Comments received on poems by gray0328
Echo in the Wires
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
The creation of the machine and its take over. Well done
September 16th, 2026 12:42
Echo in the Wires
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Friendship said:
Nicely written. I was thinking about you this morning. I was wondering how you\'re doing since the passing of your dad. I hope You\'re doing well, my friend.🙏❤️🙏
September 16th, 2026 11:46
Echo in the Wires
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
FrasMac said:
That\'s a fine comment on AI and the potential negatives of it. Good writing, easy to read because it flows without flaw.
September 16th, 2026 11:14
The Cowboy They Couldn\'t Tame
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A tale told of a strategist and senator of old. Well written my friend.
September 15th, 2026 11:03
Groceries
sorenbarrett said:
A journey we have all taken and feels like each step is not one closer to the counter but one closer to disaster. The bite, the possible tearing of the plastic and the question of what will survive. A tense and great write. I will not venture the metaphor here for it strikes too close to home.
September 14th, 2026 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A journey we have all taken and feels like each step is not one closer to the counter but one closer to disaster. The bite, the possible tearing of the plastic and the question of what will survive. A tense and great write. I will not venture the metaphor here for it strikes too close to home.
September 14th, 2026 10:51
The Pulse Beneath the City
Doggerel Dave said:
When I realised your poem wasn\'t about rats, I settled down and as I\'ve travelled on a number of city\'s (Including NYC) underground/subways, got into the swing and above all the atmosphere. Had a safe ride, thanks.
September 13th, 2026 17:03
Doggerel Dave said:
When I realised your poem wasn\'t about rats, I settled down and as I\'ve travelled on a number of city\'s (Including NYC) underground/subways, got into the swing and above all the atmosphere. Had a safe ride, thanks.
September 13th, 2026 17:03
The Pulse Beneath the City
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in the city and all its turmoil I feel it as I read it. Nicely done Gray
September 13th, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in the city and all its turmoil I feel it as I read it. Nicely done Gray
September 13th, 2026 05:27
Lessons Learned From an Ostrich
sorenbarrett said:
Now if this is not a metaphor for facing fear I don\'t know what is. A good write my friend.
September 12th, 2026 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Now if this is not a metaphor for facing fear I don\'t know what is. A good write my friend.
September 12th, 2026 11:18
The Wisdom of Wax
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is different for you Gray did you write Gray\'s anatomy? Oh got ya its a metaphor. Why do we poke and prod at what nature has designed. A very good one my friend.
September 11th, 2026 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is different for you Gray did you write Gray\'s anatomy? Oh got ya its a metaphor. Why do we poke and prod at what nature has designed. A very good one my friend.
September 11th, 2026 10:46
Hoodoo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write my friend, much enjoyed
September 10th, 2026 06:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write my friend, much enjoyed
September 10th, 2026 06:36
Hoodoo
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me represents that power of association or belief or superstition and nature itself all wrapped up in a ritual. Well done my friend.
September 10th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me represents that power of association or belief or superstition and nature itself all wrapped up in a ritual. Well done my friend.
September 10th, 2026 04:19
Roadtrip
Cheeky Missy said:
Gorgeous. Sweetly rendered with a wealth of details and excellent imagery, its carefree poignancy waltzes. Thank you for sharing. I love it.
September 9th, 2026 13:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Gorgeous. Sweetly rendered with a wealth of details and excellent imagery, its carefree poignancy waltzes. Thank you for sharing. I love it.
September 9th, 2026 13:48
Roadtrip
sorenbarrett said:
In the process of this trip one must focus for the turns in the road well done
September 9th, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
In the process of this trip one must focus for the turns in the road well done
September 9th, 2026 10:36
What You Could Be
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am not religious but a powerful write my friend
September 8th, 2026 09:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am not religious but a powerful write my friend
September 8th, 2026 09:52
What You Could Be
sorenbarrett said:
Although not religious this is a most powerful message that all need to take to heart. Lovely wording make this a fave Gray
September 8th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Although not religious this is a most powerful message that all need to take to heart. Lovely wording make this a fave Gray
September 8th, 2026 09:45
A Blueprint For Joy
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge grows and as it does so does doubt the faults in the rock of wisdom laid out in pages some open others closed. Some flutter in the breeze shaking memories and creating a landscape tumultuous and hazardous. Well written my friend
September 7th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge grows and as it does so does doubt the faults in the rock of wisdom laid out in pages some open others closed. Some flutter in the breeze shaking memories and creating a landscape tumultuous and hazardous. Well written my friend
September 7th, 2026 14:42
The Wind Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
Unfinished stories how sad that is but death come early for some and lack of courage to others. Well done Gray
September 6th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Unfinished stories how sad that is but death come early for some and lack of courage to others. Well done Gray
September 6th, 2026 11:23
Tackle Box
arqios said:
This is very touching and relatable. I have a cousin who is no longer with us that had a much-beloved tackle box. It\'s physical presence, the actions they entail and the memories they pull up are quite potent. Thoroughly moving poem, Gray. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:59
arqios said:
This is very touching and relatable. I have a cousin who is no longer with us that had a much-beloved tackle box. It\'s physical presence, the actions they entail and the memories they pull up are quite potent. Thoroughly moving poem, Gray. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:59
The Golden Drum Major
sorenbarrett said:
Here a tribute and sense of pride in a dog one owns. Nicely worded with great images my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Here a tribute and sense of pride in a dog one owns. Nicely worded with great images my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:28
How Do I Love
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely love poem. You have done well what is most difficult taken a love poem and made it not seem trite. Most images are overused and here they fall fresh. Nicely done Gray
September 4th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely love poem. You have done well what is most difficult taken a love poem and made it not seem trite. Most images are overused and here they fall fresh. Nicely done Gray
September 4th, 2026 11:36
Items That Never Sell at a Garage Sale
Norman Flagtea said:
True art is never complete, perfect, flawless. Something is missing. The same holds true for life in general. Perfection is dead, imperfection is loveable and humane.
Thanx for your wonderful poem!
September 3rd, 2026 15:01
Norman Flagtea said:
True art is never complete, perfect, flawless. Something is missing. The same holds true for life in general. Perfection is dead, imperfection is loveable and humane.
Thanx for your wonderful poem!
September 3rd, 2026 15:01
Flickering Glow
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful atmosphere is painted in this write, romantic in every respect of the word. A fave Gray
September 3rd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful atmosphere is painted in this write, romantic in every respect of the word. A fave Gray
September 3rd, 2026 09:33
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