Comments received on poems by gray0328
Throwing Children
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write and I particularly love the last line that seems so endearing
May 21st, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write and I particularly love the last line that seems so endearing
May 21st, 2026 05:02
Throwing Children
teardrop said:
From the title, I was waiting for the Mom to slap the child. (past memories I guess) anyway, love the metaphors,. It seems as they rolled together to elegantly.
Thank you for the read.
May 21st, 2026 04:06
teardrop said:
From the title, I was waiting for the Mom to slap the child. (past memories I guess) anyway, love the metaphors,. It seems as they rolled together to elegantly.
Thank you for the read.
May 21st, 2026 04:06
Imaginary Landscape
sorenbarrett said:
Each wrinkle, varicose vein, piece of hanging skin and mole a mark of a life\'s journey. Well written Gray
May 19th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Each wrinkle, varicose vein, piece of hanging skin and mole a mark of a life\'s journey. Well written Gray
May 19th, 2026 12:14
Red Walls
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to be crackers to do that anyway, so.... situation normal...?🤣
(My own mind got blistered just picturing it!)
May 18th, 2026 16:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to be crackers to do that anyway, so.... situation normal...?🤣
(My own mind got blistered just picturing it!)
May 18th, 2026 16:43
Red Walls
sorenbarrett said:
Color has a bit to do with emotion that is why they paint isolation rooms Pepto Bismal pink. A fun read my friend
May 18th, 2026 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
Color has a bit to do with emotion that is why they paint isolation rooms Pepto Bismal pink. A fun read my friend
May 18th, 2026 12:23
Roadside Responders
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes it was courageous, a miracle (right people right place right time) and it was the right thing to do.
It could also have been a news item yesterday, as just such acts do occur when the situation arises.
A realistic write.
May 17th, 2026 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes it was courageous, a miracle (right people right place right time) and it was the right thing to do.
It could also have been a news item yesterday, as just such acts do occur when the situation arises.
A realistic write.
May 17th, 2026 16:23
Roadside Responders
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad world where what the world calls heroism and courage is just doing the right thing. Where do the rest of us lie? Well written Gray
May 17th, 2026 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad world where what the world calls heroism and courage is just doing the right thing. Where do the rest of us lie? Well written Gray
May 17th, 2026 13:33
Roadside Responders
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around three boys who instinctively respond to an emergency, rescuing a trapped individual from a dangerous situation. You highlight the contrast between societal labels of \"courage\" and \"miracle\" and the boys\' humble perspective of simply doing what felt right.
May 17th, 2026 12:07
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around three boys who instinctively respond to an emergency, rescuing a trapped individual from a dangerous situation. You highlight the contrast between societal labels of \"courage\" and \"miracle\" and the boys\' humble perspective of simply doing what felt right.
May 17th, 2026 12:07
Nose Hairs
sorenbarrett said:
Been there Gray and sincerity does sting. A lovely write about more than nose hairs. A fave
May 16th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Been there Gray and sincerity does sting. A lovely write about more than nose hairs. A fave
May 16th, 2026 04:31
Bats
sorenbarrett said:
The balance of nature where one trouble ends a salvation begins a lovely metaphor
May 15th, 2026 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
The balance of nature where one trouble ends a salvation begins a lovely metaphor
May 15th, 2026 13:49
The Shape of a Word
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Let\'s call the whole thing off\"
Great elaboration on a theme. Muchly entertained
May 14th, 2026 16:09
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Let\'s call the whole thing off\"
Great elaboration on a theme. Muchly entertained
May 14th, 2026 16:09
Life is Like a Taxi
sorenbarrett said:
A nice metaphor Gray well employed in this poem. Well done
May 13th, 2026 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
A nice metaphor Gray well employed in this poem. Well done
May 13th, 2026 17:19
The Lake, the Bee, and the Crash
sorenbarrett said:
Just enough familiar to feel it enough foreign to give it appeal a tight balance. Nicely written in what feels so real but with enough play to give it a soft landing. A wonderful write Gray and a fave.
May 12th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Just enough familiar to feel it enough foreign to give it appeal a tight balance. Nicely written in what feels so real but with enough play to give it a soft landing. A wonderful write Gray and a fave.
May 12th, 2026 05:18
The Divine Echo
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of faith in this poem well written
May 11th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is an echo of faith in this poem well written
May 11th, 2026 04:48
Veil of the Wolf
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like something stalking its own conscience in the dark—tight, cinematic, and uneasy in its calm.
There’s a cold, controlled intensity in it, like the poem knows exactly how wrong it feels and doesn’t look away.
May 10th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like something stalking its own conscience in the dark—tight, cinematic, and uneasy in its calm.
There’s a cold, controlled intensity in it, like the poem knows exactly how wrong it feels and doesn’t look away.
May 10th, 2026 07:37
Feathered Witness
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray that has great wording and meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray that has great wording and meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:04
Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
Here parts of speech take on personified images. Nicely done Gray
May 8th, 2026 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Here parts of speech take on personified images. Nicely done Gray
May 8th, 2026 15:44
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