Comments received on poems by JuneM
Fragile
Lil said:
This is powerful. And emotional. I love this. And whatever your going through I\'m here for you.
January 20th, 2024 00:26
Lil said:
This is powerful. And emotional. I love this. And whatever your going through I\'m here for you.
January 20th, 2024 00:26
Fragile
Forrest said:
The ending line! Very emotional, I hope you\'re doing well :)
January 10th, 2024 12:35
Forrest said:
The ending line! Very emotional, I hope you\'re doing well :)
January 10th, 2024 12:35
Flourish
Miss_Dreamer said:
Hope is a strange thing, but I\'m glad you\'ve managed to find it. Keep going
December 6th, 2023 15:47
Miss_Dreamer said:
Hope is a strange thing, but I\'m glad you\'ve managed to find it. Keep going
December 6th, 2023 15:47
Again and again..
AuburnScribbler said:
Wonderfully written here JuneM, thank you very much for sharing this.
I read this like a soliloquy/epilogue of a Shakespearian play, as the way that you\'ve masterfully woven the words, in my mind, I could both see the savagery of such emotional frustration, and also, I could hear a pin drop, due to such concentrated angst, which entertainingly drew me in like a moth to flame.
Bravo for writing such a mentally straining piece, and I hope that all is well.
December 5th, 2023 10:35
AuburnScribbler said:
Wonderfully written here JuneM, thank you very much for sharing this.
I read this like a soliloquy/epilogue of a Shakespearian play, as the way that you\'ve masterfully woven the words, in my mind, I could both see the savagery of such emotional frustration, and also, I could hear a pin drop, due to such concentrated angst, which entertainingly drew me in like a moth to flame.
Bravo for writing such a mentally straining piece, and I hope that all is well.
December 5th, 2023 10:35
Breakup, Breakdown
Lil said:
Oh my god I just cried this poem is so true for all the \"friends\" out there that causes the pain. I just hope you don\'t lose hope. WE ARE STRONG!!!!!!
November 14th, 2023 15:32
Lil said:
Oh my god I just cried this poem is so true for all the \"friends\" out there that causes the pain. I just hope you don\'t lose hope. WE ARE STRONG!!!!!!
November 14th, 2023 15:32
Angry Note
Lil said:
Oh my god you are telling the truth from the beginning to the principal. Great poem keep it up.I LOVED IT!!!
November 12th, 2023 14:47
Lil said:
Oh my god you are telling the truth from the beginning to the principal. Great poem keep it up.I LOVED IT!!!
November 12th, 2023 14:47
Angry Note
Positive Girl said:
You’re being honest. Great Poem. I enjoyed reading it.
November 9th, 2023 16:45
Positive Girl said:
You’re being honest. Great Poem. I enjoyed reading it.
November 9th, 2023 16:45
Dreams
Lil said:
I just am touched by this I mean it really shows hurt & a little bit of confusion. I can relate to be honest.
November 9th, 2023 15:57
Lil said:
I just am touched by this I mean it really shows hurt & a little bit of confusion. I can relate to be honest.
November 9th, 2023 15:57
Questions of Pain
Lil said:
I feel almost everything in this poem I can and have been able to relate. But I will get better soon.
November 9th, 2023 15:41
Lil said:
I feel almost everything in this poem I can and have been able to relate. But I will get better soon.
November 9th, 2023 15:41
The Mask
dtrusss said:
\"Objects, hearts, trust, time, love, all broken
People\'s souls, taken as tokens.\"
Love this expression so much. I\'ve lately been asking the question: \"Is it possible to walk the earth with no soul.\" To me, that\'s the mask. Showing face to numbly embrace a life without soil. Who knows. Just my thoughts. Wonderful work. I also feel it comes from a place of hurt. I just burned the mast and said screw the world asking me to be something. I\'ll let you know how it goes lol.
November 6th, 2023 16:59
dtrusss said:
\"Objects, hearts, trust, time, love, all broken
People\'s souls, taken as tokens.\"
Love this expression so much. I\'ve lately been asking the question: \"Is it possible to walk the earth with no soul.\" To me, that\'s the mask. Showing face to numbly embrace a life without soil. Who knows. Just my thoughts. Wonderful work. I also feel it comes from a place of hurt. I just burned the mast and said screw the world asking me to be something. I\'ll let you know how it goes lol.
November 6th, 2023 16:59
The Mask
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You describe the mask many people wear? Intelligently written.
November 6th, 2023 16:17
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
You describe the mask many people wear? Intelligently written.
November 6th, 2023 16:17
Questions of Pain
Miss_Dreamer said:
I deeply relate to how you are feeling. I\'m so sorry you have to deal with this too. But it has to get better. It has to. I know people say it all the time, and honestly sometimes it\'s hard to believe, but behind every cloud still shines the sun. Even if you cannot see it now, there is light. Keep going friend
November 2nd, 2023 09:54
Miss_Dreamer said:
I deeply relate to how you are feeling. I\'m so sorry you have to deal with this too. But it has to get better. It has to. I know people say it all the time, and honestly sometimes it\'s hard to believe, but behind every cloud still shines the sun. Even if you cannot see it now, there is light. Keep going friend
November 2nd, 2023 09:54
Dreams
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. I relate to the longing for simpler times.
October 25th, 2023 10:03
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. I relate to the longing for simpler times.
October 25th, 2023 10:03
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