Comments received on poems by HolesInMyJeans
The Camps
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a literal description of life on the battlefield but well can be a metaphor for life itself. Very nicely rhymed and set in good meter it gives a military appearance. Nicely done
May 29th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a literal description of life on the battlefield but well can be a metaphor for life itself. Very nicely rhymed and set in good meter it gives a military appearance. Nicely done
May 29th, 2025 04:33
The Camps
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write, trying to survive day by day in a horrific situation, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write, trying to survive day by day in a horrific situation, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 02:42
Uniform
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be layers to this poem. Uniform is a most interesting title as it can be a noun and adjective. As the latter we see in the poem that there is no uniformity as in many regimes there is discrimination that can extend to genocide in the complete rejection of others and here even the uniforms are not uniform. Lovely write and quite clever a fave
May 27th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be layers to this poem. Uniform is a most interesting title as it can be a noun and adjective. As the latter we see in the poem that there is no uniformity as in many regimes there is discrimination that can extend to genocide in the complete rejection of others and here even the uniforms are not uniform. Lovely write and quite clever a fave
May 27th, 2025 05:04
Uniform
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write, I believe of a horrific part of our history, that should never be forgotten, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and haunting write, I believe of a horrific part of our history, that should never be forgotten, nicely expressed and written
May 27th, 2025 02:15
Escaping the Nazis
Poetic Licence said:
Although the write refers to a horrific part of history and the persecution a race suffered, it also highlights there should be no descrmination of any sort, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
Although the write refers to a horrific part of history and the persecution a race suffered, it also highlights there should be no descrmination of any sort, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 10:44
Escaping the Nazis
sorenbarrett said:
Such a horrific metaphor for discrimination of any type. This poem in the first person sends power to the message and I can feel the fear and tension.
May 16th, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Such a horrific metaphor for discrimination of any type. This poem in the first person sends power to the message and I can feel the fear and tension.
May 16th, 2025 09:29
Message In A Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 04:48
The Calling Cell
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I knew a church that sold interviews with God and when they were sued for him not showing up they told the judge that they would have to sue God since he was the one that didn\'t show up.
August 10th, 2024 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I knew a church that sold interviews with God and when they were sued for him not showing up they told the judge that they would have to sue God since he was the one that didn\'t show up.
August 10th, 2024 18:04
“Good Morning Heartache. Sit Down”
sorenbarrett said:
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one sentence. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one sentence. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 05:07
An Unmedicated Day
Cassie58 said:
We have to grow our own happiness and that can be mighty difficult at times. Hoping you have better days. I hear you.
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Cassie58 said:
We have to grow our own happiness and that can be mighty difficult at times. Hoping you have better days. I hear you.
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Message In A Bottle
Manslick said:
way too wanting. for fucks sake are you a babe
June 1st, 2024 20:32
Manslick said:
way too wanting. for fucks sake are you a babe
June 1st, 2024 20:32
Message In A Bottle
Cassie58 said:
Your words are much like a prayer. Nicely spoken.
June 1st, 2024 00:35
Cassie58 said:
Your words are much like a prayer. Nicely spoken.
June 1st, 2024 00:35
