Comments received on poems by Laguna
369 Days
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and dark write layered with guilt and the pressure they are putting on themselves to except responsibility for all that is wrong, sense of sadness and longing, beautifully written piece
February 21st, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and dark write layered with guilt and the pressure they are putting on themselves to except responsibility for all that is wrong, sense of sadness and longing, beautifully written piece
February 21st, 2025 07:17
369 Days
sorenbarrett said:
The weight of guilt in this poem. The creation of reason for another\'s wrong. The need to feel responsible for things not done. A heavy and dark poem of the inner workings of the mind.
February 21st, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
The weight of guilt in this poem. The creation of reason for another\'s wrong. The need to feel responsible for things not done. A heavy and dark poem of the inner workings of the mind.
February 21st, 2025 05:49
Art
Cassie58 said:
A lovely metaphor. Your poem deeply felt. Well penned Laguna.
February 4th, 2025 09:03
Cassie58 said:
A lovely metaphor. Your poem deeply felt. Well penned Laguna.
February 4th, 2025 09:03
Art
sorenbarrett said:
In haunting metaphor you have painted images that puzzle the mind and capture the heart.
February 4th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
In haunting metaphor you have painted images that puzzle the mind and capture the heart.
February 4th, 2025 04:51
Art
Cellar Door said:
Both sad yet beautiful, the title of the poem describes this well. Indeed this is art.
February 4th, 2025 01:54
Cellar Door said:
Both sad yet beautiful, the title of the poem describes this well. Indeed this is art.
February 4th, 2025 01:54
Love
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words and hard questions in this powerful poem. Nicely done
January 31st, 2025 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words and hard questions in this powerful poem. Nicely done
January 31st, 2025 19:51
To Fly Without You
SOUIIIESS said:
I really liked this one and it reminded me of someone who fate didn\'t let me be with.
January 31st, 2025 12:02
SOUIIIESS said:
I really liked this one and it reminded me of someone who fate didn\'t let me be with.
January 31st, 2025 12:02
Self Awareness
Bragee said:
Very wise outlook on life!
I can truly appreciate this.
January 1st, 2025 10:53
Bragee said:
Very wise outlook on life!
I can truly appreciate this.
January 1st, 2025 10:53
Self Awareness
Poetic Licence said:
Words of wisdom in this short but poignant piece, none of us know what each other have hidden in the wardrobe, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 10:32
Poetic Licence said:
Words of wisdom in this short but poignant piece, none of us know what each other have hidden in the wardrobe, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 10:32
Self Awareness
Cellar Door said:
A very mature outlook and full of wisdom. I’ll be coming back to this a lot as a reminder.
January 1st, 2025 10:28
Cellar Door said:
A very mature outlook and full of wisdom. I’ll be coming back to this a lot as a reminder.
January 1st, 2025 10:28
When he Cries
Young Fella said:
Thanks for sharing this nice work. Great lines. Enjoyed the flow. Keep writing.
November 12th, 2024 16:36
Young Fella said:
Thanks for sharing this nice work. Great lines. Enjoyed the flow. Keep writing.
November 12th, 2024 16:36
When he Cries
sorenbarrett said:
A comforting and reassuring poem, one of kindness and generosity nicely worded
November 12th, 2024 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
A comforting and reassuring poem, one of kindness and generosity nicely worded
November 12th, 2024 14:40
The Man in the Corner
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of an undesired guest. Whether a creeper or an admirer or even a lover, when undesired, they seem to sit in the corner nicely written.
September 5th, 2024 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of an undesired guest. Whether a creeper or an admirer or even a lover, when undesired, they seem to sit in the corner nicely written.
September 5th, 2024 13:42
Grief
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad at the same time well stated leaving feelings of sorrow
August 27th, 2024 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad at the same time well stated leaving feelings of sorrow
August 27th, 2024 08:31
Liquid Courage
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this piece. It is well written.
August 1st, 2024 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this piece. It is well written.
August 1st, 2024 14:36
Good Intentions
peto said:
Read a great poem earlier
Couldn\'t remember where
Glad I found it again
The road to hell is paved with good intentions
Super read
June 27th, 2024 18:29
peto said:
Read a great poem earlier
Couldn\'t remember where
Glad I found it again
The road to hell is paved with good intentions
Super read
June 27th, 2024 18:29
