Comments received on poems by gray0328
Fairways and Second Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Not in golf for I don\'t play but in many things I feel this way Gray. A good write my friend.
October 20th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
Not in golf for I don\'t play but in many things I feel this way Gray. A good write my friend.
October 20th, 2026 09:59
Her Wink
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gem. A painting of a joke where the angle of laughter mete a straight face. A fave my friend
October 19th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gem. A painting of a joke where the angle of laughter mete a straight face. A fave my friend
October 19th, 2026 13:52
Bird Ballet
sorenbarrett said:
It is you last line in this magnificent poem of nature that captured me. \"freedom holds no footprints, only flight.\" What a wonderful metaphor.
October 18th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is you last line in this magnificent poem of nature that captured me. \"freedom holds no footprints, only flight.\" What a wonderful metaphor.
October 18th, 2026 09:16
Fur and Judgement
sorenbarrett said:
There is a reason that the Egyptians worshiped cats and that seems evident in this write. Nicely worded and paced in this poem the cat rules supreme.
October 17th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a reason that the Egyptians worshiped cats and that seems evident in this write. Nicely worded and paced in this poem the cat rules supreme.
October 17th, 2026 05:49
Misfired Gesture
sorenbarrett said:
This one stung. I can\'t speak for others but I have been there and it hit close to home. A familiar not too comfortable feel in these words Gray. That is what good poets do take the familiar, wring emotion out of it and put it on the page. Nicely done
October 16th, 2026 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
This one stung. I can\'t speak for others but I have been there and it hit close to home. A familiar not too comfortable feel in these words Gray. That is what good poets do take the familiar, wring emotion out of it and put it on the page. Nicely done
October 16th, 2026 08:13
Misfired Gesture
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Flows wonderfully my friend, much enjoyed
October 16th, 2026 07:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Flows wonderfully my friend, much enjoyed
October 16th, 2026 07:39
The Day the Glaciers Sighed
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Pretend\' is the perative word. Prophetic write.
October 15th, 2026 22:29
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Pretend\' is the perative word. Prophetic write.
October 15th, 2026 22:29
The Day the Glaciers Sighed
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem speaks to a changing world. Nicely done Gray
October 15th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem speaks to a changing world. Nicely done Gray
October 15th, 2026 10:32
Where Revelation Breathes
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray a poem of taking from the infinite and transposing threads of emotion into poetry.
October 14th, 2026 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray a poem of taking from the infinite and transposing threads of emotion into poetry.
October 14th, 2026 10:49
The Hand That Dares to Reach
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write friend, enjoyed
October 14th, 2026 04:24
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write friend, enjoyed
October 14th, 2026 04:24
The Hand That Dares to Reach
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor it is so Tao like. Well done
October 13th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor it is so Tao like. Well done
October 13th, 2026 12:16
Belly Button
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and melancholically wistful poem. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and melancholically wistful poem. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 05:59
The Tenacity of Ivy
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor Gray so nicely written it creeps like the ivy itself slowly and tenaciously into the mind of the reader and continues to grow long after the structure of the poem crumbles into the shadows of time. A fave my friend
October 11th, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor Gray so nicely written it creeps like the ivy itself slowly and tenaciously into the mind of the reader and continues to grow long after the structure of the poem crumbles into the shadows of time. A fave my friend
October 11th, 2026 06:21
All Dogs Like Cheese
sorenbarrett said:
Is it memories of a mother\'s milk that inspires such devotion to this concoction or is it more. Nicely written Gray
October 10th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Is it memories of a mother\'s milk that inspires such devotion to this concoction or is it more. Nicely written Gray
October 10th, 2026 08:53
Stray Cat
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted in vivid images I think I have seen him before. Like a gutter ghost he seems to slink in the shadows a reminder of man\'s indifference and cruelty. A lovely write Gray and well worthy of a fave.
October 9th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted in vivid images I think I have seen him before. Like a gutter ghost he seems to slink in the shadows a reminder of man\'s indifference and cruelty. A lovely write Gray and well worthy of a fave.
October 9th, 2026 13:04
Stray Cat
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
October 9th, 2026 12:28
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
October 9th, 2026 12:28
Ghosts in the Exhaust
sorenbarrett said:
I could smell the gas and smoke in this one Gray it screamed like the motor and its heat was felt. Nicely done.
October 7th, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
I could smell the gas and smoke in this one Gray it screamed like the motor and its heat was felt. Nicely done.
October 7th, 2026 13:23
Athletic Rituals
sorenbarrett said:
A write of belief a prayer that things will go our way. Nicely written Gray
October 6th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A write of belief a prayer that things will go our way. Nicely written Gray
October 6th, 2026 13:30
Athletic Rituals
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
all sports and their superstitious rituals
October 6th, 2026 12:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
all sports and their superstitious rituals
October 6th, 2026 12:59
He Was The Friendliest Guy
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover nor a man by his cloths. A lovely poem that depicts so well a person and his nature. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover nor a man by his cloths. A lovely poem that depicts so well a person and his nature. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:21
Joy is a Net
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
The Ivy\'s Whisper
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
The Ivy\'s Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
The Ivy\'s Whisper
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
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