Comments received on poems by dandelion.drafts
Red Riding Hood
MA-Q said:
This was a wonderful read. It evoked the thought of the hero\'s journey. Especially, the Arthurian legend, in which every knight has to enter the forest in the place that is darkest for them. And so they scatter, individually seeking out their own treasure through the path they most fear.
Your poem is delightful.
July 9th, 2024 20:49
MA-Q said:
This was a wonderful read. It evoked the thought of the hero\'s journey. Especially, the Arthurian legend, in which every knight has to enter the forest in the place that is darkest for them. And so they scatter, individually seeking out their own treasure through the path they most fear.
Your poem is delightful.
July 9th, 2024 20:49
Red Riding Hood
MA-Q said:
This was a wonderful read. It evoked the thought of the hero\'s journey. Especially, the Arthurian legend, in which every knight has to enter the forest in the place that is darkest for them. And so they scatter, individually seeking out their own treasure through the path they most fear.
Your poem is delightful.
July 9th, 2024 20:49
MA-Q said:
This was a wonderful read. It evoked the thought of the hero\'s journey. Especially, the Arthurian legend, in which every knight has to enter the forest in the place that is darkest for them. And so they scatter, individually seeking out their own treasure through the path they most fear.
Your poem is delightful.
July 9th, 2024 20:49
Roommate Situations (TW: self harm)
MLHnow said:
Wow! Love serious story poems!
June 20th, 2024 16:07
MLHnow said:
Wow! Love serious story poems!
June 20th, 2024 16:07
The Texture of Mud
peto said:
You are a talented writer
So much more here than the title suggests
So visual I felt I was walking the trail with you
Enjoyed
June 7th, 2024 01:11
peto said:
You are a talented writer
So much more here than the title suggests
So visual I felt I was walking the trail with you
Enjoyed
June 7th, 2024 01:11
A Cordial Invitation to Exchange Tea and Pleasantries
peto said:
Magical write of an emotional journey
It takes guts for such self inventory
Respect
June 5th, 2024 06:48
peto said:
Magical write of an emotional journey
It takes guts for such self inventory
Respect
June 5th, 2024 06:48
Ghosts Don\'t Respect Eviction Notices
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... what a journey that was! your words just took too a place drop down in my soul! I\'ve written a long time ago about have tea with my demons but what you have done is truly magnificent for me!
Honestly can\'t thank you enough, the breath I took right at the end. Felt like I\'d let go of something known, yet unknown!
If this was just fantastic or something! Still a amazing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
May 18th, 2024 15:51
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... what a journey that was! your words just took too a place drop down in my soul! I\'ve written a long time ago about have tea with my demons but what you have done is truly magnificent for me!
Honestly can\'t thank you enough, the breath I took right at the end. Felt like I\'d let go of something known, yet unknown!
If this was just fantastic or something! Still a amazing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
May 18th, 2024 15:51
Weeds And Other Such Things
Doggerel Dave said:
A little information about yourself - on your profile page for starters and then possibly something more here would be helpful..... or are you already moving on?
May 17th, 2024 20:45
Doggerel Dave said:
A little information about yourself - on your profile page for starters and then possibly something more here would be helpful..... or are you already moving on?
May 17th, 2024 20:45
