Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Maybe, I\'ll get It Right
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thomas, this hit me hard. There’s a quiet desperation running through it…not theatrical, just human. The ache of wanting to fix even one small thing before time closes in feels painfully real. That last turn stays heavy. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

December 28th, 2025 07:54

Maybe, I\'ll get It Right
orchidee said:

Good write Tom. You got it right now? lol.

December 28th, 2025 03:01

Maybe, I\'ll get It Right
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem a character description. So nicely done Thomas

December 27th, 2025 18:37

Maybe, I\'ll get It Right
Friendship said:

Well written, Thomas, your poem explores themes of longing, introspection, and the search for meaning in the chaos of life. It captures a moment of connection between two individuals, juxtaposed with personal struggles and the yearning for resolution and clarity.

December 27th, 2025 18:14

Watching is Safer
PerditaRose said:

Thomas,
OK, I had read this yesterday, but I was called away for something and my poor memory took care of the rest. I apologize. This is raw emotion and you don\'t flinch. There is sadness. A fear of and lack of connection. A hard way to live. That\'s my take. Thank you for sharing this. I doubt that it was easy.

You have my sympathies.

December 22nd, 2025 19:15

Watching is Safer
arqios said:

Good write, ThomasπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

December 21st, 2025 22:07

The Soaring Bird of Time
rawaneigh.99 said:

I REALLY LOVED UR POEM THAT I CANT EVEN DESCRIBE HOW M FEELING NOW

December 21st, 2025 16:27

Watching is Safer
sorenbarrett said:

What a powerful poem Thomas. I have had cutters tell me that they cut to feel the pain to know that they are real that there is something inside so they can see the blood run to know they are alive. All this filters through this write in different ways. Well said

December 21st, 2025 13:31

Watching is Safer
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thomas, the phrase β€œneon jazz” stands out. It captures the city’s pulse without romance, turning light and sound into something watchful and indifferent. That image anchors the poem. Wonderful job, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

December 21st, 2025 12:53

Watching is Safer
orchidee said:

Good write Tom.

December 21st, 2025 10:59

Watching is Safer
Friendship said:

Well written, Thomas, your poem revolves around feelings of isolation, longing, and the struggle for connection in an urban environment. The poet feels like a \"broken toy,\" unwanted and marginalized, observing life from a distance without engaging.

December 21st, 2025 10:33

Prince of the Private School
Paul Bell said:

All it takes is a spark, and then you\'re off and running.

December 19th, 2025 07:45

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
NafisaSB said:

a truly tragic tale straight from the heart...

December 18th, 2025 00:54

Born Like This
Kevin Hulme said:

I think we can all agree on the Sentiments here .
A Good Write.

December 15th, 2025 19:56

Born Like This
arqios said:

Anthemic and primal πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

December 15th, 2025 19:30

Born Like This
orchidee said:

Good write Tom.

December 15th, 2025 15:51

Born Like This
Friendship said:

Well written


December 15th, 2025 13:06

Born Like This
Paul Bell said:

Sometimes you just have to paint the picture as you see it.

December 15th, 2025 11:27

Born Like This
sorenbarrett said:

To write to live or to live to write is the question. A gritty poem about poetry on the hard side. Lovely Thomas

December 15th, 2025 11:08

Born Like This
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write, Thomas! Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

December 15th, 2025 10:00

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
PerditaRose said:

Your poem is beautiful - achingly so.

December 14th, 2025 13:11

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
Friendship said:

Well written, my friend.

December 14th, 2025 07:54

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
PerditaRose said:

Thomas,
I\'m sorry for your loss.
Perdita

December 14th, 2025 06:19

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
arqios said:

Powerful.

December 14th, 2025 06:05

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
Paul Bell said:

This was poetry at its rawest, cos that\'s the hand given.
I had the same teacher. (Beats me why you come to school, she echoed daily.) Beats me to was the usual retort.
We keep going cos life dictates we do.

December 14th, 2025 04:56

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
Doggerel Dave said:

An episodic sketch of a messy life, if not well lived, most certainly lived, Thomas.

Please add this comment to swathes of your poetry - and understand I\'m not knocking it.

December 13th, 2025 22:55

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:

An excellent poem, my friend. Loved the title too! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

December 13th, 2025 20:36

Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love
sorenbarrett said:

Well done Thomas a story of life.

December 13th, 2025 18:45

Train Wreck Women and Whiskey Nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

December 12th, 2025 09:35

Ode to 3 Voices
NafisaSB said:

Straight from the heart - liked it

December 12th, 2025 01:30

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