Comments received on poems by fikrioshin
CATCHING THE RAIN
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely constructed and written. The end relates to the beginning and most poetic. Loved it
January 30th, 2026 18:01
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely constructed and written. The end relates to the beginning and most poetic. Loved it
January 30th, 2026 18:01
TOGETHER
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic tautology that makes sense. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic tautology that makes sense. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 03:52
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
evenwheniLie said:
First off, Happy Birthday!! …..And you’re so right in your assessment, taking time out for yourself is necessary to understand yourself completely, it would make for a more fulfilling life….. you would have the necessary balance to do so….
January 29th, 2026 16:18
evenwheniLie said:
First off, Happy Birthday!! …..And you’re so right in your assessment, taking time out for yourself is necessary to understand yourself completely, it would make for a more fulfilling life….. you would have the necessary balance to do so….
January 29th, 2026 16:18
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with good advice nicely composed. Loved it and Happy Birthday
January 28th, 2026 17:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with good advice nicely composed. Loved it and Happy Birthday
January 28th, 2026 17:35
LOST OUR CONNECTION
sorenbarrett said:
This has vague feelings of familiarity that touch down deep. Nicely stated in poetic form
January 27th, 2026 02:44
sorenbarrett said:
This has vague feelings of familiarity that touch down deep. Nicely stated in poetic form
January 27th, 2026 02:44
THE DARKENED ROOM (PART 2)
sorenbarrett said:
Too much on the mind to sleep. A good write
January 26th, 2026 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Too much on the mind to sleep. A good write
January 26th, 2026 19:34
JOKES ONLY YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND
sorenbarrett said:
Changes occur and in this poem there is a loss in a forgotten map and now a search for the lost unsuccessfully A most reflective poem
January 25th, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Changes occur and in this poem there is a loss in a forgotten map and now a search for the lost unsuccessfully A most reflective poem
January 25th, 2026 11:33
DEATH IS A THIEF WITH NO SOUND
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem but at the same time a strong poem of friendship that gos beyond death and lives in memory. Nicely written it shows good rhyme and flow with a strong message. Lovely and a fave
January 24th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem but at the same time a strong poem of friendship that gos beyond death and lives in memory. Nicely written it shows good rhyme and flow with a strong message. Lovely and a fave
January 24th, 2026 04:15
A COLOUR I CAN NO LONGER SEE
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a sense of physical loss as well as emotional and the pain of amputation. A powerful piece
January 23rd, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a sense of physical loss as well as emotional and the pain of amputation. A powerful piece
January 23rd, 2026 04:37
A BEAUTIFUL STORY THAT SIMPLY ENDS
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of the deterioration of relationships and the felt loss in their absence. Particularly poignant today where relationships are as disposable as the car you trade in every few years when the lease runs out.
January 22nd, 2026 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of the deterioration of relationships and the felt loss in their absence. Particularly poignant today where relationships are as disposable as the car you trade in every few years when the lease runs out.
January 22nd, 2026 09:20
THE FREQUENCY WE LOST
sorenbarrett said:
As distance grows so does formal politeness that is cold in its smiles. A wonderful poem based on the heat of a relationship now cold ash.
January 21st, 2026 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
As distance grows so does formal politeness that is cold in its smiles. A wonderful poem based on the heat of a relationship now cold ash.
January 21st, 2026 10:58
THE MOMENT I STOPPED GIVING MUCH..
sorenbarrett said:
Accepting the inevitable is a sign of intelligence but knowing what is inevitable is greater intelligence yet. A lovely write
January 19th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
Accepting the inevitable is a sign of intelligence but knowing what is inevitable is greater intelligence yet. A lovely write
January 19th, 2026 09:57
SAME LINE
sorenbarrett said:
Depth in this pool of thought, stop and reflect in it before one stomps in the mud. Well written Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Depth in this pool of thought, stop and reflect in it before one stomps in the mud. Well written Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:42
A MAN BY DESIGN
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful statement of what all fear, that of not meeting others expectations. As they say you can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time but you can\'t please all of the people all of the time so you might as well take off the mask and please yourself. In so doing you may also please one or two others that will love you for who you are, far better than being loved by many for what you are not.
December 21st, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful statement of what all fear, that of not meeting others expectations. As they say you can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time but you can\'t please all of the people all of the time so you might as well take off the mask and please yourself. In so doing you may also please one or two others that will love you for who you are, far better than being loved by many for what you are not.
December 21st, 2025 14:10
BLINDFOLDED
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"BLINDFOLDED\" revolves around the themes of emotional pain, self-deception, and the complexities of human relationships. It explores the notion that despite outward appearances and friendships, individuals often conceal their true feelings and struggles, walking through life without truly seeing or understanding one another.
December 20th, 2025 07:29
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem \"BLINDFOLDED\" revolves around the themes of emotional pain, self-deception, and the complexities of human relationships. It explores the notion that despite outward appearances and friendships, individuals often conceal their true feelings and struggles, walking through life without truly seeing or understanding one another.
December 20th, 2025 07:29
BLINDFOLDED
sorenbarrett said:
A deep write that lies beneath the surface and the mask. We are blind indeed but that does not change who we are. Well done
December 20th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A deep write that lies beneath the surface and the mask. We are blind indeed but that does not change who we are. Well done
December 20th, 2025 07:03
IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep poem on aging that we all unfortunately face. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
December 18th, 2025 07:19
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep poem on aging that we all unfortunately face. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
December 18th, 2025 07:19
IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can be felt and it feels cold and neglected, isolated from the rest of the world. A sad write
December 18th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can be felt and it feels cold and neglected, isolated from the rest of the world. A sad write
December 18th, 2025 04:08
MARCHING DOWN THE TOWN SQUARE
sorenbarrett said:
poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well written
December 17th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well written
December 17th, 2025 09:11
THE MAN AT THE TRAIN STATION
sorenbarrett said:
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this poem a sense of tension and building angst that makes it great as far as I am concerned and a fave
December 17th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this poem a sense of tension and building angst that makes it great as far as I am concerned and a fave
December 17th, 2025 03:50
AND AS THE SUN GOES DOWN
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem speaks to the being and existence of the individual come what might. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem speaks to the being and existence of the individual come what might. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 08:50
THEY\'RE ALL GOING TO BE INTERESTING AGAIN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a lull and maybe a new beginning. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a lull and maybe a new beginning. Nicely written
December 9th, 2025 09:56
FRECKLES AND BIGGER THIGHS
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it gives me a sense of belonging in a small space that although not powerful is still ours. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this it gives me a sense of belonging in a small space that although not powerful is still ours. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 04:05
SOUNDS FROM A FORBIDDEN TOWN.
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there are reflections of dress and appearance as well as the passage of time and feeling on shaky ground. A sense of insecurity lives here. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there are reflections of dress and appearance as well as the passage of time and feeling on shaky ground. A sense of insecurity lives here. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 04:15
THAT DAY WHEN I STOPPED TALKING TO YOU
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed feelings and resolution. Nicely stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed feelings and resolution. Nicely stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:20
MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
Poetic Licence said:
A reflective look at a past relationship and asking if it was right to say goodbye or will they meet again, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
A reflective look at a past relationship and asking if it was right to say goodbye or will they meet again, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:26
MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good bye or better until we meet again.
July 21st, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good bye or better until we meet again.
July 21st, 2025 11:01
MAYBE IF MY VOICE A LITTLE BIT LOUDER, THEY\'LL HEAR ME
sorenbarrett said:
Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense we are not thinking of? Good write
July 13th, 2025 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense we are not thinking of? Good write
July 13th, 2025 19:25
NEVER REALLY HAD A GOOD FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of isolation and searching for affiliation come through to me in this poem. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of isolation and searching for affiliation come through to me in this poem. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 04:09
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