Comments received on poems by Finley Oaktree
During Strawberry Season
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a beautiful setting with great images. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a beautiful setting with great images. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:52
No Name Poem Yet (I)
Cheeky Missy said:
Damn! How you nearly drive me bonkers by failing to add the title since I could arrive at multiple, yet since I do not know your intention, I cannot suggest any. Lovely.
September 6th, 2024 16:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Damn! How you nearly drive me bonkers by failing to add the title since I could arrive at multiple, yet since I do not know your intention, I cannot suggest any. Lovely.
September 6th, 2024 16:02
An Incredibly Short Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the effort.
September 3rd, 2024 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the effort.
September 3rd, 2024 17:38
An Incredibly Short Poem
orchidee said:
A slice of humble pie too? But how does one make it?! lol.
September 3rd, 2024 10:29
orchidee said:
A slice of humble pie too? But how does one make it?! lol.
September 3rd, 2024 10:29
