Comments received on poems by gray0328
Every Jagged Sip
Syd said:
In the past I\'ve struggled with sobriety. Alcoholism runs in my family also. I enjoyed this relatable write.
- Syd
May 2nd, 2026 08:58
Syd said:
In the past I\'ve struggled with sobriety. Alcoholism runs in my family also. I enjoyed this relatable write.
- Syd
May 2nd, 2026 08:58
Every Jagged Sip
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so powerful in its description and a fav
May 2nd, 2026 08:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so powerful in its description and a fav
May 2nd, 2026 08:17
Every Jagged Sip
Katie B. said:
Wow, this is a heartbreaking story of what I\'m gathering to be addiction. Powerful, moving and heavy. Takes a great deal of self to share if this is indeed your story. I will just say it resonates with me.
May 2nd, 2026 07:46
Katie B. said:
Wow, this is a heartbreaking story of what I\'m gathering to be addiction. Powerful, moving and heavy. Takes a great deal of self to share if this is indeed your story. I will just say it resonates with me.
May 2nd, 2026 07:46
Every Jagged Sip
Friendship said:
A strong poem. Your poem reflects on the intimate and painful experiences shared between the poet and a woman battling addiction.
May 2nd, 2026 06:46
Friendship said:
A strong poem. Your poem reflects on the intimate and painful experiences shared between the poet and a woman battling addiction.
May 2nd, 2026 06:46
Every Jagged Sip
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your lines have grown in their poetic strength and I love them. A fave ,my friend
May 2nd, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your lines have grown in their poetic strength and I love them. A fave ,my friend
May 2nd, 2026 04:52
Behind the Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems have grown stronger over time and this one is a great one. So nicely worded with great pairings of meaning in its verses. Most poetic my friend and a fave
May 1st, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems have grown stronger over time and this one is a great one. So nicely worded with great pairings of meaning in its verses. Most poetic my friend and a fave
May 1st, 2026 16:27
Behind the Noise
Katie B. said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Like \"There\'s courage in the quiet we avoid.\" Some people think something needs to be said at all times during a conversation. Me, I covet silence.
May 1st, 2026 13:39
Katie B. said:
I really enjoyed this poem. Like \"There\'s courage in the quiet we avoid.\" Some people think something needs to be said at all times during a conversation. Me, I covet silence.
May 1st, 2026 13:39
Behind the Noise
Bianitalisa said:
This is so good. The \"who first carved a whistle from air, unwilling to surrender to stillness?\" is my favorite part💜
May 1st, 2026 09:22
Bianitalisa said:
This is so good. The \"who first carved a whistle from air, unwilling to surrender to stillness?\" is my favorite part💜
May 1st, 2026 09:22
Cashmere Couture
Doggerel Dave said:
Influencer (I think that\'s what they are called...)?
May 1st, 2026 00:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Influencer (I think that\'s what they are called...)?
May 1st, 2026 00:15
Cashmere Couture
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray well imaged and with a strong message.
April 30th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray well imaged and with a strong message.
April 30th, 2026 12:00
Leaving Breadcrumbs
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful piece of recollections. Very nicely written.
April 29th, 2026 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful piece of recollections. Very nicely written.
April 29th, 2026 17:14
Leaving Breadcrumbs
Doggerel Dave said:
This world a simulation....? My minder keeps a gentle eye...
I felt that a little.
April 29th, 2026 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
This world a simulation....? My minder keeps a gentle eye...
I felt that a little.
April 29th, 2026 17:05
The Kingdom Within
sorenbarrett said:
It is in being like a child that we become perfect. Perfect and trust perfect in being open minded, perfect in innocence and love. Very nicely said Grey
April 28th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is in being like a child that we become perfect. Perfect and trust perfect in being open minded, perfect in innocence and love. Very nicely said Grey
April 28th, 2026 14:38
The Kingdom Within
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the innate purity and openness of a child\'s heart, emphasizing the importance of returning to a state of innocence, love, and forgiveness.
April 28th, 2026 09:52
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the innate purity and openness of a child\'s heart, emphasizing the importance of returning to a state of innocence, love, and forgiveness.
April 28th, 2026 09:52
The Evidence of Living
Katie B. said:
I love what this message says about peoples stuff and their organization. Unique perspective.
April 27th, 2026 13:15
Katie B. said:
I love what this message says about peoples stuff and their organization. Unique perspective.
April 27th, 2026 13:15
The Evidence of Living
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle, a detective story, a poetic write where metaphor meets reality. Nicely done
April 27th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle, a detective story, a poetic write where metaphor meets reality. Nicely done
April 27th, 2026 05:16
The Evidence of Living
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, deep and meaningful
April 27th, 2026 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, deep and meaningful
April 27th, 2026 04:16
Buried Under Bureaucratic Rubble
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Bogged down beneath bureaucratic bullshit? Never ! Ignore the buggers or get legal advice. Great write about something which gives me a nervous rash from time to time.
April 26th, 2026 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Bogged down beneath bureaucratic bullshit? Never ! Ignore the buggers or get legal advice. Great write about something which gives me a nervous rash from time to time.
April 26th, 2026 18:06
Buried Under Bureaucratic Rubble
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! This one tears the agenda off the docket and bleeds rage on the floor. A most powerful declaration of poetic protest against bureaucracy. Well written and a fave my friend
April 26th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! This one tears the agenda off the docket and bleeds rage on the floor. A most powerful declaration of poetic protest against bureaucracy. Well written and a fave my friend
April 26th, 2026 10:54
Dating App
sorenbarrett said:
Your last six lines Gray are very powerful and gripping and the reason for my fave
April 25th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Your last six lines Gray are very powerful and gripping and the reason for my fave
April 25th, 2026 10:32
The Journalist
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no more honourable position for a journalist than that of taking truth to power, sometimes with costs; but possibly not as high by virtue of the profession as a whistleblower and others of that ilk.
I enjoyed the force of the message.
April 24th, 2026 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no more honourable position for a journalist than that of taking truth to power, sometimes with costs; but possibly not as high by virtue of the profession as a whistleblower and others of that ilk.
I enjoyed the force of the message.
April 24th, 2026 21:46
The Journalist
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
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