Comments received on poems by gray0328
Hollow Hands
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
Red, White and Blue
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Red, White and Blue
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Red, White and Blue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
The Boxer
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
The Boxer
Doggerel Dave said:
Great. The crowd I\'d vote for as the biggest bunch of.... at one with those clapped out cheaply manufactured lightbulbs...
July 3rd, 2026 18:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Great. The crowd I\'d vote for as the biggest bunch of.... at one with those clapped out cheaply manufactured lightbulbs...
July 3rd, 2026 18:15
The Boxer
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏
Your descriptions are so unique \"lean like a starving stray\" being one of my favourites.
I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
- Syd 🍄
July 3rd, 2026 13:24
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏
Your descriptions are so unique \"lean like a starving stray\" being one of my favourites.
I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
- Syd 🍄
July 3rd, 2026 13:24
The Boxer
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful picture set in images of the pugilist. Could there be metaphor here or is it just poetic painting of an instant in time. Well done my friend
July 3rd, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful picture set in images of the pugilist. Could there be metaphor here or is it just poetic painting of an instant in time. Well done my friend
July 3rd, 2026 12:33
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. There\'s some great descriptions in there. Well written.
- Syd
July 2nd, 2026 14:04
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. There\'s some great descriptions in there. Well written.
- Syd
July 2nd, 2026 14:04
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed
July 2nd, 2026 13:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed
July 2nd, 2026 13:52
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
sorenbarrett said:
You keep doing it Gray another wonderful metaphoric poem that psychologically makes sense. Well done my friend
July 2nd, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
You keep doing it Gray another wonderful metaphoric poem that psychologically makes sense. Well done my friend
July 2nd, 2026 10:15
Already Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and so well employed truly poetic my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and so well employed truly poetic my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:32
Inside the Tempest
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to me of the calm that is available beneath all the daily storms and stress if one will only listen for it and access it. Another lovely write Gray and a fave
June 30th, 2026 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to me of the calm that is available beneath all the daily storms and stress if one will only listen for it and access it. Another lovely write Gray and a fave
June 30th, 2026 10:44
Electric Reverie
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem explores the interplay between overwhelming feelings and the sense of powerlessness that can accompany such deep emotional experiences.
June 29th, 2026 14:47
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem explores the interplay between overwhelming feelings and the sense of powerlessness that can accompany such deep emotional experiences.
June 29th, 2026 14:47
Electric Reverie
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in metaphor and images it is well written
June 29th, 2026 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in metaphor and images it is well written
June 29th, 2026 08:55
Drool and Drive
sorenbarrett said:
Once again you have captured the essence of poetry in your images. I love dogs and have had a few, each a special pleasure. Each has been a drooler but loved them just the same. A lovely poem that does not really personify the dog but makes his qualities admirable. A fave my friend
June 28th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Once again you have captured the essence of poetry in your images. I love dogs and have had a few, each a special pleasure. Each has been a drooler but loved them just the same. A lovely poem that does not really personify the dog but makes his qualities admirable. A fave my friend
June 28th, 2026 08:15
Water and Stone
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophically deep, poetically rich this poem speaks of a relationship that may be muse and poet or love itself. A wonderful write my friend and another fave
June 27th, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophically deep, poetically rich this poem speaks of a relationship that may be muse and poet or love itself. A wonderful write my friend and another fave
June 27th, 2026 06:55
Cover Letter
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded my friend and nicely said improved communication should be our goal.
June 26th, 2026 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded my friend and nicely said improved communication should be our goal.
June 26th, 2026 12:45
Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem on a lovely topic well written it speaks like the Tao a fave
June 25th, 2026 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem on a lovely topic well written it speaks like the Tao a fave
June 25th, 2026 16:43
Stillness
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem invites a meditative and contemplative response, prompting readers to consider their relationship with their own emotions and experiences, akin to the ever-changing and boundary-less nature of water.
June 25th, 2026 12:33
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem invites a meditative and contemplative response, prompting readers to consider their relationship with their own emotions and experiences, akin to the ever-changing and boundary-less nature of water.
June 25th, 2026 12:33
The Streets Were Our Kingdom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
excellent write
June 24th, 2026 13:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
excellent write
June 24th, 2026 13:20
The Streets Were Our Kingdom
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray reminiscent of boyhood and all its games, gangs and friendships where one was measured by their grit. Well written
June 24th, 2026 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray reminiscent of boyhood and all its games, gangs and friendships where one was measured by their grit. Well written
June 24th, 2026 11:51
The Place That Circles Itself
Alex Arnot said:
The familiarity becomes maddening! Great write!
June 23rd, 2026 21:20
Alex Arnot said:
The familiarity becomes maddening! Great write!
June 23rd, 2026 21:20
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