Comments received on poems by Raye
Grief
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
feels like i\'ve been mourning for months... great poem
February 20th, 2026 17:12
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
feels like i\'ve been mourning for months... great poem
February 20th, 2026 17:12
Life is Unfair
An Artifact said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
An Artifact said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
Life is Unfair
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
Devil’s World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
Devil’s World
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Devil’s World
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Devil’s World
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
9/11
An Artifact said:
This goes beyond art, this is a haunting reminder of that day and the way you wrote it you have it the weight and gravity it deserves. I can feel your sadness in every line, to say this was well written is an understatement.
March 4th, 2025 02:38
An Artifact said:
This goes beyond art, this is a haunting reminder of that day and the way you wrote it you have it the weight and gravity it deserves. I can feel your sadness in every line, to say this was well written is an understatement.
March 4th, 2025 02:38
9/11
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write about the horrors of that day from hell,the world will never forget, well expressed
March 3rd, 2025 09:37
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write about the horrors of that day from hell,the world will never forget, well expressed
March 3rd, 2025 09:37
9/11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never have, never will forget. That is for sure. A beautiful poem that speaks to the horror of the most \"beautiful day\" I can remember...until it wasn\'t. Hauntingly beautiful and a fave. This sounds like it comes from a personal loss...if so, my condolences, my friend. Regardless, beautiful poem. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never have, never will forget. That is for sure. A beautiful poem that speaks to the horror of the most \"beautiful day\" I can remember...until it wasn\'t. Hauntingly beautiful and a fave. This sounds like it comes from a personal loss...if so, my condolences, my friend. Regardless, beautiful poem. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:25
Self Awareness
Bragee said:
Very wise outlook on life!
I can truly appreciate this.
January 1st, 2025 10:53
Bragee said:
Very wise outlook on life!
I can truly appreciate this.
January 1st, 2025 10:53
Self Awareness
Poetic Licence said:
Words of wisdom in this short but poignant piece, none of us know what each other have hidden in the wardrobe, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 10:32
Poetic Licence said:
Words of wisdom in this short but poignant piece, none of us know what each other have hidden in the wardrobe, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 10:32
Self Awareness
An Artifact said:
A very mature outlook and full of wisdom. I’ll be coming back to this a lot as a reminder.
January 1st, 2025 10:28
An Artifact said:
A very mature outlook and full of wisdom. I’ll be coming back to this a lot as a reminder.
January 1st, 2025 10:28
