Comments received on poems by Jopmisunderstood



Silence.. ?
Cheeky Missy said:

Your pic is rather interesting but it did not really affect my perception/perspective on your poem. Your author's comment/opinion on it was very useful. It is a fascinating consideration...I mean, while we might keep that "stiff upper lip" in silence, we may also be dying inside, like when my last boyfriend broke up with me (over the phone) while I silently cried. Your bold assertion and admonition is rather hard, and yet what we are, some of us, inclined to do, lest we be crushed out of existence. Silence in that case is rather deadly. Anyway, for all that, I rather enjoyed it, but it is a sad, rather frightening piece. You've presented it well with your spellings and the title is great.

December 21st, 2010 23:50

Silence.. ?
Jopmisunderstood said:

plz dont look at my pic and think oh my god an emo just look at the poem thank you

December 21st, 2010 17:45