Comments received on poems by gray0328
Highway Robbery
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in its metaphor this poem speaks of theft not only literal but metaphorical. Very well written Gray this is a fave
December 4th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in its metaphor this poem speaks of theft not only literal but metaphorical. Very well written Gray this is a fave
December 4th, 2025 05:46
Highway Robbery
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Very well written. Captures the reader\'s attention immediately. True story?
December 4th, 2025 05:22
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Very well written. Captures the reader\'s attention immediately. True story?
December 4th, 2025 05:22
Small Things, Great Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about every day things and how they too are important. We need to maintain them just as much as the bigger things. Nicely written Gray
December 3rd, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about every day things and how they too are important. We need to maintain them just as much as the bigger things. Nicely written Gray
December 3rd, 2025 12:10
If I Let it Work
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts out with uncertainty and ends in hope. Nicely done Gray
December 2nd, 2025 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts out with uncertainty and ends in hope. Nicely done Gray
December 2nd, 2025 20:48
Bus Stop
Katie B. said:
Beautiful walk down memory lane. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing!!
November 30th, 2025 09:54
Katie B. said:
Beautiful walk down memory lane. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing!!
November 30th, 2025 09:54
Bus Stop
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Gray you have most poetically caught the spirit of past dreams and journeys in an old bus station and with such great images and metaphor left it haunted. A beautiful and nostalgic piece that is a fave. Your writing has truly grown in its depth and polish since I have first know you
November 30th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Gray you have most poetically caught the spirit of past dreams and journeys in an old bus station and with such great images and metaphor left it haunted. A beautiful and nostalgic piece that is a fave. Your writing has truly grown in its depth and polish since I have first know you
November 30th, 2025 05:18
Forgive the Climb
Katie B. said:
Well written. Captures art of canoeing well. Thanks for sharing!!
November 29th, 2025 11:47
Katie B. said:
Well written. Captures art of canoeing well. Thanks for sharing!!
November 29th, 2025 11:47
Forgive the Climb
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic journey over water and land to reach a destination. Although the burden may be heavy and the trip seem long the reward at the end may well compensate the effort. Nicely written Gray
November 29th, 2025 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic journey over water and land to reach a destination. Although the burden may be heavy and the trip seem long the reward at the end may well compensate the effort. Nicely written Gray
November 29th, 2025 11:08
Dust in the Wind
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves as a meditation on the importance of balance in relationships, highlighting the necessity of patience, boundaries, and the ability to let go. It invites readers to consider their own experiences with love and connection in a thoughtful manner.
November 27th, 2025 17:12
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves as a meditation on the importance of balance in relationships, highlighting the necessity of patience, boundaries, and the ability to let go. It invites readers to consider their own experiences with love and connection in a thoughtful manner.
November 27th, 2025 17:12
Dust in the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic expression of nature and life and its unfolding until it ends. Lovely
November 27th, 2025 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic expression of nature and life and its unfolding until it ends. Lovely
November 27th, 2025 12:54
the high school labyrinth
sorenbarrett said:
Ending of class for the day or holidays it shows the scuffle and clatter of kids in a hurry to leave. And so it is with all of us whether office, road, or shop we all seem in a hurry to leave. Well done Gray
November 26th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
Ending of class for the day or holidays it shows the scuffle and clatter of kids in a hurry to leave. And so it is with all of us whether office, road, or shop we all seem in a hurry to leave. Well done Gray
November 26th, 2025 10:55
The Milkman\'s Passing
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia I really enjoyed, a pre dawn mood piece. Even if the milkman\'s cart of my memory was battery propelled, glass bottles still rattled, though. Thanks.
November 25th, 2025 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia I really enjoyed, a pre dawn mood piece. Even if the milkman\'s cart of my memory was battery propelled, glass bottles still rattled, though. Thanks.
November 25th, 2025 16:18
The Milkman\'s Passing
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic the lines of this poem Gray. Your writing has definitely grown over time and is truly a pleasure to read.
November 25th, 2025 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic the lines of this poem Gray. Your writing has definitely grown over time and is truly a pleasure to read.
November 25th, 2025 13:10
Nothing Gold Can Stay
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, lyrical and true...a great write
November 25th, 2025 06:45
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, lyrical and true...a great write
November 25th, 2025 06:45
you already have everything
sorenbarrett said:
So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies within and those that look in the wrong place will never find it. Very nice Gray
November 24th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies within and those that look in the wrong place will never find it. Very nice Gray
November 24th, 2025 16:12
throwing children
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely Gray this poem paints a vivid picture to an old grandfather and also of past memories of his own children but there is more. This is also a metaphor of casting young minds and spirits upward and catching them in their fall. Being that safety net to prevent harm. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely Gray this poem paints a vivid picture to an old grandfather and also of past memories of his own children but there is more. This is also a metaphor of casting young minds and spirits upward and catching them in their fall. Being that safety net to prevent harm. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 12:37
emotional hangover
sorenbarrett said:
There is patience in this poem a plea for one to wait and see. It softens the blow of past wrongs and injustice with the seasoning of time. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
There is patience in this poem a plea for one to wait and see. It softens the blow of past wrongs and injustice with the seasoning of time. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 06:44
early morning fishing with Papa Benny
sorenbarrett said:
I have memories of fishing with my father and they make up part of what I am. This is a nostalgic but it seems message sending poem. Lovely
November 21st, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
I have memories of fishing with my father and they make up part of what I am. This is a nostalgic but it seems message sending poem. Lovely
November 21st, 2025 14:46
Nothing Gold Can Stay
arqios said:
Brings me back to “nature’s first green is gold,” but then turns right round into its own! 🙏🏻🕊️
November 20th, 2025 06:34
arqios said:
Brings me back to “nature’s first green is gold,” but then turns right round into its own! 🙏🏻🕊️
November 20th, 2025 06:34
A Tale of Two Trees
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning in this poetic metaphor Gray. Nicely told
November 20th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning in this poetic metaphor Gray. Nicely told
November 20th, 2025 05:06
Nothing Gold Can Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A true romantic poem and so well worded Gray this has no way not to be a fave. It is simply smashing my friend.
November 19th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
A true romantic poem and so well worded Gray this has no way not to be a fave. It is simply smashing my friend.
November 19th, 2025 11:59
when all else fails, try following directions
Doggerel Dave said:
What I felt was pure irony in the title drew me in....
November 17th, 2025 15:29
Doggerel Dave said:
What I felt was pure irony in the title drew me in....
November 17th, 2025 15:29
when all else fails, try following directions
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
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