Comments received on poems by maria rk.
Spoken Between the Heart and the Brain
Thomas W Case said:
Great job, and the eternal struggle between heart and head.
October 27th, 2023 10:00
Thomas W Case said:
Great job, and the eternal struggle between heart and head.
October 27th, 2023 10:00
On My Knees / Dirty Sinner
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. They forget, God is love. Very well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:35
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. They forget, God is love. Very well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:35
My Last Love Letter / Mocking Bird’s Last Flight
peto said:
Super write Maria
Powerful and touching
As it says
There is something beautiful about you
The 3rd verse from the end with all the lasts is great
As long as it\'s not the last write from your pen
Excellent
October 22nd, 2023 16:49
peto said:
Super write Maria
Powerful and touching
As it says
There is something beautiful about you
The 3rd verse from the end with all the lasts is great
As long as it\'s not the last write from your pen
Excellent
October 22nd, 2023 16:49
Forbidden Fruit
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Great flow. You paint a picture with your words
October 22nd, 2023 12:55
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Great flow. You paint a picture with your words
October 22nd, 2023 12:55
Dream Affairs
Pop64 said:
Dreams can certainly foretell as I hope this one does for you. This is beautiful as wonderfully details the aspects of your dream person. Lovely!
September 29th, 2023 07:10
Pop64 said:
Dreams can certainly foretell as I hope this one does for you. This is beautiful as wonderfully details the aspects of your dream person. Lovely!
September 29th, 2023 07:10
Poetic Suicide
Weep little lion girl said:
This is a stunningly written poem.
You managed to artfully describe the desire to be a tortured artist. Much love for your mental health journey though.
September 29th, 2023 04:21
Weep little lion girl said:
This is a stunningly written poem.
You managed to artfully describe the desire to be a tortured artist. Much love for your mental health journey though.
September 29th, 2023 04:21
Poetic Suicide
Christina8 said:
This is flawless and I agree with Peto that you need a poetic life rather than death.....this is great, i hope you keep writing!
September 28th, 2023 10:49
Christina8 said:
This is flawless and I agree with Peto that you need a poetic life rather than death.....this is great, i hope you keep writing!
September 28th, 2023 10:49
Poetic Suicide
Pop64 said:
This reads with a sadness, but remains a well penned write. A poet\'s death would be only recognized by those remaining behind, I do not believe (personally) it to be recognized by the person that dies. but I can understand the want. I just want to pass with family near, but yet I don\'t want them to suffer through loss. This write made me think, continues to make me think, so great effect with your writing as well
September 28th, 2023 09:55
Pop64 said:
This reads with a sadness, but remains a well penned write. A poet\'s death would be only recognized by those remaining behind, I do not believe (personally) it to be recognized by the person that dies. but I can understand the want. I just want to pass with family near, but yet I don\'t want them to suffer through loss. This write made me think, continues to make me think, so great effect with your writing as well
September 28th, 2023 09:55
Poetic Suicide
peto said:
Perhaps a poetic LIFE is more your speed
Very talented
Strong message with tremendous word choices
September 28th, 2023 09:53
peto said:
Perhaps a poetic LIFE is more your speed
Very talented
Strong message with tremendous word choices
September 28th, 2023 09:53
Dream Affairs
Lorenz said:
avatar of light and shadow
in the dimension of dream...
September 28th, 2023 03:49
Lorenz said:
avatar of light and shadow
in the dimension of dream...
September 28th, 2023 03:49
Dream Affairs
peto said:
Welcome Maria
Beautiful write
Look forward to reading more from you
Great start
I hope he can read
September 28th, 2023 02:37
peto said:
Welcome Maria
Beautiful write
Look forward to reading more from you
Great start
I hope he can read
September 28th, 2023 02:37
