Comments received on poems by Raye
Life is Unfair
I’ll never forget you said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
I’ll never forget you said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
Life is Unfair
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
Regret
sorenbarrett said:
Pawn takes queen a powerful poem with just a few lines that convey its message well. Nicely done.
December 19th, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Pawn takes queen a powerful poem with just a few lines that convey its message well. Nicely done.
December 19th, 2025 06:56
PTSD
sorenbarrett said:
The frozen nature of emotional trauma is spoken in this poem. Nicely said in few words
November 25th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
The frozen nature of emotional trauma is spoken in this poem. Nicely said in few words
November 25th, 2025 09:01
Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Short but in so few lines it takes a sharp twist. Nicely crafted
October 30th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
Short but in so few lines it takes a sharp twist. Nicely crafted
October 30th, 2025 07:52
Curious
NafisaSB said:
the only thing i can do after reading your poem is wish you luck to have people love you, and give you the energy and will to love them back..
October 24th, 2025 01:21
NafisaSB said:
the only thing i can do after reading your poem is wish you luck to have people love you, and give you the energy and will to love them back..
October 24th, 2025 01:21
Tattoo
sorenbarrett said:
Tatoos better than scars they both tell a story but one is more beautiful
October 23rd, 2025 22:03
sorenbarrett said:
Tatoos better than scars they both tell a story but one is more beautiful
October 23rd, 2025 22:03
Curious
William Hromada said:
Opening up is hard but you have love to do it!!
October 16th, 2025 11:27
William Hromada said:
Opening up is hard but you have love to do it!!
October 16th, 2025 11:27
Curious
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
Curious
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Lust
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
Devil’s World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
Devil’s World
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
Devil’s World
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Devil’s World
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
Move On
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
Move On
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Move On
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
My Story
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
My Story
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
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