Comments received on poems by Ma5on



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Goldfinch60 said:

Those clouds may help you Ma5on but what you must know is that the sun is always above the clouds so you will never get away from it.

Andy

November 8th, 2023 02:07

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dtrusss said:

Daggum. These words are strong. It sure feels absurd much of the time. I tend to find it\'s quelled by a good dose of sunshine, but I happen to live in one of the darkest places in the country come fall/wintertime.

November 7th, 2023 17:12

Aimlessly
Lorenz said:

A phrasing I feel intensely :
\"Nowhere to find solace for my soul \"

November 7th, 2023 00:14

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dtrusss said:

Totally feel this one. My Scorpio brain is being flooded right now and feeling something so similar. Is it a nightmare, a vit d deficiency, a true feeling of loneliness? The answer\'s somewhere in the ether. Somewhere the answer exists, so my persistence presses onward through the ether. Press onward, stud!

November 6th, 2023 16:52