions, past history often tell more than words. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Body language, actions, past history often tell more than words. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:11
The Sky Beyond the Fog
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely message clothed in most lovely poetic words with wonderful flow and meter. Very nicely done and a fave
September 19th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely message clothed in most lovely poetic words with wonderful flow and meter. Very nicely done and a fave
September 19th, 2025 16:25
The Shore We Return To
Keeter C said:
Nicely written. The tide always turns yet is governed by the moon.
September 18th, 2025 23:44
Keeter C said:
Nicely written. The tide always turns yet is governed by the moon.
September 18th, 2025 23:44
The Shore We Return To
rebellion_in_sanity said:
We do not need storms to prove us- stunning. Wonderful poem 🙏
September 16th, 2025 11:58
rebellion_in_sanity said:
We do not need storms to prove us- stunning. Wonderful poem 🙏
September 16th, 2025 11:58
The Shore We Return To
sorenbarrett said:
Most wonderful metaphor coincidentally very close to mine today as well. Nicely penned
September 12th, 2025 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Most wonderful metaphor coincidentally very close to mine today as well. Nicely penned
September 12th, 2025 19:22
The River Knows the Way
sorenbarrett said:
One needs to judge one\'s strength to swim against the current and to survive sometimes we need to go with the flow. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
One needs to judge one\'s strength to swim against the current and to survive sometimes we need to go with the flow. Nicely written
September 1st, 2025 11:37
Grace Without Possession
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely and wise thought transmitted by this poem. Very nicely worded
August 17th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely and wise thought transmitted by this poem. Very nicely worded
August 17th, 2025 09:04
« Return to the profile of GeekSusie
