Comments received on poems by Finley Oaktree
War of Snowballs in Winterland
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too good! Almost akin to the aka \"polish jokes\" one with a blank white page claiming to be the image of ghosts roasting marshmallows without a fire, or something like that. Lovely and charmingly rendered with excellent details and a subtly humorous poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
September 29th, 2024 18:56
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too good! Almost akin to the aka \"polish jokes\" one with a blank white page claiming to be the image of ghosts roasting marshmallows without a fire, or something like that. Lovely and charmingly rendered with excellent details and a subtly humorous poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
September 29th, 2024 18:56
At Six and Sevens
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely in sweet brevity, as well as intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely in sweet brevity, as well as intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:46
During Strawberry Season
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a beautiful setting with great images. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a beautiful setting with great images. Nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:52
No Name Poem Yet (I)
Cheeky Missy said:
Damn! How you nearly drive me bonkers by failing to add the title since I could arrive at multiple, yet since I do not know your intention, I cannot suggest any. Lovely.
September 6th, 2024 16:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Damn! How you nearly drive me bonkers by failing to add the title since I could arrive at multiple, yet since I do not know your intention, I cannot suggest any. Lovely.
September 6th, 2024 16:02
An Incredibly Short Poem
Doggerel Dave said:
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the effort.
September 3rd, 2024 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the effort.
September 3rd, 2024 17:38
An Incredibly Short Poem
orchidee said:
A slice of humble pie too? But how does one make it?! lol.
September 3rd, 2024 10:29
orchidee said:
A slice of humble pie too? But how does one make it?! lol.
September 3rd, 2024 10:29
