Comments received on poems by ElizabethMoroz
Convoluted Reflections of Possibility
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, Elizabeth, this ebbs and flows like a tide...pulling between conviction and lament, light and fracture. The rhythm carries weight…almost like each stanza is its own rallying cry. That closing image of innocence dying stays with me...I feel its weight. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I hope all has been well in my absence.
August 10th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, Elizabeth, this ebbs and flows like a tide...pulling between conviction and lament, light and fracture. The rhythm carries weight…almost like each stanza is its own rallying cry. That closing image of innocence dying stays with me...I feel its weight. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I hope all has been well in my absence.
August 10th, 2025 07:49
Convoluted Reflections of Possibility
Poetic Licence said:
This is my homework for today, I enjoy your reads they always make me have to think, nicely crafted and written
August 10th, 2025 07:04
Poetic Licence said:
This is my homework for today, I enjoy your reads they always make me have to think, nicely crafted and written
August 10th, 2025 07:04
Convoluted Reflections of Possibility
sorenbarrett said:
The classics are always a good foundation for thought. People that many class as primitive excel beyond modern thought. Nicely worded with a good deal of internal rhyme as well.
August 9th, 2025 22:15
sorenbarrett said:
The classics are always a good foundation for thought. People that many class as primitive excel beyond modern thought. Nicely worded with a good deal of internal rhyme as well.
August 9th, 2025 22:15
The Plight Of A Sage
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible poem in it\'s structure and cadence. I read aloud several times, for the pauses and inflections that enhance it\'s meaning. I think what I see is that the sage has insight to see the inevitability of the direction in which we are being led, through the fog of misdirection and manipulation that is perpetrated upon us all, each day by those who have been given, or taken control. It is a heavy load to bear mentally, and a return to nature, which is real and unwavering, can bring respite until it starts all over again. At least that is my interpretation. I thoroughly enjoyed!
August 6th, 2025 12:50
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible poem in it\'s structure and cadence. I read aloud several times, for the pauses and inflections that enhance it\'s meaning. I think what I see is that the sage has insight to see the inevitability of the direction in which we are being led, through the fog of misdirection and manipulation that is perpetrated upon us all, each day by those who have been given, or taken control. It is a heavy load to bear mentally, and a return to nature, which is real and unwavering, can bring respite until it starts all over again. At least that is my interpretation. I thoroughly enjoyed!
August 6th, 2025 12:50
The Plight Of A Sage
sorenbarrett said:
The juxtaposition in each line of related terms requires close analysis and may be taken in more than one way on occasion. The mental struggle obfuscates the emotionality that lays underneath. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
The juxtaposition in each line of related terms requires close analysis and may be taken in more than one way on occasion. The mental struggle obfuscates the emotionality that lays underneath. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:30
Intuitive Clones of Progress and Dying
Poetic Licence said:
This is just flowing with a long list of subjects and actions that are always as they appear to be, or in fact how we would like them to be. So well crafted and thought out, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:56
Poetic Licence said:
This is just flowing with a long list of subjects and actions that are always as they appear to be, or in fact how we would like them to be. So well crafted and thought out, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:56
Intuitive Clones of Progress and Dying
sorenbarrett said:
Cascading images of a world we live in where things are not always what the purport to be and often not what they should be or what we want. I love the complex rhyme introduced in this poem\'s beginning with beginning and end rhyme with play in the middle. Nicely thought out and worked through.
August 4th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Cascading images of a world we live in where things are not always what the purport to be and often not what they should be or what we want. I love the complex rhyme introduced in this poem\'s beginning with beginning and end rhyme with play in the middle. Nicely thought out and worked through.
August 4th, 2025 04:27
Modern Consternations of Lament
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive collection of difficult issues, crises and problems of the modern world, that are not for the better of mankind and need addressing, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
A comprehensive collection of difficult issues, crises and problems of the modern world, that are not for the better of mankind and need addressing, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 05:11
Modern Concentration Stamps For Query
sorenbarrett said:
A critique of society indeed not just past history but present day problems that don\'t seem to have improved much. A most intellectual write that knocks on the doors of reason. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A critique of society indeed not just past history but present day problems that don\'t seem to have improved much. A most intellectual write that knocks on the doors of reason. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 05:05
Modern Consternations of Lament
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem are many of societal present day dilemas, crises and problems. In rhyme it roles out as if on the morning news. Each item cited causes the back to stiffen. A lovely collage of modern day problems that call out for attention. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem are many of societal present day dilemas, crises and problems. In rhyme it roles out as if on the morning news. Each item cited causes the back to stiffen. A lovely collage of modern day problems that call out for attention. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:21
Modern Concentration Stamps For Query
2781 said:
That\'s hard for a dill like me to get my head around, might be best chopped off.
August 2nd, 2025 04:06
2781 said:
That\'s hard for a dill like me to get my head around, might be best chopped off.
August 2nd, 2025 04:06
On Friendship
arqios said:
Now something to put our \'friendships\' against. Most enjoyed🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 05:49
arqios said:
Now something to put our \'friendships\' against. Most enjoyed🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 05:49
On Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful compendium of friendship nicely written in verse and rhyme. Well done
July 31st, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful compendium of friendship nicely written in verse and rhyme. Well done
July 31st, 2025 03:52
Emancipation From The Afterthought
sorenbarrett said:
And they call that progress, I am not so sure. A great write raising several questions. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
And they call that progress, I am not so sure. A great write raising several questions. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:54
Emancipation From The Afterthought
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to say I have got all of this write, I am working still on some of it, but I get very much the sense of the world we live in is so negative and it appears there is always someone happy to put you down, increasingly becoming doom and gloom. Your writing is wonderful, I just wish I had a bit better an education, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 10:43
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to say I have got all of this write, I am working still on some of it, but I get very much the sense of the world we live in is so negative and it appears there is always someone happy to put you down, increasingly becoming doom and gloom. Your writing is wonderful, I just wish I had a bit better an education, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 10:43
Emancipation From The Afterthought
Bella Shepard said:
You capture in this incredible verse the \"Age of Entropy\" that is upon us. I\'ve always thought that dystopia was relegated to the realm science fiction, but it\'s becoming all too real. I then think this is simply the natural progression of entropy in our isolated world, and that ultimately it is unavoidable. How can we understand, with these little brains, what is unfathomable? Another amazing write my friend!
July 30th, 2025 08:31
Bella Shepard said:
You capture in this incredible verse the \"Age of Entropy\" that is upon us. I\'ve always thought that dystopia was relegated to the realm science fiction, but it\'s becoming all too real. I then think this is simply the natural progression of entropy in our isolated world, and that ultimately it is unavoidable. How can we understand, with these little brains, what is unfathomable? Another amazing write my friend!
July 30th, 2025 08:31
Malevolent Forms Of Warning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, this is a siren song of warnings. The form feels intentionally mechanical at times—like a machine producing prophecy—and yet there\'s something deeply human pulsing beneath the precision. That last stanza itself, bleeds with reckoning. I love this piece for everything I said above and for its urgency. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my dear friend.
July 29th, 2025 05:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, this is a siren song of warnings. The form feels intentionally mechanical at times—like a machine producing prophecy—and yet there\'s something deeply human pulsing beneath the precision. That last stanza itself, bleeds with reckoning. I love this piece for everything I said above and for its urgency. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my dear friend.
July 29th, 2025 05:36
Malevolent Forms Of Warning
sorenbarrett said:
Many symbols in this poem each of which could well be expanded upon. I carries a sense of discontentment with the status quo and can be heard muttering over irony. Very nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Many symbols in this poem each of which could well be expanded upon. I carries a sense of discontentment with the status quo and can be heard muttering over irony. Very nicely done
July 29th, 2025 04:30
Misanthropic Melodies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, this is a whirlwind of language and insight...surreal and sharp-edged, like someone dissecting the world while it’s still moving. The musical thread carries through the chaos, but what stays with me is the raw tension beneath the cleverness…like intellect stretched thin over something deeply unsettled. It’s big, bold, and brilliant. Well done, dear poet, philosopher, and friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elizabeth, this is a whirlwind of language and insight...surreal and sharp-edged, like someone dissecting the world while it’s still moving. The musical thread carries through the chaos, but what stays with me is the raw tension beneath the cleverness…like intellect stretched thin over something deeply unsettled. It’s big, bold, and brilliant. Well done, dear poet, philosopher, and friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:10
Misanthropic Melodies
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the combination of human emotions and contradictions, asking us to take a closer look and question what we see and hear around us, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the combination of human emotions and contradictions, asking us to take a closer look and question what we see and hear around us, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 05:47
Misanthropic Melodies
arqios said:
This poem’s kaleidoscope of scientific marvels, political reckonings, and raw human emotion pulses with vivid urgency; each line feels like a new lens through which to confront our broken world. The harnessing of that fearless wordplay and boundless curiosity; and your voice cutting through the noise and invites us all to think deeper, feel sharper, and stay unafraid of the questions that shake us.
July 28th, 2025 04:16
arqios said:
This poem’s kaleidoscope of scientific marvels, political reckonings, and raw human emotion pulses with vivid urgency; each line feels like a new lens through which to confront our broken world. The harnessing of that fearless wordplay and boundless curiosity; and your voice cutting through the noise and invites us all to think deeper, feel sharper, and stay unafraid of the questions that shake us.
July 28th, 2025 04:16
Misanthropic Melodies
sorenbarrett said:
This poem appears as a collage of societal, intelectual, emotional snap shots presented in a Bob Dylan style that overflow the brim. It is filled with contradictions seen in modern every day life. Complex and with poignant commentary on incompatibilities in values and reality. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem appears as a collage of societal, intelectual, emotional snap shots presented in a Bob Dylan style that overflow the brim. It is filled with contradictions seen in modern every day life. Complex and with poignant commentary on incompatibilities in values and reality. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 04:05
Canopies or Emotion and Consecrations of Reality
Bella Shepard said:
I am blown away as I read. Each line incredibly crafted to shed light upon the dilemma of human existence, where we are out of sync with nature. A wake up call to all that we are part of the whole, and must be vigilant and part of the solution. Brilliant!!
July 27th, 2025 08:16
Bella Shepard said:
I am blown away as I read. Each line incredibly crafted to shed light upon the dilemma of human existence, where we are out of sync with nature. A wake up call to all that we are part of the whole, and must be vigilant and part of the solution. Brilliant!!
July 27th, 2025 08:16
Canopies or Emotion and Consecrations of Reality
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderfully crafted write, flows really nicely with a sense of urgency gaining momentum as you read through it, you can read these writes many times as I do and still pick up on something new, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderfully crafted write, flows really nicely with a sense of urgency gaining momentum as you read through it, you can read these writes many times as I do and still pick up on something new, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 08:48
Canopies or Emotion and Consecrations of Reality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You\'re poems carry such weight, Elizabeth. Another sweeping and densely woven piece. There’s an urgency beneath the language that pulses from stanza to stanza...existential, political, and cosmic all at once. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You\'re poems carry such weight, Elizabeth. Another sweeping and densely woven piece. There’s an urgency beneath the language that pulses from stanza to stanza...existential, political, and cosmic all at once. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:20
Atmospheric Elocutions For Surviving Armageddon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sorting out Satan?!? Yikes, turn on the lights. Doh! And call in Obi! You gonna need that light saber!
July 26th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sorting out Satan?!? Yikes, turn on the lights. Doh! And call in Obi! You gonna need that light saber!
July 26th, 2025 08:11
Atmospheric Elocutions For Surviving Armageddon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fierce and sprawling piece, Elizabeth. This moves like a manifest...equal parts lament, defiance, and cosmic commentary. The language pulls no punches, which I appreciate, and the questions you end with hit hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fierce and sprawling piece, Elizabeth. This moves like a manifest...equal parts lament, defiance, and cosmic commentary. The language pulls no punches, which I appreciate, and the questions you end with hit hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 07:56
Canopies or Emotion and Consecrations of Reality
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great diversity that ranges from observational beauty through science, ecology, emotions, governance, society, maturation, perception, all with their plus and minus. Woven in rhyme it dazzles the comprehension requiring more than one read by my feeble mind. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great diversity that ranges from observational beauty through science, ecology, emotions, governance, society, maturation, perception, all with their plus and minus. Woven in rhyme it dazzles the comprehension requiring more than one read by my feeble mind. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 04:58
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