Dancing with my Soul
Parisab said:

Exacting words in the evolution of womanhood-Keep writing in your special lovely tone!

October 8th, 2023 11:36

Dancing with my Soul
novaa said:

A nice write about self love. Quite inspiring!

October 8th, 2023 08:48

The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity
Neville said:



Bravo and good on ya Ms Susie 👍

October 5th, 2023 15:54

The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity
MendedFences27 said:

We must be at peace with our own heart, before we can ever truly love another. Your brave statement here, so beautifully expressed, will empower you for the future. Your poetry is wonderful, and you have a talent worth pursuing. Be Strong! - Phil A.

October 4th, 2023 21:15

The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity
Pop64 said:

The rhyme and flow served well to deliver that last stanza and the committed announcement. It\'s so important to not be afraid to be oneself and if afraid to do it anyway, and soar!! Beautiful write!

October 4th, 2023 14:35

Alarming Deception
Michaelpoet said:

Excellent piece

October 3rd, 2023 14:10

Colors of a Silent Crush
peto said:

Absolutely love your rhyme and rhythm
Fantastic flowing writing
As for the content
You had me fancying her
Super talent

September 30th, 2023 08:57

Adolescent Rapture
Pop64 said:

This read echoes the truth that teens, especially, feel they must hide, which is unfortunate. Love should not be hidden, regardless of the person for whom the love is offered. This reads smoothly and with great imagery, with the meaning becoming encapsulated in the last verse. Beautiful work!

September 28th, 2023 14:15

Choosing Wisely: The Garden of Existence
Pop64 said:

Very wise advise all offered in a flowing wonderfully rhyming piece. Very well done!

September 22nd, 2023 07:42

Bodies and Brushes: A Tale of Artistic Intimacy
Blair Stella Flynn said:

such a well written poem!! as a person who used to sketch, this poem brings so many memories :\')

September 21st, 2023 08:09

Bodies and Brushes: A Tale of Artistic Intimacy
Pop64 said:

This is damn good! Written from the perspective of the person that poses, it\'s a new approach and so cleverly detailed, providing remarkable imagery. Lovely! Michael

September 19th, 2023 14:38

Unity\'s Struggle: The American Dichotomy
2781 said:

It\'s Nebuchadnezzar\'s dream.

September 17th, 2023 08:09

Through the Eyes of Never Enough
Doggerel Dave said:

Welcome back to English for a while (I\'m hesitant to trust Google translate when it comes to poetry).
Do you banish all critiques of the circumstances we find ourselves in? Is it not possible to simultaneously appreciate, nay rejoice in some of the riches life provides, but at the same time be able to offer suggestions for its improvement? Imperfection lies everywhere – that could be perceived as what makes life interesting, dynamic.
All this is not to say I didn’t enjoy your work – I did.




September 15th, 2023 20:24

Through the Eyes of Never Enough
amysliterature said:

„Yet they pick and poke, their pleasure dead“ that really did it for me I really loved your poem it seems classic and modern melancholic at the same time…:)

September 15th, 2023 14:47

A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique
MendedFences27 said:

I can comment on only your English poems. I chose this one because it spoke of growing older, something I can appreciate. The rhythm of your poem, the rhyming, your phrases, all say to me that you are an accomplished poet. To the theme of this piece, let me first say that no two people are alike. or ever have been. We all age differently, we all bear unique talents, we follow a multitude of varied paths as we progress through life. I would say that being unique makes you a conformist.
This poem is so well written, and I enjoyed it immensely. Some of your phrases struck me, \"mirrors of time, my mind has its dance.\" So please, continue to \"sing your own song.\" - Phil A.

September 13th, 2023 17:59