Comments received on poems by NDOU ROLIVHUWA
A love for stone
Poetic Licence said:
Filled with love and emotion for someone, maybe it\'s time to tell them, nicely expressed
March 2nd, 2025 15:02
Poetic Licence said:
Filled with love and emotion for someone, maybe it\'s time to tell them, nicely expressed
March 2nd, 2025 15:02
A love for stone
sorenbarrett said:
It is most difficult living with a fantasy that is never confirmed and all that is needed is to reach out and ask. The worst is rejection and the best fulfillment. This poem speaks of all the emotion of passion and blooming love that is unrequited. Good rhyme helps the mood and the meter is good as well. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is most difficult living with a fantasy that is never confirmed and all that is needed is to reach out and ask. The worst is rejection and the best fulfillment. This poem speaks of all the emotion of passion and blooming love that is unrequited. Good rhyme helps the mood and the meter is good as well. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 14:59
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely written.
August 9th, 2024 18:08
sorenbarrett said:
I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely written.
August 9th, 2024 18:08
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely written.
August 9th, 2024 18:08
sorenbarrett said:
I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely written.
August 9th, 2024 18:08
A Mother\'s Devotion
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful tribute to a mother. No purer love that that of a mother.
July 26th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful tribute to a mother. No purer love that that of a mother.
July 26th, 2024 06:03
Happiness is a choice
sorenbarrett said:
A true message indeed. Happiness is our choice and ours alone. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
A true message indeed. Happiness is our choice and ours alone. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 06:25
Happiness is a choice
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Our heart\'s sweet toil.\" Magic write!
July 22nd, 2024 22:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Our heart\'s sweet toil.\" Magic write!
July 22nd, 2024 22:47
Her last words
Neilton said:
It certainly takes courage to talk about such a vulnerable moment ! Impressive work!
June 25th, 2024 08:25
Neilton said:
It certainly takes courage to talk about such a vulnerable moment ! Impressive work!
June 25th, 2024 08:25
The Transient Allure of Fame
Thomas W Case said:
Absolutely. You nailed it. Great work.
June 2nd, 2024 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
Absolutely. You nailed it. Great work.
June 2nd, 2024 07:53
A mother\'s love beyond compare
mvvenkataraman said:
A classic poem with perfect rhyme,
These poems soothe the mind finely,
The subject itself is damn noble,
And the words are indeed mesmerizing,
May God get you a permanent access,
To the internet at the earliest,
All the best and I pray for you
And also for your mother truly !
May 28th, 2024 05:15
mvvenkataraman said:
A classic poem with perfect rhyme,
These poems soothe the mind finely,
The subject itself is damn noble,
And the words are indeed mesmerizing,
May God get you a permanent access,
To the internet at the earliest,
All the best and I pray for you
And also for your mother truly !
May 28th, 2024 05:15
