Comments received on poems by TheVlama
By The Lake
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that tells its story. Well written in a manner that leaves a mood behind.
June 5th, 2025 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that tells its story. Well written in a manner that leaves a mood behind.
June 5th, 2025 13:26
Within In
RSM0812 said:
I like how you used the foam of the water as the connecting entity between two people that miss each other. Really nicely done.
May 27th, 2025 08:54
RSM0812 said:
I like how you used the foam of the water as the connecting entity between two people that miss each other. Really nicely done.
May 27th, 2025 08:54
Within In
Poetic Licence said:
A really touching write that could apply to any mother, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 11:32
Poetic Licence said:
A really touching write that could apply to any mother, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 11:32
Within In
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anyone\'s mother or mother nature herself. Lovely
May 24th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anyone\'s mother or mother nature herself. Lovely
May 24th, 2025 11:15
Twilight
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, more to this write than first appears, nicely written
May 21st, 2025 12:42
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, more to this write than first appears, nicely written
May 21st, 2025 12:42
Twilight
sorenbarrett said:
There was a ghost to this poem. Something I could not see but could feel it called for a fave
May 21st, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
There was a ghost to this poem. Something I could not see but could feel it called for a fave
May 21st, 2025 12:28
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
A great Acrostic poem well written and full of meaning.
May 3rd, 2025 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
A great Acrostic poem well written and full of meaning.
May 3rd, 2025 13:27
The Ending I Want
Poet Bee said:
I like the metaphors that you used here to describe how you don\'t want someone to be dependent on you. You want them to work alongside you instead.
March 25th, 2024 10:58
Poet Bee said:
I like the metaphors that you used here to describe how you don\'t want someone to be dependent on you. You want them to work alongside you instead.
March 25th, 2024 10:58
