Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Tenacity of Ivy
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor Gray so nicely written it creeps like the ivy itself slowly and tenaciously into the mind of the reader and continues to grow long after the structure of the poem crumbles into the shadows of time. A fave my friend
October 11th, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor Gray so nicely written it creeps like the ivy itself slowly and tenaciously into the mind of the reader and continues to grow long after the structure of the poem crumbles into the shadows of time. A fave my friend
October 11th, 2026 06:21
All Dogs Like Cheese
sorenbarrett said:
Is it memories of a mother\'s milk that inspires such devotion to this concoction or is it more. Nicely written Gray
October 10th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Is it memories of a mother\'s milk that inspires such devotion to this concoction or is it more. Nicely written Gray
October 10th, 2026 08:53
Stray Cat
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted in vivid images I think I have seen him before. Like a gutter ghost he seems to slink in the shadows a reminder of man\'s indifference and cruelty. A lovely write Gray and well worthy of a fave.
October 9th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted in vivid images I think I have seen him before. Like a gutter ghost he seems to slink in the shadows a reminder of man\'s indifference and cruelty. A lovely write Gray and well worthy of a fave.
October 9th, 2026 13:04
Stray Cat
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
October 9th, 2026 12:28
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
October 9th, 2026 12:28
Ghosts in the Exhaust
sorenbarrett said:
I could smell the gas and smoke in this one Gray it screamed like the motor and its heat was felt. Nicely done.
October 7th, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
I could smell the gas and smoke in this one Gray it screamed like the motor and its heat was felt. Nicely done.
October 7th, 2026 13:23
Athletic Rituals
sorenbarrett said:
A write of belief a prayer that things will go our way. Nicely written Gray
October 6th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A write of belief a prayer that things will go our way. Nicely written Gray
October 6th, 2026 13:30
Athletic Rituals
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
all sports and their superstitious rituals
October 6th, 2026 12:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
all sports and their superstitious rituals
October 6th, 2026 12:59
He Was The Friendliest Guy
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover nor a man by his cloths. A lovely poem that depicts so well a person and his nature. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover nor a man by his cloths. A lovely poem that depicts so well a person and his nature. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:21
Joy is a Net
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
What a noble write of recognition that life is more than receiving it is giving.
October 4th, 2026 12:24
The Ivy\'s Whisper
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
2781 said:
There\'s more beauty in chaos than clean lines,
And a masterpiece takes time!
Your well on your way, I suspect.
October 4th, 2026 09:03
The Ivy\'s Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic lines that take one on a journey. A wonderful write my friend and a fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:00
The Ivy\'s Whisper
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep and thoughtful piece very much enjoyed my friend
October 3rd, 2026 04:56
Take What Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
Pain a primary stimulator for action. The heart a muscle under the rib would be a terrible place to feel it. Literally my grandfather had a heart attack and said it was the worst pain he ever felt laying for eight hours before he got help. Metaphorically I believe the pain is worse.
October 2nd, 2026 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
Pain a primary stimulator for action. The heart a muscle under the rib would be a terrible place to feel it. Literally my grandfather had a heart attack and said it was the worst pain he ever felt laying for eight hours before he got help. Metaphorically I believe the pain is worse.
October 2nd, 2026 13:27
Take What Hurts
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine deep write my friend, much enjoyed read
October 2nd, 2026 11:39
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine deep write my friend, much enjoyed read
October 2nd, 2026 11:39
Nuclear Submarine
sorenbarrett said:
A great write as a tribute and historical reminder nicely worded and metered my friend
October 1st, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great write as a tribute and historical reminder nicely worded and metered my friend
October 1st, 2026 13:20
Hands and Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support for life and faith. Nicely done Gray
September 30th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support for life and faith. Nicely done Gray
September 30th, 2026 14:38
Sunlight Wears Their Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads of comradeship, trust built upon mutual need and reliance a bond of brotherhood across species. It is a fable and a metaphor nicely written my friend and a fave.
September 29th, 2026 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads of comradeship, trust built upon mutual need and reliance a bond of brotherhood across species. It is a fable and a metaphor nicely written my friend and a fave.
September 29th, 2026 12:11
Echo in the Margin
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
A Thousand Periods
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
A Thousand Periods
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
Medicine in the Thorns
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
Medicine in the Thorns
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
Passengers of Time
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Passengers of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
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