Comments received on poems by gray0328
Depression
Cassie58 said:
Some excellent poetic expression here when writing about depression. You paint the picture well. Fabulous imagery. Pleased I stopped by.
May 3rd, 2024 21:01
Cassie58 said:
Some excellent poetic expression here when writing about depression. You paint the picture well. Fabulous imagery. Pleased I stopped by.
May 3rd, 2024 21:01
beauty is in the eye of the beerholder
Cassie58 said:
Great title. You had me hooked. I would imagine that half a dozen beers could make a pensioner look like Aphrodite. Most enjoyed gray0328
April 29th, 2024 16:03
Cassie58 said:
Great title. You had me hooked. I would imagine that half a dozen beers could make a pensioner look like Aphrodite. Most enjoyed gray0328
April 29th, 2024 16:03
beauty is in the eye of the beerholder
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it.
April 29th, 2024 10:48
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it.
April 29th, 2024 10:48
Impunity Wears a Wristwatch
2781 said:
To me belongs vengeance, and recompense; Their foot shall slide in due time:
April 27th, 2024 00:09
2781 said:
To me belongs vengeance, and recompense; Their foot shall slide in due time:
April 27th, 2024 00:09
Consider the Possibilities
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained comes to mind with your words. You have to put effort in to make a difference. Building blocks. You have to build one brick at a time. I enjoyed the positive message in your poem gray0328. Happy Saturday.
April 20th, 2024 07:00
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained comes to mind with your words. You have to put effort in to make a difference. Building blocks. You have to build one brick at a time. I enjoyed the positive message in your poem gray0328. Happy Saturday.
April 20th, 2024 07:00
The Unanticipated Buzz
Parisab said:
So playful while solving nature’s rhyme:
‘One simply bursts forth in a riot of color’ so no ‘Fantasy or Forecast’ …
April 14th, 2024 09:54
Parisab said:
So playful while solving nature’s rhyme:
‘One simply bursts forth in a riot of color’ so no ‘Fantasy or Forecast’ …
April 14th, 2024 09:54
Two Powers
Parisab said:
I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I visited NOLA during COVID…So disappointing to miss that jazz …moving words…
April 14th, 2024 09:43
Parisab said:
I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I visited NOLA during COVID…So disappointing to miss that jazz …moving words…
April 14th, 2024 09:43
Rooms of Life
Parisab said:
Fascinating poem depicting the heart and soul of an aging house…I was putting somethings away and this really resinated…
April 11th, 2024 11:14
Parisab said:
Fascinating poem depicting the heart and soul of an aging house…I was putting somethings away and this really resinated…
April 11th, 2024 11:14
The Room Where Everything was Stored
A.D. Small said:
I really love how you painted the picture here great work indeed!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:15
A.D. Small said:
I really love how you painted the picture here great work indeed!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:15
Elements
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
I fought fire with - fire? No, with water. Chucked a bucket of it over neighbour\'s bonfire. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:32
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
I fought fire with - fire? No, with water. Chucked a bucket of it over neighbour\'s bonfire. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:32
Tears
Cassie58 said:
Highly creative.Never thought of looking at the world through the eyes of a fallen tear before. Love that you mention the white cliffs of Dover. Many a tear would have been shed either on departure or return to those shores. For me they represent home. Enjoyed my visit today.
March 10th, 2024 06:52
Cassie58 said:
Highly creative.Never thought of looking at the world through the eyes of a fallen tear before. Love that you mention the white cliffs of Dover. Many a tear would have been shed either on departure or return to those shores. For me they represent home. Enjoyed my visit today.
March 10th, 2024 06:52
Tears
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
You know the dark humour story of someone waving for help in the sea.
When rescued they said \'Why didn\'t you help; I was drowning\'. The reply was \'I thought ya was waving hello to me!\'
March 10th, 2024 03:28
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
You know the dark humour story of someone waving for help in the sea.
When rescued they said \'Why didn\'t you help; I was drowning\'. The reply was \'I thought ya was waving hello to me!\'
March 10th, 2024 03:28
I\'m Leaving You, But Come With Me
Cloie said:
It\'s a poignant reflection on longing, disillusionment, and the inescapable nature of certain connections. Fabulous!
March 3rd, 2024 05:50
Cloie said:
It\'s a poignant reflection on longing, disillusionment, and the inescapable nature of certain connections. Fabulous!
March 3rd, 2024 05:50
The Dark Talent
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Heart of the Tree
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Carrying the Cross
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
Sometimes In the Stillness
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
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