Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Sound of Certainty
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
Miss Mary, Ticket Taker
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
The Poet\'s Cafe
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
The Poet\'s Cafe
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
Vlad, the Impaler
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
Vlad, the Impaler
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
To Cradle Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
Peanut, the Chicken
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
Farewell Leaf
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
Farewell Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a small feeling of sadness. Very nicely worded.
November 12th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a small feeling of sadness. Very nicely worded.
November 12th, 2024 14:38
Fire in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
At the Edge of the Lagoon
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
The Strength of a Redwood Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
At the Edge of the Lagoon
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
Mr. Ball\'s Bouncing Curriculum
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
Renegade Honey Bee
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
Flannel Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
Misunderstanding
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Misunderstanding
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
Woodstock Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Woodstock Summer
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
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