Comments received on poems by gray0328
Scatter Theory
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Scatter Theory
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
Scatter Theory
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
Searching for Leadership
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Searching for Leadership
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
Snowflakes in Summer
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
Will
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
Bricks and Mortar
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
The Architecture of Trust
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost scriptural in nature. Nicely done Gray
September 19th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost scriptural in nature. Nicely done Gray
September 19th, 2026 04:22
Snowflakes in Summer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful write friend and a fav
September 18th, 2026 10:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful write friend and a fav
September 18th, 2026 10:44
Snowflakes in Summer
Paul Bell said:
Yes, how many have wrote down their future, walked out the door and got killed by a bus.
Hindsight, if only we had it in spades.
September 18th, 2026 09:50
Paul Bell said:
Yes, how many have wrote down their future, walked out the door and got killed by a bus.
Hindsight, if only we had it in spades.
September 18th, 2026 09:50
Snowflakes in Summer
sorenbarrett said:
What a poignant and most beautiful poem Gray sad but beautiful and with such great metaphors a definite fave
September 18th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a poignant and most beautiful poem Gray sad but beautiful and with such great metaphors a definite fave
September 18th, 2026 09:46
Made For Greater Heights
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message set in earthen molds against steel tools. Well done my friend and a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message set in earthen molds against steel tools. Well done my friend and a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:46
Echo in the Wires
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
Echo in the Wires
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Echo in the Wires
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
The Cowboy They Couldn\'t Tame
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
Groceries
sorenbarrett said:
A journey we have all taken and feels like each step is not one closer to the counter but one closer to disaster. The bite, the possible tearing of the plastic and the question of what will survive. A tense and great write. I will not venture the metaphor here for it strikes too close to home.
September 14th, 2026 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A journey we have all taken and feels like each step is not one closer to the counter but one closer to disaster. The bite, the possible tearing of the plastic and the question of what will survive. A tense and great write. I will not venture the metaphor here for it strikes too close to home.
September 14th, 2026 10:51
The Pulse Beneath the City
Doggerel Dave said:
When I realised your poem wasn\'t about rats, I settled down and as I\'ve travelled on a number of city\'s (Including NYC) underground/subways, got into the swing and above all the atmosphere. Had a safe ride, thanks.
September 13th, 2026 17:03
Doggerel Dave said:
When I realised your poem wasn\'t about rats, I settled down and as I\'ve travelled on a number of city\'s (Including NYC) underground/subways, got into the swing and above all the atmosphere. Had a safe ride, thanks.
September 13th, 2026 17:03
The Pulse Beneath the City
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in the city and all its turmoil I feel it as I read it. Nicely done Gray
September 13th, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in the city and all its turmoil I feel it as I read it. Nicely done Gray
September 13th, 2026 05:27
Lessons Learned From an Ostrich
sorenbarrett said:
Now if this is not a metaphor for facing fear I don\'t know what is. A good write my friend.
September 12th, 2026 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Now if this is not a metaphor for facing fear I don\'t know what is. A good write my friend.
September 12th, 2026 11:18
The Wisdom of Wax
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is different for you Gray did you write Gray\'s anatomy? Oh got ya its a metaphor. Why do we poke and prod at what nature has designed. A very good one my friend.
September 11th, 2026 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is different for you Gray did you write Gray\'s anatomy? Oh got ya its a metaphor. Why do we poke and prod at what nature has designed. A very good one my friend.
September 11th, 2026 10:46
Hoodoo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write my friend, much enjoyed
September 10th, 2026 06:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write my friend, much enjoyed
September 10th, 2026 06:36
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