Comments received on poems by gray0328
Pseudo Intellectual
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Wonderful images and metaphors so appropriate to the title. Loved this one a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Wonderful images and metaphors so appropriate to the title. Loved this one a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 11:23
Decaf
sorenbarrett said:
I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in this poem. It speaks with the resignation of experience and its shadows fall heavy. Very nicely imaged and worded.
March 22nd, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in this poem. It speaks with the resignation of experience and its shadows fall heavy. Very nicely imaged and worded.
March 22nd, 2025 05:23
God is Love
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of love as a saving grace from fear and so it is. If one loves oneself and others as well as all nature there is no room or reason for fear. Most lovely.
March 21st, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of love as a saving grace from fear and so it is. If one loves oneself and others as well as all nature there is no room or reason for fear. Most lovely.
March 21st, 2025 13:50
give & take
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form nicely done and a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form nicely done and a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:59
the aching pedestal
sorenbarrett said:
The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of glory, fame in ones suffering. A great poem
March 19th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of glory, fame in ones suffering. A great poem
March 19th, 2025 11:06
The Artist\'s Ascent
Parisab said:
Life is the only masterpiece…thought provoking as always
March 17th, 2025 11:59
Parisab said:
Life is the only masterpiece…thought provoking as always
March 17th, 2025 11:59
The Artist\'s Ascent
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your generous feedback
March 17th, 2025 09:16
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your generous feedback
March 17th, 2025 09:16
The Artist\'s Ascent
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring out as words sooth the readers mind. Truly well done a fave
March 17th, 2025 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring out as words sooth the readers mind. Truly well done a fave
March 17th, 2025 07:08
Night Shift
sorenbarrett said:
A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well imaged
March 16th, 2025 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well imaged
March 16th, 2025 12:41
Spring Cleaning
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 10:15
the weight of fire
sorenbarrett said:
This may be about your birthday but many feel it. I love the ingenious and poetic title. The weight of wax is also a great metaphor for age. This poem was very well crafted and is a fave Happy Birthday I still have a few on ya.
March 14th, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
This may be about your birthday but many feel it. I love the ingenious and poetic title. The weight of wax is also a great metaphor for age. This poem was very well crafted and is a fave Happy Birthday I still have a few on ya.
March 14th, 2025 11:26
Overnight Temblor
sorenbarrett said:
A great description so well done in verse. Been through them and know the feel. Well done
March 13th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great description so well done in verse. Been through them and know the feel. Well done
March 13th, 2025 04:11
Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this twice to grasp it. The it in this poem makes it universal and metaphorical. The setting is magical and most beautiful, so well imaged. The last line is what finishes it so well. Everything is enough. Most lovely
March 12th, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this twice to grasp it. The it in this poem makes it universal and metaphorical. The setting is magical and most beautiful, so well imaged. The last line is what finishes it so well. Everything is enough. Most lovely
March 12th, 2025 12:17
The Divine Circle
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is connected in this world and helping the smallest is only helping ourselves.
March 11th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is connected in this world and helping the smallest is only helping ourselves.
March 11th, 2025 10:56
The Constant Flow
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow regardless and that change is continuous. The feel of the poem was like water running in a river following its course abandoned to the currents following its destiny toward the sea. A lovely write
March 10th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow regardless and that change is continuous. The feel of the poem was like water running in a river following its course abandoned to the currents following its destiny toward the sea. A lovely write
March 10th, 2025 04:50
Modern Capabilities
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. One might also say parental hands that steer large trucks through crowded streets might steer their children through moral choices, Professionals that practice health care might teach their children the benefits of proper diet and exercise, parents that practice law might teach their children to keep it. Those that are in construction should teach their children how to build a future and those that are in lawn maintenance teach their children how to cut their own lawn. A good write Gray
March 9th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. One might also say parental hands that steer large trucks through crowded streets might steer their children through moral choices, Professionals that practice health care might teach their children the benefits of proper diet and exercise, parents that practice law might teach their children to keep it. Those that are in construction should teach their children how to build a future and those that are in lawn maintenance teach their children how to cut their own lawn. A good write Gray
March 9th, 2025 04:18
The Final Hour
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
The Final Hour
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
Coffee With My Younger Self
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Coffee With My Younger Self
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Coffee With My Younger Self
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
What He Gave Me
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
Two Spirits Merging
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
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