Comments received on poems by Ilal
Bubbles
sorenbarrett said:
What a delightful metaphor the vision of a child chasing a bubble is innocent and joyful. So should love be. The final line speaks to the ephemeral nature of the relationship, dreamlike nonexistent but in the soap film of the dream and mind that would pop upon awakening. A most lovely write and a fave
October 20th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
What a delightful metaphor the vision of a child chasing a bubble is innocent and joyful. So should love be. The final line speaks to the ephemeral nature of the relationship, dreamlike nonexistent but in the soap film of the dream and mind that would pop upon awakening. A most lovely write and a fave
October 20th, 2026 04:27
