Comments received on poems by Gaurav Gurung
Sati
Poetic Licence said:
It is such a horrific, brutal, revolting part of a culture, but the author has expressed it beautifully in this write. A very sad reminder that some people still hang onto rituals like these
August 11th, 2025 08:13
Poetic Licence said:
It is such a horrific, brutal, revolting part of a culture, but the author has expressed it beautifully in this write. A very sad reminder that some people still hang onto rituals like these
August 11th, 2025 08:13
Sati
Priya Tomar said:
The scene is dancing in my eyes.
Every line of this poem full of tragedy .
Bitter truth of our culture......
August 11th, 2025 06:45
Priya Tomar said:
The scene is dancing in my eyes.
Every line of this poem full of tragedy .
Bitter truth of our culture......
August 11th, 2025 06:45
Sati
sorenbarrett said:
A cultural, religious, spiritual, ritual poetically spoken in vivid and graphic images. Compelling, revolting, emotional with an ending twist. A fave
August 11th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A cultural, religious, spiritual, ritual poetically spoken in vivid and graphic images. Compelling, revolting, emotional with an ending twist. A fave
August 11th, 2025 05:07
To be Dylan\'s Voice / A Generation\'s Voice
Poetic Licence said:
One of my favourite artists, lovely tribute, and we wish we could be as creative as him, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 17:59
Poetic Licence said:
One of my favourite artists, lovely tribute, and we wish we could be as creative as him, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 17:59
To be Dylan\'s Voice / A Generation\'s Voice
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the voice of the century. Nobel winner in poetry it is his verse that I love the most. King of metaphor. A lovely write.
July 19th, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the voice of the century. Nobel winner in poetry it is his verse that I love the most. King of metaphor. A lovely write.
July 19th, 2025 13:20
The Moth and The Warmth
sorenbarrett said:
The allegory is very nice. It speaks to the heart and soul. To give back what was taken is the best way to end a story. Lovely and a fave
July 13th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
The allegory is very nice. It speaks to the heart and soul. To give back what was taken is the best way to end a story. Lovely and a fave
July 13th, 2025 13:46
Guerrilla Warfare
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and sad write over the bloody nature of humanity, although a dark read it still offers a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 00:01
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and sad write over the bloody nature of humanity, although a dark read it still offers a glimmer of hope, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 00:01
Guerrilla Warfare
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and dark it is sad and bloody the worst of humanity and a small twinge of remorse as an ember still glowing of hope. A fave
July 10th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and dark it is sad and bloody the worst of humanity and a small twinge of remorse as an ember still glowing of hope. A fave
July 10th, 2025 14:45
The Unison
Poetic Licence said:
For good sex the souls should unite, erotic and sensuous write, nicely written
June 16th, 2025 16:16
Poetic Licence said:
For good sex the souls should unite, erotic and sensuous write, nicely written
June 16th, 2025 16:16
The Unison
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual and erotic it speaks of unity. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual and erotic it speaks of unity. Nicely done
June 16th, 2025 15:52
The Accursed Sea - A Sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read with wonderful imagery, that flows right till the end, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 10:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read with wonderful imagery, that flows right till the end, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 10:57
The Accursed Sea - A Sonnet
sorenbarrett said:
Faithful to the lore of sirens and the sea. A lovely wording carried me on like the siren to the end
June 2nd, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Faithful to the lore of sirens and the sea. A lovely wording carried me on like the siren to the end
June 2nd, 2025 08:54
Everybody Wants To Rule The World
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about one of the worst human traights, the desire for and greed that spans the world, religions, cultures and countries, ending with the irony of the last stanza, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:00
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about one of the worst human traights, the desire for and greed that spans the world, religions, cultures and countries, ending with the irony of the last stanza, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:00
Everybody Wants To Rule The World
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to be a human quality from birth to grave all cultures, countries and religions. Power rules as does wealth greed and aspiration rules the world
May 8th, 2025 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to be a human quality from birth to grave all cultures, countries and religions. Power rules as does wealth greed and aspiration rules the world
May 8th, 2025 09:57
The Missiles and its People
Poetic Licence said:
A sad, touching, haunting and sadly true write of what so many children have to live through these days and the price they pay, wonderful eomotional write
April 11th, 2025 09:35
Poetic Licence said:
A sad, touching, haunting and sadly true write of what so many children have to live through these days and the price they pay, wonderful eomotional write
April 11th, 2025 09:35
The Missiles and its People
sorenbarrett said:
War, Famine and Pestilence the three big killers that act indiscriminately on all. A sad poem tragic in its imagery but then nature has a different sense of justice. A most moving work well worded and nicely penned.
April 11th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
War, Famine and Pestilence the three big killers that act indiscriminately on all. A sad poem tragic in its imagery but then nature has a different sense of justice. A most moving work well worded and nicely penned.
April 11th, 2025 09:13
The Shepherds :- An ode to the Gurung community
spilleronsheet said:
It’s heartwarming to know about different cultures….giving me insight are those lines, telling me the courage of the clans…there really lies treasure in North-east…the culture they hold, and the people who hold them
April 11th, 2025 07:27
spilleronsheet said:
It’s heartwarming to know about different cultures….giving me insight are those lines, telling me the courage of the clans…there really lies treasure in North-east…the culture they hold, and the people who hold them
April 11th, 2025 07:27
Azalea
spilleronsheet said:
A very deep insight with carefully chosen lines…takes the reader from different emotions yet powering is the determination…keep writing poet….well done poet
April 11th, 2025 07:25
spilleronsheet said:
A very deep insight with carefully chosen lines…takes the reader from different emotions yet powering is the determination…keep writing poet….well done poet
April 11th, 2025 07:25
Azalea
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, wonderful imagery, story and expression, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 07:13
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, wonderful imagery, story and expression, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 07:13
Azalea
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing lines woven into this beautiful poem. It has an Eastern feel as if it fell from the Vedas pages. (Her brother was adored; and she was his shadow,) a lovely and historically true image. (But there exists not a cage, strong enough to hold the storm.) A great line that encapsulates the truth but frees the mind. A poem of so many things, courage, determination, strife, overcoming and so is the sky. A fave
April 8th, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing lines woven into this beautiful poem. It has an Eastern feel as if it fell from the Vedas pages. (Her brother was adored; and she was his shadow,) a lovely and historically true image. (But there exists not a cage, strong enough to hold the storm.) A great line that encapsulates the truth but frees the mind. A poem of so many things, courage, determination, strife, overcoming and so is the sky. A fave
April 8th, 2025 07:01
The Shepherds :- An ode to the Gurung community
sorenbarrett said:
Pride of one\'s roots and place of origin comes through in this poem. It speaks with power of customs and ways held dear. Very nice
February 1st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Pride of one\'s roots and place of origin comes through in this poem. It speaks with power of customs and ways held dear. Very nice
February 1st, 2025 04:42
That Day in the Garden
Poetic Licence said:
What a beautiful memory to have, enjoyable read
January 30th, 2025 16:13
Poetic Licence said:
What a beautiful memory to have, enjoyable read
January 30th, 2025 16:13
Love is for the Brave
Cassie58 said:
When the heart chooses, the mind loses. A beautiful poem. Long live love. Shame on the haters.
September 14th, 2024 12:21
Cassie58 said:
When the heart chooses, the mind loses. A beautiful poem. Long live love. Shame on the haters.
September 14th, 2024 12:21
(Not) Just a Paper
sorenbarrett said:
Writing itself probably the world\'s greatest invention long neglected in its importance. Without it knowledge could not be passed on over much time. Paper came latter but surely facilitated the process. Yes trees have given us something to talk about
August 26th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Writing itself probably the world\'s greatest invention long neglected in its importance. Without it knowledge could not be passed on over much time. Paper came latter but surely facilitated the process. Yes trees have given us something to talk about
August 26th, 2024 09:28
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