Comments received on poems by R. Gordon Zyne
I EMBRACE MY FAITH LIKE A DOG WITH A BONE
sorenbarrett said:
This reads like a song with the chorus and I can hear it sing
August 26th, 2024 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
This reads like a song with the chorus and I can hear it sing
August 26th, 2024 09:23
GLASS AMNESIA BLOCKS THE RAYS OF THE SUN
sorenbarrett said:
Several great lines in this poem of destruction. It paints a picture of hate, indifference and gloom. Powerful images and metaphors fill its lines nicely done
August 25th, 2024 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Several great lines in this poem of destruction. It paints a picture of hate, indifference and gloom. Powerful images and metaphors fill its lines nicely done
August 25th, 2024 10:45
PEBBLE IN MY SHOE
sorenbarrett said:
Irritations are part of life it is what you do about them that counts. I liked the idea of putting it in the fish tank. Nicely done
August 20th, 2024 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
Irritations are part of life it is what you do about them that counts. I liked the idea of putting it in the fish tank. Nicely done
August 20th, 2024 17:50
THE EGG
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor in this poem. I would hope that we are all good not rotten eggs. Fun read.
August 11th, 2024 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor in this poem. I would hope that we are all good not rotten eggs. Fun read.
August 11th, 2024 14:42
UKRAINE SPRING
rengoku said:
i am part Ukrainian,actually , and it is so hard to see my people suffer like this
July 10th, 2024 22:52
rengoku said:
i am part Ukrainian,actually , and it is so hard to see my people suffer like this
July 10th, 2024 22:52
THE COMING DARK AGE
poetryismusic said:
This poem really captures the horror of our reality and future. I especially liked this part:
\"The poets write in binary, the lovers touch through glass,\"
July 8th, 2024 11:06
poetryismusic said:
This poem really captures the horror of our reality and future. I especially liked this part:
\"The poets write in binary, the lovers touch through glass,\"
July 8th, 2024 11:06
THE LOCKSMITH
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting?
O grave, where is thy victory?
July 8th, 2024 09:06
2781 said:
O death, where is thy sting?
O grave, where is thy victory?
July 8th, 2024 09:06
THE COMING DARK AGE
Doggerel Dave said:
Prescient and grim.
Unplug? Chances?
Enjoyed the irony spread evenly through your piece.
\"The dark age is here, and it is bright,\"
July 7th, 2024 16:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Prescient and grim.
Unplug? Chances?
Enjoyed the irony spread evenly through your piece.
\"The dark age is here, and it is bright,\"
July 7th, 2024 16:39
THE COMING DARK AGE
2781 said:
The remant shall return, even the remnant of Jacob, unto the mighty God.
July 7th, 2024 10:15
2781 said:
The remant shall return, even the remnant of Jacob, unto the mighty God.
July 7th, 2024 10:15
THE COMING DARK AGE
R. Gordon Zyne said:
Thank you so much, Naina, for your comments and thoughts.
July 7th, 2024 07:17
R. Gordon Zyne said:
Thank you so much, Naina, for your comments and thoughts.
July 7th, 2024 07:17
THE COMING DARK AGE
Naina Pandey said:
The best thing I\'ve read today! You\'ve beautifully and accurately described the reality of today, but of course it being the reality, is the saddest thing in itself.
\"The dark age is here, and it is bright,
too bright to see the stars,
too loud to hear the whispers
of the earth beneath our feet,
too fast to catch our breath.\".... ! đź’Ż
July 7th, 2024 06:54
Naina Pandey said:
The best thing I\'ve read today! You\'ve beautifully and accurately described the reality of today, but of course it being the reality, is the saddest thing in itself.
\"The dark age is here, and it is bright,
too bright to see the stars,
too loud to hear the whispers
of the earth beneath our feet,
too fast to catch our breath.\".... ! đź’Ż
July 7th, 2024 06:54
HELL IS AN EMPTY SPACE
Parisab said:
So Grace lives in “hell” That’s hopeful-inspiring message …
July 4th, 2024 17:27
Parisab said:
So Grace lives in “hell” That’s hopeful-inspiring message …
July 4th, 2024 17:27
MAGRITTE AND DALI SHARED A URINAL
aDarkerMind said:
in a word........
.............superb!
June 16th, 2024 12:35
aDarkerMind said:
in a word........
.............superb!
June 16th, 2024 12:35
HER MIND IS A BUTTERNUT SQUASH
Bibekanand \'Agyat\' said:
Beautifully and profoundly themed
June 13th, 2024 05:50
Bibekanand \'Agyat\' said:
Beautifully and profoundly themed
June 13th, 2024 05:50
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