Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Crooked Lens
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
The Crooked Lens
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
The Lazy Man\'s Gospel
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Be Kind and Love Strawberries
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
The Futility of Small Battles
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
French Quarter Fatigue
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
The Yawn Spinner
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
The Yawn Spinner
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
A Fool With Scars
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphors Gray yes a wise mane is a fool with scars
February 17th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphors Gray yes a wise mane is a fool with scars
February 17th, 2026 13:40
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this grips me by the collar—gritty and unflinching, like walking barefoot on broken glass.
You’ve got that stubborn ember burning through the gray, refusing to die, and I feel every damn step.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this grips me by the collar—gritty and unflinching, like walking barefoot on broken glass.
You’ve got that stubborn ember burning through the gray, refusing to die, and I feel every damn step.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Paul Bell said:
As humans, we persevere, no matter what it seems, even if life still kicks us down and down.
Martyrs to the cause as they lower you into the grave, though, tomorrow is another day.
February 16th, 2026 14:41
Paul Bell said:
As humans, we persevere, no matter what it seems, even if life still kicks us down and down.
Martyrs to the cause as they lower you into the grave, though, tomorrow is another day.
February 16th, 2026 14:41
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles of life, the persistence of hope, and the inner strength that drives individuals to keep moving forward despite challenges and self-doubt.
February 16th, 2026 06:08
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles of life, the persistence of hope, and the inner strength that drives individuals to keep moving forward despite challenges and self-doubt.
February 16th, 2026 06:08
Can\'t Kill the Flame
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic and well written with great images and metaphor it defines defiance in the face of hopelessness. Lovely and a fave Gray. Decided to post my poem that resembles in some way yours of yesterday
February 16th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic and well written with great images and metaphor it defines defiance in the face of hopelessness. Lovely and a fave Gray. Decided to post my poem that resembles in some way yours of yesterday
February 16th, 2026 05:14
Dimensions
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of three dimensions when we know there are more. I am working on a poem closely related, not sure if I will have it ready tomorrow but within a couple of days. Good write my friend
February 15th, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of three dimensions when we know there are more. I am working on a poem closely related, not sure if I will have it ready tomorrow but within a couple of days. Good write my friend
February 15th, 2026 11:53
A Love That Never Dies
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful deep write
February 14th, 2026 11:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a wonderful deep write
February 14th, 2026 11:43
A Love That Never Dies
sorenbarrett said:
Most romantic Gray with memories as a guide there is a sense of searching for the lost and hoping for union in the next life
February 14th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Most romantic Gray with memories as a guide there is a sense of searching for the lost and hoping for union in the next life
February 14th, 2026 11:40
Life\'s Irony, A Sharp Smile
Doggerel Dave said:
Balance is the hope rarely achieved consistently or for very long, Yet I \"keep walking, edge to edge\".
Cracked that one.
February 13th, 2026 19:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Balance is the hope rarely achieved consistently or for very long, Yet I \"keep walking, edge to edge\".
Cracked that one.
February 13th, 2026 19:30
Life\'s Irony, A Sharp Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem Gray and especially the last stanza captured my eye. Nicely poetic in its wording. Loved it
February 13th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem Gray and especially the last stanza captured my eye. Nicely poetic in its wording. Loved it
February 13th, 2026 10:32
Toxic Circles
Friendship said:
Well written, Gray. Your poem captures the pervasive sense of anxiety and unease in contemporary society. It reflects on how individuals navigate a world filled with uncertainty and fear, highlighting the emotional toll that this environment takes on people.
February 12th, 2026 07:51
Friendship said:
Well written, Gray. Your poem captures the pervasive sense of anxiety and unease in contemporary society. It reflects on how individuals navigate a world filled with uncertainty and fear, highlighting the emotional toll that this environment takes on people.
February 12th, 2026 07:51
Toxic Circles
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves feelings of trepidation and sense of doom. Nicely worded this poem speak of a modern world where instant communication places us on a precipice of worry a cravasse between us and safety with crumbling edges that threaten our demise. Well written
February 12th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves feelings of trepidation and sense of doom. Nicely worded this poem speak of a modern world where instant communication places us on a precipice of worry a cravasse between us and safety with crumbling edges that threaten our demise. Well written
February 12th, 2026 05:30
madness is the only freedom
Vipassana said:
nice. my favorite line is
we run barefoot where it\'s forbidden
February 11th, 2026 16:04
Vipassana said:
nice. my favorite line is
we run barefoot where it\'s forbidden
February 11th, 2026 16:04
madness is the only freedom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write
February 11th, 2026 12:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write
February 11th, 2026 12:12
madness is the only freedom
sorenbarrett said:
There is freedom in madness. A great poem Gray that tells its tail well
February 11th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
There is freedom in madness. A great poem Gray that tells its tail well
February 11th, 2026 11:20
What Owns You
sorenbarrett said:
So true love kept to oneself soon rots on the tree. I particularly loved your last stanza Gray. Very nice
February 10th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
So true love kept to oneself soon rots on the tree. I particularly loved your last stanza Gray. Very nice
February 10th, 2026 09:37
Bandwagon Brother
sorenbarrett said:
The complexities of relationships and timing. A metaphor well employed and yes love does forgive the little things even time itself. Well done Gray
February 9th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
The complexities of relationships and timing. A metaphor well employed and yes love does forgive the little things even time itself. Well done Gray
February 9th, 2026 11:34
Bandwagon Brother
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the complexities of loyalty and love, particularly how they can be influenced by success and timing. The poet focuses on a relationship that is rekindled or strengthened in the context of shared experiences, specifically in the backdrop of a sports event.
February 9th, 2026 11:31
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the complexities of loyalty and love, particularly how they can be influenced by success and timing. The poet focuses on a relationship that is rekindled or strengthened in the context of shared experiences, specifically in the backdrop of a sports event.
February 9th, 2026 11:31
The Heat in New Orleans
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write,
and one to fave for sure.
February 8th, 2026 12:12
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write,
and one to fave for sure.
February 8th, 2026 12:12
A Gentleman is Just a Patient Wolf
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful poem Gray and so true it is indeed. Patience is a virtue they say and so society regards it when hunting prey whether animal or human. They say men are dogs the savage ancestor the wolf. Man\'s best friend domesticated for thousands of years has developed patience. A wolf too is patient when hunting and perseverant chasing down its prey. Ever hungry the wolf is stealthy as most women know. A fave
February 8th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful poem Gray and so true it is indeed. Patience is a virtue they say and so society regards it when hunting prey whether animal or human. They say men are dogs the savage ancestor the wolf. Man\'s best friend domesticated for thousands of years has developed patience. A wolf too is patient when hunting and perseverant chasing down its prey. Ever hungry the wolf is stealthy as most women know. A fave
February 8th, 2026 05:34
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