Comments received on poems by Rainbow_doom14
Yesterday ^_^
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Well-written with your symbolism and pleasant with your end-rhyming and fairly consistent metre....I think you expressed it very well, from your title on through all your metaphors. It is sad indeed and yet I like it because you communicated it so very well.
December 21st, 2010 23:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Well-written with your symbolism and pleasant with your end-rhyming and fairly consistent metre....I think you expressed it very well, from your title on through all your metaphors. It is sad indeed and yet I like it because you communicated it so very well.
December 21st, 2010 23:35