Comments received on poems by Gaurav Gurung
Love is for the Brave
Cassie58 said:
When the heart chooses, the mind loses. A beautiful poem. Long live love. Shame on the haters.
September 14th, 2024 12:21
Cassie58 said:
When the heart chooses, the mind loses. A beautiful poem. Long live love. Shame on the haters.
September 14th, 2024 12:21
(Not) Just a Paper
sorenbarrett said:
Writing itself probably the world\'s greatest invention long neglected in its importance. Without it knowledge could not be passed on over much time. Paper came latter but surely facilitated the process. Yes trees have given us something to talk about
August 26th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Writing itself probably the world\'s greatest invention long neglected in its importance. Without it knowledge could not be passed on over much time. Paper came latter but surely facilitated the process. Yes trees have given us something to talk about
August 26th, 2024 09:28
10 Rupees
sorenbarrett said:
Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money but actions. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money but actions. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:53
10 Rupees
jarcher54 said:
Quite relatable. Your boys are so real. I recall occasionally finding a coin or bill on the roadside and feeling rich at that moment, full of possibilities. I don\'t recall being disappointed but I suspect I was. Thanks for sharing this poignant anecdote my friend.
August 18th, 2024 11:57
jarcher54 said:
Quite relatable. Your boys are so real. I recall occasionally finding a coin or bill on the roadside and feeling rich at that moment, full of possibilities. I don\'t recall being disappointed but I suspect I was. Thanks for sharing this poignant anecdote my friend.
August 18th, 2024 11:57
Poetry of the Undesired
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to agree with 2781 here. The trouble is..... \'those in power\' and \'bureaucracy\' are not the same, not equivalents.
Impassioned plea I liked a lot.
August 5th, 2024 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to agree with 2781 here. The trouble is..... \'those in power\' and \'bureaucracy\' are not the same, not equivalents.
Impassioned plea I liked a lot.
August 5th, 2024 17:40
Poetry of the Undesired
sorenbarrett said:
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here as a responsibility of the rest of us. Nicely stated.
August 5th, 2024 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here as a responsibility of the rest of us. Nicely stated.
August 5th, 2024 07:49
Nature and Poetry
HoboBilbo said:
My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don\'t write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
July 24th, 2024 08:14
HoboBilbo said:
My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don\'t write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
July 24th, 2024 08:14
Nature and Poetry
HoboBilbo said:
My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don\'t write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
July 24th, 2024 08:14
HoboBilbo said:
My feedback: maybe study a selection of poets (try to internalize their styles whilst looking for the subcontextual meanings of their works), internalize the meanings of many punctuation marks (the colon, hyphen, semi-colon, etc.), teach yourself to understand real similes (and then stay away from W.B. Yeats), and don\'t write anything that is seasoned by anything too far before the days of Shakespeare (if you do this, be lenient). If you wish to not write anything stupid, stay away from absurdism. If you ask ChatGpt for advice and you find yourself reading something that takes something away from you, go subjectify and internalize. Understanding Metaphysics/Meta-physics/Tarot/& Spirituality will also help out. Also, teach yourself Music Theory and the etymology of words.
July 24th, 2024 08:14
When Did The Sweets Turn Bitter?
Neilton said:
I believe it is part of growing up and changing...Either way these are always in my mind !Nostalgia is truly a mind\'s trick! I loved your poem
June 1st, 2024 04:50
Neilton said:
I believe it is part of growing up and changing...Either way these are always in my mind !Nostalgia is truly a mind\'s trick! I loved your poem
June 1st, 2024 04:50
A Day in the Un-Urbanized
2781 said:
Some one once told me we were created for village life.
Whats that song say- they take paradise, put up a parking lot
May 25th, 2024 02:05
2781 said:
Some one once told me we were created for village life.
Whats that song say- they take paradise, put up a parking lot
May 25th, 2024 02:05
The Visions of A Gentleman
2781 said:
It even sadder that they are inspired to be like us.
March 3rd, 2024 08:12
2781 said:
It even sadder that they are inspired to be like us.
March 3rd, 2024 08:12
A Love Beyond A Heart
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed emotion here for a love. I particularly enjoyed the references to the wind and the raindrops. Heart warming poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:31
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed emotion here for a love. I particularly enjoyed the references to the wind and the raindrops. Heart warming poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:31
A Love Beyond A Heart
Santajah Douglass said:
This is so beautiful. What an amazing feeling to express.
November 30th, 2023 13:39
Santajah Douglass said:
This is so beautiful. What an amazing feeling to express.
November 30th, 2023 13:39
