Comments received on poems by Gaurav Gurung
10 Rupees
sorenbarrett said:
Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money but actions. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money but actions. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:53
10 Rupees
jarcher54 said:
Quite relatable. Your boys are so real. I recall occasionally finding a coin or bill on the roadside and feeling rich at that moment, full of possibilities. I don\'t recall being disappointed but I suspect I was. Thanks for sharing this poignant anecdote my friend.
August 18th, 2024 11:57
jarcher54 said:
Quite relatable. Your boys are so real. I recall occasionally finding a coin or bill on the roadside and feeling rich at that moment, full of possibilities. I don\'t recall being disappointed but I suspect I was. Thanks for sharing this poignant anecdote my friend.
August 18th, 2024 11:57
Poetry of the Undesired
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to agree with 2781 here. The trouble is..... \'those in power\' and \'bureaucracy\' are not the same, not equivalents.
Impassioned plea I liked a lot.
August 5th, 2024 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Have to agree with 2781 here. The trouble is..... \'those in power\' and \'bureaucracy\' are not the same, not equivalents.
Impassioned plea I liked a lot.
August 5th, 2024 17:40
Poetry of the Undesired
sorenbarrett said:
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here as a responsibility of the rest of us. Nicely stated.
August 5th, 2024 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here as a responsibility of the rest of us. Nicely stated.
August 5th, 2024 07:49
When Did The Sweets Turn Bitter?
Neilton said:
I believe it is part of growing up and changing...Either way these are always in my mind !Nostalgia is truly a mind\'s trick! I loved your poem
June 1st, 2024 04:50
Neilton said:
I believe it is part of growing up and changing...Either way these are always in my mind !Nostalgia is truly a mind\'s trick! I loved your poem
June 1st, 2024 04:50
A Day in the Un-Urbanized
2781 said:
Some one once told me we were created for village life.
Whats that song say- they take paradise, put up a parking lot
May 25th, 2024 02:05
2781 said:
Some one once told me we were created for village life.
Whats that song say- they take paradise, put up a parking lot
May 25th, 2024 02:05
The Visions of A Gentleman
2781 said:
It even sadder that they are inspired to be like us.
March 3rd, 2024 08:12
2781 said:
It even sadder that they are inspired to be like us.
March 3rd, 2024 08:12
A Love Beyond A Heart
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed emotion here for a love. I particularly enjoyed the references to the wind and the raindrops. Heart warming poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:31
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully expressed emotion here for a love. I particularly enjoyed the references to the wind and the raindrops. Heart warming poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:31
A Love Beyond A Heart
Santajah Douglass said:
This is so beautiful. What an amazing feeling to express.
November 30th, 2023 13:39
Santajah Douglass said:
This is so beautiful. What an amazing feeling to express.
November 30th, 2023 13:39
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