Comments received on poems by Ilal



Bubbles
sorenbarrett said:

What a delightful metaphor the vision of a child chasing a bubble is innocent and joyful. So should love be. The final line speaks to the ephemeral nature of the relationship, dreamlike nonexistent but in the soap film of the dream and mind that would pop upon awakening. A most lovely write and a fave

October 20th, 2026 04:27

Can\'t Live Without You
2781 said:

Ancestry lives on.

November 22nd, 2023 07:32

A Tiny Crush
Thomas W Case said:

Excelleent.

October 26th, 2023 06:08