Comments received on poems by gray0328
Uncle Chad
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
For some life is a battle waged in bargains and haggling where the war is one over a penny. Nicely done as a caricature.
July 20th, 2026 04:35
Live Long and Prosper
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the series and the movies. This formed part of my youth and I remember the hand gesture and its sensuality beyond sex. This write Gray falls at several levels as a memory, its metaphoric message about human communication be it formal or sexual, relationship between others, all set in most poetic terms. It gives the mind pause and in all is most poetic a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:27
A Gathering of Marvels
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify - and I\'ve given up dusting.
July 18th, 2026 18:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify - and I\'ve given up dusting.
July 18th, 2026 18:07
A Gathering of Marvels
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful piece Gray that reminds me of what I used to have. Threw it all away, kept only what I use. Memories kept only in the head where distortion dusts them from time to time.
July 18th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful piece Gray that reminds me of what I used to have. Threw it all away, kept only what I use. Memories kept only in the head where distortion dusts them from time to time.
July 18th, 2026 11:39
A Gathering of Marvels
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great atmosphere to this piece my friend
July 18th, 2026 11:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great atmosphere to this piece my friend
July 18th, 2026 11:22
The Quite Weight of Honesty
Doggerel Dave said:
Honesty is a virtue; however the important thing, as in poetry, is what one is being honest about.
Thanks for your always interesting well versed commentary, mate.
July 17th, 2026 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Honesty is a virtue; however the important thing, as in poetry, is what one is being honest about.
Thanks for your always interesting well versed commentary, mate.
July 17th, 2026 19:09
The Quite Weight of Honesty
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that many agreed with and many others did not. Controversial is the price paid for being honest. Well done Gray
July 17th, 2026 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that many agreed with and many others did not. Controversial is the price paid for being honest. Well done Gray
July 17th, 2026 11:11
Fault Lines and First Responders
sorenbarrett said:
Natural disasters and their effects with the need for help for victims. Well written
July 16th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Natural disasters and their effects with the need for help for victims. Well written
July 16th, 2026 11:36
Velvet and Venom
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray it reminds me of my snorkeling days off the coast where colored fish swam in the reef and sharks played ghost in the darkness beyond vision.
July 15th, 2026 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Gray it reminds me of my snorkeling days off the coast where colored fish swam in the reef and sharks played ghost in the darkness beyond vision.
July 15th, 2026 11:56
Potato Chip Patient
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a metaphor played out prettily. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2026 18:52
Potato Chip Patient
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well Gray drawing a picture in the mind. Well done
July 14th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well Gray drawing a picture in the mind. Well done
July 14th, 2026 10:32
Clint Eastwood
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, I could vote for Clint too, despite his passion for guns.
Hasn\'t used one as far as I can tell in his fight against ageing recognised from your write and for which I can feel a great empathy.
July 13th, 2026 16:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, I could vote for Clint too, despite his passion for guns.
Hasn\'t used one as far as I can tell in his fight against ageing recognised from your write and for which I can feel a great empathy.
July 13th, 2026 16:55
Clint Eastwood
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray and tribute to my favorite actor, director and producer. A man of no excuses as wise as he is talented. Well written and a fave
July 13th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Gray and tribute to my favorite actor, director and producer. A man of no excuses as wise as he is talented. Well written and a fave
July 13th, 2026 14:28
Hammerheads
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem of life and death where preditor and prey match wits and only one wins. Nicely done Gray I have swam those waters and it feels very real set in color not just black and white of type.
July 12th, 2026 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem of life and death where preditor and prey match wits and only one wins. Nicely done Gray I have swam those waters and it feels very real set in color not just black and white of type.
July 12th, 2026 09:21
Hammerheads
rhmn_7 said:
This breathtaking poem captures the brutal dance of the ocean, where the hammerhead’s silent hunt transforms the stingray’s desperate defense into a tragic surrender. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 07:45
rhmn_7 said:
This breathtaking poem captures the brutal dance of the ocean, where the hammerhead’s silent hunt transforms the stingray’s desperate defense into a tragic surrender. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 07:45
A Single Spark
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its images and informative in its information this poem flows well as do electro chemical impulses along a fiber separated by stanza synapses. Well written my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its images and informative in its information this poem flows well as do electro chemical impulses along a fiber separated by stanza synapses. Well written my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:02
A Single Spark
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the cog within the machine, much enjoyed
July 11th, 2026 04:46
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the cog within the machine, much enjoyed
July 11th, 2026 04:46
Love Directed
sorenbarrett said:
A gift indeed that like any other gift is given with no strings attached. It comes from an owner that offers it. Well written my friend
July 10th, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A gift indeed that like any other gift is given with no strings attached. It comes from an owner that offers it. Well written my friend
July 10th, 2026 11:43
Everything Bagel
sorenbarrett said:
Nirvana could be taste indeed I have had meals that took me to heaven and a taste of heaven is all that is needed to want it again. Lovely Gray
July 9th, 2026 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
Nirvana could be taste indeed I have had meals that took me to heaven and a taste of heaven is all that is needed to want it again. Lovely Gray
July 9th, 2026 12:50
Running of the Bulls
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem but so poignant as well and it is the last stanza that ties it all together and poses the question that speaks to violence whether self inflicted or directed toward other something privative and archetypal. A fave my friend
July 8th, 2026 12:36
Running of the Bulls
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complex relationship between danger, thrill, and the human experience. It contemplates why people are drawn to perilous situations and how these moments create a sense of unity and ritual among participants.
July 8th, 2026 12:09
Lava Light
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The seventies (a sixties extension) well painted. A lava lamp still fascinates, when I see one.
July 8th, 2026 01:54
Lava Light
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
This creates an image of nostalgia from the past. Well imaged and nicely written
July 7th, 2026 12:18
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