Comments received on poems by gray0328
Anxious Streets and Scared Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a call to arms and a speech of encouragement. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a call to arms and a speech of encouragement. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 05:08
When I Discard My Body
Vipassana said:
bravo. beautifully written and conceived. and I wish your father well.
March 19th, 2026 00:50
Vipassana said:
bravo. beautifully written and conceived. and I wish your father well.
March 19th, 2026 00:50
When I Discard My Body
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in this poem Gray well written my friend
March 18th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in this poem Gray well written my friend
March 18th, 2026 12:05
The Stillness Between Footfalls
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful spiritual lines here Gray. Nicely written it speaks to those that believe. Well done
March 17th, 2026 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful spiritual lines here Gray. Nicely written it speaks to those that believe. Well done
March 17th, 2026 12:49
The Housefly\'s Final Flight
Doggerel Dave said:
Got yer!! Though think of the environment .. a fly swatter would have been more environmentally friendly😂
A write rich in imagery.
March 16th, 2026 18:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Got yer!! Though think of the environment .. a fly swatter would have been more environmentally friendly😂
A write rich in imagery.
March 16th, 2026 18:50
The Housefly\'s Final Flight
sorenbarrett said:
Gray coincidence is amazing in that I too in todays poem wrote of burning a fly. What are the odds? This poem takes a different course than mine and seems deep in its allegory of ingenuity, entrapment and destruction. What elaborate means we use to rid ourselves of an annoyance and in the process take joy in display. Ingenious and dangerous its efficiency undisputed. Reminds me how as kids we rolled buckshot down a board where a toad would swallow it until he was so full he could not hop. We would grab him by back legs and shake him upside down until he was empty then start the process all over again. Nicely done my friend
March 16th, 2026 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Gray coincidence is amazing in that I too in todays poem wrote of burning a fly. What are the odds? This poem takes a different course than mine and seems deep in its allegory of ingenuity, entrapment and destruction. What elaborate means we use to rid ourselves of an annoyance and in the process take joy in display. Ingenious and dangerous its efficiency undisputed. Reminds me how as kids we rolled buckshot down a board where a toad would swallow it until he was so full he could not hop. We would grab him by back legs and shake him upside down until he was empty then start the process all over again. Nicely done my friend
March 16th, 2026 09:19
Whispers Beneath the Surface
Katie B. said:
This piece is excellent. I love your words about poetry.
Meaningful and insightful.
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:17
Katie B. said:
This piece is excellent. I love your words about poetry.
Meaningful and insightful.
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:17
Whispers Beneath the Surface
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray your wording so poetic gets the fave in this poem
March 15th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Gray your wording so poetic gets the fave in this poem
March 15th, 2026 03:59
Whispered in Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of trust and belief whether to God or a lover it shines
March 14th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of trust and belief whether to God or a lover it shines
March 14th, 2026 09:37
Growing From the Storm
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write my friend
March 13th, 2026 10:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write my friend
March 13th, 2026 10:37
Growing From the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger they say and I hear this in this poem. A lovely write Gray
March 13th, 2026 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger they say and I hear this in this poem. A lovely write Gray
March 13th, 2026 09:22
The Whole Hole
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of divine help and so we all look at times of extreme stress. Wishing you and yours well in these difficult times Gray
March 12th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of divine help and so we all look at times of extreme stress. Wishing you and yours well in these difficult times Gray
March 12th, 2026 10:54
Dwelling in the Fabric of Love
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to you Gray and your father. I give you my best wishes. This poem is especially poignant in that light and is beautifully worded. Nicely done my friend
March 11th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to you Gray and your father. I give you my best wishes. This poem is especially poignant in that light and is beautifully worded. Nicely done my friend
March 11th, 2026 11:03
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
NafisaSB said:
this is so true in real life - agree with you..
March 11th, 2026 01:09
NafisaSB said:
this is so true in real life - agree with you..
March 11th, 2026 01:09
The Stubborn Stench of Consensus
Doggerel Dave said:
I drink - alone (it is safer that way; I have perfect control)
(About your Dad: No words I could possibly provide.......)
March 10th, 2026 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I drink - alone (it is safer that way; I have perfect control)
(About your Dad: No words I could possibly provide.......)
March 10th, 2026 23:12
The Stubborn Stench of Consensus
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is gritty and full of life. It speaks of earthiness. Well done Gray
March 10th, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is gritty and full of life. It speaks of earthiness. Well done Gray
March 10th, 2026 11:02
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a modern fable—humor, horror, and loneliness all typed out in fevered rhythm.
You’ve captured the quiet terror of obsession with uncanny clarity.
March 10th, 2026 09:16
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a modern fable—humor, horror, and loneliness all typed out in fevered rhythm.
You’ve captured the quiet terror of obsession with uncanny clarity.
March 10th, 2026 09:16
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder that young Soren upstairs hasn\'t introduced \'metaphor\' into the proceedings, as I see this as symbolic for all the texts that float out there from all machines!
Reminds me of a denizen of a cafe I once frequented. Rich picture.
March 9th, 2026 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I wonder that young Soren upstairs hasn\'t introduced \'metaphor\' into the proceedings, as I see this as symbolic for all the texts that float out there from all machines!
Reminds me of a denizen of a cafe I once frequented. Rich picture.
March 9th, 2026 17:21
The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of exhaustion following tireless efforts. A wonderful write of frenzy meets burn out. Well done
March 9th, 2026 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of exhaustion following tireless efforts. A wonderful write of frenzy meets burn out. Well done
March 9th, 2026 12:52
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
Thomas W Case said:
Merciless truth, laid bare and unflinching—your kindness is light tossed into the wind.
The world doesn’t bend for virtue; it tests it, grinds it, and leaves you raw.
March 8th, 2026 10:21
Thomas W Case said:
Merciless truth, laid bare and unflinching—your kindness is light tossed into the wind.
The world doesn’t bend for virtue; it tests it, grinds it, and leaves you raw.
March 8th, 2026 10:21
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, you had me thinking!. Your poem explores themes of existentialism, the nature of goodness, and the harsh realities of life. It juxtaposes human attempts at kindness and morality against the backdrop of a universe that is unconcerned with those efforts.
March 8th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, you had me thinking!. Your poem explores themes of existentialism, the nature of goodness, and the harsh realities of life. It juxtaposes human attempts at kindness and morality against the backdrop of a universe that is unconcerned with those efforts.
March 8th, 2026 07:57
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and pointed toward nihilism it speaks plainly its view of life and the universe. It is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and pointed toward nihilism it speaks plainly its view of life and the universe. It is a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:29
The Bull Doesn\'t Care
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, enjoyed the read and subject matter
March 8th, 2026 04:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, enjoyed the read and subject matter
March 8th, 2026 04:22
The Tilted Chase for Forever
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors in this poem get a fave for they speak deeper than skin color when playing that music from the jukebox. Good one my friend
March 7th, 2026 05:54
Forgotten Shields of the City
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Man hole covers, sewer lids whatever you call them. A discus to throw an Frisbee of the giants. A fun read
March 6th, 2026 12:53
The Recipe for Flight
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
True not only for butterflies but children and all other animals. Did the same with an egg once and the chick came out sickly and did not survive. A fave
March 5th, 2026 13:06
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