Comments received on poems by gray0328
Running of the Bulls
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
Running of the Bulls
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Lava Light
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Lava Light
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
NafisaSB said:
The psychiatrists job is to heal but often it seems as if they are playing games or testing the patient 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:45
NafisaSB said:
The psychiatrists job is to heal but often it seems as if they are playing games or testing the patient 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:45
Tracks of Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend so well imaged it falls close to my heart having seen the advancement of all those things. Long gone by the time of my birth on this continent I saw on a Southern continent in my youth as well as the racing horses alongside. You have touched a ghost rider in my memory my friend and it deserves a fave
July 6th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful my friend so well imaged it falls close to my heart having seen the advancement of all those things. Long gone by the time of my birth on this continent I saw on a Southern continent in my youth as well as the racing horses alongside. You have touched a ghost rider in my memory my friend and it deserves a fave
July 6th, 2026 06:46
Tracks of Dust
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write Gray. Such brilliant descriptions and imagery. \"Muscles carving air\" being one of my favourites.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:52
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write Gray. Such brilliant descriptions and imagery. \"Muscles carving air\" being one of my favourites.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 04:52
Tracks of Dust
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
What once was and what now is, great write and a fav
July 6th, 2026 04:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
What once was and what now is, great write and a fav
July 6th, 2026 04:00
Hollow Hands
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this poem could convey many meanings but the one that I took as I read it was returning to the past with a backward clock through pressing our hands against the glass becomes a fantasy in that we can not pass through that glass but our minds do and in fantasy we focus on what could have been. A lovely write
July 5th, 2026 11:41
Red, White and Blue
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a wide, cinematic sweep in this—like the whole day is being held in one long breath between celebration and reflection.
What stands out most is the way you balance brightness and weight, letting the imagery of light carry both joy and memory at the same time.
July 5th, 2026 07:53
Red, White and Blue
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Syd said:
Happy 4th of July from across the pond. Well written Grey.
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 10:22
Red, White and Blue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray a lovely tribute to a nation and its history on its birthday. Well done
July 4th, 2026 09:36
The Boxer
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
Paul Bell said:
When they can take a punch, they can usually punch to match.
Something tells me there wasn\'t a second punch.
July 4th, 2026 07:53
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
Paul Bell said:
Have you ever left the Psychiatrist\'s office thinking to yourself, that guy\'s nuts.
Then you hand the money over, and realise you\'re the nut.
July 4th, 2026 03:45
The Boxer
Doggerel Dave said:
Great. The crowd I\'d vote for as the biggest bunch of.... at one with those clapped out cheaply manufactured lightbulbs...
July 3rd, 2026 18:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Great. The crowd I\'d vote for as the biggest bunch of.... at one with those clapped out cheaply manufactured lightbulbs...
July 3rd, 2026 18:15
The Boxer
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏
Your descriptions are so unique \"lean like a starving stray\" being one of my favourites.
I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
- Syd 🍄
July 3rd, 2026 13:24
Syd said:
Brilliantly written 👏
Your descriptions are so unique \"lean like a starving stray\" being one of my favourites.
I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
- Syd 🍄
July 3rd, 2026 13:24
The Boxer
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful picture set in images of the pugilist. Could there be metaphor here or is it just poetic painting of an instant in time. Well done my friend
July 3rd, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful picture set in images of the pugilist. Could there be metaphor here or is it just poetic painting of an instant in time. Well done my friend
July 3rd, 2026 12:33
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. There\'s some great descriptions in there. Well written.
- Syd
July 2nd, 2026 14:04
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this write. There\'s some great descriptions in there. Well written.
- Syd
July 2nd, 2026 14:04
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed
July 2nd, 2026 13:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed
July 2nd, 2026 13:52
My Psychiatrist Told Me to Get Under the Couch
sorenbarrett said:
You keep doing it Gray another wonderful metaphoric poem that psychologically makes sense. Well done my friend
July 2nd, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
You keep doing it Gray another wonderful metaphoric poem that psychologically makes sense. Well done my friend
July 2nd, 2026 10:15
Already Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and so well employed truly poetic my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Gray and so well employed truly poetic my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:32
Inside the Tempest
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to me of the calm that is available beneath all the daily storms and stress if one will only listen for it and access it. Another lovely write Gray and a fave
June 30th, 2026 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to me of the calm that is available beneath all the daily storms and stress if one will only listen for it and access it. Another lovely write Gray and a fave
June 30th, 2026 10:44
Electric Reverie
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem explores the interplay between overwhelming feelings and the sense of powerlessness that can accompany such deep emotional experiences.
June 29th, 2026 14:47
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem explores the interplay between overwhelming feelings and the sense of powerlessness that can accompany such deep emotional experiences.
June 29th, 2026 14:47
Electric Reverie
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in metaphor and images it is well written
June 29th, 2026 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in metaphor and images it is well written
June 29th, 2026 08:55
Drool and Drive
sorenbarrett said:
Once again you have captured the essence of poetry in your images. I love dogs and have had a few, each a special pleasure. Each has been a drooler but loved them just the same. A lovely poem that does not really personify the dog but makes his qualities admirable. A fave my friend
June 28th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Once again you have captured the essence of poetry in your images. I love dogs and have had a few, each a special pleasure. Each has been a drooler but loved them just the same. A lovely poem that does not really personify the dog but makes his qualities admirable. A fave my friend
June 28th, 2026 08:15
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