Comments received on poems by janiselizabeth



Rules (Triolet Poem)
Thomas W Case said:

Great job. You are right on target. There is a double standard.

October 20th, 2023 12:10

In the Comfort of a Stranger\'s Arms
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Very powerful, great job.

October 17th, 2023 13:26

Rules (Triolet Poem)
Pop64 said:

Love the form to this write and can appreciate the underlying sentiment conveyed by the subject. This is what my father taught me, but I\'ve taught my adult boys that it\'s okay to cry, without having to swallow their pride. They\'re more considerate of others as a result.

October 4th, 2023 07:28

You Are
Pop64 said:

This speaks so highly of that special someone and how we sometimes take them for granted. Your imagery used to convey the subject matter is just perfect.

October 3rd, 2023 13:20

In the Comfort of a Stranger\'s Arms
Neville said:



ink well spilt .. and very muchly enjoyed .. welcome to MPS .. I hope you will be happy here ..

all good things, Neville

October 2nd, 2023 10:49

In the Comfort of a Stranger\'s Arms
Pop64 said:

Your words clearly detail the road to the subject\'s salvation or enlightenment. Beautifully expressed.

October 2nd, 2023 06:29

In the Comfort of a Stranger\'s Arms
2781 said:

He is magnificent!
The greatest lover of all.

October 2nd, 2023 06:23