Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
She\'s a Smoker
NafisaSB said:
A realistic look at a daily routine described in a down to earth manner โ๏ธ๐
October 28th, 2026 11:34
NafisaSB said:
A realistic look at a daily routine described in a down to earth manner โ๏ธ๐
October 28th, 2026 11:34
Mojo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thomas, Iโd love to meet her, though I suspect sheโd decline the invitationโฆfair enough! Thoroughly enjoyed spending a little time with you both here. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 27th, 2026 20:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thomas, Iโd love to meet her, though I suspect sheโd decline the invitationโฆfair enough! Thoroughly enjoyed spending a little time with you both here. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 27th, 2026 20:16
Mojo
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a lot to be said about the runt of the pack, they need to be smarter and quicker to survive.
And as you say, trust needs to be earned, but once it is, you\'ve got a stayer.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a lot to be said about the runt of the pack, they need to be smarter and quicker to survive.
And as you say, trust needs to be earned, but once it is, you\'ve got a stayer.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
Mojo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
most descriptive piece, much enjoyed
October 27th, 2026 09:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
most descriptive piece, much enjoyed
October 27th, 2026 09:54
Mojo
Teddy.15 said:
She has a great intuition. Fabulous imagery. I enjoy the adventures of your cats. ๐น
October 27th, 2026 09:22
Teddy.15 said:
She has a great intuition. Fabulous imagery. I enjoy the adventures of your cats. ๐น
October 27th, 2026 09:22
Mojo
sorenbarrett said:
Endearing and cute this poem takes a different direction than most of your gritty work Thomas and brings a tender side into your poems. Nicely penned
October 27th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Endearing and cute this poem takes a different direction than most of your gritty work Thomas and brings a tender side into your poems. Nicely penned
October 27th, 2026 08:42
Only Time will Tell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Thomas. I have known days when one familiar object carries too much of a personโs history...letting it rest can take real courage. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 26th, 2026 12:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Thomas. I have known days when one familiar object carries too much of a personโs history...letting it rest can take real courage. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 26th, 2026 12:06
Only Time will Tell
Teddy.15 said:
Time can truly be a bastard, I\'ve learnt over the years, a wonderful quietly delivered piece. ๐น
October 26th, 2026 03:10
Teddy.15 said:
Time can truly be a bastard, I\'ve learnt over the years, a wonderful quietly delivered piece. ๐น
October 26th, 2026 03:10
Only Time will Tell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The hound dog looking worried broke my heart a little, Thomasโฆanimals know when something in us has gone quiet. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 25th, 2026 22:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The hound dog looking worried broke my heart a little, Thomasโฆanimals know when something in us has gone quiet. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 25th, 2026 22:12
Only Time will Tell
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
Free of an obsession, released from the prison of time, as it were to enjoy the dawning of a new day. You are a master of continuity; your words flow beautifully, bringing the reader effortlessly along to a worthy ending leaving one content. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 18:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
Free of an obsession, released from the prison of time, as it were to enjoy the dawning of a new day. You are a master of continuity; your words flow beautifully, bringing the reader effortlessly along to a worthy ending leaving one content. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 18:43
Only Time will Tell
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should all stop for a Moment. Not let Time be a Master. Especially as we get Older.
Enjoyed.
October 25th, 2026 11:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe we should all stop for a Moment. Not let Time be a Master. Especially as we get Older.
Enjoyed.
October 25th, 2026 11:23
Only Time will Tell
RSM0812 said:
Im wondering if this is your books intro. Its a great write of a lone man, pocessions, pets, picket fence, land. The man emarking on a self exploratory voyage as time itself stops for him. I really enjoyed it.
October 25th, 2026 08:57
RSM0812 said:
Im wondering if this is your books intro. Its a great write of a lone man, pocessions, pets, picket fence, land. The man emarking on a self exploratory voyage as time itself stops for him. I really enjoyed it.
October 25th, 2026 08:57
Only Time will Tell
sorenbarrett said:
My father gave me a gold pocket watch, when it was stolen it was like letting go of my father\'s hand. I was on my own, had grown up. I no longer needed material things to make me who I was I had become a sanyasi, reached another level. I hear this in this poem, time no longer a restraint one looks beyond to the beauty surrounding one.
\"He stood at the window
and watched the garden turn green,
dandelions and violets
dotting the yard
like a Jackson Pollock painting.\"
Most poetic and descriptive of the admiration of natural beauty. With time no longer the issue the central meaning of the poem to me comes in the statement:
\"For the first time in years,
he let the morning come
without asking it
for anything.\"
Transformation had occurred.
October 25th, 2026 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
My father gave me a gold pocket watch, when it was stolen it was like letting go of my father\'s hand. I was on my own, had grown up. I no longer needed material things to make me who I was I had become a sanyasi, reached another level. I hear this in this poem, time no longer a restraint one looks beyond to the beauty surrounding one.
\"He stood at the window
and watched the garden turn green,
dandelions and violets
dotting the yard
like a Jackson Pollock painting.\"
Most poetic and descriptive of the admiration of natural beauty. With time no longer the issue the central meaning of the poem to me comes in the statement:
\"For the first time in years,
he let the morning come
without asking it
for anything.\"
Transformation had occurred.
October 25th, 2026 08:04
She\'s a Smoker
Novaselic said:
This definitely hits close to home. A beautifully written poem imo.
October 20th, 2026 19:37
Novaselic said:
This definitely hits close to home. A beautifully written poem imo.
October 20th, 2026 19:37
She\'s a Smoker
Teddy.15 said:
lol I actually have friends who do that with food, nah I\'m not hungry I\'ll order a plate of fries and then they\'ll eat my steak, I feel for you, I used to be a smoker but I\'d always have two packs on a night out just in case. Love your nerative you brought back some of my own memories from my 20\'s... ๐
October 20th, 2026 10:52
Teddy.15 said:
lol I actually have friends who do that with food, nah I\'m not hungry I\'ll order a plate of fries and then they\'ll eat my steak, I feel for you, I used to be a smoker but I\'d always have two packs on a night out just in case. Love your nerative you brought back some of my own memories from my 20\'s... ๐
October 20th, 2026 10:52
She\'s a Smoker
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like the style of this one - very Kerouac. Descriptive and flowing.
October 20th, 2026 09:03
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like the style of this one - very Kerouac. Descriptive and flowing.
October 20th, 2026 09:03
She\'s a Smoker
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
Wine, homemade cigarettes and alcohol words contradicting the sobriety of life in the cold stains of winter. A truly excellent passage of poetry. Thank you very much for this one.
All the best,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 08:59
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
Wine, homemade cigarettes and alcohol words contradicting the sobriety of life in the cold stains of winter. A truly excellent passage of poetry. Thank you very much for this one.
All the best,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 08:59
The Usual Weather
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
A dirty chalk day and a forgotten envelope feels like the skin of harsh weather and most unwelcome. I like this poem, very much so. Well done.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 08:46
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Thomas,
A dirty chalk day and a forgotten envelope feels like the skin of harsh weather and most unwelcome. I like this poem, very much so. Well done.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 08:46
She\'s a Smoker
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Nothing worse than the non smoker who takes a drink then smokes yours
October 20th, 2026 08:24
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Nothing worse than the non smoker who takes a drink then smokes yours
October 20th, 2026 08:24
She\'s a Smoker
arqios said:
Exquisitely done. You got me at speckled evidence, dear friend ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
October 20th, 2026 07:32
arqios said:
Exquisitely done. You got me at speckled evidence, dear friend ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
October 20th, 2026 07:32
She\'s a Smoker
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of my favorites of yours Thomas. Having read it earlier on another site I will take a different direction. It is earthy and lived in. It holds the grasp of one that has lived life a poet that has written a thousand poems and words come naturally as if in speech from a seasoned mouth. It holds the grit of life where one knows those that live around them and speaks as if no one was listening. Your wordsmithing is evident in the ones you choose. Personification \"winter has bitter teeth\" uncommon but so vivid. You show the patience to develop a feeling and thought in actions not words. The walk, feeling the change in the pocket tells much more than saying it outright. I love the process of constructing one\'s own cigarette out of butts and yellow pages it says so much (I have done the same with a pipe and scraps of tobacco) The initial her buying you a box to keep smokes in tells more about her and the relationship than a paragraph could. The last stanza is the unfolding of how ridiculous the whole process is and maybe we all need that belt.
October 20th, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
This is one of my favorites of yours Thomas. Having read it earlier on another site I will take a different direction. It is earthy and lived in. It holds the grasp of one that has lived life a poet that has written a thousand poems and words come naturally as if in speech from a seasoned mouth. It holds the grit of life where one knows those that live around them and speaks as if no one was listening. Your wordsmithing is evident in the ones you choose. Personification \"winter has bitter teeth\" uncommon but so vivid. You show the patience to develop a feeling and thought in actions not words. The walk, feeling the change in the pocket tells much more than saying it outright. I love the process of constructing one\'s own cigarette out of butts and yellow pages it says so much (I have done the same with a pipe and scraps of tobacco) The initial her buying you a box to keep smokes in tells more about her and the relationship than a paragraph could. The last stanza is the unfolding of how ridiculous the whole process is and maybe we all need that belt.
October 20th, 2026 06:55
The Usual Weather
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thomas, autumn is always a mixed bag for me. I love the season, but the shorter days can really mess with my mood. Some evenings I just want to crawl under a blanket and tell the world to come back tomorrow. LOL! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 19th, 2026 00:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thomas, autumn is always a mixed bag for me. I love the season, but the shorter days can really mess with my mood. Some evenings I just want to crawl under a blanket and tell the world to come back tomorrow. LOL! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 19th, 2026 00:28
The Usual Weather
arqios said:
We\'ve had a cold Spring this year, so this poem had excellent timing and substance in its posting and reading. ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
October 18th, 2026 19:07
arqios said:
We\'ve had a cold Spring this year, so this poem had excellent timing and substance in its posting and reading. ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
October 18th, 2026 19:07
The Usual Weather
Teddy.15 said:
Love this dear Thomas, you always pull a rabbit out of the bag so to speak with your fabulous imagery and the way you write.
I love this particular part.
Squirrels buried their futures
beneath the dirt,
trusting the ground to keep
its mouth shut
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October 18th, 2026 13:35
Teddy.15 said:
Love this dear Thomas, you always pull a rabbit out of the bag so to speak with your fabulous imagery and the way you write.
I love this particular part.
Squirrels buried their futures
beneath the dirt,
trusting the ground to keep
its mouth shut
๐น
October 18th, 2026 13:35
The Usual Weather
Paul Bell said:
I hear the smart squirrel watches the others burying their spoils, and then steals it.
Winter is on its way, and sunnier climes are calling.
October 18th, 2026 13:33
Paul Bell said:
I hear the smart squirrel watches the others burying their spoils, and then steals it.
Winter is on its way, and sunnier climes are calling.
October 18th, 2026 13:33
The Usual Weather
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s the same here Thomas. Already I\'m being attacked by Leaves as I walk under the Trees.
The Whole aspect has a \'Stay inside and Save Yourselves\' look from Outdoors.
A most appropriate Write .
October 18th, 2026 09:06
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s the same here Thomas. Already I\'m being attacked by Leaves as I walk under the Trees.
The Whole aspect has a \'Stay inside and Save Yourselves\' look from Outdoors.
A most appropriate Write .
October 18th, 2026 09:06
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