Comments received on poems by gray0328
My Mom is Dying
jarcher54 said:
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense hospitalization over a decade ago... you captured all those emotions so beautifully and sensitively. Thank you and much love.
November 18th, 2023 20:00
jarcher54 said:
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense hospitalization over a decade ago... you captured all those emotions so beautifully and sensitively. Thank you and much love.
November 18th, 2023 20:00
Lucifer\'s Flaw
jarcher54 said:
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning the dark sky above my neighborhood... a little Paradise Lost vibe... very nice imagery.
November 18th, 2023 19:57
jarcher54 said:
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning the dark sky above my neighborhood... a little Paradise Lost vibe... very nice imagery.
November 18th, 2023 19:57
My Mom is Dying
Christina8 said:
Poignant poem, very well stated. God bless you and your family.
November 16th, 2023 11:17
Christina8 said:
Poignant poem, very well stated. God bless you and your family.
November 16th, 2023 11:17
My Mom is Dying
Firefall said:
Beautiful words. May you and your mom find peace.
November 15th, 2023 17:46
Firefall said:
Beautiful words. May you and your mom find peace.
November 15th, 2023 17:46
My Mom is Dying
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
My best friend died at 47 due to colon cancer thank you for this.
November 15th, 2023 07:18
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
My best friend died at 47 due to colon cancer thank you for this.
November 15th, 2023 07:18
My Mom is Dying
2781 said:
Good stuff, your honouring your mum, and knowing mums I am sure they forgive us, in their wisdom.
God bless you all.
November 15th, 2023 02:04
2781 said:
Good stuff, your honouring your mum, and knowing mums I am sure they forgive us, in their wisdom.
God bless you all.
November 15th, 2023 02:04
Home
David Wakeling said:
Home sweet home. Memories are precious.Well written poem.
November 9th, 2023 15:20
David Wakeling said:
Home sweet home. Memories are precious.Well written poem.
November 9th, 2023 15:20
Thumb Stump
David Wakeling said:
Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren
November 8th, 2023 14:27
David Wakeling said:
Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren
November 8th, 2023 14:27
Where Darkness Abides
2781 said:
I kind of paradox between the pace and the message, but very engaging.
We\'re bombarded with fear, when there\'s beauty all around.
November 4th, 2023 08:06
2781 said:
I kind of paradox between the pace and the message, but very engaging.
We\'re bombarded with fear, when there\'s beauty all around.
November 4th, 2023 08:06
Timeless Square
David Wakeling said:
This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400 words we still don\'t know who the statue is of.I like the rhyme.
October 27th, 2023 15:49
David Wakeling said:
This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400 words we still don\'t know who the statue is of.I like the rhyme.
October 27th, 2023 15:49
The Pebble
Miss_Dreamer said:
What a great poem! Its rythm ebbed and flowed like the waves you talked about, I loved it
October 26th, 2023 11:35
Miss_Dreamer said:
What a great poem! Its rythm ebbed and flowed like the waves you talked about, I loved it
October 26th, 2023 11:35
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