Comments received on poems by GeekSusie
Bodies and Brushes: A Tale of Artistic Intimacy
Pop64 said:
This is damn good! Written from the perspective of the person that poses, it\'s a new approach and so cleverly detailed, providing remarkable imagery. Lovely! Michael
September 19th, 2023 14:38
Pop64 said:
This is damn good! Written from the perspective of the person that poses, it\'s a new approach and so cleverly detailed, providing remarkable imagery. Lovely! Michael
September 19th, 2023 14:38
Unity\'s Struggle: The American Dichotomy
Doggerel Dave said:
Failed State?
September 18th, 2023 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Failed State?
September 18th, 2023 18:14
Unity\'s Struggle: The American Dichotomy
2781 said:
It\'s Nebuchadnezzar\'s dream.
September 17th, 2023 08:09
2781 said:
It\'s Nebuchadnezzar\'s dream.
September 17th, 2023 08:09
The Misguided Dance of Digital Discourse
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t be without - my choice to engage or ignore.. This time entertained.
September 16th, 2023 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t be without - my choice to engage or ignore.. This time entertained.
September 16th, 2023 16:29
Through the Eyes of Never Enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Welcome back to English for a while (I\'m hesitant to trust Google translate when it comes to poetry).
Do you banish all critiques of the circumstances we find ourselves in? Is it not possible to simultaneously appreciate, nay rejoice in some of the riches life provides, but at the same time be able to offer suggestions for its improvement? Imperfection lies everywhere – that could be perceived as what makes life interesting, dynamic.
All this is not to say I didn’t enjoy your work – I did.
September 15th, 2023 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Welcome back to English for a while (I\'m hesitant to trust Google translate when it comes to poetry).
Do you banish all critiques of the circumstances we find ourselves in? Is it not possible to simultaneously appreciate, nay rejoice in some of the riches life provides, but at the same time be able to offer suggestions for its improvement? Imperfection lies everywhere – that could be perceived as what makes life interesting, dynamic.
All this is not to say I didn’t enjoy your work – I did.
September 15th, 2023 20:24
Through the Eyes of Never Enough
peto said:
Tremendous write
In a language I can understand
For a change
With my eyes wide open
i see the beauty so many may miss
Superb susie
September 15th, 2023 15:09
peto said:
Tremendous write
In a language I can understand
For a change
With my eyes wide open
i see the beauty so many may miss
Superb susie
September 15th, 2023 15:09
Through the Eyes of Never Enough
amysliterature said:
„Yet they pick and poke, their pleasure dead“ that really did it for me I really loved your poem it seems classic and modern melancholic at the same time…:)
September 15th, 2023 14:47
amysliterature said:
„Yet they pick and poke, their pleasure dead“ that really did it for me I really loved your poem it seems classic and modern melancholic at the same time…:)
September 15th, 2023 14:47
Through the Eyes of Never Enough
Pop64 said:
This has wonderful flowing rhyme and clearly speaks of those that never have anything good to say, always seeing only flaws and just pick at everything. Excellent writing!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
Pop64 said:
This has wonderful flowing rhyme and clearly speaks of those that never have anything good to say, always seeing only flaws and just pick at everything. Excellent writing!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique
MendedFences27 said:
I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it spoke of growing older, something I can appreciate. The rhythm of your poem, the rhyming, your phrases, all say to me that you are an accomplished poet. To the theme of this piece, let me first say that no two people are alike. or ever have been. We all age differently, we all bear unique talents, we follow a multitude of varied paths as we progress through life. I would say that being unique makes you a conformist.
This poem is so well written, and I enjoyed it immensely. Some of your phrases struck me, \"mirrors of time, my mind has its dance.\" So please, continue to \"sing your own song.\" - Phil A.
September 13th, 2023 17:59
MendedFences27 said:
I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it spoke of growing older, something I can appreciate. The rhythm of your poem, the rhyming, your phrases, all say to me that you are an accomplished poet. To the theme of this piece, let me first say that no two people are alike. or ever have been. We all age differently, we all bear unique talents, we follow a multitude of varied paths as we progress through life. I would say that being unique makes you a conformist.
This poem is so well written, and I enjoyed it immensely. Some of your phrases struck me, \"mirrors of time, my mind has its dance.\" So please, continue to \"sing your own song.\" - Phil A.
September 13th, 2023 17:59
La Danse Des Illusions Cybernétiques
Doggerel Dave said:
I, monolingual must rely on Google translate to provide access to your efforts (sorry – more than ‘efforts’!) at an analysis of the internet, or rather the voices inflicted on the sum total of human knowledge there.
Though however ghastly the experience sometimes (often?) is your last stanza reminds that infrequent evidence which keeps alive hope remains. Reassurance is always welcome.
September 10th, 2023 23:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I, monolingual must rely on Google translate to provide access to your efforts (sorry – more than ‘efforts’!) at an analysis of the internet, or rather the voices inflicted on the sum total of human knowledge there.
Though however ghastly the experience sometimes (often?) is your last stanza reminds that infrequent evidence which keeps alive hope remains. Reassurance is always welcome.
September 10th, 2023 23:10
La Danse Des Illusions Cybernétiques
Lorenz said:
Nous sommes tous la fugace étincelle du rêve d\'un Bouddha ...
L\'un y trouve sa voie,
l\'autre ses orages ...
Je vais chercher musique et couleurs dans les mots ,
déclinant le langage des anges autistes...
Sais tu que les parques sages tissent folles toiles ?..
September 10th, 2023 09:00
Lorenz said:
Nous sommes tous la fugace étincelle du rêve d\'un Bouddha ...
L\'un y trouve sa voie,
l\'autre ses orages ...
Je vais chercher musique et couleurs dans les mots ,
déclinant le langage des anges autistes...
Sais tu que les parques sages tissent folles toiles ?..
September 10th, 2023 09:00
In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded
MendedFences27 said:
Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself \"in the mirror of her eyes.\" \"A harmony of us , in her,\" this and other phrases portray the realization of genetic \"influence.\" But more so the \"influence\" of parenting. Don\'t be surprised if she becomes an artist. - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:57
MendedFences27 said:
Very nice, The love of a mother for her child, and the seeing of herself \"in the mirror of her eyes.\" \"A harmony of us , in her,\" this and other phrases portray the realization of genetic \"influence.\" But more so the \"influence\" of parenting. Don\'t be surprised if she becomes an artist. - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:57
In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded
Doggerel Dave said:
I dislike most love poetry as often it seems to depict an emotionally fraught relationship between two perhaps emotionally unstable people. True love though is much more expansive deep and multifaceted as you have depicted here with respect to your kids. Thanks.
September 8th, 2023 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
I dislike most love poetry as often it seems to depict an emotionally fraught relationship between two perhaps emotionally unstable people. True love though is much more expansive deep and multifaceted as you have depicted here with respect to your kids. Thanks.
September 8th, 2023 21:22
A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique
Pop64 said:
Your rhyming is met with excellence while your imagery remains so clear and both serve well to convey the meaning of piece. Beautiful writing
September 8th, 2023 15:34
Pop64 said:
Your rhyming is met with excellence while your imagery remains so clear and both serve well to convey the meaning of piece. Beautiful writing
September 8th, 2023 15:34
Empathy in a Digital Age
Pop64 said:
In the digital streaming age, this can be all too true and so often. The wrong things can end up on the internet when it isn\'t what the person might not have wanted, something bad or just embarrassing. I like how yo wrap this up though, offering the reader and everyone a lesson. Keep writing. Awesome read
September 8th, 2023 14:20
Pop64 said:
In the digital streaming age, this can be all too true and so often. The wrong things can end up on the internet when it isn\'t what the person might not have wanted, something bad or just embarrassing. I like how yo wrap this up though, offering the reader and everyone a lesson. Keep writing. Awesome read
September 8th, 2023 14:20
Bridging the Divide: A Poetic Response to Political Fracture
Pop64 said:
Another perfect read! The last stanza floored me as it summed everything up, like a ribbon and bow on a gift, but the gift is your poem, your depiction of the divide that exists and the offering of a solution. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2023 14:11
Pop64 said:
Another perfect read! The last stanza floored me as it summed everything up, like a ribbon and bow on a gift, but the gift is your poem, your depiction of the divide that exists and the offering of a solution. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2023 14:11
In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded
Pop64 said:
The whole poem is fantasti, but the folowing 2 lines really got to me as it makes me think of my 2 daughters (and my 2 sons) and their different personalities but as well what went into them, \"A hybrid of our love, our essence intertwined,
In every smile, every tear, our personalities combined,\". Marvelous!!
September 8th, 2023 14:08
Pop64 said:
The whole poem is fantasti, but the folowing 2 lines really got to me as it makes me think of my 2 daughters (and my 2 sons) and their different personalities but as well what went into them, \"A hybrid of our love, our essence intertwined,
In every smile, every tear, our personalities combined,\". Marvelous!!
September 8th, 2023 14:08
Bridging the Divide: A Poetic Response to Political Fracture
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m five days late, I know - such a flow of pieces pass through MPS that it\'s easy to miss a few.
So how many poems do you have in your archive? Now I\'ve found you, I do hope you will continue to push them out at the permitted one a day.
I enjoy what you have written very much. How could I not when I\'m presented with rhyming quatrains, which as a bonus make a great deal of sense.
PS: New York City gets a thumbs up as well.
September 7th, 2023 14:50
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m five days late, I know - such a flow of pieces pass through MPS that it\'s easy to miss a few.
So how many poems do you have in your archive? Now I\'ve found you, I do hope you will continue to push them out at the permitted one a day.
I enjoy what you have written very much. How could I not when I\'m presented with rhyming quatrains, which as a bonus make a great deal of sense.
PS: New York City gets a thumbs up as well.
September 7th, 2023 14:50
A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique
aDarkerMind said:
very well written;
a poem I will come back read many more times;
September 6th, 2023 15:37
aDarkerMind said:
very well written;
a poem I will come back read many more times;
September 6th, 2023 15:37
Hearts Ablaze: The Everchanging Faces of Leadership
Pop64 said:
This so depicts the present situation with regard to American politics and the clowns that each of the 2 main parties have as frontrunners. if only one, just one person could pick up the charge, be recognized and be the leader the people truly need. Very very well written, loved this!
September 5th, 2023 06:57
Pop64 said:
This so depicts the present situation with regard to American politics and the clowns that each of the 2 main parties have as frontrunners. if only one, just one person could pick up the charge, be recognized and be the leader the people truly need. Very very well written, loved this!
September 5th, 2023 06:57
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