Comments received on poems by Laguna
Curious
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the philosophy and brevity so much said in so few words. It is the unluckiest thing of all to not love others.
October 14th, 2025 07:22
Curious
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Paul Bell said:
The love boat on water is great.
The love boats that\'s sinking, we\'ve all been on it.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
Lust
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Temptation to cast caution to the wind and submit to passion instead of love. Nicely written
October 7th, 2025 13:38
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of the other side of love. Hate a powerful emotion that consumes all. Well written
October 5th, 2025 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of the other side of love. Hate a powerful emotion that consumes all. Well written
October 5th, 2025 12:44
Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point a poem that still requires some thought. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 14:24
Devil’s World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
Her
sorenbarrett said:
So glad it is light hearted. Move on is the word. Nicely written
August 30th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
So glad it is light hearted. Move on is the word. Nicely written
August 30th, 2025 11:18
Devil’s World
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
How many people have done that, wonderful write, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:26
Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness can begin only after the bridge is rebuilt. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 10:16
Devil’s World
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Devil’s World
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
Fire
Poetic Licence said:
Quite rightly a powerful write of anger and vengeance against an abusive person, everyone has their limits and we never know what we will do, until pushed to that point, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Quite rightly a powerful write of anger and vengeance against an abusive person, everyone has their limits and we never know what we will do, until pushed to that point, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:36
Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance. Strong words over a difficult subject
August 3rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance. Strong words over a difficult subject
August 3rd, 2025 04:43
Move On
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
soullless said:
Que hermoso poema, siempre has sabido expresar los latidos de tu corazón con letras.
July 6th, 2025 21:29
Move On
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Poetic Licence said:
A short sad write of a one sided relationship and only one left hurting, nicely expressed and written
June 23rd, 2025 06:33
Move On
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the burden. A sad and tragic poem. Love unrequited. Nicely penned and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 05:15
Abuse
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about a man that’s all this but has no money?
June 9th, 2025 03:58
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about a man that’s all this but has no money?
June 9th, 2025 03:58
The Devil
sorenbarrett said:
What a creative and at the same time both humorous and sadly true statement that like an onion one peels as one reads. Well done
May 31st, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
What a creative and at the same time both humorous and sadly true statement that like an onion one peels as one reads. Well done
May 31st, 2025 08:06
My Story
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this hits home and being said in so few words that are so nicely woven gives it a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:51
My Story
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
There is no one cure for all, each person is different and deals with things in a different way, we all to often give advice that is not helpful or wanted, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:50
Your Arms
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be erotic but is also metaphoric and it even more personal than exposing one\'s body to expose one\'s soul. Nicely done in such few words.
April 29th, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be erotic but is also metaphoric and it even more personal than exposing one\'s body to expose one\'s soul. Nicely done in such few words.
April 29th, 2025 16:16
It\'s Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with rage and indignation. No one should allow someone to take advantage of them knowingly and to have it done repeatedly seems not a problem with forgiveness but trust. A magnificent pairing of the first two lines calm to the next two lines of violence. It is as though there was an explosion. Well written with passion
April 25th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks with rage and indignation. No one should allow someone to take advantage of them knowingly and to have it done repeatedly seems not a problem with forgiveness but trust. A magnificent pairing of the first two lines calm to the next two lines of violence. It is as though there was an explosion. Well written with passion
April 25th, 2025 03:43
Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
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