Comments received on poems by TheVlama
Twilight
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, more to this write than first appears, nicely written
May 21st, 2025 12:42
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, more to this write than first appears, nicely written
May 21st, 2025 12:42
Twilight
sorenbarrett said:
There was a ghost to this poem. Something I could not see but could feel it called for a fave
May 21st, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
There was a ghost to this poem. Something I could not see but could feel it called for a fave
May 21st, 2025 12:28
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
A great Acrostic poem well written and full of meaning.
May 3rd, 2025 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
A great Acrostic poem well written and full of meaning.
May 3rd, 2025 13:27
The Ending I Want
Poet Bee said:
I like the metaphors that you used here to describe how you don\'t want someone to be dependent on you. You want them to work alongside you instead.
March 25th, 2024 10:58
Poet Bee said:
I like the metaphors that you used here to describe how you don\'t want someone to be dependent on you. You want them to work alongside you instead.
March 25th, 2024 10:58
