Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Tilted Chase for Forever
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
Forgotten Shields of the City
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
The Recipe for Flight
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
The Dance of Laughter in Little Tongues
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well errors made by my teachers sixty years ago, one that blew up the chemistry lab, another that fell of the stage pulling the screen with him, another in a fist fight with a student. Beautiful memories that still make me smile. Good write Gray
March 4th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well errors made by my teachers sixty years ago, one that blew up the chemistry lab, another that fell of the stage pulling the screen with him, another in a fist fight with a student. Beautiful memories that still make me smile. Good write Gray
March 4th, 2026 11:41
Misplaced Things
Doggerel Dave said:
\'memory’s frays\' just about sums it up. Words/terms missing just when I want them; actual names appear I haven\'t thought of for years. And I have absolutely no wish to mention possessions lost in the small cupboard (OK - bedsit, studio) I call home. Relevant, too relevant a write..
March 3rd, 2026 18:29
Doggerel Dave said:
\'memory’s frays\' just about sums it up. Words/terms missing just when I want them; actual names appear I haven\'t thought of for years. And I have absolutely no wish to mention possessions lost in the small cupboard (OK - bedsit, studio) I call home. Relevant, too relevant a write..
March 3rd, 2026 18:29
Misplaced Things
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how somethings disappear and others stay. Lost my car key the other day found it three days later in the last place I looked. Words escape me at times only to surface when I don\'t need them and funny how I only remember things when reminded that my story doesn\'t match that of another. A great write my friend and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how somethings disappear and others stay. Lost my car key the other day found it three days later in the last place I looked. Words escape me at times only to surface when I don\'t need them and funny how I only remember things when reminded that my story doesn\'t match that of another. A great write my friend and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 11:25
The Chain Snapped Before Anyone Noticed
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
The Currency of Care
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
Beads, Booze, and Broken Saints
sorenbarrett said:
Awakening from the party froth to a day of reality. Nicely written
February 28th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Awakening from the party froth to a day of reality. Nicely written
February 28th, 2026 12:09
Cravings Born Electric
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write, enjoyed
February 27th, 2026 09:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write, enjoyed
February 27th, 2026 09:21
Cravings Born Electric
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another great write my friend
February 27th, 2026 09:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another great write my friend
February 27th, 2026 09:21
Cravings Born Electric
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray in all its awful savagery it tells the story of addiction. A fave
February 27th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray in all its awful savagery it tells the story of addiction. A fave
February 27th, 2026 09:09
The Taste of What We Choose
sorenbarrett said:
Such philosophy in poetic form. The metaphor fits well the human condition and so we sit flies and bees and never the two shall mix. Lovely and a fave
February 26th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Such philosophy in poetic form. The metaphor fits well the human condition and so we sit flies and bees and never the two shall mix. Lovely and a fave
February 26th, 2026 06:07
The Edges That Bruise Us
sorenbarrett said:
Instincts are strong and like reflexes are programed to protect us but reason given time for reflection is safer and kinder. Well written Gray
February 25th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Instincts are strong and like reflexes are programed to protect us but reason given time for reflection is safer and kinder. Well written Gray
February 25th, 2026 12:34
The Office Guillotine
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A DEEP WRITE MY FRIEND, ENJOYED
February 24th, 2026 10:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A DEEP WRITE MY FRIEND, ENJOYED
February 24th, 2026 10:44
The Office Guillotine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects the chaos and rush of daily life and the zoo that it is. Nicely done Gray
February 24th, 2026 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects the chaos and rush of daily life and the zoo that it is. Nicely done Gray
February 24th, 2026 10:24
Swallowing Fire
Doggerel Dave said:
So much there I recognise and can identify with. Your conclusion definitely embodies a major truth - provided I can still believe that occasionally some fights are worth the trouble. I really came to grips with this one.
February 23rd, 2026 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
So much there I recognise and can identify with. Your conclusion definitely embodies a major truth - provided I can still believe that occasionally some fights are worth the trouble. I really came to grips with this one.
February 23rd, 2026 17:57
Swallowing Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Few wars are worth the fight as Sun Tzu says the most superior way to win is to not have to fight. Toleration sometimes is the concession made. A lovely write my friend.
February 23rd, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Few wars are worth the fight as Sun Tzu says the most superior way to win is to not have to fight. Toleration sometimes is the concession made. A lovely write my friend.
February 23rd, 2026 12:59
The Crooked Lens
Thomas W Case said:
This limps with bruised clarity—half revelation, half hangover from existing too hard.
You’ve caught the world mid-stagger, and it feels honest in all its crooked angles.
February 22nd, 2026 08:52
Thomas W Case said:
This limps with bruised clarity—half revelation, half hangover from existing too hard.
You’ve caught the world mid-stagger, and it feels honest in all its crooked angles.
February 22nd, 2026 08:52
The Crooked Lens
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
The Crooked Lens
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
The Lazy Man\'s Gospel
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Be Kind and Love Strawberries
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
The Futility of Small Battles
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
French Quarter Fatigue
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
The Yawn Spinner
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
The Yawn Spinner
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
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