Comments received on poems by gray0328
dark matter
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
dark matter
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
dark matter
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
the art of digging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
the art of digging
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
the bipolar ride
James Michael said:
The last stanza ties this one together succinctly. The shift between brutal mood swings is torturous. My experience I describe as a roller coaster with no seatbelt. Medication can be frowned upon. For my family it has been a God-send.
June 30th, 2025 21:32
James Michael said:
The last stanza ties this one together succinctly. The shift between brutal mood swings is torturous. My experience I describe as a roller coaster with no seatbelt. Medication can be frowned upon. For my family it has been a God-send.
June 30th, 2025 21:32
the bipolar ride
Doggerel Dave said:
An honest and self revelatory write.
I\'ve heard patients argue that while meds keep them more or less on the straight and narrow, they can hanker for the excitement of the highs. I\'m thankful it was not within the ambit of my pay grade to make medical decisions.
June 30th, 2025 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
An honest and self revelatory write.
I\'ve heard patients argue that while meds keep them more or less on the straight and narrow, they can hanker for the excitement of the highs. I\'m thankful it was not within the ambit of my pay grade to make medical decisions.
June 30th, 2025 06:53
the bipolar ride
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about a condition that many suffer from and struggle to understand, so nicely expressed, wonderful write
June 30th, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about a condition that many suffer from and struggle to understand, so nicely expressed, wonderful write
June 30th, 2025 06:23
the bipolar ride
sorenbarrett said:
Gray such a poetic description in metaphor. Brilliant!! I have worked with bipolar people for many years and have never heard a better description of what it is like. A definite fave
June 30th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Gray such a poetic description in metaphor. Brilliant!! I have worked with bipolar people for many years and have never heard a better description of what it is like. A definite fave
June 30th, 2025 04:38
alive again
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of faith and belief, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:34
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of faith and belief, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:34
alive again
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this to me is a poem of dedication and commitment. A poem of faith and belief. Very nicely said
June 29th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this to me is a poem of dedication and commitment. A poem of faith and belief. Very nicely said
June 29th, 2025 11:48
The Fruits of the Spirit
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautifully written piece of poetry, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:03
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautifully written piece of poetry, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:03
The Fruits of the Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray to say anything more would be to ruin it. A fave
June 27th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray to say anything more would be to ruin it. A fave
June 27th, 2025 16:14
Rush of Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines here Gray lines the feed into each other revealing a picture of a present day life that is full of incongruities and conflicts that often go unnoticed and taken for granted. Well written and a fave
June 26th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines here Gray lines the feed into each other revealing a picture of a present day life that is full of incongruities and conflicts that often go unnoticed and taken for granted. Well written and a fave
June 26th, 2025 05:42
The Art of Subtlety
Poetic Licence said:
Such wonderful advice so often ignored, or maybe some people just don\'t understand how to get a balance, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 12:15
Poetic Licence said:
Such wonderful advice so often ignored, or maybe some people just don\'t understand how to get a balance, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 12:15
The Art of Subtlety
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice Gray that is too often ignored or worse yet never learned. Nicely written
June 25th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice Gray that is too often ignored or worse yet never learned. Nicely written
June 25th, 2025 12:09
The Barking Symphony
sorenbarrett said:
In tune and harmony with best friend and it serves as a great metaphor. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
In tune and harmony with best friend and it serves as a great metaphor. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 09:53
the root of peace
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem about humility and indeed it speaks the truth. Humility is only for the strong that are strong enough to know that they are not all there is in this world that don\'t have to worry about protecting themselves and instead protect others. A lovely write and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem about humility and indeed it speaks the truth. Humility is only for the strong that are strong enough to know that they are not all there is in this world that don\'t have to worry about protecting themselves and instead protect others. A lovely write and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 13:24
midsummer\'s night
sorenbarrett said:
Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to. Nicely written Gray
June 22nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to. Nicely written Gray
June 22nd, 2025 11:29
1964 Fairlane
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a poem, days I remember and feelings resurrected. A wonderful write.
June 21st, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a poem, days I remember and feelings resurrected. A wonderful write.
June 21st, 2025 12:59
Salty Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor and deep as well salt being on of the basic primitive elements and a universal need.
June 20th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor and deep as well salt being on of the basic primitive elements and a universal need.
June 20th, 2025 14:12
prisoners of the gilded world
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth a body of truth in this poem that shines through and like clothing that reveals a sirens charms draws attention. Well done Gray
June 19th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth a body of truth in this poem that shines through and like clothing that reveals a sirens charms draws attention. Well done Gray
June 19th, 2025 13:11
we see with our ears
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most interesting as a thought. I have wondered what colors smelled like and the taste of music. Loved it Gray
June 18th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most interesting as a thought. I have wondered what colors smelled like and the taste of music. Loved it Gray
June 18th, 2025 11:33
wild horses on asphalt
Doggerel Dave said:
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. Really neat but strong.
PS: Is that a form with a name?
June 16th, 2025 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. Really neat but strong.
PS: Is that a form with a name?
June 16th, 2025 18:08
wild horses on asphalt
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read of having the freedom of the open highway in a wonderful car, enjoyed
June 16th, 2025 16:19
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read of having the freedom of the open highway in a wonderful car, enjoyed
June 16th, 2025 16:19
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