Comments received on poems by Raye
Lust
Paul Bell said:
That final glass, the tipping point.
Sometimes you\'ve just got to go with it.
August 1st, 2026 04:21
Paul Bell said:
That final glass, the tipping point.
Sometimes you\'ve just got to go with it.
August 1st, 2026 04:21
Lust
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be passion in the air and concern that one may do what they will later regret. Well done
July 31st, 2026 18:02
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be passion in the air and concern that one may do what they will later regret. Well done
July 31st, 2026 18:02
Lust
Doggerel Dave said:
As a nicely brief account of what is happening just below the surface I found this full of honesty and truth.
July 31st, 2026 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
As a nicely brief account of what is happening just below the surface I found this full of honesty and truth.
July 31st, 2026 18:01
Lust
peto said:
I think we all have a self destruct button
To press at times like this
Glad to discover your writing
Looking forward to reading more
July 31st, 2026 17:39
peto said:
I think we all have a self destruct button
To press at times like this
Glad to discover your writing
Looking forward to reading more
July 31st, 2026 17:39
Chess and Checkers
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and checkers as metaphors in this poem of lies combines with tatoos to make for a highly metaphoric poem. Very nicely done with multiple implications in such simple wording. Love it and a fave
July 29th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and checkers as metaphors in this poem of lies combines with tatoos to make for a highly metaphoric poem. Very nicely done with multiple implications in such simple wording. Love it and a fave
July 29th, 2026 04:05
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that speaks to projection and how weakness in ourself is turned around and put on others to save face. Well written
June 13th, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that speaks to projection and how weakness in ourself is turned around and put on others to save face. Well written
June 13th, 2026 10:15
Ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply beautiful and most philosophical it speaks to all that have had sad memories. A fave
May 5th, 2026 19:58
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply beautiful and most philosophical it speaks to all that have had sad memories. A fave
May 5th, 2026 19:58
Grief
Demar Desu said:
feels like i\'ve been mourning for months... great poem
February 20th, 2026 17:12
Demar Desu said:
feels like i\'ve been mourning for months... great poem
February 20th, 2026 17:12
Life is Unfair
An Artifact said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
An Artifact said:
So much potency in what you say but with so few words, you are gifted.
December 25th, 2025 07:55
Life is Unfair
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Fair and unfair human constructs to which nature does not adhere. Nature has a different set of values that we scarcely understand and like a wise parent can not explain to a child. A wonderful write Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 06:50
Devil’s World
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:42
Her
sorenbarrett said:
So glad it is light hearted. Move on is the word. Nicely written
August 30th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
So glad it is light hearted. Move on is the word. Nicely written
August 30th, 2025 11:18
Devil’s World
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Keeter C said:
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
August 14th, 2025 14:32
Devil’s World
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 05:44
Devil’s World
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2025 04:40
Fire
Poetic Licence said:
Quite rightly a powerful write of anger and vengeance against an abusive person, everyone has their limits and we never know what we will do, until pushed to that point, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Quite rightly a powerful write of anger and vengeance against an abusive person, everyone has their limits and we never know what we will do, until pushed to that point, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:36
Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance. Strong words over a difficult subject
August 3rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance. Strong words over a difficult subject
August 3rd, 2025 04:43
Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and passionate write around emotions and motives, those who seek weekness in others is to have some power and control over something because that is something they do not have in their own lives, usually they are week and very insecure people, loved the read
April 9th, 2025 12:06
Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and motives. Well said in most poetic form.
April 9th, 2025 09:37
9/11
An Artifact said:
This goes beyond art, this is a haunting reminder of that day and the way you wrote it you have it the weight and gravity it deserves. I can feel your sadness in every line, to say this was well written is an understatement.
March 4th, 2025 02:38
An Artifact said:
This goes beyond art, this is a haunting reminder of that day and the way you wrote it you have it the weight and gravity it deserves. I can feel your sadness in every line, to say this was well written is an understatement.
March 4th, 2025 02:38
9/11
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write about the horrors of that day from hell,the world will never forget, well expressed
March 3rd, 2025 09:37
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write about the horrors of that day from hell,the world will never forget, well expressed
March 3rd, 2025 09:37
9/11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never have, never will forget. That is for sure. A beautiful poem that speaks to the horror of the most \"beautiful day\" I can remember...until it wasn\'t. Hauntingly beautiful and a fave. This sounds like it comes from a personal loss...if so, my condolences, my friend. Regardless, beautiful poem. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never have, never will forget. That is for sure. A beautiful poem that speaks to the horror of the most \"beautiful day\" I can remember...until it wasn\'t. Hauntingly beautiful and a fave. This sounds like it comes from a personal loss...if so, my condolences, my friend. Regardless, beautiful poem. 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:25
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