Comments received on poems by gray0328
Potato Chip Patient
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
Potato Chip Patient
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well Gray drawing a picture in the mind. Well done
July 14th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well Gray drawing a picture in the mind. Well done
July 14th, 2026 10:32
Clint Eastwood
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, I could vote for Clint too, despite his passion for guns.
Hasn\'t used one as far as I can tell in his fight against ageing recognised from your write and for which I can feel a great empathy.
July 13th, 2026 16:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, I could vote for Clint too, despite his passion for guns.
Hasn\'t used one as far as I can tell in his fight against ageing recognised from your write and for which I can feel a great empathy.
July 13th, 2026 16:55
Clint Eastwood
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray and tribute to my favorite actor, director and producer. A man of no excuses as wise as he is talented. Well written and a fave
July 13th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray and tribute to my favorite actor, director and producer. A man of no excuses as wise as he is talented. Well written and a fave
July 13th, 2026 14:28
Hammerheads
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem of life and death where preditor and prey match wits and only one wins. Nicely done Gray I have swam those waters and it feels very real set in color not just black and white of type.
July 12th, 2026 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem of life and death where preditor and prey match wits and only one wins. Nicely done Gray I have swam those waters and it feels very real set in color not just black and white of type.
July 12th, 2026 09:21
Hammerheads
rhmn_7 said:
This breathtaking poem captures the brutal dance of the ocean, where the hammerhead’s silent hunt transforms the stingray’s desperate defense into a tragic surrender. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 07:45
rhmn_7 said:
This breathtaking poem captures the brutal dance of the ocean, where the hammerhead’s silent hunt transforms the stingray’s desperate defense into a tragic surrender. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 07:45
A Single Spark
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its images and informative in its information this poem flows well as do electro chemical impulses along a fiber separated by stanza synapses. Well written my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its images and informative in its information this poem flows well as do electro chemical impulses along a fiber separated by stanza synapses. Well written my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:02
A Single Spark
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the cog within the machine, much enjoyed
July 11th, 2026 04:46
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the cog within the machine, much enjoyed
July 11th, 2026 04:46
Love Directed
sorenbarrett said:
A gift indeed that like any other gift is given with no strings attached. It comes from an owner that offers it. Well written my friend
July 10th, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A gift indeed that like any other gift is given with no strings attached. It comes from an owner that offers it. Well written my friend
July 10th, 2026 11:43
Everything Bagel
sorenbarrett said:
Nirvana could be taste indeed I have had meals that took me to heaven and a taste of heaven is all that is needed to want it again. Lovely Gray
July 9th, 2026 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
Nirvana could be taste indeed I have had meals that took me to heaven and a taste of heaven is all that is needed to want it again. Lovely Gray
July 9th, 2026 12:50
Running of the Bulls
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
Running of the Bulls
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Lava Light
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Lava Light
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
NafisaSB said:
The psychiatrists job is to heal but often it seems as if they are playing games or testing the patient 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:45
NafisaSB said:
The psychiatrists job is to heal but often it seems as if they are playing games or testing the patient 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:45
Tracks of Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend so well imaged it falls close to my heart having seen the advancement of all those things. Long gone by the time of my birth on this continent I saw on a Southern continent in my youth as well as the racing horses alongside. You have touched a ghost rider in my memory my friend and it deserves a fave
July 6th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend so well imaged it falls close to my heart having seen the advancement of all those things. Long gone by the time of my birth on this continent I saw on a Southern continent in my youth as well as the racing horses alongside. You have touched a ghost rider in my memory my friend and it deserves a fave
July 6th, 2026 06:46
Tracks of Dust
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write Gray. Such brilliant descriptions and imagery. \"Muscles carving air\" being one of my favourites.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:52
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write Gray. Such brilliant descriptions and imagery. \"Muscles carving air\" being one of my favourites.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:52
Tracks of Dust
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
What once was and what now is, great write and a fav
July 6th, 2026 04:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
What once was and what now is, great write and a fav
July 6th, 2026 04:00
Hollow Hands
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
Red, White and Blue
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Red, White and Blue
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Red, White and Blue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
The Boxer
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
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