Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
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August 3rd, 2026 11:48
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 11:48
Each Day
sorenbarrett said:
The surprise of each day molded by the hands of the possessor. Nicely said Gray
August 3rd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The surprise of each day molded by the hands of the possessor. Nicely said Gray
August 3rd, 2026 04:01
Odysseus
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant a lovely poem that may well apply to the ancient mythical figure or equally well in metaphor to a modern day hero torn in thought and feeling. Well done Gray
August 2nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant a lovely poem that may well apply to the ancient mythical figure or equally well in metaphor to a modern day hero torn in thought and feeling. Well done Gray
August 2nd, 2026 04:25
Fluid Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perception and recognition. Wonderful imagery poetry in motion my friend
August 1st, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perception and recognition. Wonderful imagery poetry in motion my friend
August 1st, 2026 11:43
The Smile He Borrowed
sorenbarrett said:
Here a person trapped in his role plays it as well as he can but behind the mask things are not all well and we are presented with a short transitional period of life. Well written with great metaphor and imagery. Well done
July 31st, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here a person trapped in his role plays it as well as he can but behind the mask things are not all well and we are presented with a short transitional period of life. Well written with great metaphor and imagery. Well done
July 31st, 2026 09:40
Borrowed Quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A read that justifies, something we have all done whether in this manner or in metaphor others. Well written Gray and a fave
July 30th, 2026 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
A read that justifies, something we have all done whether in this manner or in metaphor others. Well written Gray and a fave
July 30th, 2026 09:00
Architects of Illusion
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever gets you through. I recognise elements of that - thanks for reminding me.
July 30th, 2026 01:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Whatever gets you through. I recognise elements of that - thanks for reminding me.
July 30th, 2026 01:45
Architects of Illusion
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write Gray painting the brain as a conspiracy theorist seeing patterns where there are none. Well done and a fave
July 29th, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write Gray painting the brain as a conspiracy theorist seeing patterns where there are none. Well done and a fave
July 29th, 2026 12:10
Treasure Hunt
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem focuses on the experience of wandering through thrift stores, flea markets, or similar places where one can discover items with histories. It touches on themes of nostalgia, love, and the unpolished beauty of things that carry emotional weight.
July 28th, 2026 18:14
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem focuses on the experience of wandering through thrift stores, flea markets, or similar places where one can discover items with histories. It touches on themes of nostalgia, love, and the unpolished beauty of things that carry emotional weight.
July 28th, 2026 18:14
The Sun Holds Its Breath
sorenbarrett said:
The heat of summer or of the world in general taxes its occupants man or beast. Nicely imaged Gray
July 26th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
The heat of summer or of the world in general taxes its occupants man or beast. Nicely imaged Gray
July 26th, 2026 04:20
Catfish Cancer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A good deep write my friend much enjoyed
July 25th, 2026 05:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A good deep write my friend much enjoyed
July 25th, 2026 05:00
Catfish Cancer
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor within a metaphor where fish is man and lake is ecosystem. A good write Gray
July 25th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor within a metaphor where fish is man and lake is ecosystem. A good write Gray
July 25th, 2026 04:38
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
Cheeky Missy said:
Yellow is NOT my color, whence I can side with you, having more a distaste for it than otherwise, so don\'t ask how I ended up buying a butter yellow sundress-- I\'ll just sleep in it because yellow is NOT my color. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Yellow is NOT my color, whence I can side with you, having more a distaste for it than otherwise, so don\'t ask how I ended up buying a butter yellow sundress-- I\'ll just sleep in it because yellow is NOT my color. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:05
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
sorenbarrett said:
Love butter eat it on most anything pounds of it every week. Fun read Gray
July 24th, 2026 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Love butter eat it on most anything pounds of it every week. Fun read Gray
July 24th, 2026 18:04
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m no marriage counsellor. Sorry - no comment. 🤫
(I\'m a bit nosey though and enjoy discovering how others live their lives...)
July 24th, 2026 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m no marriage counsellor. Sorry - no comment. 🤫
(I\'m a bit nosey though and enjoy discovering how others live their lives...)
July 24th, 2026 15:53
Filling the Gaps
Doggerel Dave said:
Slowly encroaching dementia is something many fear, I think. You have provided a both sympathetic and at the same time almost clinical portrait of early onset decline.
July 22nd, 2026 21:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Slowly encroaching dementia is something many fear, I think. You have provided a both sympathetic and at the same time almost clinical portrait of early onset decline.
July 22nd, 2026 21:16
Filling the Gaps
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so beautifully rendered you make me want to weep for him, excellent imagery and a lively poignancy haunting the very breath we breathe. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:21
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so beautifully rendered you make me want to weep for him, excellent imagery and a lively poignancy haunting the very breath we breathe. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:21
Filling the Gaps
sorenbarrett said:
Wo well worded in a most poetic fashion my friend. Very nice
July 22nd, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Wo well worded in a most poetic fashion my friend. Very nice
July 22nd, 2026 11:26
Broken Mirrors
Doggerel Dave said:
I go with that. Immediate disarmament of a potential adversary (or at least cut down the numbers).
July 21st, 2026 15:47
Doggerel Dave said:
I go with that. Immediate disarmament of a potential adversary (or at least cut down the numbers).
July 21st, 2026 15:47
Broken Mirrors
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
In imperfection lies all beauty, much enjoyed read
July 21st, 2026 12:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
In imperfection lies all beauty, much enjoyed read
July 21st, 2026 12:07
The Quite Weight of Honesty
8Blackwidow8 said:
(I thought of how hands
can cradle as much as crush)
As a woman, I fear the best of men is dying like old trades die to new tech.
The world won\'t forget what happened with Charlie whether you hated a man you didn\'t know, or loved a man you thought you did.
July 21st, 2026 10:58
8Blackwidow8 said:
(I thought of how hands
can cradle as much as crush)
As a woman, I fear the best of men is dying like old trades die to new tech.
The world won\'t forget what happened with Charlie whether you hated a man you didn\'t know, or loved a man you thought you did.
July 21st, 2026 10:58
The Boxer
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"fists like cinder blocks\"
What a line. It reminds me of a poem I wrote about Rocky Marciano. My father was am amateur boxer. I really enjoyed this.
July 21st, 2026 10:55
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"fists like cinder blocks\"
What a line. It reminds me of a poem I wrote about Rocky Marciano. My father was am amateur boxer. I really enjoyed this.
July 21st, 2026 10:55
Broken Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray where the admission of imperfection becomes beauty itself and the claiming to be flawed lowers the defenses and lets people in. Well done my friend
July 21st, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray where the admission of imperfection becomes beauty itself and the claiming to be flawed lowers the defenses and lets people in. Well done my friend
July 21st, 2026 10:36
Broken Mirrors
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. In a society which seems to have perfected the strange art of absolute perfection in the limelight, the trend from sixty years ago seeps through to add a bit of sense. And please forgive me if I\'m still confused. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy.
July 21st, 2026 10:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. In a society which seems to have perfected the strange art of absolute perfection in the limelight, the trend from sixty years ago seeps through to add a bit of sense. And please forgive me if I\'m still confused. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy.
July 21st, 2026 10:13
Uncle Chad
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
Live Long and Prosper
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
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