Comments received on poems by gray0328
Chasing the White Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray so nicely imaged and worded.
August 19th, 2026 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray so nicely imaged and worded.
August 19th, 2026 13:50
Kristen\'s Junk Drawer
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous how much we can tell of a person by what is in their drawer. Nicely done Gray
August 18th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous how much we can tell of a person by what is in their drawer. Nicely done Gray
August 18th, 2026 09:56
New Orleans Heat
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem filled with images of wetness and heat with a sense of paralysis but the finish of singing insects and there is nothing that New Orleans is known for more than its jaz and music. Well written Gray
August 17th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem filled with images of wetness and heat with a sense of paralysis but the finish of singing insects and there is nothing that New Orleans is known for more than its jaz and music. Well written Gray
August 17th, 2026 04:45
Highchair Adventures
sorenbarrett said:
I could not but give a fave to this wonderful description of a child in extasy of feeding. Painted so well I could see and hear it. I have had children of my own and grandchildren that I have seen this in and it brings joy to picture it retold.
August 16th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I could not but give a fave to this wonderful description of a child in extasy of feeding. Painted so well I could see and hear it. I have had children of my own and grandchildren that I have seen this in and it brings joy to picture it retold.
August 16th, 2026 04:47
Highchair Adventures
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write
August 16th, 2026 04:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write
August 16th, 2026 04:19
Keeping the Wolves Away
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh to implement your advice would regrettably require more self control than I posess. Doesn\'t in any way negate its validity - only highlights my lack of restraint under fire.
August 15th, 2026 21:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh to implement your advice would regrettably require more self control than I posess. Doesn\'t in any way negate its validity - only highlights my lack of restraint under fire.
August 15th, 2026 21:52
Keeping the Wolves Away
sorenbarrett said:
This one has some very good lines my friend. The ending is quite powerful. Well done Gray
August 15th, 2026 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
This one has some very good lines my friend. The ending is quite powerful. Well done Gray
August 15th, 2026 10:48
The Echo of His Voice
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful flow to this, definite FAV
August 14th, 2026 12:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Beautiful flow to this, definite FAV
August 14th, 2026 12:38
Winter\'s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I started reading this feeling it uncanny as I associated it immediately with my brother. So well written Gray it sent shivers down my spine. Very nicely written it can not help but be a fave. I thank you my friend for the write it means a lot.
August 12th, 2026 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I started reading this feeling it uncanny as I associated it immediately with my brother. So well written Gray it sent shivers down my spine. Very nicely written it can not help but be a fave. I thank you my friend for the write it means a lot.
August 12th, 2026 11:55
Winter\'s Breath
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write my friend
August 12th, 2026 10:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write my friend
August 12th, 2026 10:58
Gravity and Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy subject taken on with such levity. It sings in its childlike humor that raises above adult seriousness. The innocence of a child written in a poem where all that ends ends well. My brother in High School was struck by a girl on his way to school sent through the air about 30 feet, but being a snowy day when he landed he skid and bounced right back up a bit bruised but none the worse. The girl driver was taken to the hospital for shock.
August 11th, 2026 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy subject taken on with such levity. It sings in its childlike humor that raises above adult seriousness. The innocence of a child written in a poem where all that ends ends well. My brother in High School was struck by a girl on his way to school sent through the air about 30 feet, but being a snowy day when he landed he skid and bounced right back up a bit bruised but none the worse. The girl driver was taken to the hospital for shock.
August 11th, 2026 12:29
Gulliver\'s Cell Phone
sorenbarrett said:
A different point of view makes all the difference. Well done Gray
August 10th, 2026 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
A different point of view makes all the difference. Well done Gray
August 10th, 2026 12:51
Green Gospel
Thomas W Case said:
This is a damn good little meditation on fathers, work, and the quiet lessons we inherit without realizing it. The lawn becomes a beautiful metaphor for love—unshowy, stubborn, seasonal work that keeps something alive.
August 9th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
This is a damn good little meditation on fathers, work, and the quiet lessons we inherit without realizing it. The lawn becomes a beautiful metaphor for love—unshowy, stubborn, seasonal work that keeps something alive.
August 9th, 2026 07:51
Green Gospel
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic lesson and may be applied to many things. Poetry is such and with fertilizer and proper care it too will grow overcoming the weeds. Very Nice Gray
August 9th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poetic lesson and may be applied to many things. Poetry is such and with fertilizer and proper care it too will grow overcoming the weeds. Very Nice Gray
August 9th, 2026 04:22
A Pinch Too Much
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely recipe in words in ingredients that bring memories of warmth be it the soup or the mother or the past. Lovely
August 8th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely recipe in words in ingredients that bring memories of warmth be it the soup or the mother or the past. Lovely
August 8th, 2026 04:47
Hard Truths
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems reflection and search. Well written Gray
August 7th, 2026 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems reflection and search. Well written Gray
August 7th, 2026 11:50
Wooden Shoes
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that moved me in this poem of metaphor. Nicely done Gray
August 6th, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that moved me in this poem of metaphor. Nicely done Gray
August 6th, 2026 09:51
Breaking Like the Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of faith and belief in a higher power concentrated in a man god that was sent for all mankind. A fave my friend
August 5th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of faith and belief in a higher power concentrated in a man god that was sent for all mankind. A fave my friend
August 5th, 2026 12:02
Red Tape
sorenbarrett said:
Slow is the progress of changing policy and rules if they change at all it is usually for the worse and more loopholes and complications requiring attorneys and judges and years of precedent and interpretation. The metaphor of knotted necklaces is a good one indeed.
August 4th, 2026 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Slow is the progress of changing policy and rules if they change at all it is usually for the worse and more loopholes and complications requiring attorneys and judges and years of precedent and interpretation. The metaphor of knotted necklaces is a good one indeed.
August 4th, 2026 12:51
Each Day
sorenbarrett said:
The surprise of each day molded by the hands of the possessor. Nicely said Gray
August 3rd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The surprise of each day molded by the hands of the possessor. Nicely said Gray
August 3rd, 2026 04:01
Odysseus
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant a lovely poem that may well apply to the ancient mythical figure or equally well in metaphor to a modern day hero torn in thought and feeling. Well done Gray
August 2nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant a lovely poem that may well apply to the ancient mythical figure or equally well in metaphor to a modern day hero torn in thought and feeling. Well done Gray
August 2nd, 2026 04:25
Fluid Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perception and recognition. Wonderful imagery poetry in motion my friend
August 1st, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of perception and recognition. Wonderful imagery poetry in motion my friend
August 1st, 2026 11:43
The Smile He Borrowed
sorenbarrett said:
Here a person trapped in his role plays it as well as he can but behind the mask things are not all well and we are presented with a short transitional period of life. Well written with great metaphor and imagery. Well done
July 31st, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here a person trapped in his role plays it as well as he can but behind the mask things are not all well and we are presented with a short transitional period of life. Well written with great metaphor and imagery. Well done
July 31st, 2026 09:40
Borrowed Quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A read that justifies, something we have all done whether in this manner or in metaphor others. Well written Gray and a fave
July 30th, 2026 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
A read that justifies, something we have all done whether in this manner or in metaphor others. Well written Gray and a fave
July 30th, 2026 09:00
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