Comments received on poems by gray0328
Junk Drawer
sorenbarrett said:
It is the meaning itself that is poetic in this piece. Nostalgic is the word that comes to mind but there is more in Portuguese saudade fits better but still misses a bit and it is that bit that makes it poetically great.
November 6th, 2026 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
It is the meaning itself that is poetic in this piece. Nostalgic is the word that comes to mind but there is more in Portuguese saudade fits better but still misses a bit and it is that bit that makes it poetically great.
November 6th, 2026 11:42
Grandma\'s Recipes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely write my friend
November 5th, 2026 07:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
lovely write my friend
November 5th, 2026 07:51
Grandma\'s Recipes
sorenbarrett said:
Old recipes like sepia photos have a feel to them and are never as accurate as we would think yet if we knew they never were accurate at all varying from one making to another as grandma a cook of experience never really measured it was a handful of this a pinch of that and all from memory each batch having its own signature. Lovely
November 5th, 2026 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Old recipes like sepia photos have a feel to them and are never as accurate as we would think yet if we knew they never were accurate at all varying from one making to another as grandma a cook of experience never really measured it was a handful of this a pinch of that and all from memory each batch having its own signature. Lovely
November 5th, 2026 05:41
Yellow Walls
sorenbarrett said:
Purely poetic. I\'m sure there are many interpretations of this one but if felt so old folk to me a type of dementia of an old folk home where little is noticed and false feelings of the past still remain and every day is sunny lost in dreams of the past.
November 4th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Purely poetic. I\'m sure there are many interpretations of this one but if felt so old folk to me a type of dementia of an old folk home where little is noticed and false feelings of the past still remain and every day is sunny lost in dreams of the past.
November 4th, 2026 13:03
Beneath a Blood Moon
sorenbarrett said:
An ominous write Gray that seems to portend unsettling times. It is dark and holds a feeling of tension. Nicely written it speaks to a person\'s nerve. Well done
November 3rd, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
An ominous write Gray that seems to portend unsettling times. It is dark and holds a feeling of tension. Nicely written it speaks to a person\'s nerve. Well done
November 3rd, 2026 13:24
Where the Chewed Toys Lead
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely look at a dog that obviously thinks different than we. Oh for just a moment in their brain. Nicely done Gray
November 1st, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely look at a dog that obviously thinks different than we. Oh for just a moment in their brain. Nicely done Gray
November 1st, 2026 06:48
Between Asking and Knowing
Gelyn said:
Such a beautiful reflection on the two paths of connecting with the Divine. Prayer gives voice to the longings of the soul, while meditation teaches the heart to listen beyond words. One reaches out in faith, the other embraces the silence. Both remind us that sometimes we find answers not only in what we ask, but also in the stillness where we learn to listen. Truly profound and soul stirring...
Gel
November 1st, 2026 01:50
Gelyn said:
Such a beautiful reflection on the two paths of connecting with the Divine. Prayer gives voice to the longings of the soul, while meditation teaches the heart to listen beyond words. One reaches out in faith, the other embraces the silence. Both remind us that sometimes we find answers not only in what we ask, but also in the stillness where we learn to listen. Truly profound and soul stirring...
Gel
November 1st, 2026 01:50
Between Asking and Knowing
ginny jayne said:
That is a lovely poem very intriguing, wanting to hear more.
October 31st, 2026 06:20
ginny jayne said:
That is a lovely poem very intriguing, wanting to hear more.
October 31st, 2026 06:20
Between Asking and Knowing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most calming piece much enjoyed
October 31st, 2026 05:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most calming piece much enjoyed
October 31st, 2026 05:10
Between Asking and Knowing
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the beauty of the imagery that this one gets a fave Gray
October 31st, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the beauty of the imagery that this one gets a fave Gray
October 31st, 2026 04:46
River Tyrant
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric what risks we face each day and little knowing whether we will escape or not so we pray.
October 30th, 2026 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric what risks we face each day and little knowing whether we will escape or not so we pray.
October 30th, 2026 12:47
A Fragile Secret
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking before one leaps is an old advice. Nicely put into this poetic verse
October 28th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking before one leaps is an old advice. Nicely put into this poetic verse
October 28th, 2026 11:25
Walls
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write my friend that is symbolic and surreal in a blend with the reality of its imagery. Well done
October 27th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write my friend that is symbolic and surreal in a blend with the reality of its imagery. Well done
October 27th, 2026 09:03
Unfiltered Confession
sorenbarrett said:
Reading this I thought of the movie African Queen when Humphry Bogart\'s character sits for proper tea and his stomach starts to uncontrollably rumble. Funny but too improper to laugh. He did what I would do addressed it directly as opposed to try to hide it. Nice write Gray
October 26th, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
Reading this I thought of the movie African Queen when Humphry Bogart\'s character sits for proper tea and his stomach starts to uncontrollably rumble. Funny but too improper to laugh. He did what I would do addressed it directly as opposed to try to hide it. Nice write Gray
October 26th, 2026 13:33
At Sixteen
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
As we slow and age our youth has a certain daring that we didnt notice so much at the time
October 25th, 2026 10:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
As we slow and age our youth has a certain daring that we didnt notice so much at the time
October 25th, 2026 10:00
Burnout
Novaselic said:
This has such a powerful message in a way, I enjoyed it a lot.
October 24th, 2026 13:46
Novaselic said:
This has such a powerful message in a way, I enjoyed it a lot.
October 24th, 2026 13:46
Burnout
sorenbarrett said:
\"concrete promises crumbling to sand\" That line takes it for me. A lovely write Gray
October 24th, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
\"concrete promises crumbling to sand\" That line takes it for me. A lovely write Gray
October 24th, 2026 11:43
A Compliment vs Flattery
Novaselic said:
Truer words have never been spoken.
October 23rd, 2026 09:57
Novaselic said:
Truer words have never been spoken.
October 23rd, 2026 09:57
A Compliment vs Flattery
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully thoughtful
October 23rd, 2026 09:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully thoughtful
October 23rd, 2026 09:44
Quiet Rustling
sorenbarrett said:
It is the thought so beautifully expressed in metaphor that gets the fave Gray. The poem itself is quiet and surrendering its meaning settling like the leaves.
October 22nd, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
It is the thought so beautifully expressed in metaphor that gets the fave Gray. The poem itself is quiet and surrendering its meaning settling like the leaves.
October 22nd, 2026 07:32
Humility
sorenbarrett said:
True it is for those that have the strength and grit to do it and so it should be for all. Nicely written my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
True it is for those that have the strength and grit to do it and so it should be for all. Nicely written my friend.
October 21st, 2026 11:49
Fairways and Second Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Not in golf for I don\'t play but in many things I feel this way Gray. A good write my friend.
October 20th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
Not in golf for I don\'t play but in many things I feel this way Gray. A good write my friend.
October 20th, 2026 09:59
Her Wink
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gem. A painting of a joke where the angle of laughter mete a straight face. A fave my friend
October 19th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gem. A painting of a joke where the angle of laughter mete a straight face. A fave my friend
October 19th, 2026 13:52
Bird Ballet
sorenbarrett said:
It is you last line in this magnificent poem of nature that captured me. \"freedom holds no footprints, only flight.\" What a wonderful metaphor.
October 18th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is you last line in this magnificent poem of nature that captured me. \"freedom holds no footprints, only flight.\" What a wonderful metaphor.
October 18th, 2026 09:16
Fur and Judgement
sorenbarrett said:
There is a reason that the Egyptians worshiped cats and that seems evident in this write. Nicely worded and paced in this poem the cat rules supreme.
October 17th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a reason that the Egyptians worshiped cats and that seems evident in this write. Nicely worded and paced in this poem the cat rules supreme.
October 17th, 2026 05:49
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