Comments received on poems by gray0328
Dancing Under Borrowed Stars
sorenbarrett said:
In the transe of a dance, the beam of a dream where music and humanity mix there is the liberation of a soul. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
In the transe of a dance, the beam of a dream where music and humanity mix there is the liberation of a soul. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:06
The Naming
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so surreal yet so light and pleasing it floats. Nicely done and although I can not put my finger on it I think it is the calling of the name that gives it a fave
September 6th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so surreal yet so light and pleasing it floats. Nicely done and although I can not put my finger on it I think it is the calling of the name that gives it a fave
September 6th, 2025 04:11
The Divine Compass
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of what is not seen, heard or felt but exists beyond. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of what is not seen, heard or felt but exists beyond. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 12:12
The Divine Compass
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed this poem very much
September 4th, 2025 11:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed this poem very much
September 4th, 2025 11:33
The Hands That Hold
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I read that we are all our own savior and god. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I read that we are all our own savior and god. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2025 10:35
No Shame in Weakness
sorenbarrett said:
Weakness can become a strength when recognized and knowing one\'s limits is a strength
September 2nd, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
Weakness can become a strength when recognized and knowing one\'s limits is a strength
September 2nd, 2025 12:24
The Universal Root
Doggerel Dave said:
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49
The Universal Root
sorenbarrett said:
A tuber that has bridged the international gap and continues to entice and nourish nations. A poetic recipe that leaves me hungry.
September 1st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A tuber that has bridged the international gap and continues to entice and nourish nations. A poetic recipe that leaves me hungry.
September 1st, 2025 04:33
the poet and the craftsman
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing the process of Creating a poem. Good Write.
August 31st, 2025 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing the process of Creating a poem. Good Write.
August 31st, 2025 19:45
the poet and the craftsman
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
Shells
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
The Vine and the Branches
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
The Vine and the Branches
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
The Well
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
Birth of a Star
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
Stubborn as the Earth Beneath Us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
some people never go crazy
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
some people never go crazy
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
some people never go crazy
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
some people never go crazy
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
Rearguard of the Pack
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
The Burden of Being Karma
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
The Light That Binds
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
Silent As Seed Beneath Soil
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
Incoming Freshmen
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
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