Comments received on poems by fikrioshin



THAT DAY WHEN I STOPPED TALKING TO YOU
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of mixed feelings and resolution. Nicely stated

July 22nd, 2025 04:20

MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
Poetic Licence said:

A reflective look at a past relationship and asking if it was right to say goodbye or will they meet again, nicely expressed and written

July 21st, 2025 12:26

MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
sorenbarrett said:

Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good bye or better until we meet again.

July 21st, 2025 11:01

MAYBE IF MY VOICE A LITTLE BIT LOUDER, THEY\'LL HEAR ME
sorenbarrett said:

Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense we are not thinking of? Good write

July 13th, 2025 19:25

NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:

Feelings of isolation and searching for affiliation come through to me in this poem. Very nicely done

July 10th, 2025 04:09

HOUSE FOR TWO
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 3rd, 2025 10:29

HOUSE FOR TWO
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely read, really enjoyed it

February 3rd, 2025 07:11

HOUSE FOR TWO
arqios said:

Good, so good not to be alone. 🙏🏻🕊

February 3rd, 2025 06:44

I DON\'T SEE GOOD IN A GOODBYE
2781 said:

I like farewell.

November 13th, 2024 10:00

AEROPHYTE
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 11th, 2024 15:06

AEROPHYTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great contrast between the natural, serene setting you describe in the universe above, while describing the cruel reality of us humans down below. Well done! Brilliant and hauntingly true poem! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤

November 11th, 2024 08:00

SO ARE YOU STILL WITH ME?
arial said:

Being content of yourself and having a healthy relationship to oneself can be the most beautiful privilege of life..and the line terrifying yet exhilarating...this....explains all...nicely done dear poet...

April 28th, 2024 07:18

BROKEN WINGS
John said:

I see mountains of hopes, reappeared from the dust.... what a couple of lines those are


January 30th, 2024 08:14

BOTH HAVE GONE
Alan R said:

Don\'t know how I came across this piece but I am glad I did

January 29th, 2024 15:55

BIRTHDAY CAKES
John said:

Another good read, thanks

January 29th, 2024 10:15

THE DARKENED ROOM (PART I)
John said:

Great poem mate, I was especially drawn to your middle verse,... really good

January 28th, 2024 10:21

BOTH HAVE GONE
Cassie58 said:

I got a sense of isolation from your words of reflection. When your sense of fun has gone and you can’t smile the darkness has set in. That’s not a good place to be.

January 24th, 2024 08:24

BROKEN WINGS
Cassie58 said:

Out of the dust I rise. Those words came to me as I read your reflections. I found hope in your poem. Everyone needs hope. Have a lovely day.

January 23rd, 2024 05:16

ABOUT THE SKY
Cassie58 said:

Grey days are calming and reflective. So many shades of grey. I enjoyed reading the words of your students. Thank you and them.

January 22nd, 2024 04:12

FEAR
2781 said:

For the LORD most high is terrible;

January 8th, 2024 07:10

INDEMNIFY
evenwheniLie said:

Putting forth the best version of ones self, may not insure your future, it does however insure self dignity and respect.

January 4th, 2024 16:21

THE UNFORGOTTEN
2781 said:

I know that there is no good in them, but for a man to rejoice, and to do good in his life.

January 1st, 2024 08:17

ONLY BE REMEMBERED
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

December 31st, 2023 12:54

ME
Thomas W Case said:

Superb

December 19th, 2023 12:15

THE UNCOMMON TESTAMENT
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

December 18th, 2023 14:09

THE NIGHTS ARE OVER
2781 said:

Now it\'s Netflix and the occasional meal at the RSL!

December 18th, 2023 04:21

THE NIGHTS ARE OVER
evenwheniLie said:

Excellent poem, it’s like reading what you’re seeing when you’re looking at a Picasso.

December 17th, 2023 14:23

THE NIGHTS ARE OVER
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful write.

December 17th, 2023 11:38

A FRIEND OF MINE
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful and moving.

December 16th, 2023 10:24

DELUSIONAL
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic imagery.

December 15th, 2023 09:37

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