Comments received on poems by gray0328
Time Machine
sorenbarrett said:
A most fanciful flight through time and space that reminds me of old sci-fi movies from the fifties and sixties. Romantic and with a frosted feel of happy ever after dreams. Lovely Gray
January 19th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most fanciful flight through time and space that reminds me of old sci-fi movies from the fifties and sixties. Romantic and with a frosted feel of happy ever after dreams. Lovely Gray
January 19th, 2026 05:35
Reckless
2781 said:
I was thinking of a nightmare like that today, as I speed along in the rain.
January 19th, 2026 05:27
2781 said:
I was thinking of a nightmare like that today, as I speed along in the rain.
January 19th, 2026 05:27
Reckless
Thomas W Case said:
This strikes hard and true—gritty, remorseful, and heartbreakingly human. The imagery hits like a punch you can’t look away from.
January 18th, 2026 07:57
Thomas W Case said:
This strikes hard and true—gritty, remorseful, and heartbreakingly human. The imagery hits like a punch you can’t look away from.
January 18th, 2026 07:57
Reckless
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fave Gray. Some really great lines here \"a bottle my compass, no maps.\" a poignant message sent in a tense moment of the poem. Sad none the less in the injury of an animal and the question remains will it be enough to effect change. Lovely
January 18th, 2026 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fave Gray. Some really great lines here \"a bottle my compass, no maps.\" a poignant message sent in a tense moment of the poem. Sad none the less in the injury of an animal and the question remains will it be enough to effect change. Lovely
January 18th, 2026 06:00
The Mood Elevator
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of various levels of values and the acceptance intimating that their are higher values still. Nicely written
January 17th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of various levels of values and the acceptance intimating that their are higher values still. Nicely written
January 17th, 2026 11:36
Hitchhiking to California
sorenbarrett said:
So vivid and fresh despite its soggy nature this poem is raw and flows like rainwater carrying old feelings with it like debris. Well done Gray
January 16th, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
So vivid and fresh despite its soggy nature this poem is raw and flows like rainwater carrying old feelings with it like debris. Well done Gray
January 16th, 2026 12:21
Artifacts of Motion
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich description of a life full of experiences as depicted in the well adorned house. You have managed to give me the feeling I\'d been to tea there.
Items from a chequered life have found their way into my home, though I’m by no means so well travelled.
January 15th, 2026 23:54
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich description of a life full of experiences as depicted in the well adorned house. You have managed to give me the feeling I\'d been to tea there.
Items from a chequered life have found their way into my home, though I’m by no means so well travelled.
January 15th, 2026 23:54
Artifacts of Motion
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic picture painted in words Gray and it carries a mood but beneath it all moves shadows of metaphor as well and deep are the meanings.
January 15th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic picture painted in words Gray and it carries a mood but beneath it all moves shadows of metaphor as well and deep are the meanings.
January 15th, 2026 05:57
Today My Heart Wears You
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that tells the loved how much they are valued. Nicely written Gray
January 14th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that tells the loved how much they are valued. Nicely written Gray
January 14th, 2026 11:40
The Life in Your Years
Doggerel Dave said:
All that measurement (birthdays etc) abandoned for the experiential stirred an almost forgotten feeling - valuable write. Thanks for placing it here.
January 13th, 2026 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
All that measurement (birthdays etc) abandoned for the experiential stirred an almost forgotten feeling - valuable write. Thanks for placing it here.
January 13th, 2026 18:45
The Life in Your Years
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about someone cared about remembered by the good times. A marvelous write of endearment.
January 13th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about someone cared about remembered by the good times. A marvelous write of endearment.
January 13th, 2026 13:03
The Life in Your Years
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, so deep but so clear
January 13th, 2026 11:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, so deep but so clear
January 13th, 2026 11:39
Ableism
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that requires so thought. Nicely done Gray
January 12th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that requires so thought. Nicely done Gray
January 12th, 2026 12:02
Finding Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A portrait of any of us but for the grace of god. A symbol of persistence in life and acceptance of what it has given us. Not a curse but a resignation and prayer of hope for us and others. Lovely Gray
January 11th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
A portrait of any of us but for the grace of god. A symbol of persistence in life and acceptance of what it has given us. Not a curse but a resignation and prayer of hope for us and others. Lovely Gray
January 11th, 2026 06:20
The Waitress Breaks at Midnight
sorenbarrett said:
Covering one\'s feelings and actions with bribes ill gained giving what was never yours as presents for favor. \"You don’t stretch nice thin enough to fit their demands. \" a great line. Deception especially self deception falls short in this poem. Very nice Gray
January 10th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Covering one\'s feelings and actions with bribes ill gained giving what was never yours as presents for favor. \"You don’t stretch nice thin enough to fit their demands. \" a great line. Deception especially self deception falls short in this poem. Very nice Gray
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Magnet For An Outboard Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Magnetic force nature at work. It is like gravity holding objects together. A lovely write of love
January 9th, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Magnetic force nature at work. It is like gravity holding objects together. A lovely write of love
January 9th, 2026 11:31
Leech\'s Relatives in the Swamp
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Gray unfortunately too close to true it portrays society as it is. A lovely write my friend
January 8th, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Gray unfortunately too close to true it portrays society as it is. A lovely write my friend
January 8th, 2026 11:33
The Riparian Path
sorenbarrett said:
Gray it is always the in-betweens that make the difference. A lovely write my friend
January 7th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Gray it is always the in-betweens that make the difference. A lovely write my friend
January 7th, 2026 12:42
The Poet at Market
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful scene but knowing you Gray it is much more than that a metaphor as well. The vender and vender of what seeds of truth, fruits of wisdom. A lovely poem Gray
January 6th, 2026 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful scene but knowing you Gray it is much more than that a metaphor as well. The vender and vender of what seeds of truth, fruits of wisdom. A lovely poem Gray
January 6th, 2026 13:15
Never Miss an Opportunity to Shut Up
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Choosing silence can be more beneficial in maintaining relationships and fostering understanding.
January 5th, 2026 07:45
Friendship said:
Nicely worded. Choosing silence can be more beneficial in maintaining relationships and fostering understanding.
January 5th, 2026 07:45
Never Miss an Opportunity to Shut Up
Paul Bell said:
Should be put in every politician\'s inbox.
Sadly some people think their voice actually makes a difference, but in reality we know different.
January 5th, 2026 07:08
Paul Bell said:
Should be put in every politician\'s inbox.
Sadly some people think their voice actually makes a difference, but in reality we know different.
January 5th, 2026 07:08
Never Miss an Opportunity to Shut Up
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice in a poem. Well stated and nicely said silence speaks more than words can ever state.
January 5th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice in a poem. Well stated and nicely said silence speaks more than words can ever state.
January 5th, 2026 05:23
Never Miss an Opportunity to Shut Up
sorenbarrett said:
Silence can be far more powerful than noise. Often it is the space between words that makes the most powerful statement, Well said Gray
January 5th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Silence can be far more powerful than noise. Often it is the space between words that makes the most powerful statement, Well said Gray
January 5th, 2026 04:47
First Snow
Friendship said:
Lovely written, my friend. Your poem revolves around the joy and innocence of childhood, capturing the fleeting beauty of a snowy day where children engage in playful activities without the constraints of time or adult responsibilities. The poem evokes nostalgia and the essence of carefree moments that leave lasting impressions.
January 4th, 2026 09:40
Friendship said:
Lovely written, my friend. Your poem revolves around the joy and innocence of childhood, capturing the fleeting beauty of a snowy day where children engage in playful activities without the constraints of time or adult responsibilities. The poem evokes nostalgia and the essence of carefree moments that leave lasting impressions.
January 4th, 2026 09:40
First Snow
sorenbarrett said:
Like the prints in the snow so we leave our prints after our joyful journey in this life of brief day. What a wonderful write my friend a vivid metaphor of life itself cast in the innocence of children at play in a scene of no rules where we all pass away. Your use of rhyme and near rhyme enhances the poem decorating it with life. Lovely and a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Like the prints in the snow so we leave our prints after our joyful journey in this life of brief day. What a wonderful write my friend a vivid metaphor of life itself cast in the innocence of children at play in a scene of no rules where we all pass away. Your use of rhyme and near rhyme enhances the poem decorating it with life. Lovely and a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:24
First Snow
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2026 05:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2026 05:00
The Mischievous Shart
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the comedic aspects of bodily functions, specifically sharting, which combines farting with an accidental release of more. It presents this experience whimsically, making it relatable and entertaining.
January 3rd, 2026 10:36
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the comedic aspects of bodily functions, specifically sharting, which combines farting with an accidental release of more. It presents this experience whimsically, making it relatable and entertaining.
January 3rd, 2026 10:36
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