Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Sun Holds Its Breath
sorenbarrett said:
The heat of summer or of the world in general taxes its occupants man or beast. Nicely imaged Gray
July 26th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
The heat of summer or of the world in general taxes its occupants man or beast. Nicely imaged Gray
July 26th, 2026 04:20
Catfish Cancer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A good deep write my friend much enjoyed
July 25th, 2026 05:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A good deep write my friend much enjoyed
July 25th, 2026 05:00
Catfish Cancer
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor within a metaphor where fish is man and lake is ecosystem. A good write Gray
July 25th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor within a metaphor where fish is man and lake is ecosystem. A good write Gray
July 25th, 2026 04:38
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
Cheeky Missy said:
Yellow is NOT my color, whence I can side with you, having more a distaste for it than otherwise, so don\'t ask how I ended up buying a butter yellow sundress-- I\'ll just sleep in it because yellow is NOT my color. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Yellow is NOT my color, whence I can side with you, having more a distaste for it than otherwise, so don\'t ask how I ended up buying a butter yellow sundress-- I\'ll just sleep in it because yellow is NOT my color. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:05
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
sorenbarrett said:
Love butter eat it on most anything pounds of it every week. Fun read Gray
July 24th, 2026 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Love butter eat it on most anything pounds of it every week. Fun read Gray
July 24th, 2026 18:04
A Heavy Yawn of Butter
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m no marriage counsellor. Sorry - no comment. 🤫
(I\'m a bit nosey though and enjoy discovering how others live their lives...)
July 24th, 2026 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m no marriage counsellor. Sorry - no comment. 🤫
(I\'m a bit nosey though and enjoy discovering how others live their lives...)
July 24th, 2026 15:53
Filling the Gaps
Doggerel Dave said:
Slowly encroaching dementia is something many fear, I think. You have provided a both sympathetic and at the same time almost clinical portrait of early onset decline.
July 22nd, 2026 21:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Slowly encroaching dementia is something many fear, I think. You have provided a both sympathetic and at the same time almost clinical portrait of early onset decline.
July 22nd, 2026 21:16
Filling the Gaps
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so beautifully rendered you make me want to weep for him, excellent imagery and a lively poignancy haunting the very breath we breathe. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:21
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so beautifully rendered you make me want to weep for him, excellent imagery and a lively poignancy haunting the very breath we breathe. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:21
Filling the Gaps
sorenbarrett said:
Wo well worded in a most poetic fashion my friend. Very nice
July 22nd, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Wo well worded in a most poetic fashion my friend. Very nice
July 22nd, 2026 11:26
Broken Mirrors
Doggerel Dave said:
I go with that. Immediate disarmament of a potential adversary (or at least cut down the numbers).
July 21st, 2026 15:47
Doggerel Dave said:
I go with that. Immediate disarmament of a potential adversary (or at least cut down the numbers).
July 21st, 2026 15:47
Broken Mirrors
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
In imperfection lies all beauty, much enjoyed read
July 21st, 2026 12:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
In imperfection lies all beauty, much enjoyed read
July 21st, 2026 12:07
The Quite Weight of Honesty
8Blackwidow8 said:
(I thought of how hands
can cradle as much as crush)
As a woman, I fear the best of men is dying like old trades die to new tech.
The world won\'t forget what happened with Charlie whether you hated a man you didn\'t know, or loved a man you thought you did.
July 21st, 2026 10:58
8Blackwidow8 said:
(I thought of how hands
can cradle as much as crush)
As a woman, I fear the best of men is dying like old trades die to new tech.
The world won\'t forget what happened with Charlie whether you hated a man you didn\'t know, or loved a man you thought you did.
July 21st, 2026 10:58
The Boxer
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"fists like cinder blocks\"
What a line. It reminds me of a poem I wrote about Rocky Marciano. My father was am amateur boxer. I really enjoyed this.
July 21st, 2026 10:55
8Blackwidow8 said:
\"fists like cinder blocks\"
What a line. It reminds me of a poem I wrote about Rocky Marciano. My father was am amateur boxer. I really enjoyed this.
July 21st, 2026 10:55
Broken Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray where the admission of imperfection becomes beauty itself and the claiming to be flawed lowers the defenses and lets people in. Well done my friend
July 21st, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray where the admission of imperfection becomes beauty itself and the claiming to be flawed lowers the defenses and lets people in. Well done my friend
July 21st, 2026 10:36
Broken Mirrors
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. In a society which seems to have perfected the strange art of absolute perfection in the limelight, the trend from sixty years ago seeps through to add a bit of sense. And please forgive me if I\'m still confused. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy.
July 21st, 2026 10:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. In a society which seems to have perfected the strange art of absolute perfection in the limelight, the trend from sixty years ago seeps through to add a bit of sense. And please forgive me if I\'m still confused. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy.
July 21st, 2026 10:13
Uncle Chad
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
Live Long and Prosper
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
A Gathering of Marvels
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify - and I\'ve given up dusting.
July 18th, 2026 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify - and I\'ve given up dusting.
July 18th, 2026 18:07
A Gathering of Marvels
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful piece Gray that reminds me of what I used to have. Threw it all away, kept only what I use. Memories kept only in the head where distortion dusts them from time to time.
July 18th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful piece Gray that reminds me of what I used to have. Threw it all away, kept only what I use. Memories kept only in the head where distortion dusts them from time to time.
July 18th, 2026 11:39
A Gathering of Marvels
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great atmosphere to this piece my friend
July 18th, 2026 11:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great atmosphere to this piece my friend
July 18th, 2026 11:22
The Quite Weight of Honesty
Doggerel Dave said:
Honesty is a virtue; however the important thing, as in poetry, is what one is being honest about.
Thanks for your always interesting well versed commentary, mate.
July 17th, 2026 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Honesty is a virtue; however the important thing, as in poetry, is what one is being honest about.
Thanks for your always interesting well versed commentary, mate.
July 17th, 2026 19:09
The Quite Weight of Honesty
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that many agreed with and many others did not. Controversial is the price paid for being honest. Well done Gray
July 17th, 2026 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that many agreed with and many others did not. Controversial is the price paid for being honest. Well done Gray
July 17th, 2026 11:11
Fault Lines and First Responders
sorenbarrett said:
Natural disasters and their effects with the need for help for victims. Well written
July 16th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Natural disasters and their effects with the need for help for victims. Well written
July 16th, 2026 11:36
Velvet and Venom
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray it reminds me of my snorkeling days off the coast where colored fish swam in the reef and sharks played ghost in the darkness beyond vision.
July 15th, 2026 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray it reminds me of my snorkeling days off the coast where colored fish swam in the reef and sharks played ghost in the darkness beyond vision.
July 15th, 2026 11:56
Potato Chip Patient
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
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