Comments received on poems by Buttercup
stabbed
Cassie58 said:
Oh betrayal is the pits. Four stab wounds is far too many. Pain shared here in your brevity.
July 14th, 2024 08:00
Cassie58 said:
Oh betrayal is the pits. Four stab wounds is far too many. Pain shared here in your brevity.
July 14th, 2024 08:00
stabbed
Buttercup said:
You don\'t even know me,
but still tried to console me.
We need more people like you,
to change the world to new.
It brought a smile on my face
I know this is just a phase.
Yes my heart survived,
but it can\'t forget the way he lied.
Thank you so much maplespal. It\'s a wonderful poem and I\'m grateful.
wishing you the best
buttercup
July 13th, 2024 08:53
Buttercup said:
You don\'t even know me,
but still tried to console me.
We need more people like you,
to change the world to new.
It brought a smile on my face
I know this is just a phase.
Yes my heart survived,
but it can\'t forget the way he lied.
Thank you so much maplespal. It\'s a wonderful poem and I\'m grateful.
wishing you the best
buttercup
July 13th, 2024 08:53
stabbed
Maplespal said:
till the shore shows,
a tear randomly flows.
broken trusted ideals,
remembering how lust feels
the pain will subside,
despite the stabbing,
your heart survived
Many more stabs to the heart will come, strengthen yourself with each one.
July 13th, 2024 08:04
Maplespal said:
till the shore shows,
a tear randomly flows.
broken trusted ideals,
remembering how lust feels
the pain will subside,
despite the stabbing,
your heart survived
Many more stabs to the heart will come, strengthen yourself with each one.
July 13th, 2024 08:04
That day
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful and memorable moment when love was everything. Nicely penned.
June 29th, 2024 15:31
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful and memorable moment when love was everything. Nicely penned.
June 29th, 2024 15:31
Free Child
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of the book/movie, The Outsiders. Great work.
May 30th, 2024 14:12
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of the book/movie, The Outsiders. Great work.
May 30th, 2024 14:12
Kindness in the World
Cassie58 said:
Kindness can make a huge difference. Have a lovely day. I enjoyed your uplifting poem.
May 30th, 2024 06:22
Cassie58 said:
Kindness can make a huge difference. Have a lovely day. I enjoyed your uplifting poem.
May 30th, 2024 06:22
Heart on Fire
Fearless Dreams said:
It sounds beautiful and peacefully violent.
April 10th, 2024 23:09
Fearless Dreams said:
It sounds beautiful and peacefully violent.
April 10th, 2024 23:09
