Comments received on poems by R. Gordon Zyne



Grandma at the Stove
Cassie58 said:

Grandma is a trooper. Just gets on with life as best she can. Heart of gold. Salt of the earth. Reminded me of London Grandmas. Love this poem. So well written. Wonderful detail.

December 14th, 2024 14:54

Grandma at the Stove
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 14th, 2024 14:37

The Thorn
Tony36 said:

Excellent

December 13th, 2024 09:10

The Thorn
2781 said:

Good advice.

December 13th, 2024 07:49

The Light and the Pain
Cassie58 said:

Beautiful poetry. Light and dark go hand in hand. We need both. The pain, I think we can all do without.

December 6th, 2024 01:37

The Light and the Pain
arqios said:

They say that light bends, that should be a good thing, right? And as for companionable pain, now that’s something familiarly chronic!

December 5th, 2024 21:24

Remember the Black Death
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 2nd, 2024 10:54

The Path of Becoming
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 28th, 2024 08:39

Still in the Fight
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 28th, 2024 08:17

The Edge of Truth
rin said:

Truth is something that changes depending on a person\'s bias.
Only the facts are correct, and the truth may be incorrect.

November 25th, 2024 02:30

The Edge of Truth
2781 said:

I also read somewhere that it was sharper than any two-edged sword, piercing to the division of soul and spirit, of joints and of marrow, and discerning the thoughts and intentions of the heart.

Your right though.

November 24th, 2024 08:04

The Flood
Doggerel Dave said:

Flooding and subsequent loss is an experience of many now. You made the account of a personal journey very real, the end not \'happy ever after\' but a relief and very satisfying. Thanks for that.

November 23rd, 2024 17:47

Haiku - from Hold the Darkness Close
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, RG You might enjoy this publication
https://www.theheronsnest.com/

November 22nd, 2024 11:39

Haiku - from Hold the Darkness Close
Tony36 said:

L9ve them all

November 22nd, 2024 10:41

Haiku - from Hold the Darkness Close
Demar Desu said:

Number 21 is a banger

November 22nd, 2024 07:35

Girl on the Twelfth Floor
Caring dove said:

Yeah , some people can make us feel invisible , unnoticed , not interesting etc . Difficult way to feel I guess , sometimes


November 21st, 2024 16:47

A Song for Broken Souls
MDStone said:

Excellent! Well written, vivid imagery, a poem you can feel and not just read. A message that needs to be heard and understood. Thanks for sharing with us.

November 18th, 2024 06:51

This Pain
2781 said:

Who heals all our diseases:

November 16th, 2024 07:01

Inward Journey
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 24th, 2024 07:48

Subway Refrain
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 22nd, 2024 09:48

Walk in the Pain of Others
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 20th, 2024 12:58

God\'s the Poet of the Universe
Tony36 said:

Awesome

October 13th, 2024 15:54

Lies
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 10th, 2024 12:41

Haiku - October 5, 2024
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 5th, 2024 12:27

Haiku - October 5, 2024
2781 said:

Behold, I make all things new.

October 5th, 2024 10:40

Haiku - September 30, 2024
Tony36 said:

Excellent

September 30th, 2024 09:29

GRACE IS A TROUBLEMAKER
2781 said:

Which say to the seers, See not; and to the prophets, Prophesy not unto us right things, speak unto us smooth things, prophesy deceits:

September 29th, 2024 08:50

AT THE END OF THE CITY\'S GUTS
2781 said:

I\'ll drink to that.

August 29th, 2024 07:43

I EMBRACE MY FAITH LIKE A DOG WITH A BONE
sorenbarrett said:

This reads like a song with the chorus and I can hear it sing

August 26th, 2024 09:23

GLASS AMNESIA BLOCKS THE RAYS OF THE SUN
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 25th, 2024 19:43

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