Comments received on poems by gray0328
Whispers Beneath the Surface
Katie B. said:
This piece is excellent. I love your words about poetry.
Meaningful and insightful.
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:17
Katie B. said:
This piece is excellent. I love your words about poetry.
Meaningful and insightful.
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:17
Whispers Beneath the Surface
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray your wording so poetic gets the fave in this poem
March 15th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray your wording so poetic gets the fave in this poem
March 15th, 2026 03:59
Whispered in Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of trust and belief whether to God or a lover it shines
March 14th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of trust and belief whether to God or a lover it shines
March 14th, 2026 09:37
Growing From the Storm
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write my friend
March 13th, 2026 10:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write my friend
March 13th, 2026 10:37
Growing From the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger they say and I hear this in this poem. A lovely write Gray
March 13th, 2026 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger they say and I hear this in this poem. A lovely write Gray
March 13th, 2026 09:22
The Whole Hole
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of divine help and so we all look at times of extreme stress. Wishing you and yours well in these difficult times Gray
March 12th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of divine help and so we all look at times of extreme stress. Wishing you and yours well in these difficult times Gray
March 12th, 2026 10:54
Dwelling in the Fabric of Love
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to you Gray and your father. I give you my best wishes. This poem is especially poignant in that light and is beautifully worded. Nicely done my friend
March 11th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to you Gray and your father. I give you my best wishes. This poem is especially poignant in that light and is beautifully worded. Nicely done my friend
March 11th, 2026 11:03
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
NafisaSB said:
this is so true in real life - agree with you..
March 11th, 2026 01:09
NafisaSB said:
this is so true in real life - agree with you..
March 11th, 2026 01:09
The Stubborn Stench of Consensus
Doggerel Dave said:
I drink - alone (it is safer that way; I have perfect control)
(About your Dad: No words I could possibly provide.......)
March 10th, 2026 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I drink - alone (it is safer that way; I have perfect control)
(About your Dad: No words I could possibly provide.......)
March 10th, 2026 23:12
The Stubborn Stench of Consensus
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is gritty and full of life. It speaks of earthiness. Well done Gray
March 10th, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is gritty and full of life. It speaks of earthiness. Well done Gray
March 10th, 2026 11:02
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a modern fable—humor, horror, and loneliness all typed out in fevered rhythm.
You’ve captured the quiet terror of obsession with uncanny clarity.
March 10th, 2026 09:16
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a modern fable—humor, horror, and loneliness all typed out in fevered rhythm.
You’ve captured the quiet terror of obsession with uncanny clarity.
March 10th, 2026 09:16
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder that young Soren upstairs hasn\'t introduced \'metaphor\' into the proceedings, as I see this as symbolic for all the texts that float out there from all machines!
Reminds me of a denizen of a cafe I once frequented. Rich picture.
March 9th, 2026 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder that young Soren upstairs hasn\'t introduced \'metaphor\' into the proceedings, as I see this as symbolic for all the texts that float out there from all machines!
Reminds me of a denizen of a cafe I once frequented. Rich picture.
March 9th, 2026 17:21
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of exhaustion following tireless efforts. A wonderful write of frenzy meets burn out. Well done
March 9th, 2026 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of exhaustion following tireless efforts. A wonderful write of frenzy meets burn out. Well done
March 9th, 2026 12:52
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
Thomas W Case said:
Merciless truth, laid bare and unflinching—your kindness is light tossed into the wind.
The world doesn’t bend for virtue; it tests it, grinds it, and leaves you raw.
March 8th, 2026 10:21
Thomas W Case said:
Merciless truth, laid bare and unflinching—your kindness is light tossed into the wind.
The world doesn’t bend for virtue; it tests it, grinds it, and leaves you raw.
March 8th, 2026 10:21
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, you had me thinking!. Your poem explores themes of existentialism, the nature of goodness, and the harsh realities of life. It juxtaposes human attempts at kindness and morality against the backdrop of a universe that is unconcerned with those efforts.
March 8th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, you had me thinking!. Your poem explores themes of existentialism, the nature of goodness, and the harsh realities of life. It juxtaposes human attempts at kindness and morality against the backdrop of a universe that is unconcerned with those efforts.
March 8th, 2026 07:57
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and pointed toward nihilism it speaks plainly its view of life and the universe. It is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and pointed toward nihilism it speaks plainly its view of life and the universe. It is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:29
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, enjoyed the read and subject matter
March 8th, 2026 04:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, enjoyed the read and subject matter
March 8th, 2026 04:22
The Tilted Chase for Forever
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
Forgotten Shields of the City
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
The Recipe for Flight
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
The Dance of Laughter in Little Tongues
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well errors made by my teachers sixty years ago, one that blew up the chemistry lab, another that fell of the stage pulling the screen with him, another in a fist fight with a student. Beautiful memories that still make me smile. Good write Gray
March 4th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well errors made by my teachers sixty years ago, one that blew up the chemistry lab, another that fell of the stage pulling the screen with him, another in a fist fight with a student. Beautiful memories that still make me smile. Good write Gray
March 4th, 2026 11:41
Misplaced Things
Doggerel Dave said:
\'memory’s frays\' just about sums it up. Words/terms missing just when I want them; actual names appear I haven\'t thought of for years. And I have absolutely no wish to mention possessions lost in the small cupboard (OK - bedsit, studio) I call home. Relevant, too relevant a write..
March 3rd, 2026 18:29
Doggerel Dave said:
\'memory’s frays\' just about sums it up. Words/terms missing just when I want them; actual names appear I haven\'t thought of for years. And I have absolutely no wish to mention possessions lost in the small cupboard (OK - bedsit, studio) I call home. Relevant, too relevant a write..
March 3rd, 2026 18:29
Misplaced Things
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how somethings disappear and others stay. Lost my car key the other day found it three days later in the last place I looked. Words escape me at times only to surface when I don\'t need them and funny how I only remember things when reminded that my story doesn\'t match that of another. A great write my friend and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how somethings disappear and others stay. Lost my car key the other day found it three days later in the last place I looked. Words escape me at times only to surface when I don\'t need them and funny how I only remember things when reminded that my story doesn\'t match that of another. A great write my friend and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 11:25
The Chain Snapped Before Anyone Noticed
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
The Currency of Care
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
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