Comments received on poems by rust



Girl\'s fear
NDOU ROLIVHUWA said:

Rust, this poem is incredibly powerful and moving. I love the way you explore the themes of mortality and fear, and the imagery is so vivid and evocative. The line \'Please Mama Shutmeaway now\' is particularly striking - it\'s such a poignant expression of vulnerability and longing. Your poetry is truly exceptional.\"

June 2nd, 2024 07:36

Girl\'s fear
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Vivid imagery and language. Truly stunning.

June 2nd, 2024 06:28

Girl\'s fear
Meera Mere said:

This is so beautiful manšŸ„¹
You are amazing. It describes a girl\'s mind so well.


June 2nd, 2024 04:49

I am an automaton
Lorenz said:

very sensitive automaton !

October 14th, 2023 09:31