Comments received on poems by harmony



Fixing broken hearts
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Fixing broken hearts” by Harmony
From your poem :
“I cant keep fixing your broken heart
cause at the end of the day
you were never around to help me fix mine.”
We will note the following :
(a)
“Courtesy on one side only lasts so long.”
--Quoted in : Sam Phillips : \"3000 proverbs.\" New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
(b)
“It takes two to tango.”
(c)
The song “Where do broken hearts go ?” by Whitney Houston, 1987.
These words are impressive. Indeed, where do broken hearts go ? They can’t go anywhere. They are trapped in us. We have to keep them with us till our last day. Somehow, we have to scrape along. Best wishes to you. Do keep writing on this site. Soman Ragavan. 27 January, 2024.
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January 26th, 2024 19:42

Emotional Homicide
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Great write.

November 25th, 2023 23:04