Comments received on poems by gray0328
Tackle Box
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and metaphors my friend. There is sadness in the bait box and hope on the line. Watch the bobber he will signal you.
August 31st, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and metaphors my friend. There is sadness in the bait box and hope on the line. Watch the bobber he will signal you.
August 31st, 2026 12:13
My Father
sorenbarrett said:
My condolences my friend I know that feeling well having lost mine when he was 89.
August 29th, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
My condolences my friend I know that feeling well having lost mine when he was 89.
August 29th, 2026 11:26
My Father
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
My deepest condolences my friend, I lost my father when he was 47, all these years later not one day passes without thinking of him
August 29th, 2026 10:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
My deepest condolences my friend, I lost my father when he was 47, all these years later not one day passes without thinking of him
August 29th, 2026 10:16
Hardened Places
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A lovely write Gray that captures the essence of forgiveness. A fave my friend
August 28th, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A lovely write Gray that captures the essence of forgiveness. A fave my friend
August 28th, 2026 08:18
Not a Dress Rehearsal
Doggerel Dave said:
Getting it all worked out ahead of time? I can relate to that - a habit. I want more spontaneity.
Well stated advice I need........ but just a wee bit of thought before I walk into that meeting?
August 27th, 2026 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Getting it all worked out ahead of time? I can relate to that - a habit. I want more spontaneity.
Well stated advice I need........ but just a wee bit of thought before I walk into that meeting?
August 27th, 2026 16:58
Not a Dress Rehearsal
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of staying in the moment and living there not in the past or the future. Well done Gray
August 27th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of staying in the moment and living there not in the past or the future. Well done Gray
August 27th, 2026 09:43
They Built a Fort
sorenbarrett said:
This is nostalgic to me. When between the age of ten and fourteen I and my friends built a tree house that became a club house at the field at the end of the street. It was two stories with a deck on the top of the second floor, built of stolen construction material we kept our playboy magazines there as well as other prohibited items. Nicely written Gray
August 26th, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This is nostalgic to me. When between the age of ten and fourteen I and my friends built a tree house that became a club house at the field at the end of the street. It was two stories with a deck on the top of the second floor, built of stolen construction material we kept our playboy magazines there as well as other prohibited items. Nicely written Gray
August 26th, 2026 11:27
Two Paths
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Gray we all let such carve our trail but many times turning around we see no trail behind us. A well written piece my friend
August 25th, 2026 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Gray we all let such carve our trail but many times turning around we see no trail behind us. A well written piece my friend
August 25th, 2026 10:45
Quite Hands
sorenbarrett said:
What power in these words and even more in the message. A lovely write that merits more ears and hearts. A fave my friend
August 23rd, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
What power in these words and even more in the message. A lovely write that merits more ears and hearts. A fave my friend
August 23rd, 2026 04:31
Between My Thumbs
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the digital world, good write
August 22nd, 2026 06:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the digital world, good write
August 22nd, 2026 06:51
Understanding Habits
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful piece, rich in deepness
August 22nd, 2026 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful piece, rich in deepness
August 22nd, 2026 04:34
Between My Thumbs
sorenbarrett said:
The distance of an electronic world where closeness is measured in emojis
August 22nd, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
The distance of an electronic world where closeness is measured in emojis
August 22nd, 2026 04:10
Understanding Habits
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deep into what it is to understand and to know. Well written Gray
August 21st, 2026 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deep into what it is to understand and to know. Well written Gray
August 21st, 2026 10:53
Chasing the White Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray so nicely imaged and worded.
August 19th, 2026 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray so nicely imaged and worded.
August 19th, 2026 13:50
Kristen\'s Junk Drawer
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous how much we can tell of a person by what is in their drawer. Nicely done Gray
August 18th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous how much we can tell of a person by what is in their drawer. Nicely done Gray
August 18th, 2026 09:56
New Orleans Heat
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem filled with images of wetness and heat with a sense of paralysis but the finish of singing insects and there is nothing that New Orleans is known for more than its jaz and music. Well written Gray
August 17th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem filled with images of wetness and heat with a sense of paralysis but the finish of singing insects and there is nothing that New Orleans is known for more than its jaz and music. Well written Gray
August 17th, 2026 04:45
Highchair Adventures
sorenbarrett said:
I could not but give a fave to this wonderful description of a child in extasy of feeding. Painted so well I could see and hear it. I have had children of my own and grandchildren that I have seen this in and it brings joy to picture it retold.
August 16th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I could not but give a fave to this wonderful description of a child in extasy of feeding. Painted so well I could see and hear it. I have had children of my own and grandchildren that I have seen this in and it brings joy to picture it retold.
August 16th, 2026 04:47
Highchair Adventures
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write
August 16th, 2026 04:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most descriptive write
August 16th, 2026 04:19
Keeping the Wolves Away
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh to implement your advice would regrettably require more self control than I posess. Doesn\'t in any way negate its validity - only highlights my lack of restraint under fire.
August 15th, 2026 21:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh to implement your advice would regrettably require more self control than I posess. Doesn\'t in any way negate its validity - only highlights my lack of restraint under fire.
August 15th, 2026 21:52
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