Comments received on poems by Beatrix M
Garden of Chilies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully descriptive and captures the moment beautifully! The juxtaposition of heated passion with the cold unease of winter…brilliant. Well done!
October 22nd, 2024 07:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully descriptive and captures the moment beautifully! The juxtaposition of heated passion with the cold unease of winter…brilliant. Well done!
October 22nd, 2024 07:01
Statuesque Statuette Statue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written with great word choice. Loved it
August 17th, 2024 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written with great word choice. Loved it
August 17th, 2024 16:14
Letter From The Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy and dark a plea for forgiveness for betrayal and treachery. Gothic in nature. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy and dark a plea for forgiveness for betrayal and treachery. Gothic in nature. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:29
Under the Mausoleum Door
sorenbarrett said:
Fine words here leaving a gothic feel to a dark poem. I loved the last line. \"A rosary of bones I kiss\" what an image. \"
August 10th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Fine words here leaving a gothic feel to a dark poem. I loved the last line. \"A rosary of bones I kiss\" what an image. \"
August 10th, 2024 06:32
Axiomatic Sliver
sorenbarrett said:
Very metaphoric this write. its comments on sexuality and purity buried beneath metaphor. Nicely written it shines being highly polished.
August 8th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Very metaphoric this write. its comments on sexuality and purity buried beneath metaphor. Nicely written it shines being highly polished.
August 8th, 2024 07:03
Queen Tore Flesh From Bone
sorenbarrett said:
I once found myself in an obsidian field and gathered several shards. A most interesting read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
I once found myself in an obsidian field and gathered several shards. A most interesting read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:50
Rubicon Prophecy
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like I have met this person before. Some people just stand out. A most interesting read.
July 31st, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like I have met this person before. Some people just stand out. A most interesting read.
July 31st, 2024 06:15
Judge Meet Executioner
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if nearly all those
“Christians” are
Mistaken?
And “Christ” is a symbol of
Awakened imagination?
What if all those “Luciferians”
Are mistaken
And “Lucifer”
Is our
Psychological trainer
Leading us to awaken
Through the tests of
Temptation?
May 26th, 2024 01:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if nearly all those
“Christians” are
Mistaken?
And “Christ” is a symbol of
Awakened imagination?
What if all those “Luciferians”
Are mistaken
And “Lucifer”
Is our
Psychological trainer
Leading us to awaken
Through the tests of
Temptation?
May 26th, 2024 01:45
I Am A Poe Hit
2781 said:
Who gives songs in the night; Who teaches us more than the beasts of the earth, And makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
May 23rd, 2024 06:15
2781 said:
Who gives songs in the night; Who teaches us more than the beasts of the earth, And makes us wiser than the fowls of heaven?
May 23rd, 2024 06:15
Sarah Origin
jarcher54 said:
Your narrative is spot on... like you have personal knowledge? \"Patient 379, are you ready for the ride?\" reads so authentic!
May 18th, 2024 22:00
jarcher54 said:
Your narrative is spot on... like you have personal knowledge? \"Patient 379, are you ready for the ride?\" reads so authentic!
May 18th, 2024 22:00
Sarah Origin
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... I\'ve written a few gothic pieces but I can\'t keep it going without repeating myself. I see an epic coming together here! mom and dad rictus... shiver!
May 18th, 2024 21:58
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... I\'ve written a few gothic pieces but I can\'t keep it going without repeating myself. I see an epic coming together here! mom and dad rictus... shiver!
May 18th, 2024 21:58
