Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Proof of Mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the wording of this surreal poem that dives deep into the psyche spreading its existential wings
December 15th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the wording of this surreal poem that dives deep into the psyche spreading its existential wings
December 15th, 2025 12:09
Tied to the Mast
Alan R said:
So here we are, facing our storms—
not weaker, no, just differently tested
Beautiful lines!!!
December 14th, 2025 07:12
Alan R said:
So here we are, facing our storms—
not weaker, no, just differently tested
Beautiful lines!!!
December 14th, 2025 07:12
Tied to the Mast
sorenbarrett said:
Blended with mythology this poem speaks of reality and to what anchor we choose to tie. A lovely poem Gray full of wisdom and advice. A fave
December 14th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Blended with mythology this poem speaks of reality and to what anchor we choose to tie. A lovely poem Gray full of wisdom and advice. A fave
December 14th, 2025 05:22
Tied to the Mast
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great read, thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2025 05:06
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great read, thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2025 05:06
Glass Gloves
sorenbarrett said:
Clothed in fragile transparency this poem\'s meaning remains obscure. I can not imagine the difficulty of using glass gloves inflexible and slippery as well. The threat of cutting oneself should breakage occur. Nicely written Gray
December 13th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Clothed in fragile transparency this poem\'s meaning remains obscure. I can not imagine the difficulty of using glass gloves inflexible and slippery as well. The threat of cutting oneself should breakage occur. Nicely written Gray
December 13th, 2025 04:59
Wanting More
NinjaGirl said:
This is so interesting it really makes me think. Especially the last line: \"It\'s the reaching that makes us alive.\" I think maybe that\'s why people continue to scroll on their phones, hoping to find more and more of what was promised, or why the drinker gets drunk again, it\'s not being drunk that they enjoy but the promise of not having to think anymore. Well done!
December 12th, 2025 14:03
NinjaGirl said:
This is so interesting it really makes me think. Especially the last line: \"It\'s the reaching that makes us alive.\" I think maybe that\'s why people continue to scroll on their phones, hoping to find more and more of what was promised, or why the drinker gets drunk again, it\'s not being drunk that they enjoy but the promise of not having to think anymore. Well done!
December 12th, 2025 14:03
Wanting More
sorenbarrett said:
Neither good or bad on its own ambition can be guided by noble or nefarious motivation. A good read
December 12th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
Neither good or bad on its own ambition can be guided by noble or nefarious motivation. A good read
December 12th, 2025 11:06
Man\'s Infinite Appetite
Doggerel Dave said:
Electronic babel and an infinite appetite for this.. Infinite stupidity along the way. I always enjoy a good dose of reality - many thanks.
December 11th, 2025 16:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Electronic babel and an infinite appetite for this.. Infinite stupidity along the way. I always enjoy a good dose of reality - many thanks.
December 11th, 2025 16:36
Man\'s Infinite Appetite
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Gray that seems digital in so ways speaking of pixels and screens. I seems to relate to communication of information and its electronic component. Nicely done Gray
December 11th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Gray that seems digital in so ways speaking of pixels and screens. I seems to relate to communication of information and its electronic component. Nicely done Gray
December 11th, 2025 13:52
We Build Fragile Things
Katie B. said:
On point about shielding our kids. Extremely well written. Thanks for sharing gray.
December 10th, 2025 14:33
Katie B. said:
On point about shielding our kids. Extremely well written. Thanks for sharing gray.
December 10th, 2025 14:33
We Build Fragile Things
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I am very much enjoying the poetic terminology that you’ve been using lately Gray, well written
December 10th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I am very much enjoying the poetic terminology that you’ve been using lately Gray, well written
December 10th, 2025 13:40
Dopamine Indulgence
Doggerel Dave said:
Addictions (of so many kinds) do have their rewards short term....
December 10th, 2025 01:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Addictions (of so many kinds) do have their rewards short term....
December 10th, 2025 01:22
Dopamine Indulgence
sorenbarrett said:
This can be taken more than one way Gray. The first way I took it was age and its ravages. Time can be a cruel master. A poem well written.
December 9th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
This can be taken more than one way Gray. The first way I took it was age and its ravages. Time can be a cruel master. A poem well written.
December 9th, 2025 11:41
Dopamine Indulgence
Katie B. said:
Enjoyed your poem. Well written, nice share!
December 9th, 2025 11:26
Katie B. said:
Enjoyed your poem. Well written, nice share!
December 9th, 2025 11:26
Big Black Trash Bags
Paul Bell said:
It seems like even though the trash is in the bag, it refuses to go in the bin.
We all seem to carry those black bags of trash that find themselves back in the house like an unwanted guest.
December 8th, 2025 14:59
Paul Bell said:
It seems like even though the trash is in the bag, it refuses to go in the bin.
We all seem to carry those black bags of trash that find themselves back in the house like an unwanted guest.
December 8th, 2025 14:59
Big Black Trash Bags
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This one is a visible verbal vestige violating vintage vermin. Don\'t know where that one came from but those black trash bags cast an image of a trass heap or land fill. So much trash of a life goes in those bags Gray. Loved the poem
December 8th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This one is a visible verbal vestige violating vintage vermin. Don\'t know where that one came from but those black trash bags cast an image of a trass heap or land fill. So much trash of a life goes in those bags Gray. Loved the poem
December 8th, 2025 10:23
The Quite Between the Words
sorenbarrett said:
\"wars begin long before words\" what a profound statement that rings so true and echoes in the mind long after the poem is read. Well said Gray
December 7th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
\"wars begin long before words\" what a profound statement that rings so true and echoes in the mind long after the poem is read. Well said Gray
December 7th, 2025 13:33
The Second Arrow
sorenbarrett said:
Learn from experience everyone makes a mistake but to make the same mistake twice is your own fault. Good write Gray
December 6th, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Learn from experience everyone makes a mistake but to make the same mistake twice is your own fault. Good write Gray
December 6th, 2025 13:35
Stop Signs
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic prayer Gray and although I don\'t pray this could well become a mantra for me. Loved it masterful and a fave
December 5th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic prayer Gray and although I don\'t pray this could well become a mantra for me. Loved it masterful and a fave
December 5th, 2025 11:05
Highway Robbery
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in its metaphor this poem speaks of theft not only literal but metaphorical. Very well written Gray this is a fave
December 4th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in its metaphor this poem speaks of theft not only literal but metaphorical. Very well written Gray this is a fave
December 4th, 2025 05:46
Highway Robbery
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Very well written. Captures the reader\'s attention immediately. True story?
December 4th, 2025 05:22
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Very well written. Captures the reader\'s attention immediately. True story?
December 4th, 2025 05:22
Small Things, Great Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about every day things and how they too are important. We need to maintain them just as much as the bigger things. Nicely written Gray
December 3rd, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be about every day things and how they too are important. We need to maintain them just as much as the bigger things. Nicely written Gray
December 3rd, 2025 12:10
If I Let it Work
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts out with uncertainty and ends in hope. Nicely done Gray
December 2nd, 2025 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts out with uncertainty and ends in hope. Nicely done Gray
December 2nd, 2025 20:48
Bus Stop
Katie B. said:
Beautiful walk down memory lane. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing!!
November 30th, 2025 09:54
Katie B. said:
Beautiful walk down memory lane. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing!!
November 30th, 2025 09:54
« Return to the profile of gray0328
