The Green Village Liturgy
sorenbarrett said:

Love this reptilian approach to the extremes sin and salvation and us in the middle. I thought that you would have added a monitor to watch what we do. Maybe a lizard in a blizzard, a wizard or gizzard or two. A poignant read and fun as well.

February 27th, 2026 08:58

I Should Be There
sorenbarrett said:

I like very much the separation created between the here and there of desire and reality. We create images of ourselves that become rigid with time and are hard to break but desire to be something more resides inside this mold. I can hear its longing to be set free in this poem. The ability of this poem to loose that feeling into words is what gets the fave

February 24th, 2026 05:02

Succour for the Legs
sorenbarrett said:

Used one might say. Misdiagnosed where the interest lay. Nicely written

February 2nd, 2026 18:26

The Pale Profitable Christ
sorenbarrett said:

Magnificent in its power this poem represents the statue calling out the hypocrisy of religion used to justify crimes against the humanity it stands for. Man has always found a way to twist what is holy to meet his needs. With the use of metaphor and images this write contrasts images of love with those of villainy and self interest. Very nicely compoosed it is a fave

January 8th, 2026 05:14

These Thoughts Frighten Me
MR.apocalypse said:

i really enjoyed this i think you would really enjoy some of my work its very simmiler

September 4th, 2024 21:21