Comments received on poems by gray0328
Cashmere Couture
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray well imaged and with a strong message.
April 30th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray well imaged and with a strong message.
April 30th, 2026 12:00
Leaving Breadcrumbs
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful piece of recollections. Very nicely written.
April 29th, 2026 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful piece of recollections. Very nicely written.
April 29th, 2026 17:14
Leaving Breadcrumbs
Doggerel Dave said:
This world a simulation....? My minder keeps a gentle eye...
I felt that a little.
April 29th, 2026 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
This world a simulation....? My minder keeps a gentle eye...
I felt that a little.
April 29th, 2026 17:05
The Kingdom Within
sorenbarrett said:
It is in being like a child that we become perfect. Perfect and trust perfect in being open minded, perfect in innocence and love. Very nicely said Grey
April 28th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is in being like a child that we become perfect. Perfect and trust perfect in being open minded, perfect in innocence and love. Very nicely said Grey
April 28th, 2026 14:38
The Kingdom Within
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the innate purity and openness of a child\'s heart, emphasizing the importance of returning to a state of innocence, love, and forgiveness.
April 28th, 2026 09:52
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem revolves around the innate purity and openness of a child\'s heart, emphasizing the importance of returning to a state of innocence, love, and forgiveness.
April 28th, 2026 09:52
The Evidence of Living
Katie B. said:
I love what this message says about peoples stuff and their organization. Unique perspective.
April 27th, 2026 13:15
Katie B. said:
I love what this message says about peoples stuff and their organization. Unique perspective.
April 27th, 2026 13:15
The Evidence of Living
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle, a detective story, a poetic write where metaphor meets reality. Nicely done
April 27th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle, a detective story, a poetic write where metaphor meets reality. Nicely done
April 27th, 2026 05:16
The Evidence of Living
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, deep and meaningful
April 27th, 2026 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write my friend, deep and meaningful
April 27th, 2026 04:16
Buried Under Bureaucratic Rubble
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Bogged down beneath bureaucratic bullshit? Never ! Ignore the buggers or get legal advice. Great write about something which gives me a nervous rash from time to time.
April 26th, 2026 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Bogged down beneath bureaucratic bullshit? Never ! Ignore the buggers or get legal advice. Great write about something which gives me a nervous rash from time to time.
April 26th, 2026 18:06
Buried Under Bureaucratic Rubble
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! This one tears the agenda off the docket and bleeds rage on the floor. A most powerful declaration of poetic protest against bureaucracy. Well written and a fave my friend
April 26th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! This one tears the agenda off the docket and bleeds rage on the floor. A most powerful declaration of poetic protest against bureaucracy. Well written and a fave my friend
April 26th, 2026 10:54
Dating App
sorenbarrett said:
Your last six lines Gray are very powerful and gripping and the reason for my fave
April 25th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Your last six lines Gray are very powerful and gripping and the reason for my fave
April 25th, 2026 10:32
The Journalist
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no more honourable position for a journalist than that of taking truth to power, sometimes with costs; but possibly not as high by virtue of the profession as a whistleblower and others of that ilk.
I enjoyed the force of the message.
April 24th, 2026 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no more honourable position for a journalist than that of taking truth to power, sometimes with costs; but possibly not as high by virtue of the profession as a whistleblower and others of that ilk.
I enjoyed the force of the message.
April 24th, 2026 21:46
The Journalist
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
The Journalist
Friendship said:
well written.Your poem explores the theme of courage in the face of uncomfortable truths. It depicts a powerful figure who confronts silence and propriety with incisive questioning, revealing hidden truths and challenging societal norms.
April 24th, 2026 08:34
Friendship said:
well written.Your poem explores the theme of courage in the face of uncomfortable truths. It depicts a powerful figure who confronts silence and propriety with incisive questioning, revealing hidden truths and challenging societal norms.
April 24th, 2026 08:34
My Therapist
sorenbarrett said:
Here therapy and therapist come into play. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here therapy and therapist come into play. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 11:45
My Therapist
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your revolves around the complex dynamics of therapy and self-exploration. It highlights the discomfort of facing painful truths and the struggle of confronting one\'s inner turmoil. The therapist catalyzes change, pushing the person to confront buried emotions and experiences.
April 23rd, 2026 07:21
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your revolves around the complex dynamics of therapy and self-exploration. It highlights the discomfort of facing painful truths and the struggle of confronting one\'s inner turmoil. The therapist catalyzes change, pushing the person to confront buried emotions and experiences.
April 23rd, 2026 07:21
Our Sanctuaries
Soman Ragavan said:
Noise and spoken words can bring friction and tension. Silence enables us to recover, to navigate. Well written words.
April 22nd, 2026 21:10
Soman Ragavan said:
Noise and spoken words can bring friction and tension. Silence enables us to recover, to navigate. Well written words.
April 22nd, 2026 21:10
Our Sanctuaries
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic terms that speak of what is natural and what leads to peace and happiness Silence, Stillness, Simplicity, Solitude all with s\'s.
April 22nd, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic terms that speak of what is natural and what leads to peace and happiness Silence, Stillness, Simplicity, Solitude all with s\'s.
April 22nd, 2026 16:08
Our Sanctuaries
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the importance of silence, solitude, and simplicity in finding inner peace and clarity amidst the chaos of daily life.
April 22nd, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the importance of silence, solitude, and simplicity in finding inner peace and clarity amidst the chaos of daily life.
April 22nd, 2026 08:55
Mr. Brown Taught History
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like the class was full of adventure and interest.
Pity Mr Brown could not devote his special energies to aspects of history other than war.
Your write bought him to life. Mission accomplished !
April 21st, 2026 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like the class was full of adventure and interest.
Pity Mr Brown could not devote his special energies to aspects of history other than war.
Your write bought him to life. Mission accomplished !
April 21st, 2026 17:46
Mr. Brown Taught History
sorenbarrett said:
A teacher makes all the difference it is not what is told but how it is told that one learns from. Well done
April 21st, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A teacher makes all the difference it is not what is told but how it is told that one learns from. Well done
April 21st, 2026 11:57
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