Comments received on poems by HolesInMyJeans
Message In A Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very nicely done.
August 11th, 2024 04:48
The Calling Cell
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I knew a church that sold interviews with God and when they were sued for him not showing up they told the judge that they would have to sue God since he was the one that didn\'t show up.
August 10th, 2024 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I knew a church that sold interviews with God and when they were sued for him not showing up they told the judge that they would have to sue God since he was the one that didn\'t show up.
August 10th, 2024 18:04
“Good Morning Heartache. Sit Down”
sorenbarrett said:
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one sentence. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one sentence. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 05:07
An Unmedicated Day
Cassie58 said:
We have to grow our own happiness and that can be mighty difficult at times. Hoping you have better days. I hear you.
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Cassie58 said:
We have to grow our own happiness and that can be mighty difficult at times. Hoping you have better days. I hear you.
June 9th, 2024 10:18
Message In A Bottle
Manslick said:
way too wanting. for fucks sake are you a babe
June 1st, 2024 20:32
Manslick said:
way too wanting. for fucks sake are you a babe
June 1st, 2024 20:32
Message In A Bottle
Cassie58 said:
Your words are much like a prayer. Nicely spoken.
June 1st, 2024 00:35
Cassie58 said:
Your words are much like a prayer. Nicely spoken.
June 1st, 2024 00:35
