Comments received on poems by Randall Racine
But I’m not done yet
sorenbarrett said:
I get the definite feeling of not being heard in this poem. There is the feel of agitation and aggravation and a lot of strong emotion. Well written
April 24th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
I get the definite feeling of not being heard in this poem. There is the feel of agitation and aggravation and a lot of strong emotion. Well written
April 24th, 2025 16:12
Hidden History
sorenbarrett said:
So many examples of past exploitation and the resulting damage done. A beautiful poem of lifting awareness. We have clawed our way to the top of the pile now to be criticized for how we have gotten on top. Greed the motivator of capitalism and the driving force behind democracy would you rather have a comfortable life on the back of others or live in squalor with everyone equal? A most thought provoking poem. Loved it and by the way agree with it as well.
April 20th, 2025 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
So many examples of past exploitation and the resulting damage done. A beautiful poem of lifting awareness. We have clawed our way to the top of the pile now to be criticized for how we have gotten on top. Greed the motivator of capitalism and the driving force behind democracy would you rather have a comfortable life on the back of others or live in squalor with everyone equal? A most thought provoking poem. Loved it and by the way agree with it as well.
April 20th, 2025 12:58
Losing Myself For Me To Be Found
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption in a season that is most appropriate. A story in good rhyme and with meter that allowed the poem to flow well. Nicely said.
April 19th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption in a season that is most appropriate. A story in good rhyme and with meter that allowed the poem to flow well. Nicely said.
April 19th, 2025 08:50
The Best is Left of Me
Poetic Licence said:
A very strong message of faith that saved them and put them back on the right path after adversity at a young age, very nicely written and crafted
April 18th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
A very strong message of faith that saved them and put them back on the right path after adversity at a young age, very nicely written and crafted
April 18th, 2025 07:11
The Best is Left of Me
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem tells the story of a life changed by adversity. Very nicely told
April 18th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem tells the story of a life changed by adversity. Very nicely told
April 18th, 2025 05:29
Buy Me
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely flow as you read, you kinda get carried along with it, a sense of the automated world man has created and where it end, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:35
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely flow as you read, you kinda get carried along with it, a sense of the automated world man has created and where it end, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:35
Buy Me
sorenbarrett said:
This poem utilizes careful meter in each line to create the rhythm and rhyme as a beat. A beat that to me represents the machine like world that we live in and have created for ourselves. Very nicely crafted
April 18th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem utilizes careful meter in each line to create the rhythm and rhyme as a beat. A beat that to me represents the machine like world that we live in and have created for ourselves. Very nicely crafted
April 18th, 2025 04:01
