Comments received on poems by gray0328
God is Not a Cosmic Bellboy
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
the hunger
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
Don\'t Jump to Conclusions
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly a plea to wait patiently before forming conclusions. Loved it Gray
July 10th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly a plea to wait patiently before forming conclusions. Loved it Gray
July 10th, 2025 14:34
wired for the divine
sorenbarrett said:
(how can the ocean be enough
when thirst roots in the soul )
A great line that conveys so much in so little. Loved the poem.
July 10th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
(how can the ocean be enough
when thirst roots in the soul )
A great line that conveys so much in so little. Loved the poem.
July 10th, 2025 03:53
poems & poets
sorenbarrett said:
Well put Gray a beautiful poem of poems. A fave
July 8th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Well put Gray a beautiful poem of poems. A fave
July 8th, 2025 12:40
poems & poets
Cheeky Missy said:
If only this delicate beauty, like Atlas bearing the world upon his shoulder, could be posted in all halls of learning to enlighten the ignorant and open the door to pastures fewer know than should. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a wonderful poignancy, thank you for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 11:49
Cheeky Missy said:
If only this delicate beauty, like Atlas bearing the world upon his shoulder, could be posted in all halls of learning to enlighten the ignorant and open the door to pastures fewer know than should. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a wonderful poignancy, thank you for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 11:49
Polar Bear in the Fridge
sorenbarrett said:
When you said bear in the fridge I thought of Klondike bars. A fun read that gives imagery to what is inside and accentuates the cool temperature inside. Nicely done.
July 7th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
When you said bear in the fridge I thought of Klondike bars. A fun read that gives imagery to what is inside and accentuates the cool temperature inside. Nicely done.
July 7th, 2025 12:15
polish the stars
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fanciful write that in metaphor speaks of many things, the light from the past, the romance of nature, books and poems. A lovely write
July 6th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fanciful write that in metaphor speaks of many things, the light from the past, the romance of nature, books and poems. A lovely write
July 6th, 2025 13:23
Ma Ma Zil
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely portrait of a woman in poetry it conveys the picture well. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely portrait of a woman in poetry it conveys the picture well. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 11:18
the art of the pause
Doggerel Dave said:
By far preferable to incessant input.
Understood completely.
July 4th, 2025 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
By far preferable to incessant input.
Understood completely.
July 4th, 2025 19:38
the art of the pause
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, silence is so often under used and percieved to be a bad thing, used correctly it has so much to offer , enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 16:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, silence is so often under used and percieved to be a bad thing, used correctly it has so much to offer , enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 16:31
the art of the pause
sorenbarrett said:
The hole in the pot, the space between the spokes what gives meaning. Lovely
July 4th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
The hole in the pot, the space between the spokes what gives meaning. Lovely
July 4th, 2025 16:18
The Ironing Board
sorenbarrett said:
My mother had the same board as did my wife and those smells and memories are ironed into my memory as well. What a nice poem of nostalgia and pressed feelings of the past long stored.
July 3rd, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
My mother had the same board as did my wife and those smells and memories are ironed into my memory as well. What a nice poem of nostalgia and pressed feelings of the past long stored.
July 3rd, 2025 16:06
dark matter
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
dark matter
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
dark matter
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
the art of digging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
the art of digging
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
the bipolar ride
James Michael said:
The last stanza ties this one together succinctly. The shift between brutal mood swings is torturous. My experience I describe as a roller coaster with no seatbelt. Medication can be frowned upon. For my family it has been a God-send.
June 30th, 2025 21:32
James Michael said:
The last stanza ties this one together succinctly. The shift between brutal mood swings is torturous. My experience I describe as a roller coaster with no seatbelt. Medication can be frowned upon. For my family it has been a God-send.
June 30th, 2025 21:32
the bipolar ride
Doggerel Dave said:
An honest and self revelatory write.
I\'ve heard patients argue that while meds keep them more or less on the straight and narrow, they can hanker for the excitement of the highs. I\'m thankful it was not within the ambit of my pay grade to make medical decisions.
June 30th, 2025 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
An honest and self revelatory write.
I\'ve heard patients argue that while meds keep them more or less on the straight and narrow, they can hanker for the excitement of the highs. I\'m thankful it was not within the ambit of my pay grade to make medical decisions.
June 30th, 2025 06:53
the bipolar ride
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about a condition that many suffer from and struggle to understand, so nicely expressed, wonderful write
June 30th, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about a condition that many suffer from and struggle to understand, so nicely expressed, wonderful write
June 30th, 2025 06:23
the bipolar ride
sorenbarrett said:
Gray such a poetic description in metaphor. Brilliant!! I have worked with bipolar people for many years and have never heard a better description of what it is like. A definite fave
June 30th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Gray such a poetic description in metaphor. Brilliant!! I have worked with bipolar people for many years and have never heard a better description of what it is like. A definite fave
June 30th, 2025 04:38
alive again
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of faith and belief, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:34
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of faith and belief, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:34
alive again
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this to me is a poem of dedication and commitment. A poem of faith and belief. Very nicely said
June 29th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this to me is a poem of dedication and commitment. A poem of faith and belief. Very nicely said
June 29th, 2025 11:48
The Fruits of the Spirit
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautifully written piece of poetry, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:03
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautifully written piece of poetry, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:03
The Fruits of the Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray to say anything more would be to ruin it. A fave
June 27th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray to say anything more would be to ruin it. A fave
June 27th, 2025 16:14
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