Comments received on poems by gray0328
Confined Thoughts
Eugene S. said:
The tea ball is cracked indeed - beautiful! Awesome wordplay!!
January 1st, 2024 15:15
Eugene S. said:
The tea ball is cracked indeed - beautiful! Awesome wordplay!!
January 1st, 2024 15:15
Prophetic Courage
gray0328 said:
Thanks Orchi. It\'s in our hearts and actions that our true selves can be found. But now I am going to write a a poem about a histrionic religious zealot who gets his daily workout by constantly crossing himself. 😂
December 26th, 2023 12:36
gray0328 said:
Thanks Orchi. It\'s in our hearts and actions that our true selves can be found. But now I am going to write a a poem about a histrionic religious zealot who gets his daily workout by constantly crossing himself. 😂
December 26th, 2023 12:36
Prophetic Courage
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
Yes, I saw someone so caught up in religion, that he was bowing, crossing himself, etc, so much, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts\', Doh!
December 26th, 2023 02:59
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
Yes, I saw someone so caught up in religion, that he was bowing, crossing himself, etc, so much, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts\', Doh!
December 26th, 2023 02:59
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
gray0328 said:
Thank You for your continued support.
December 24th, 2023 19:20
gray0328 said:
Thank You for your continued support.
December 24th, 2023 19:20
The Weight We Carry
sorenbarrett said:
\"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All of us that have had children can relate to this poem. It is a great read with a wonderful and powerful message.
December 24th, 2023 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
\"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All of us that have had children can relate to this poem. It is a great read with a wonderful and powerful message.
December 24th, 2023 14:04
Party Line
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black dial phone that had a party line with two other neighbors. How many times I got in trouble interrupting their calls.
December 24th, 2023 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black dial phone that had a party line with two other neighbors. How many times I got in trouble interrupting their calls.
December 24th, 2023 13:47
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
sorenbarrett said:
I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar stain
And the sweet-gum tree is lost to time\'s disdain
Where the shirt is just plastic ditch-litter
And the kitchen\'s a cow\'s corpse, bitter\"
Great images indeed. Merry Christmas to you as well
December 24th, 2023 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar stain
And the sweet-gum tree is lost to time\'s disdain
Where the shirt is just plastic ditch-litter
And the kitchen\'s a cow\'s corpse, bitter\"
Great images indeed. Merry Christmas to you as well
December 24th, 2023 13:42
Pure Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:
The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by their memory so is this one
December 24th, 2023 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by their memory so is this one
December 24th, 2023 06:20
The Weight We Carry
Cassie58 said:
A põem iof great compassion. Sadly we can’t help the whole world. We can show compassion though and understanding. Nicely penned stanzas.
December 21st, 2023 05:29
Cassie58 said:
A põem iof great compassion. Sadly we can’t help the whole world. We can show compassion though and understanding. Nicely penned stanzas.
December 21st, 2023 05:29
The Weight We Carry
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just love it when a car splashes you with a puddle on purpose?! Grrr! lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:08
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just love it when a car splashes you with a puddle on purpose?! Grrr! lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:08
Mary
orchidee said:
A fine write Gary.
I could maybe set a poem or two to a hymn/carol tune, if you wish, if I\'m inspired to!
December 20th, 2023 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Gary.
I could maybe set a poem or two to a hymn/carol tune, if you wish, if I\'m inspired to!
December 20th, 2023 03:02
Mary
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cowboy
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
John The Baptist
orchidee said:
A fine write G, and for this Sunday\'s theme in some churches \'The Forerunner\'.
December 17th, 2023 10:46
orchidee said:
A fine write G, and for this Sunday\'s theme in some churches \'The Forerunner\'.
December 17th, 2023 10:46
Survivor
MendedFences27 said:
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your poem draws a picture of what was survived. It is well written and poetic as it calls for a focus on those who do not survive. Enjoyed the read.. - Phil A.
December 12th, 2023 18:28
MendedFences27 said:
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your poem draws a picture of what was survived. It is well written and poetic as it calls for a focus on those who do not survive. Enjoyed the read.. - Phil A.
December 12th, 2023 18:28
Intwined Roots
GODisreal said:
I can\'t really remember when the last time someone else was able to paint the picture... thanks 🧎🏿♀️
December 11th, 2023 01:20
GODisreal said:
I can\'t really remember when the last time someone else was able to paint the picture... thanks 🧎🏿♀️
December 11th, 2023 01:20
Fervent Glory
2781 said:
That a thing about faith, it\'s as big as it\'s boundaries.
December 4th, 2023 23:28
2781 said:
That a thing about faith, it\'s as big as it\'s boundaries.
December 4th, 2023 23:28
What Lies Beneath
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme although some of it is forced. There are a lot of generalisations that need explaining but hey what would I know
December 1st, 2023 15:54
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme although some of it is forced. There are a lot of generalisations that need explaining but hey what would I know
December 1st, 2023 15:54
Conflicted
2781 said:
...work out your own salvation with fear and trembling, for it is God who works in you, both to will and to work for his good pleasure.
He won\'t let us down.
November 27th, 2023 01:38
2781 said:
...work out your own salvation with fear and trembling, for it is God who works in you, both to will and to work for his good pleasure.
He won\'t let us down.
November 27th, 2023 01:38
Frozen Beauty
peto said:
The 1st verse is stunning and captures the reader
Great read with magical rhyming
November 26th, 2023 20:20
peto said:
The 1st verse is stunning and captures the reader
Great read with magical rhyming
November 26th, 2023 20:20
Poetry Should Not Take Hours to Comprehend
John Lee said:
Very nice! And I agree
November 25th, 2023 22:00
John Lee said:
Very nice! And I agree
November 25th, 2023 22:00
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