Comments received on poems by Laguna
Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Short but in so few lines it takes a sharp twist. Nicely crafted
October 30th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
Short but in so few lines it takes a sharp twist. Nicely crafted
October 30th, 2025 07:52
Curious
NafisaSB said:
the only thing i can do after reading your poem is wish you luck to have people love you, and give you the energy and will to love them back..
October 24th, 2025 01:21
NafisaSB said:
the only thing i can do after reading your poem is wish you luck to have people love you, and give you the energy and will to love them back..
October 24th, 2025 01:21
Tattoo
sorenbarrett said:
Tatoos better than scars they both tell a story but one is more beautiful
October 23rd, 2025 22:03
sorenbarrett said:
Tatoos better than scars they both tell a story but one is more beautiful
October 23rd, 2025 22:03
Curious
William Hromada said:
Opening up is hard but you have love to do it!!
October 16th, 2025 11:27
William Hromada said:
Opening up is hard but you have love to do it!!
October 16th, 2025 11:27
Curious
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
Curious
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Lust
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of the other side of love. Hate a powerful emotion that consumes all. Well written
October 5th, 2025 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of the other side of love. Hate a powerful emotion that consumes all. Well written
October 5th, 2025 12:44
Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
Devil’s World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
Devil’s World
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
Devil’s World
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Devil’s World
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
Move On
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
Move On
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Move On
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
My Story
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
My Story
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
Your Arms
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be erotic but is also metaphoric and it even more personal than exposing one\'s body to expose one\'s soul. Nicely done in such few words.
April 29th, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be erotic but is also metaphoric and it even more personal than exposing one\'s body to expose one\'s soul. Nicely done in such few words.
April 29th, 2025 16:16
It\'s Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with rage and indignation. No one should allow someone to take advantage of them knowingly and to have it done repeatedly seems not a problem with forgiveness but trust. A magnificent pairing of the first two lines calm to the next two lines of violence. It is as though there was an explosion. Well written with passion
April 25th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with rage and indignation. No one should allow someone to take advantage of them knowingly and to have it done repeatedly seems not a problem with forgiveness but trust. A magnificent pairing of the first two lines calm to the next two lines of violence. It is as though there was an explosion. Well written with passion
April 25th, 2025 03:43
Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
Angel
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is implying Angel does not always mean good and everything that is beautiful is not always good, a very interesting write, nicely expressed
April 2nd, 2025 09:36
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is implying Angel does not always mean good and everything that is beautiful is not always good, a very interesting write, nicely expressed
April 2nd, 2025 09:36
Angel
NinjaGirl said:
Angel doesn\'t necessarily mean good, I love the way you expressed this. Humans are influenced by satan, but are they worse for actually doing the actions?
April 2nd, 2025 09:17
NinjaGirl said:
Angel doesn\'t necessarily mean good, I love the way you expressed this. Humans are influenced by satan, but are they worse for actually doing the actions?
April 2nd, 2025 09:17
Angel
sorenbarrett said:
(An angel can not be beautiful and good) a powerful line that sums it up. Only children can be beautiful and good. A really wonderful write that in thought provoking and asks what are we looking for? Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
(An angel can not be beautiful and good) a powerful line that sums it up. Only children can be beautiful and good. A really wonderful write that in thought provoking and asks what are we looking for? Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 06:57
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