Comments received on poems by gray0328
Embrace the Stillness
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
Late August
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem I really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.
June 20th, 2024 19:58
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem I really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.
June 20th, 2024 19:58
Evening Walk
Bloomingcereus said:
through and through a great poem. keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 18th, 2024 10:18
Bloomingcereus said:
through and through a great poem. keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 18th, 2024 10:18
A Blue Heron Stands
Mutley Ravishes said:
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15
Mutley Ravishes said:
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15
She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery
gray0328 said:
Your smile brought a smile to me. Thank You
June 13th, 2024 19:40
gray0328 said:
Your smile brought a smile to me. Thank You
June 13th, 2024 19:40
She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59
A Day in the City
peto said:
Totally agree with previous comment
Very visual
Pleasure to read
June 9th, 2024 12:34
peto said:
Totally agree with previous comment
Very visual
Pleasure to read
June 9th, 2024 12:34
A Day in the City
sorenbarrett said:
This pulls at the heartstrings and is masterfully worded. Powerful and raw.
June 9th, 2024 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
This pulls at the heartstrings and is masterfully worded. Powerful and raw.
June 9th, 2024 08:45
Please Tell Me How We Can Stop Being So Offended
aDarkerMind said:
a very clever write...
and how true things are these days of woke!
June 8th, 2024 12:15
aDarkerMind said:
a very clever write...
and how true things are these days of woke!
June 8th, 2024 12:15
Life is Like a Game of Chess
Cassie58 said:
Such a good metaphor. Really enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2024 08:47
Cassie58 said:
Such a good metaphor. Really enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2024 08:47
Life is Like a Game of Chess
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the metaphor.
June 6th, 2024 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the metaphor.
June 6th, 2024 07:33
Changing Clothes
Cassie58 said:
Nicely penned stanzas. I have to agree with the third stanza. The sun suits best. Nothing like the feeling of being clothed in sunlight. The most appropriate summer outfit. I enjoyed the read.
June 5th, 2024 11:38
Cassie58 said:
Nicely penned stanzas. I have to agree with the third stanza. The sun suits best. Nothing like the feeling of being clothed in sunlight. The most appropriate summer outfit. I enjoyed the read.
June 5th, 2024 11:38
Crevices
Cassie58 said:
A fun write with some great metaphors. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
June 4th, 2024 11:01
Cassie58 said:
A fun write with some great metaphors. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
June 4th, 2024 11:01
The Goal of Love
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony, and they loved not their lives unto the death.
May 23rd, 2024 06:27
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony, and they loved not their lives unto the death.
May 23rd, 2024 06:27
Her Pen
dandelion.drafts said:
I very much love this - especially the back-to-back lines about being like a surgeon or a thief, the imagery and possible meaning of those in relation to creating art. Absolutely gorgeous writing; thank you
May 18th, 2024 15:14
dandelion.drafts said:
I very much love this - especially the back-to-back lines about being like a surgeon or a thief, the imagery and possible meaning of those in relation to creating art. Absolutely gorgeous writing; thank you
May 18th, 2024 15:14
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