Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Push Within
sorenbarrett said:
Here one is left with the image of a hard life full of adversity. Well written Gray
April 19th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here one is left with the image of a hard life full of adversity. Well written Gray
April 19th, 2026 04:18
Fumes of a Burning World
sorenbarrett said:
I here the commentary in this poem on war be it physical, commercial, social. We all pay a price. Nicely done Gray
April 18th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
I here the commentary in this poem on war be it physical, commercial, social. We all pay a price. Nicely done Gray
April 18th, 2026 05:25
The Eternal Boomerang
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a poem of gratitude
April 17th, 2026 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a poem of gratitude
April 17th, 2026 13:38
The Eternal Boomerang
Friendship said:
I really can feel your words so deeply. Your poem is a personal journey of faith and love, highlighting the miracles that arise from the act of giving love and the profound returns that come from a divine connection. You emphasize the idea that love can transcend human limitations and fill spiritual voids, ultimately leading to a sense of belonging and home. Well done, my friend🌹
April 17th, 2026 11:32
Friendship said:
I really can feel your words so deeply. Your poem is a personal journey of faith and love, highlighting the miracles that arise from the act of giving love and the profound returns that come from a divine connection. You emphasize the idea that love can transcend human limitations and fill spiritual voids, ultimately leading to a sense of belonging and home. Well done, my friend🌹
April 17th, 2026 11:32
A Single Twist
sorenbarrett said:
So little of this today a poem of friendship. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
So little of this today a poem of friendship. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 10:25
A Single Twist
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poet, presumably reflecting on personal experiences and emotions tied to everyday objects.
April 16th, 2026 09:10
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poet, presumably reflecting on personal experiences and emotions tied to everyday objects.
April 16th, 2026 09:10
Green Means Go
Doggerel Dave said:
The one of many who need their self image and feelings of importance cracked.
Enjoyed that.
April 15th, 2026 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
The one of many who need their self image and feelings of importance cracked.
Enjoyed that.
April 15th, 2026 20:00
Green Means Go
sorenbarrett said:
A story nicely told that shows how humor conquers all. Well said Gray
April 15th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
A story nicely told that shows how humor conquers all. Well said Gray
April 15th, 2026 15:32
The Three Acts of Truth
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of truth, acceptance, societal norms, and the conflict that arises when an individual’s reality challenges established beliefs. You painted an image of laughter transforming into violence, symbolizing the struggle against oppressive norms and the resilience required to assert one\'s truth.
April 14th, 2026 18:22
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of truth, acceptance, societal norms, and the conflict that arises when an individual’s reality challenges established beliefs. You painted an image of laughter transforming into violence, symbolizing the struggle against oppressive norms and the resilience required to assert one\'s truth.
April 14th, 2026 18:22
The Three Acts of Truth
sorenbarrett said:
The falsehood of the world is evident in this write. Nicely crafted
April 14th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
The falsehood of the world is evident in this write. Nicely crafted
April 14th, 2026 11:00
The Three Acts of Truth
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
loved the deepness of this piece
April 14th, 2026 08:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
loved the deepness of this piece
April 14th, 2026 08:41
The Chewing, Bewhiskered, and Very Busy Man
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Enjoy.
April 13th, 2026 07:01
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Enjoy.
April 13th, 2026 07:01
The Chewing, Bewhiskered, and Very Busy Man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write much enjoyed
April 13th, 2026 06:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good write much enjoyed
April 13th, 2026 06:17
The Chewing, Bewhiskered, and Very Busy Man
sorenbarrett said:
Clever work Gray and the man could be anyone of many. Nicely written
April 13th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Clever work Gray and the man could be anyone of many. Nicely written
April 13th, 2026 04:31
Bar Soap
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the transient nature of existence through the metaphor of a bar of soap. It reflects on the themes of purpose, transformation, and the inevitable passage of time.
April 12th, 2026 06:19
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the transient nature of existence through the metaphor of a bar of soap. It reflects on the themes of purpose, transformation, and the inevitable passage of time.
April 12th, 2026 06:19
Bar Soap
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem speaks to me of self reflection. Well done
April 12th, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem speaks to me of self reflection. Well done
April 12th, 2026 05:50
The Shriek of Domestic Sorcery
sorenbarrett said:
How many complaints will we undergo to accomplish a minor thing. Nicely written Gray
April 11th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
How many complaints will we undergo to accomplish a minor thing. Nicely written Gray
April 11th, 2026 19:46
The Shriek of Domestic Sorcery
Friendship said:
Well done. The poet has feelings of anger and futility tied to this seemingly simple chore, reflecting on how such tasks can evoke deep emotional responses and highlight the complexities of existence.
April 11th, 2026 09:15
Friendship said:
Well done. The poet has feelings of anger and futility tied to this seemingly simple chore, reflecting on how such tasks can evoke deep emotional responses and highlight the complexities of existence.
April 11th, 2026 09:15
Forgetting Tradition
sorenbarrett said:
Traditions cast in this poetic metaphor so well. Nicely worded Gray
April 10th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Traditions cast in this poetic metaphor so well. Nicely worded Gray
April 10th, 2026 15:57
Forgetting Tradition
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 10th, 2026 09:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 10th, 2026 09:56
What Came Before
Katie B. said:
Tradition builds so many things, memories, confidence, loyalty, heritage etc.
April 9th, 2026 19:34
Katie B. said:
Tradition builds so many things, memories, confidence, loyalty, heritage etc.
April 9th, 2026 19:34
What Came Before
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of detruction be it the tradition or war itself it is always easier to destroy than to fix and the good goes with the bad. A fave my friend
April 9th, 2026 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of detruction be it the tradition or war itself it is always easier to destroy than to fix and the good goes with the bad. A fave my friend
April 9th, 2026 12:06
Empty Armor
sorenbarrett said:
Personification works well in this poem Gray. Nicely written
April 8th, 2026 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Personification works well in this poem Gray. Nicely written
April 8th, 2026 16:49
The Eyes That Never Blink
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in the real in this poem Gray. It speaks a harsh truth of alienation and enslavement to modern technology where it is the new god. Well written my friend
April 7th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in the real in this poem Gray. It speaks a harsh truth of alienation and enslavement to modern technology where it is the new god. Well written my friend
April 7th, 2026 09:45
The Prickly Edge of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Very down to earth Gray it has the gritty feeling of a slow day. Nicely worded it unwinds.
April 6th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Very down to earth Gray it has the gritty feeling of a slow day. Nicely worded it unwinds.
April 6th, 2026 09:51
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