Comments received on poems by GeekSusie



Touching the Real
sorenbarrett said:

It is the last stanza that ties this together for me. Machine versus human. To keep going. Nicely done

October 12th, 2025 19:07

Clarity Among the Stones
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely done with poetic metaphor it speak of tending the garden pruning clarity and getting to the root.

October 9th, 2025 20:22

Her Wings in My Sky
sorenbarrett said:

There is a sense of freedom in this poem where the openness of the sky and soaring hawk leave me feeling free. Nicely done

October 4th, 2025 12:20

The Yoke and I
sorenbarrett said:

There are several reflections in this poem. Nicely written

September 27th, 2025 12:52

The Stillness That Sees
sorenbarrett said:

Body language, actions, past history often tell more than words. Well done

September 23rd, 2025 18:11

The Sky Beyond the Fog
sorenbarrett said:

This is a lovely message clothed in most lovely poetic words with wonderful flow and meter. Very nicely done and a fave

September 19th, 2025 16:25

The Shore We Return To
Keeter C said:

Nicely written. The tide always turns yet is governed by the moon.

September 18th, 2025 23:44

The Shore We Return To
rebellion_in_sanity said:

We do not need storms to prove us- stunning. Wonderful poem 🙏

September 16th, 2025 11:58

The Shore We Return To
sorenbarrett said:

Most wonderful metaphor coincidentally very close to mine today as well. Nicely penned

September 12th, 2025 19:22

The Shore We Return To
Demar Desu said:

This is a great poem

September 12th, 2025 19:02

Still, I Remain
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Beautiful work 👏

September 9th, 2025 09:07

The River Knows the Way
sorenbarrett said:

One needs to judge one\'s strength to swim against the current and to survive sometimes we need to go with the flow. Nicely written

September 1st, 2025 11:37

Grace Without Possession
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely and wise thought transmitted by this poem. Very nicely worded

August 17th, 2025 09:04

The Fire I Flew Into
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice poem with a great message. Very nicely written

August 8th, 2025 19:47

The Fire Beneath My Skin
sorenbarrett said:

Learning to control fire without getting burned is a bit of a trick. Nicely worded

August 5th, 2025 17:50

The Cowslip’s Lesson
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful and tender poem that touches the heart

August 3rd, 2025 13:10

Still, I Remain
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 30th, 2025 19:53

Still, I Remain
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of reflection and thought about self and who one has grown to be. Nicely done

July 30th, 2025 18:28

Still, I Remain
Denise Roddis said:

I love the deeper message here; captured within some beautifully crafted phrases.

July 30th, 2025 16:33

Still Waters, True Heights
sorenbarrett said:

Simply beautiful in images, wording and message. Very nicely done.

July 26th, 2025 08:14

Still Water, Silent Light
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

July 23rd, 2025 17:39

Still Water, Silent Light
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem with great images. The last two lines give a great message.

July 23rd, 2025 16:58

Open Hands, Full Heart
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful message sent in such tender and light words where a gift is given without expectation or cost. Lovely and a fave

July 20th, 2025 12:54

Open Hands, Full Heart
Priya Tomar said:

Nice poem, sweet rhythm

July 20th, 2025 11:47

Over the Quiet Bridge
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely worded this poem had good meter and flow as well. Very nice

July 18th, 2025 20:33

Over the Quiet Bridge
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 18th, 2025 19:19

Stillness Knows My Name
Priya Tomar said:

Impressive

July 13th, 2025 05:04

Nothing Between Us
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 12th, 2025 18:33

Nothing Between Us
sorenbarrett said:

Well written, each line fitts like lovers bodies. Well constructed and nicely done.

July 12th, 2025 13:33

Let the Sky Be
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 10th, 2025 09:19

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