Comments received on poems by gray0328
Chronic Diorama
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of life as a movie blurred in colors. It does seem that way as time flashes by. Nice write Gray
October 27th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of life as a movie blurred in colors. It does seem that way as time flashes by. Nice write Gray
October 27th, 2025 20:05
the invitation
sorenbarrett said:
I would count this as spiritual not religious. A poem of being one with nature and all around us and knowing that we are part of it all. A lovely writ Gray
October 26th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
I would count this as spiritual not religious. A poem of being one with nature and all around us and knowing that we are part of it all. A lovely writ Gray
October 26th, 2025 05:15
The Shepherd of My Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see unconditional love and forgiveness that steadies the wanderer and provides a guiding star. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see unconditional love and forgiveness that steadies the wanderer and provides a guiding star. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 12:06
the obstinacy of creative work
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful work Gray. To break the rules one must know them. Picasso could paint realism but chose not to. When creating a master bonsai tree the creator must know all the rules before he can break them. Loved it
October 24th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful work Gray. To break the rules one must know them. Picasso could paint realism but chose not to. When creating a master bonsai tree the creator must know all the rules before he can break them. Loved it
October 24th, 2025 11:25
Through the Cracks He Shines
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most upbeat one might say spiritual. Through the cracks and fissures of decay and disregard beams light and beauty. Hope shines eternal. Lovely
October 23rd, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most upbeat one might say spiritual. Through the cracks and fissures of decay and disregard beams light and beauty. Hope shines eternal. Lovely
October 23rd, 2025 06:35
Definance in the Bottle
coracaodacripta said:
I resonate with this, a real wake up call.
October 22nd, 2025 14:59
coracaodacripta said:
I resonate with this, a real wake up call.
October 22nd, 2025 14:59
Definance in the Bottle
Paul Bell said:
The drink will break you, rich, poor, it doesn\'t care.
Easily accessible, daring that one last drink that makes you lie to yourself pretending you\'re in control.
October 22nd, 2025 13:36
Paul Bell said:
The drink will break you, rich, poor, it doesn\'t care.
Easily accessible, daring that one last drink that makes you lie to yourself pretending you\'re in control.
October 22nd, 2025 13:36
Definance in the Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong words dark and gritty well done
October 22nd, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong words dark and gritty well done
October 22nd, 2025 12:24
Mutual Confidence
sorenbarrett said:
I was going to say some great lines in this poem but that would be a lie. The whole poem is full of great lines Gray a fave
October 21st, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
I was going to say some great lines in this poem but that would be a lie. The whole poem is full of great lines Gray a fave
October 21st, 2025 11:27
The Weight of Gold
Doggerel Dave said:
Precicely - very heavy stuff, gold. Bound to weigh you down to the point of non existence.
October 18th, 2025 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Precicely - very heavy stuff, gold. Bound to weigh you down to the point of non existence.
October 18th, 2025 17:13
The Weight of Gold
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and it seems that you speak of some people that I have met and known. Well written and a fave
October 18th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and it seems that you speak of some people that I have met and known. Well written and a fave
October 18th, 2025 04:30
Mary Had a Flea Circus
sorenbarrett said:
Normally for a poem that bounces off another I wouldn\'t give a fave but this made me smile and was so well written it deserves one. A fine write Gray
October 17th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Normally for a poem that bounces off another I wouldn\'t give a fave but this made me smile and was so well written it deserves one. A fine write Gray
October 17th, 2025 12:12
The Art of Water
Dan Williams said:
Mother and monster indeed. You have nicely captured something people often fail to see, understand. Life came from the sea.
October 16th, 2025 23:19
Dan Williams said:
Mother and monster indeed. You have nicely captured something people often fail to see, understand. Life came from the sea.
October 16th, 2025 23:19
The Potter\'s Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel there\'s a religious element here I cannot relate to. However the sensation that I was formed by forces I could not control comes across clearly and truthfully.
Thanks for addressing it in that way.
October 16th, 2025 17:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel there\'s a religious element here I cannot relate to. However the sensation that I was formed by forces I could not control comes across clearly and truthfully.
Thanks for addressing it in that way.
October 16th, 2025 17:56
The Potter\'s Hands
sorenbarrett said:
We all come from clay and are shaped by our biology and environment, hands that are not always gentle. A telling poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
We all come from clay and are shaped by our biology and environment, hands that are not always gentle. A telling poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 12:10
The Art of Water
NinjaGirl said:
Water is really beautiful--it\'s always nature that amazes us, isn\'t it?
October 15th, 2025 22:59
NinjaGirl said:
Water is really beautiful--it\'s always nature that amazes us, isn\'t it?
October 15th, 2025 22:59
The Art of Water
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this - captured the hypnotic character of water in it\'s many forms.
October 15th, 2025 16:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this - captured the hypnotic character of water in it\'s many forms.
October 15th, 2025 16:04
The Art of Water
sorenbarrett said:
The Tao speaks of the qualities of water being soft and yet able to cut stone taking any form difficult to hold, Hinduism has Kali with two faces the mother and the destroyer and so is water. Birth of all life and taker of it. A wonderful poem Gray
October 15th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
The Tao speaks of the qualities of water being soft and yet able to cut stone taking any form difficult to hold, Hinduism has Kali with two faces the mother and the destroyer and so is water. Birth of all life and taker of it. A wonderful poem Gray
October 15th, 2025 10:26
Glaze on Cracked Pottery
sorenbarrett said:
Slick deception painted over lies whether a car sail of a marriage vow all the same covered rot. Well done Gray
October 14th, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
Slick deception painted over lies whether a car sail of a marriage vow all the same covered rot. Well done Gray
October 14th, 2025 13:41
The Switch
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here Gray. The connection made by the action of closing the switch. As you began I first had visions of an electric chair and what a shocking experience, jolted into another life. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here Gray. The connection made by the action of closing the switch. As you began I first had visions of an electric chair and what a shocking experience, jolted into another life. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 04:13
The Secret Treasure Trove
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
Reciprocal Mistrust
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Reciprocal Mistrust
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
Reciprocal Mistrust
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
Suddenly
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
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