Comments received on poems by gray0328
When All Else Fails
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
Do You Believe in Magic?
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
The Clowns of the Evening News
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
Get Out of Dodge
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up on all things. Very nice
January 13th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up on all things. Very nice
January 13th, 2025 15:44
The Gods in Disguise
sorenbarrett said:
Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the drunk, the begger, the homeless or the powerful all should be treated with respect and kindness. Lovely
January 11th, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the drunk, the begger, the homeless or the powerful all should be treated with respect and kindness. Lovely
January 11th, 2025 14:03
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, which i really enjoyed reading
January 9th, 2025 18:54
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, which i really enjoyed reading
January 9th, 2025 18:54
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery.
January 9th, 2025 18:14
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery.
January 9th, 2025 18:14
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
sorenbarrett said:
Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem all sealed with a coffin nail. Lovely Gray
January 9th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem all sealed with a coffin nail. Lovely Gray
January 9th, 2025 14:54
The Leviathan of Leisure
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the Bill Burr\'s take on cruise ships at a show in Nashville?! (Bill gets a little \"violent\").
Great write.
January 8th, 2025 18:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the Bill Burr\'s take on cruise ships at a show in Nashville?! (Bill gets a little \"violent\").
Great write.
January 8th, 2025 18:33
The Leviathan of Leisure
sorenbarrett said:
The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy devoted to pleasure.
January 8th, 2025 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy devoted to pleasure.
January 8th, 2025 14:01
Riveted Moments
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable and concise history and dedication to the history of jeans, i enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 17:24
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable and concise history and dedication to the history of jeans, i enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 17:24
Nocturnal Awareness
sorenbarrett said:
Both a literal picture of beauty painted in wonderful images as well as a metaphor for a new begining leaving the shadows and darkness behind. Beautiful
January 6th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Both a literal picture of beauty painted in wonderful images as well as a metaphor for a new begining leaving the shadows and darkness behind. Beautiful
January 6th, 2025 05:35
The Flight Home
sorenbarrett said:
Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that brings back memories some good and others not so much so.
January 5th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that brings back memories some good and others not so much so.
January 5th, 2025 05:44
One Butterfly or the World
TobaniNataiella said:
A meaningful message that everything is worth saving and everyone should have a chance, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2025 12:33
TobaniNataiella said:
A meaningful message that everything is worth saving and everyone should have a chance, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2025 12:33
One Butterfly or the World
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for saving the butterfly. For me they represent a visit from the spirit world. I would have done the same and felt good about it. Lovely and meaningful too.
January 4th, 2025 11:58
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for saving the butterfly. For me they represent a visit from the spirit world. I would have done the same and felt good about it. Lovely and meaningful too.
January 4th, 2025 11:58
Adulting is Overrated
Mutley Ravishes said:
It most certainly is. Dry intellect rules the day. Thank heavens its days are numbered!
January 3rd, 2025 19:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
It most certainly is. Dry intellect rules the day. Thank heavens its days are numbered!
January 3rd, 2025 19:29
Enough - Never Occurs
vicecream said:
One of the greatest mysteries and greatest pains that plague mankind. I have a feeling that the satisfaction we search for is in the very place we leave to find it..
January 3rd, 2025 11:29
vicecream said:
One of the greatest mysteries and greatest pains that plague mankind. I have a feeling that the satisfaction we search for is in the very place we leave to find it..
January 3rd, 2025 11:29
Adulting is Overrated
TobaniNataiella said:
How life is no longer how it used to be and we hang to those memories, but also stress ourselves these days over minor details, Enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 11:05
TobaniNataiella said:
How life is no longer how it used to be and we hang to those memories, but also stress ourselves these days over minor details, Enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 11:05
Adulting is Overrated
sorenbarrett said:
Memories mean age but with age a loss of innocense and we don\'t laugh as much. Nicely worded this poem has several great lines
January 3rd, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
Memories mean age but with age a loss of innocense and we don\'t laugh as much. Nicely worded this poem has several great lines
January 3rd, 2025 10:10
The Crescent City Cries
Teddy.15 said:
My heart is with all in New Orleans. I\'m so very deeply sorry to see yet again that terrorism has taken lives. 💔
January 2nd, 2025 05:57
Teddy.15 said:
My heart is with all in New Orleans. I\'m so very deeply sorry to see yet again that terrorism has taken lives. 💔
January 2nd, 2025 05:57
What is a Phone Book?
Cassie58 said:
It’s a long time since I used a phone book. Obsolete now. On the plus side, many a tree will be saved. How times have changed. Enjoyed the read gray0328. Happy new year to you.
January 1st, 2025 15:08
Cassie58 said:
It’s a long time since I used a phone book. Obsolete now. On the plus side, many a tree will be saved. How times have changed. Enjoyed the read gray0328. Happy new year to you.
January 1st, 2025 15:08
What is a Phone Book?
TobaniNataiella said:
A poignant poem of how things where and how quickly it all changes and people forget. After all it was not that long a go we used these books, Enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2025 12:58
TobaniNataiella said:
A poignant poem of how things where and how quickly it all changes and people forget. After all it was not that long a go we used these books, Enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2025 12:58
Blue is the Deepest Colour
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color type of music, true blue an honored value and at times when I feel blue my muse speaks to me. A wonderful poem about color using vivid and spectacular images. Happy New Year to you Gray
December 31st, 2024 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color type of music, true blue an honored value and at times when I feel blue my muse speaks to me. A wonderful poem about color using vivid and spectacular images. Happy New Year to you Gray
December 31st, 2024 13:58
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