Comments received on poems by gray0328
Echo in the Margin
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Under a government proven to lie and hide more than it reveals one can not but doubt and too many unanswered questions that defy physics and mathematics of probability to leave the mind at rest. People in power that benefit, shots that have not been able to be replicated, film frames missing, key witnesses deaths, redactions, classified kept from public view, revenge over unkept promises politics at its best in the smoke and mirrors of Washington. No one believes anyone anymore. If they do they are fools. Well written Gray
September 28th, 2026 06:40
A Thousand Periods
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A feeling of flying aloof with this piece, most stimulating and much enjoyed
September 27th, 2026 07:07
A Thousand Periods
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely metaphor my friend woven nicely throughout this poem with meaning.
September 27th, 2026 06:10
Medicine in the Thorns
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written and tender piece my friend
September 26th, 2026 10:42
Medicine in the Thorns
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
Discrimination in a positive light, moderation is the answer to most, proper usage another key. Nicely written Gray
September 26th, 2026 09:59
Passengers of Time
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey!
I always find free verse so much harder than rhyme. It seems you pull it off effortlessly.
\"Let us be passengers who dare to sing,
who carve laughter into the wood of the seats,
leaving echoes long after we are gone.\"
Great stuff - Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:50
Passengers of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely metaphor Gray it works well on so many levels.
September 25th, 2026 10:02
Scatter Theory
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Syd said:
Brilliant Grey! I\'ll write a proper comment when I have time.
- Syd 🍄
September 24th, 2026 06:44
Scatter Theory
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep thoughtful piece my friend
September 24th, 2026 05:11
Scatter Theory
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Strange how nature creates few straight lines. The meaning of this poem also is not a direct straight line. It bends into metaphor, takes turns into allegory finds form in similes, it flickers through the lines. Nicely worded Gray
September 24th, 2026 04:18
Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray that took me back to all the books I have read and the emotions felt with each one. Tears I\'ve cried and laughter that seized me. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2026 13:23
Searching for Leadership
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Hardly likely anytime soon , but someone has to clear the way...
September 22nd, 2026 18:47
Searching for Leadership
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
The characteristics of a good leader delineated. Nicely done Gray
September 22nd, 2026 12:49
Snowflakes in Summer
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
NafisaSB said:
Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
A good write 👌
September 22nd, 2026 05:44
Will
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Gray where will can overcome all if it is strong enough. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 13:25
Bricks and Mortar
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor Gray that carries with the weight of much meaning. Nicely worded it is built brick by brick. Well done
September 20th, 2026 11:13
The Architecture of Trust
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost scriptural in nature. Nicely done Gray
September 19th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost scriptural in nature. Nicely done Gray
September 19th, 2026 04:22
Snowflakes in Summer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful write friend and a fav
September 18th, 2026 10:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful write friend and a fav
September 18th, 2026 10:44
Snowflakes in Summer
Paul Bell said:
Yes, how many have wrote down their future, walked out the door and got killed by a bus.
Hindsight, if only we had it in spades.
September 18th, 2026 09:50
Paul Bell said:
Yes, how many have wrote down their future, walked out the door and got killed by a bus.
Hindsight, if only we had it in spades.
September 18th, 2026 09:50
Snowflakes in Summer
sorenbarrett said:
What a poignant and most beautiful poem Gray sad but beautiful and with such great metaphors a definite fave
September 18th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a poignant and most beautiful poem Gray sad but beautiful and with such great metaphors a definite fave
September 18th, 2026 09:46
Made For Greater Heights
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message set in earthen molds against steel tools. Well done my friend and a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message set in earthen molds against steel tools. Well done my friend and a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:46
Echo in the Wires
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
Echo in the Wires
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Echo in the Wires
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
The Cowboy They Couldn\'t Tame
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
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