Comments received on poems by giantgentlebear
VOID IN A TIN BORROWED FROM THE 1890S
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow the imagery and muse is awesome here. I like the wording and description all very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment my latest poem too, pleeez.
November 15th, 2016 08:08
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow the imagery and muse is awesome here. I like the wording and description all very poetic. Kudos.
Pls do comment my latest poem too, pleeez.
November 15th, 2016 08:08
VOID IN A TIN BORROWED FROM THE 1890S
Augustus said:
Has a Salvadore Dali surrealism about it. Enjoyed.
November 14th, 2016 21:12
Augustus said:
Has a Salvadore Dali surrealism about it. Enjoyed.
November 14th, 2016 21:12
OUTREACHED
Augustus said:
Old tires are thrown out as are our old ideas. New ones can be fitted and balanced as can our livelihood which is under constant threat, complicated by relationships and crises. We can hide or face these head on but The journey ends for us all the same way--- interred in something resembling the tire bay. Some careers depend on being published. Just another way to die. I don\'t even know if I am close but I had fun. Thanks.
October 17th, 2016 22:16
Augustus said:
Old tires are thrown out as are our old ideas. New ones can be fitted and balanced as can our livelihood which is under constant threat, complicated by relationships and crises. We can hide or face these head on but The journey ends for us all the same way--- interred in something resembling the tire bay. Some careers depend on being published. Just another way to die. I don\'t even know if I am close but I had fun. Thanks.
October 17th, 2016 22:16
RATS IN THE POOL
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
this is very deep and it seems that it is very personable to you...I love the way it was written,it kept me wanting to know more about what exactly u are talking about
September 13th, 2016 20:59
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
this is very deep and it seems that it is very personable to you...I love the way it was written,it kept me wanting to know more about what exactly u are talking about
September 13th, 2016 20:59
BARFLY
giantgentlebear said:
yes my main fault is not explaining-but guess you covered it cheers
September 13th, 2016 02:01
giantgentlebear said:
yes my main fault is not explaining-but guess you covered it cheers
September 13th, 2016 02:01
BARFLY
Augustus said:
I'm not sure I got the whole picture or not: Drinking one's self, drugging to death. Beyond the help of social and church services. Dying on the way home in the snow. Sad, but true. Thanks for sharing.
September 12th, 2016 19:06
Augustus said:
I'm not sure I got the whole picture or not: Drinking one's self, drugging to death. Beyond the help of social and church services. Dying on the way home in the snow. Sad, but true. Thanks for sharing.
September 12th, 2016 19:06
WHISKEY WEDNESDAY
Tony36 said:
You're write that is why we keep writing. Wonderful write anyways
September 4th, 2016 07:12
Tony36 said:
You're write that is why we keep writing. Wonderful write anyways
September 4th, 2016 07:12
paranoid about the earths crust
lysistrata said:
"you see i fear the earths crust maybe to weak for me.."
1.Typo!
2. You know better....😏
September 4th, 2016 03:08
lysistrata said:
"you see i fear the earths crust maybe to weak for me.."
1.Typo!
2. You know better....😏
September 4th, 2016 03:08
paranoid about the earths crust
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GGB (love the name !) MPS needs more peots like you whose poems are bold ~ enigmatic ~ full of fantasy ~ difficult to fathom & analyse. For me ~ as a classical poet ~ this is modern poetry at its best ! SEVENTEEN (a prime nunber) unpunctuated lines devoid of rhyme but not rhythm and reason ! The Earth's Crust (the lithosphere) is thin where the tectonic plates meet and in earthquakes people have fallen through lost forever in the underworld ~ something we have all experienced "skating on thin ice" ! Lines 12 & 13 crystalise your phobia ~ "You see I fear the Earths crust maybe too weak for me # and falling through its realms just to go to the shops". This is a part explanation of your agoraphobia and gives you reason enough to be housebound for 40 years. In the 21st C there s no reason to go out ~ mail order and doorstep delivery. The "real world" is not much fun any more. I can't visualise you "caving" ~ I love it ~ and occasionally (where the crust is very thin) I have glimpsed the "Centre of the Earth" awesome. Thanks for sharing ~ more please BRIAN Please check my latest "formal" poem COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2016 05:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GGB (love the name !) MPS needs more peots like you whose poems are bold ~ enigmatic ~ full of fantasy ~ difficult to fathom & analyse. For me ~ as a classical poet ~ this is modern poetry at its best ! SEVENTEEN (a prime nunber) unpunctuated lines devoid of rhyme but not rhythm and reason ! The Earth's Crust (the lithosphere) is thin where the tectonic plates meet and in earthquakes people have fallen through lost forever in the underworld ~ something we have all experienced "skating on thin ice" ! Lines 12 & 13 crystalise your phobia ~ "You see I fear the Earths crust maybe too weak for me # and falling through its realms just to go to the shops". This is a part explanation of your agoraphobia and gives you reason enough to be housebound for 40 years. In the 21st C there s no reason to go out ~ mail order and doorstep delivery. The "real world" is not much fun any more. I can't visualise you "caving" ~ I love it ~ and occasionally (where the crust is very thin) I have glimpsed the "Centre of the Earth" awesome. Thanks for sharing ~ more please BRIAN Please check my latest "formal" poem COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2016 05:34
