Comments received on poems by JayFace21
Time and Life
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, familiar contemplation, especially the interesting successful conclusion. Indeed time races, every pleasant moment so transient, while the miserable seem contrariwise to drag interminably. It is very desirable to make each day worthwhile that we may end our lives whenever our time chances to be up, with fewer regrets. Thought-provoking and interesting.
July 22nd, 2011 21:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, familiar contemplation, especially the interesting successful conclusion. Indeed time races, every pleasant moment so transient, while the miserable seem contrariwise to drag interminably. It is very desirable to make each day worthwhile that we may end our lives whenever our time chances to be up, with fewer regrets. Thought-provoking and interesting.
July 22nd, 2011 21:18
Sharina Rae Wilson
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet. What a lovely romantic poem! I quite like it. Yet, why will she not be around forever? Because she is only human? It is bittersweet, seeing your beloved will not abide.
March 5th, 2011 21:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet. What a lovely romantic poem! I quite like it. Yet, why will she not be around forever? Because she is only human? It is bittersweet, seeing your beloved will not abide.
March 5th, 2011 21:16
Winter Beauty
JayFace21 said:
thanks
so i guess i am good for being only 16 eh?
February 17th, 2011 22:53
JayFace21 said:
thanks
so i guess i am good for being only 16 eh?
February 17th, 2011 22:53
Winter Beauty
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I could readily visualize it, thanks to your description/depiction. Well-written...a delightful scene! I quite enjoyed it.
February 17th, 2011 00:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I could readily visualize it, thanks to your description/depiction. Well-written...a delightful scene! I quite enjoyed it.
February 17th, 2011 00:31
Heart Broken
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! You captured heartbreak well. I like how you presented it, making your point with the short lines. Great! I began to feel it.
December 30th, 2010 21:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! You captured heartbreak well. I like how you presented it, making your point with the short lines. Great! I began to feel it.
December 30th, 2010 21:17
Heart Broken
nair36 said:
I can picture a scene from this poem... it's sad but I like the poem. I like it because it can create a visual of true emotion. Good job.
December 29th, 2010 23:13
nair36 said:
I can picture a scene from this poem... it's sad but I like the poem. I like it because it can create a visual of true emotion. Good job.
December 29th, 2010 23:13
Death
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting look at dying/death....you described it well. What is the day, versus the night in it? Is the day before you died and the night after? And the way you divided the lines was good, as it effectively made your points.
December 21st, 2010 23:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting look at dying/death....you described it well. What is the day, versus the night in it? Is the day before you died and the night after? And the way you divided the lines was good, as it effectively made your points.
December 21st, 2010 23:03
