Comments received on poems by gray0328
when all else fails, try following directions
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often the instructions seem simple but the costs are never explained. Well done Gray
November 17th, 2025 11:39
dog talk dictionary
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem crafted in human language understood by dogs. A canine poem. A fave
November 16th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem crafted in human language understood by dogs. A canine poem. A fave
November 16th, 2025 09:38
A Stranger in the Mirror
NinjaGirl said:
And then who are you, now? The sum of the past or who you look like in the present? Very nice
November 13th, 2025 14:26
NinjaGirl said:
And then who are you, now? The sum of the past or who you look like in the present? Very nice
November 13th, 2025 14:26
A Stranger in the Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
So well written Gray this poem inspires reflections and yes as the last two lines say :
For reflection owns no ultimate dominion—
it holds me captive, yet I remain more.
Loved it
November 13th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
So well written Gray this poem inspires reflections and yes as the last two lines say :
For reflection owns no ultimate dominion—
it holds me captive, yet I remain more.
Loved it
November 13th, 2025 10:10
Pilgrims of Mercy
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with a type of grace. A lovely write Gray
November 11th, 2025 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with a type of grace. A lovely write Gray
November 11th, 2025 15:04
Schadenfreude
Doggerel Dave said:
I do understand your drift, but cannot deny an enjoyable nibble of the Darwin Awards occasionally.....
November 10th, 2025 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I do understand your drift, but cannot deny an enjoyable nibble of the Darwin Awards occasionally.....
November 10th, 2025 17:46
Schadenfreude
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel normal. Well done Gray
November 10th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel normal. Well done Gray
November 10th, 2025 11:58
Definance in the Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in rhyme and good meter. Very nice
November 10th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in rhyme and good meter. Very nice
November 10th, 2025 10:57
Justice In Practice
Samuel Maximilian said:
Brilliant in its thought and beautiful in its expression!
November 9th, 2025 13:34
Samuel Maximilian said:
Brilliant in its thought and beautiful in its expression!
November 9th, 2025 13:34
Justice In Practice
Paul Bell said:
Well put, once it\'s out, it\'s out.
Many a careless word has cost lives.
How many relationships ended with the wrong words.
November 9th, 2025 07:24
Paul Bell said:
Well put, once it\'s out, it\'s out.
Many a careless word has cost lives.
How many relationships ended with the wrong words.
November 9th, 2025 07:24
Justice In Practice
sorenbarrett said:
For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction so says Newton\'s third law of motion. Karma where one\'s actions determine one\'s fate in the future. It is all the same modern society calls it justice. A lovely write.
November 9th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction so says Newton\'s third law of motion. Karma where one\'s actions determine one\'s fate in the future. It is all the same modern society calls it justice. A lovely write.
November 9th, 2025 06:49
Fired Three Times
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written Gray
November 8th, 2025 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written Gray
November 8th, 2025 12:58
The Art of Disappearing
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
Crucified Acres
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
Heavy Pebbles
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I too take water to be the ultimate in as the Tao says being soft the best to defeat the hard. Well written Gray
November 4th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I too take water to be the ultimate in as the Tao says being soft the best to defeat the hard. Well written Gray
November 4th, 2025 13:53
The Broodmother
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording that gives a dark feel to this poem and that gets the fave. Very nicely done (She spins shadowed thread, The wind sneers through jaws of forest teeth, Her laughter cracks the spine of the wind)
November 3rd, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording that gives a dark feel to this poem and that gets the fave. Very nicely done (She spins shadowed thread, The wind sneers through jaws of forest teeth, Her laughter cracks the spine of the wind)
November 3rd, 2025 11:55
small town nights
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. I turned 60 this year, so I still vaguely remember… thanks for reminding me and painting a nice picture with words.
Cheers,
AHB
November 2nd, 2025 21:52
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. I turned 60 this year, so I still vaguely remember… thanks for reminding me and painting a nice picture with words.
Cheers,
AHB
November 2nd, 2025 21:52
small town nights
2781 said:
Six in the car, and one in the boot, as I remember.
November 2nd, 2025 07:50
2781 said:
Six in the car, and one in the boot, as I remember.
November 2nd, 2025 07:50
small town nights
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia breeds in this poem of a time gone by. Not only the setting but of a time of rebellion not outgrown but transformed into a modern metamorphosis in a techno world of streaming where mischief takes other forms. Love the flow of this poem Gray. It took me back to another time.
November 2nd, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia breeds in this poem of a time gone by. Not only the setting but of a time of rebellion not outgrown but transformed into a modern metamorphosis in a techno world of streaming where mischief takes other forms. Love the flow of this poem Gray. It took me back to another time.
November 2nd, 2025 05:17
Borrowed Cart
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one draws vivid images in the mind painting not only a picture but a metaphor of life itself. Most lovely it is a fave my friend
November 1st, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one draws vivid images in the mind painting not only a picture but a metaphor of life itself. Most lovely it is a fave my friend
November 1st, 2025 06:21
Currency of Blood
sorenbarrett said:
Religious where debt seems to mean original sin carried and paid by a savior\'s ransom. Well done
October 31st, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Religious where debt seems to mean original sin carried and paid by a savior\'s ransom. Well done
October 31st, 2025 12:57
Repurposed
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line of this poem (Beauty grows fierce in unexpected soil) Very nicely written Gray
October 30th, 2025 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line of this poem (Beauty grows fierce in unexpected soil) Very nicely written Gray
October 30th, 2025 12:36
The Shape of Boundaries
sorenbarrett said:
It hurts only to heal, not wound. A great line. A poem that makes deep sense. Very well done.
October 29th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
It hurts only to heal, not wound. A great line. A poem that makes deep sense. Very well done.
October 29th, 2025 11:33
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