Comments received on poems by fikrioshin
SAME LINE
sorenbarrett said:
Depth in this pool of thought, stop and reflect in it before one stomps in the mud. Well written Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Depth in this pool of thought, stop and reflect in it before one stomps in the mud. Well written Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:42
A MAN BY DESIGN
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful statement of what all fear, that of not meeting others expectations. As they say you can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time but you can\'t please all of the people all of the time so you might as well take off the mask and please yourself. In so doing you may also please one or two others that will love you for who you are, far better than being loved by many for what you are not.
December 21st, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful statement of what all fear, that of not meeting others expectations. As they say you can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time but you can\'t please all of the people all of the time so you might as well take off the mask and please yourself. In so doing you may also please one or two others that will love you for who you are, far better than being loved by many for what you are not.
December 21st, 2025 14:10
BLINDFOLDED
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"BLINDFOLDED\" revolves around the themes of emotional pain, self-deception, and the complexities of human relationships. It explores the notion that despite outward appearances and friendships, individuals often conceal their true feelings and struggles, walking through life without truly seeing or understanding one another.
December 20th, 2025 07:29
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"BLINDFOLDED\" revolves around the themes of emotional pain, self-deception, and the complexities of human relationships. It explores the notion that despite outward appearances and friendships, individuals often conceal their true feelings and struggles, walking through life without truly seeing or understanding one another.
December 20th, 2025 07:29
BLINDFOLDED
sorenbarrett said:
A deep write that lies beneath the surface and the mask. We are blind indeed but that does not change who we are. Well done
December 20th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A deep write that lies beneath the surface and the mask. We are blind indeed but that does not change who we are. Well done
December 20th, 2025 07:03
IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep poem on aging that we all unfortunately face. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
December 18th, 2025 07:19
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep poem on aging that we all unfortunately face. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
December 18th, 2025 07:19
IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can be felt and it feels cold and neglected, isolated from the rest of the world. A sad write
December 18th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can be felt and it feels cold and neglected, isolated from the rest of the world. A sad write
December 18th, 2025 04:08
MARCHING DOWN THE TOWN SQUARE
sorenbarrett said:
poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well written
December 17th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well written
December 17th, 2025 09:11
THE MAN AT THE TRAIN STATION
sorenbarrett said:
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this poem a sense of tension and building angst that makes it great as far as I am concerned and a fave
December 17th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this poem a sense of tension and building angst that makes it great as far as I am concerned and a fave
December 17th, 2025 03:50
AND AS THE SUN GOES DOWN
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem speaks to the being and existence of the individual come what might. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem speaks to the being and existence of the individual come what might. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 08:50
THEY\'RE ALL GOING TO BE INTERESTING AGAIN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a lull and maybe a new beginning. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a lull and maybe a new beginning. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 09:56
FRECKLES AND BIGGER THIGHS
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it gives me a sense of belonging in a small space that although not powerful is still ours. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it gives me a sense of belonging in a small space that although not powerful is still ours. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 04:05
SOUNDS FROM A FORBIDDEN TOWN.
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there are reflections of dress and appearance as well as the passage of time and feeling on shaky ground. A sense of insecurity lives here. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there are reflections of dress and appearance as well as the passage of time and feeling on shaky ground. A sense of insecurity lives here. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 04:15
THAT DAY WHEN I STOPPED TALKING TO YOU
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed feelings and resolution. Nicely stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed feelings and resolution. Nicely stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:20
MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
Poetic Licence said:
A reflective look at a past relationship and asking if it was right to say goodbye or will they meet again, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
A reflective look at a past relationship and asking if it was right to say goodbye or will they meet again, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:26
MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good bye or better until we meet again.
July 21st, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good bye or better until we meet again.
July 21st, 2025 11:01
MAYBE IF MY VOICE A LITTLE BIT LOUDER, THEY\'LL HEAR ME
sorenbarrett said:
Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense we are not thinking of? Good write
July 13th, 2025 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense we are not thinking of? Good write
July 13th, 2025 19:25
NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of isolation and searching for affiliation come through to me in this poem. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of isolation and searching for affiliation come through to me in this poem. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 04:09
AEROPHYTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great contrast between the natural, serene setting you describe in the universe above, while describing the cruel reality of us humans down below. Well done! Brilliant and hauntingly true poem! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 11th, 2024 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great contrast between the natural, serene setting you describe in the universe above, while describing the cruel reality of us humans down below. Well done! Brilliant and hauntingly true poem! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 11th, 2024 08:00
SO ARE YOU STILL WITH ME?
arial said:
Being content of yourself and having a healthy relationship to oneself can be the most beautiful privilege of life..and the line terrifying yet exhilarating...this....explains all...nicely done dear poet...
April 28th, 2024 07:18
arial said:
Being content of yourself and having a healthy relationship to oneself can be the most beautiful privilege of life..and the line terrifying yet exhilarating...this....explains all...nicely done dear poet...
April 28th, 2024 07:18
BROKEN WINGS
John said:
I see mountains of hopes, reappeared from the dust.... what a couple of lines those are
January 30th, 2024 08:14
John said:
I see mountains of hopes, reappeared from the dust.... what a couple of lines those are
January 30th, 2024 08:14
BOTH HAVE GONE
Alan R said:
Don\'t know how I came across this piece but I am glad I did
January 29th, 2024 15:55
Alan R said:
Don\'t know how I came across this piece but I am glad I did
January 29th, 2024 15:55
THE DARKENED ROOM (PART I)
John said:
Great poem mate, I was especially drawn to your middle verse,... really good
January 28th, 2024 10:21
John said:
Great poem mate, I was especially drawn to your middle verse,... really good
January 28th, 2024 10:21
BOTH HAVE GONE
Cassie58 said:
I got a sense of isolation from your words of reflection. When your sense of fun has gone and you can’t smile the darkness has set in. That’s not a good place to be.
January 24th, 2024 08:24
Cassie58 said:
I got a sense of isolation from your words of reflection. When your sense of fun has gone and you can’t smile the darkness has set in. That’s not a good place to be.
January 24th, 2024 08:24
BROKEN WINGS
Cassie58 said:
Out of the dust I rise. Those words came to me as I read your reflections. I found hope in your poem. Everyone needs hope. Have a lovely day.
January 23rd, 2024 05:16
Cassie58 said:
Out of the dust I rise. Those words came to me as I read your reflections. I found hope in your poem. Everyone needs hope. Have a lovely day.
January 23rd, 2024 05:16
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