Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your entrepreneurial spirit/skills to bear, please...!
Excellent.

November 24th, 2023 17:48

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Syd said:

I wish my kids were still little so I could read this version of a bed time story to them. Great write!

-Syd

November 24th, 2023 15:01

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Ellen Marsell said:

Really, it was fun ))

November 24th, 2023 08:46

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Teddy.15 said:

LOL very entertaining dear Thomas, did you know that Humpty Dumpty was really a cannon. 💜

November 24th, 2023 05:51

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Tom Dylan said:

Very good, Thomas.

November 24th, 2023 03:03

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Introverted Sage said:

Clever perspective of the woefully ignorant. Good one!

November 24th, 2023 02:50

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Thomas.

Andy

November 24th, 2023 02:16

Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Lorenz said:

Don\'t take the hump !
accept the fall ...

November 24th, 2023 01:58

Death is Stalking Me
Bobby O said:

I believe I possess no retrospective or introspective that can sneak past my hardened bias and trained denial about my own demise. Rather , much like in your piece I view it through my personal loss of friends , my journey forced to rearrange , I just don’t like it. The inevitability for me is always a swim across a calm shallow sea.

November 23rd, 2023 20:03

Death is Stalking Me
madalynsamantha said:

I’m so sorry for you loss. Secondly,I absolutely love this. Death is stalking us all and in the end it will unfortunately get us.

November 23rd, 2023 16:32

Death is Stalking Me
G.Cabús said:

I am an admirer of the concrete in your writings!
Thank you Thomas, for sharing your inspirational talent with us,

November 23rd, 2023 12:54

Death is Stalking Me
evenwheniLie said:

I always love well written works on real life situations, this poem has weight and it\'s own gravity.

November 23rd, 2023 08:24

Death is Stalking Me
2781 said:

Tell it to piss off.

November 23rd, 2023 03:10

Death is Stalking Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Well done in finishing the poem Thomas.

Andy

November 23rd, 2023 02:56

Death is Stalking Me
John Lee said:

Well done! And Yes. You showed death this time and finished the poem. Every small victory against death is a large victory for life!

November 23rd, 2023 01:54

Death is Stalking Me
Introverted Sage said:

This made me thinkof the Anais Nin quote: \'I postpone death by living, by suffering, by error, by risking, by giving, by losing.\'

🪶Great write!

November 23rd, 2023 00:30

A Writer
Jon Nakapalau said:

Really liked this Thomas!

November 22nd, 2023 22:43

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
Jon Nakapalau said:

Layered and deep!

November 22nd, 2023 22:42

Death is Stalking Me
Jon Nakapalau said:

Powerful meditation!

November 22nd, 2023 22:41

Mary\'s Mouth
aDarkerMind said:

I would imagine Mr Cohen applauding your work as loudly as I do Thomas;

November 22nd, 2023 13:52

Mary\'s Mouth
Lorenz said:

Those lips like unfathomable abyss !

November 22nd, 2023 06:20

Mary\'s Mouth
Tom Dylan said:

A really good poem. Love the last line.

November 22nd, 2023 03:06

Mary\'s Mouth
Goldfinch60 said:

You must be in love Thomas.

Andy

November 22nd, 2023 02:09

4 Walls
Katdream said:

In my mind, the simple things are the most elegant. We all need our own castle, even if it is only in our mind\'s eye.

November 21st, 2023 17:46

Will They Remember Me Well?
Katdream said:

This is a beautiful reminder that everything that happens in this universe adds up to something spectacular. And, then, that beautiful child....legacy indeed.

November 21st, 2023 17:40

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
Neville said:



thank the stars for good old chlordiazepoxide .. a fine write Thomas .. Neville

November 21st, 2023 01:40

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
Kinsley Lee said:

Thank you for your poem. Male bald eagle means the freedom. Human lives in the big jail named earth. they always dreaming to fly. Have a nice day!

November 20th, 2023 17:57

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
aDarkerMind said:

shooting from the hip as always Thomas.

strong stuff !

November 20th, 2023 10:03

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
Tom Dylan said:

Such a powerful poem. Really hits home. And the last lines, just wow.

November 20th, 2023 06:18

County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words Thomas.

Andy

November 20th, 2023 02:48



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