Comments received on poems by gray0328
Silent As Seed Beneath Soil
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
Incoming Freshmen
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
The Hawk\'s Arrival
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
The Hawk\'s Arrival
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
Flying Squirrel
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
not afraid of aging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
not afraid of aging
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
Detour on My Way to Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Detour on My Way to Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Detour on My Way to Heaven
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
Grandpa\'s Lesson
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
Grandpa\'s Lesson
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Grandpa\'s Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
to speak too soon
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
to speak too soon
sorenbarrett said:
Several quotes of notable wisdom contained in this poem. Lovely a fave
August 13th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Several quotes of notable wisdom contained in this poem. Lovely a fave
August 13th, 2025 11:36
The Laughter of Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Some very good lines here Gray it makes its point and the relationship between tragedy, grief and humor. Very nice and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Some very good lines here Gray it makes its point and the relationship between tragedy, grief and humor. Very nice and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:32
Translating the Grain
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your feedback and support
August 10th, 2025 07:42
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your feedback and support
August 10th, 2025 07:42
Translating the Grain
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this poem one must feel. It erupts from inside like a bursting seed and sprouts out the mouth flowering into self perceived meaning in a gutteral burp. Your use of varied visceral images and metaphor put this seed in me. Lovely a fave
August 10th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this poem one must feel. It erupts from inside like a bursting seed and sprouts out the mouth flowering into self perceived meaning in a gutteral burp. Your use of varied visceral images and metaphor put this seed in me. Lovely a fave
August 10th, 2025 05:20
A Lesson in Bitter Tinctures (Series on Liberals #4)
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds prophetic and is dark with promises of violence. Nicely written Gray
August 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds prophetic and is dark with promises of violence. Nicely written Gray
August 9th, 2025 04:33
Destructive Taste (Series on Liberals #3)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begs for interpretation in its obscurity it speaks of inequality, lack of justice it requires several reads and even then it is not completely clear
August 8th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begs for interpretation in its obscurity it speaks of inequality, lack of justice it requires several reads and even then it is not completely clear
August 8th, 2025 12:06
The Flickering Light (Series on Liberals #2)
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
August 7th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
August 7th, 2025 13:57
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
arqios said:
Just clocked off from a blended shift. 12 hours of madness. I am also not in the best frame of mind so am greatly appreciative 🙏🏻🕊️
August 7th, 2025 05:17
arqios said:
Just clocked off from a blended shift. 12 hours of madness. I am also not in the best frame of mind so am greatly appreciative 🙏🏻🕊️
August 7th, 2025 05:17
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
Doggerel Dave said:
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out there.
August 6th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out there.
August 6th, 2025 18:33
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
sorenbarrett said:
Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for wells, shooting stars, and birthday parties. A lovely write.
August 6th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for wells, shooting stars, and birthday parties. A lovely write.
August 6th, 2025 10:20
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful.
August 6th, 2025 10:13
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful.
August 6th, 2025 10:13
After the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the first ( The mirror confirms what silence echoes) Very nice Gray
August 4th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the first ( The mirror confirms what silence echoes) Very nice Gray
August 4th, 2025 04:19
Without You
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
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