Comments received on poems by gray0328
Veil of the Wolf
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like something stalking its own conscience in the dark—tight, cinematic, and uneasy in its calm.
There’s a cold, controlled intensity in it, like the poem knows exactly how wrong it feels and doesn’t look away.
May 10th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like something stalking its own conscience in the dark—tight, cinematic, and uneasy in its calm.
There’s a cold, controlled intensity in it, like the poem knows exactly how wrong it feels and doesn’t look away.
May 10th, 2026 07:37
Feathered Witness
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray that has great wording and meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray that has great wording and meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:04
Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
Here parts of speech take on personified images. Nicely done Gray
May 8th, 2026 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Here parts of speech take on personified images. Nicely done Gray
May 8th, 2026 15:44
Words and Witness
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like someone describing the quiet mechanics of wonder without ever breaking its spell.
There’s a gentle intelligence in it—like attention itself becoming the real subject of the poem.
May 7th, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like someone describing the quiet mechanics of wonder without ever breaking its spell.
There’s a gentle intelligence in it—like attention itself becoming the real subject of the poem.
May 7th, 2026 07:53
Words and Witness
sorenbarrett said:
A write about the first step in a process where sensitivity to what is around one is paramount. Lovely Gray
May 7th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A write about the first step in a process where sensitivity to what is around one is paramount. Lovely Gray
May 7th, 2026 04:22
Words and Witness
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, great message, much enjoyed
May 7th, 2026 04:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, great message, much enjoyed
May 7th, 2026 04:04
The Fugue of Attention
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful write and a fav
May 6th, 2026 05:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful write and a fav
May 6th, 2026 05:51
The Fugue of Attention
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a magnificent write Gray this speaks of a unity of the ultimate philosophy mathematics and the ultimate art poetry. It merges in myth and history and well written in most poetic form a fave
May 5th, 2026 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! a magnificent write Gray this speaks of a unity of the ultimate philosophy mathematics and the ultimate art poetry. It merges in myth and history and well written in most poetic form a fave
May 5th, 2026 20:01
Gunpowder Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is a deep write with some wonderful poetic lines. Your metaphors have deepened and are more polished. Truly a masterful work my friend and a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is a deep write with some wonderful poetic lines. Your metaphors have deepened and are more polished. Truly a masterful work my friend and a fave
May 4th, 2026 13:03
A Whisper in the Dark
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write of how persistence is the the key element of strength. Well written my friend
May 3rd, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write of how persistence is the the key element of strength. Well written my friend
May 3rd, 2026 11:46
Every Jagged Sip
Syd said:
In the past I\'ve struggled with sobriety. Alcoholism runs in my family also. I enjoyed this relatable write.
- Syd
May 2nd, 2026 08:58
Syd said:
In the past I\'ve struggled with sobriety. Alcoholism runs in my family also. I enjoyed this relatable write.
- Syd
May 2nd, 2026 08:58
Every Jagged Sip
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so powerful in its description and a fav
May 2nd, 2026 08:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so powerful in its description and a fav
May 2nd, 2026 08:17
Every Jagged Sip
Katie B. said:
Wow, this is a heartbreaking story of what I\'m gathering to be addiction. Powerful, moving and heavy. Takes a great deal of self to share if this is indeed your story. I will just say it resonates with me.
May 2nd, 2026 07:46
Katie B. said:
Wow, this is a heartbreaking story of what I\'m gathering to be addiction. Powerful, moving and heavy. Takes a great deal of self to share if this is indeed your story. I will just say it resonates with me.
May 2nd, 2026 07:46
Every Jagged Sip
Friendship said:
A strong poem. Your poem reflects on the intimate and painful experiences shared between the poet and a woman battling addiction.
May 2nd, 2026 06:46
Friendship said:
A strong poem. Your poem reflects on the intimate and painful experiences shared between the poet and a woman battling addiction.
May 2nd, 2026 06:46
Every Jagged Sip
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your lines have grown in their poetic strength and I love them. A fave ,my friend
May 2nd, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your lines have grown in their poetic strength and I love them. A fave ,my friend
May 2nd, 2026 04:52
Behind the Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems have grown stronger over time and this one is a great one. So nicely worded with great pairings of meaning in its verses. Most poetic my friend and a fave
May 1st, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems have grown stronger over time and this one is a great one. So nicely worded with great pairings of meaning in its verses. Most poetic my friend and a fave
May 1st, 2026 16:27
Behind the Noise
Katie B. said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Like \"There\'s courage in the quiet we avoid.\" Some people think something needs to be said at all times during a conversation. Me, I covet silence.
May 1st, 2026 13:39
Katie B. said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Like \"There\'s courage in the quiet we avoid.\" Some people think something needs to be said at all times during a conversation. Me, I covet silence.
May 1st, 2026 13:39
Behind the Noise
Bianitalisa said:
This is so good. The \"who first carved a whistle from air, unwilling to surrender to stillness?\" is my favorite part💜
May 1st, 2026 09:22
Bianitalisa said:
This is so good. The \"who first carved a whistle from air, unwilling to surrender to stillness?\" is my favorite part💜
May 1st, 2026 09:22
Cashmere Couture
Doggerel Dave said:
Influencer (I think that\'s what they are called...)?
May 1st, 2026 00:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Influencer (I think that\'s what they are called...)?
May 1st, 2026 00:15
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