Comments received on poems by Shallom_M
Come Back
sorenbarrett said:
Loss never believed, sometimes even after it occurs is not believed. We believe what we want.
August 6th, 2024 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
Loss never believed, sometimes even after it occurs is not believed. We believe what we want.
August 6th, 2024 11:11
If tomorrow starts without me
sorenbarrett said:
Do we make a difference? A great question that this poem poses. Nicely written in various means
August 5th, 2024 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Do we make a difference? A great question that this poem poses. Nicely written in various means
August 5th, 2024 07:46
If tomorrow starts without me
Maplespal said:
Those with the skill to be aware
will miss you but not be able to show they care
your poems you write will cease
we will hope you rest in peace
your words comfort and informs us true
of course we will miss you
August 5th, 2024 05:59
Maplespal said:
Those with the skill to be aware
will miss you but not be able to show they care
your poems you write will cease
we will hope you rest in peace
your words comfort and informs us true
of course we will miss you
August 5th, 2024 05:59
Sweet Suffocation
Annemarie said:
Relatable! Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful work.
August 4th, 2024 12:25
Annemarie said:
Relatable! Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful work.
August 4th, 2024 12:25
LOVED
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the foreboding thought that drenching himself in her smile would have the same result as the rain instant joy followed by illness. Subtle and well written
August 3rd, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the foreboding thought that drenching himself in her smile would have the same result as the rain instant joy followed by illness. Subtle and well written
August 3rd, 2024 06:13
Don\'t Look Away
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly stated and direct. A most interesting write.
August 1st, 2024 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly stated and direct. A most interesting write.
August 1st, 2024 19:22
Quietness
Poetic Dan said:
That environment can be so key, harmony is always just waiting for us to sit with it..
Great writing, thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 02:02
Poetic Dan said:
That environment can be so key, harmony is always just waiting for us to sit with it..
Great writing, thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 02:02
Falling in love
Accidental Poet said:
I always say, \"Let love lead the way\". 😊👍
January 20th, 2024 10:19
Accidental Poet said:
I always say, \"Let love lead the way\". 😊👍
January 20th, 2024 10:19
Do I even deserve.....
L. B. Mek said:
reads raw and sincere
thanks for sharing
September 29th, 2023 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
reads raw and sincere
thanks for sharing
September 29th, 2023 06:49
Fly
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this write serves well for detailing the fact that despite outside influences, what we feel inside could be more powerful. But yet, at the end, you write of hope and that little glimmer is that which can pull anyone through. Good read!!
September 27th, 2023 08:27
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this write serves well for detailing the fact that despite outside influences, what we feel inside could be more powerful. But yet, at the end, you write of hope and that little glimmer is that which can pull anyone through. Good read!!
September 27th, 2023 08:27
