Comments received on poems by gray0328
Joy is a Net
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
The Ivy\'s Whisper
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
The Ivy\'s Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
The Ivy\'s Whisper
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
Take What Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
Pain a primary stimulator for action. The heart a muscle under the rib would be a terrible place to feel it. Literally my grandfather had a heart attack and said it was the worst pain he ever felt laying for eight hours before he got help. Metaphorically I believe the pain is worse.
October 2nd, 2026 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
Pain a primary stimulator for action. The heart a muscle under the rib would be a terrible place to feel it. Literally my grandfather had a heart attack and said it was the worst pain he ever felt laying for eight hours before he got help. Metaphorically I believe the pain is worse.
October 2nd, 2026 13:27
Take What Hurts
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine deep write my friend, much enjoyed read
October 2nd, 2026 11:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine deep write my friend, much enjoyed read
October 2nd, 2026 11:39
Nuclear Submarine
sorenbarrett said:
A great write as a tribute and historical reminder nicely worded and metered my friend
October 1st, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great write as a tribute and historical reminder nicely worded and metered my friend
October 1st, 2026 13:20
Hands and Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support for life and faith. Nicely done Gray
September 30th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support for life and faith. Nicely done Gray
September 30th, 2026 14:38
Sunlight Wears Their Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads of comradeship, trust built upon mutual need and reliance a bond of brotherhood across species. It is a fable and a metaphor nicely written my friend and a fave.
September 29th, 2026 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads of comradeship, trust built upon mutual need and reliance a bond of brotherhood across species. It is a fable and a metaphor nicely written my friend and a fave.
September 29th, 2026 12:11
Echo in the Margin
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
A Thousand Periods
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
A Thousand Periods
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
Medicine in the Thorns
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
Medicine in the Thorns
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
Passengers of Time
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Passengers of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
Scatter Theory
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Scatter Theory
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
Scatter Theory
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
Searching for Leadership
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Searching for Leadership
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
Snowflakes in Summer
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
Will
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
Bricks and Mortar
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
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