Comments received on poems by gray0328
Nothing Gold Can Stay
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, lyrical and true...a great write
November 25th, 2025 06:45
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, lyrical and true...a great write
November 25th, 2025 06:45
you already have everything
sorenbarrett said:
So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies within and those that look in the wrong place will never find it. Very nice Gray
November 24th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies within and those that look in the wrong place will never find it. Very nice Gray
November 24th, 2025 16:12
throwing children
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely Gray this poem paints a vivid picture to an old grandfather and also of past memories of his own children but there is more. This is also a metaphor of casting young minds and spirits upward and catching them in their fall. Being that safety net to prevent harm. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely Gray this poem paints a vivid picture to an old grandfather and also of past memories of his own children but there is more. This is also a metaphor of casting young minds and spirits upward and catching them in their fall. Being that safety net to prevent harm. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 12:37
emotional hangover
sorenbarrett said:
There is patience in this poem a plea for one to wait and see. It softens the blow of past wrongs and injustice with the seasoning of time. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
There is patience in this poem a plea for one to wait and see. It softens the blow of past wrongs and injustice with the seasoning of time. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 06:44
early morning fishing with Papa Benny
sorenbarrett said:
I have memories of fishing with my father and they make up part of what I am. This is a nostalgic but it seems message sending poem. Lovely
November 21st, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
I have memories of fishing with my father and they make up part of what I am. This is a nostalgic but it seems message sending poem. Lovely
November 21st, 2025 14:46
Nothing Gold Can Stay
arqios said:
Brings me back to “nature’s first green is gold,” but then turns right round into its own! 🙏🏻🕊️
November 20th, 2025 06:34
arqios said:
Brings me back to “nature’s first green is gold,” but then turns right round into its own! 🙏🏻🕊️
November 20th, 2025 06:34
A Tale of Two Trees
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning in this poetic metaphor Gray. Nicely told
November 20th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper meaning in this poetic metaphor Gray. Nicely told
November 20th, 2025 05:06
Nothing Gold Can Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A true romantic poem and so well worded Gray this has no way not to be a fave. It is simply smashing my friend.
November 19th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
A true romantic poem and so well worded Gray this has no way not to be a fave. It is simply smashing my friend.
November 19th, 2025 11:59
when all else fails, try following directions
Doggerel Dave said:
What I felt was pure irony in the title drew me in....
November 17th, 2025 15:29
Doggerel Dave said:
What I felt was pure irony in the title drew me in....
November 17th, 2025 15:29
when all else fails, try following directions
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
dog talk dictionary
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem crafted in human language understood by dogs. A canine poem. A fave
November 16th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem crafted in human language understood by dogs. A canine poem. A fave
November 16th, 2025 09:38
A Stranger in the Mirror
NinjaGirl said:
And then who are you, now? The sum of the past or who you look like in the present? Very nice
November 13th, 2025 14:26
NinjaGirl said:
And then who are you, now? The sum of the past or who you look like in the present? Very nice
November 13th, 2025 14:26
A Stranger in the Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
So well written Gray this poem inspires reflections and yes as the last two lines say :
For reflection owns no ultimate dominion—
it holds me captive, yet I remain more.
Loved it
November 13th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
So well written Gray this poem inspires reflections and yes as the last two lines say :
For reflection owns no ultimate dominion—
it holds me captive, yet I remain more.
Loved it
November 13th, 2025 10:10
Pilgrims of Mercy
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with a type of grace. A lovely write Gray
November 11th, 2025 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with a type of grace. A lovely write Gray
November 11th, 2025 15:04
Schadenfreude
Doggerel Dave said:
I do understand your drift, but cannot deny an enjoyable nibble of the Darwin Awards occasionally.....
November 10th, 2025 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I do understand your drift, but cannot deny an enjoyable nibble of the Darwin Awards occasionally.....
November 10th, 2025 17:46
Schadenfreude
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel normal. Well done Gray
November 10th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel normal. Well done Gray
November 10th, 2025 11:58
Definance in the Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in rhyme and good meter. Very nice
November 10th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in rhyme and good meter. Very nice
November 10th, 2025 10:57
Justice In Practice
Samuel Maximilian said:
Brilliant in its thought and beautiful in its expression!
November 9th, 2025 13:34
Samuel Maximilian said:
Brilliant in its thought and beautiful in its expression!
November 9th, 2025 13:34
Justice In Practice
Paul Bell said:
Well put, once it\'s out, it\'s out.
Many a careless word has cost lives.
How many relationships ended with the wrong words.
November 9th, 2025 07:24
Paul Bell said:
Well put, once it\'s out, it\'s out.
Many a careless word has cost lives.
How many relationships ended with the wrong words.
November 9th, 2025 07:24
Justice In Practice
sorenbarrett said:
For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction so says Newton\'s third law of motion. Karma where one\'s actions determine one\'s fate in the future. It is all the same modern society calls it justice. A lovely write.
November 9th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction so says Newton\'s third law of motion. Karma where one\'s actions determine one\'s fate in the future. It is all the same modern society calls it justice. A lovely write.
November 9th, 2025 06:49
Fired Three Times
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written Gray
November 8th, 2025 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written Gray
November 8th, 2025 12:58
The Art of Disappearing
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
Crucified Acres
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
Heavy Pebbles
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
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