Comments received on poems by ElizabethMoroz
The Intricate Mysteries Of Being
Teddy.15 said:
As I am myself a firm believer I\'m fate, I adore these lines.
A decision that’s already decided by fate
The precision timing required when it’s already too late. For it\'s rhyme and irony. Your imagery throughout is fantastic and I love your opening stanza right down to the last, I don\'t usually ha e time for theo ger reads but this was well worth it. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 23:35
Teddy.15 said:
As I am myself a firm believer I\'m fate, I adore these lines.
A decision that’s already decided by fate
The precision timing required when it’s already too late. For it\'s rhyme and irony. Your imagery throughout is fantastic and I love your opening stanza right down to the last, I don\'t usually ha e time for theo ger reads but this was well worth it. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 23:35
Alchemy Of The Answers
Poetic Licence said:
That is so well laid out, feel likes an old book full of pages of statements, facts and questions, mans behaviour history for all to see, really enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:20
Poetic Licence said:
That is so well laid out, feel likes an old book full of pages of statements, facts and questions, mans behaviour history for all to see, really enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:20
Alchemy Of The Answers
arqios said:
That’s a stunning piece that is dense with imagery, rhythm, and philosophical tension. It reads like a tapestry woven from history, politics, science, and emotion, all stitched together with rhyme and reflection. Much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊️
July 17th, 2025 07:33
arqios said:
That’s a stunning piece that is dense with imagery, rhythm, and philosophical tension. It reads like a tapestry woven from history, politics, science, and emotion, all stitched together with rhyme and reflection. Much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊️
July 17th, 2025 07:33
Alchemy Of The Answers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, your poem is a tidal wave of thought and truth...equal parts lament, vision, and revolt. There’s a beat to it, a pulse that carries line after line without losing steam. You pull the intellectual and the emotional into the same orbit...and that’s not easy to do. 🌹👏 Brava, my friend. A fave for sure.
July 17th, 2025 06:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, your poem is a tidal wave of thought and truth...equal parts lament, vision, and revolt. There’s a beat to it, a pulse that carries line after line without losing steam. You pull the intellectual and the emotional into the same orbit...and that’s not easy to do. 🌹👏 Brava, my friend. A fave for sure.
July 17th, 2025 06:12
Alchemy Of The Answers
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of dropping statement after statement as if shuffling through a stack of old photos out of order, each evoking a memory, a vision. a question. Too many to answer many without answers. Thought provoking. Very nicely done
July 17th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of dropping statement after statement as if shuffling through a stack of old photos out of order, each evoking a memory, a vision. a question. Too many to answer many without answers. Thought provoking. Very nicely done
July 17th, 2025 03:52
The Intricate Mysteries Of Being
Poetic Licence said:
A really wonderful write filled with philosophical statements and questions, certainly one to read more than once, in its style and flow it reminded me of the Billy Joel song, we didn\'t start the fire, very enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A really wonderful write filled with philosophical statements and questions, certainly one to read more than once, in its style and flow it reminded me of the Billy Joel song, we didn\'t start the fire, very enjoyable read
July 16th, 2025 05:25
The Intricate Mysteries Of Being
sorenbarrett said:
It swirls in cerebral ink. It floats on an intellectual sea. Well worded it speaks to the philosopher in each reader. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
It swirls in cerebral ink. It floats on an intellectual sea. Well worded it speaks to the philosopher in each reader. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 04:03
The Intricate Mysteries Of Being
Priya Tomar said:
Your poetic power is praiseworthy.
Very wrll...
July 16th, 2025 02:10
Priya Tomar said:
Your poetic power is praiseworthy.
Very wrll...
July 16th, 2025 02:10
The War That Defies Justification
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe I\'ve said what I had to say about your poetry previously, and I resile from none of it.
PS: It\'s OK - I just ignored ChatGPT☺️
July 15th, 2025 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
I believe I\'ve said what I had to say about your poetry previously, and I resile from none of it.
PS: It\'s OK - I just ignored ChatGPT☺️
July 15th, 2025 06:50
The War That Defies Justification
Poetic Licence said:
A power and very well worded critique of the modern world, the dishonesty, greed, selfishness and corruption, controlled by the privileged few. The continuing devastation, destruction and killing that is allowed and aided before the world\'s eye\'s, yet no one stands properly to bring piece, wonderful write
July 15th, 2025 05:56
Poetic Licence said:
A power and very well worded critique of the modern world, the dishonesty, greed, selfishness and corruption, controlled by the privileged few. The continuing devastation, destruction and killing that is allowed and aided before the world\'s eye\'s, yet no one stands properly to bring piece, wonderful write
July 15th, 2025 05:56
The War That Defies Justification
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worked this poem uses great internal rhyming to reinforce its strength of message. It is powerful and shows discontent and contempt for corruption and injustice in the system. It has biting criticism for use of the system and a stinging review of organizational disregard. The reader carried on by the rhythm of the rhyme is pulled into the view almost hypnotically. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Very well worked this poem uses great internal rhyming to reinforce its strength of message. It is powerful and shows discontent and contempt for corruption and injustice in the system. It has biting criticism for use of the system and a stinging review of organizational disregard. The reader carried on by the rhythm of the rhyme is pulled into the view almost hypnotically. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 04:22
The Age of Lies
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well crafted write of disbelief and mistrust, highlighting it is so difficult these days to know what is true and what is not, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 22:31
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well crafted write of disbelief and mistrust, highlighting it is so difficult these days to know what is true and what is not, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 22:31
The Age of Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual, lost in the rhyme and rhythm of your piece and the ideas that hang between them. Could do without the \'External Review\' though. Too long (something of a white rabbit when it comes to time) and I like to know who I\'m talking or listening to. You may find me in your back catalogue occasionally, somewhere....
July 14th, 2025 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual, lost in the rhyme and rhythm of your piece and the ideas that hang between them. Could do without the \'External Review\' though. Too long (something of a white rabbit when it comes to time) and I like to know who I\'m talking or listening to. You may find me in your back catalogue occasionally, somewhere....
July 14th, 2025 07:54
The Age of Lies
sorenbarrett said:
You can\'t believe what you see, hear, smell, taste, or touch a read of disbelief so all one can do is laugh
July 14th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
You can\'t believe what you see, hear, smell, taste, or touch a read of disbelief so all one can do is laugh
July 14th, 2025 05:09
Facial Recognition Blues
ElizabethMoroz said:
Thankyou so much Thomas. Thankyou for taking the time to read this poem . I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. I look forward to reading your work ! Most Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
February 10th, 2024 06:14
ElizabethMoroz said:
Thankyou so much Thomas. Thankyou for taking the time to read this poem . I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. I look forward to reading your work ! Most Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
February 10th, 2024 06:14
Facial Recognition Blues
HappyisntthewordIduse said:
This is a great poem. Love it!
January 15th, 2024 08:44
HappyisntthewordIduse said:
This is a great poem. Love it!
January 15th, 2024 08:44
Facial Recognition Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
Would you care to identify the source of your \'external review\'?
January 15th, 2024 08:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Would you care to identify the source of your \'external review\'?
January 15th, 2024 08:38
The War That Defies Justification
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
ANY war defies justification.
January 14th, 2024 04:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
ANY war defies justification.
January 14th, 2024 04:46
The War That Defies Justification
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant.
January 12th, 2024 17:57
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant.
January 12th, 2024 17:57
The War That Defies Justification
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Certainly a sad look at the horrifying truth of War.Let us pray there is no war in the next life.
January 12th, 2024 15:53
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Certainly a sad look at the horrifying truth of War.Let us pray there is no war in the next life.
January 12th, 2024 15:53
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