Comments received on poems by Saleh Ben Saleh
A game no one can play
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with such a great message. Love is not a game as many think or paint in ink. So nicely the words were said no one should be offended. Sorry for the little rant it just seemed to com out.
August 25th, 2024 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with such a great message. Love is not a game as many think or paint in ink. So nicely the words were said no one should be offended. Sorry for the little rant it just seemed to com out.
August 25th, 2024 11:01
My sweet Canary
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a cherished pet. I have had several pets in the past that became close to my heart and I felt were part of my soul. Very nicely written.
August 20th, 2024 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a cherished pet. I have had several pets in the past that became close to my heart and I felt were part of my soul. Very nicely written.
August 20th, 2024 15:28
My sweet Canary
Cassie58 said:
The caged bird. My Uncle George had a canary called Pippy. As a seven year old I realized they had something in common. George was confined to a wheelchair and Pippy to his cage. I knew at that age, a bird is born to fly. This is a beautiful poem Saleh. Thank you for the memories.
August 20th, 2024 14:29
Cassie58 said:
The caged bird. My Uncle George had a canary called Pippy. As a seven year old I realized they had something in common. George was confined to a wheelchair and Pippy to his cage. I knew at that age, a bird is born to fly. This is a beautiful poem Saleh. Thank you for the memories.
August 20th, 2024 14:29
A mighty ship, Titanic
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure if I should call this a tribute but at least a memory now buried at sea. Well written
August 18th, 2024 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure if I should call this a tribute but at least a memory now buried at sea. Well written
August 18th, 2024 12:36
Poets & Words
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line \"And no drought is harsh enough,
to dry a poets well.\" Very nice.
August 16th, 2024 18:05
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line \"And no drought is harsh enough,
to dry a poets well.\" Very nice.
August 16th, 2024 18:05
A stranger in foreign lands
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and good read.
August 14th, 2024 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and good read.
August 14th, 2024 10:43
The Silent Giant
Cassie58 said:
Fascinated by mountains and the people who want to conquer their heights. They are driven to reach the top of the world. Beautiful and foreboding. Great work Saleh.
August 13th, 2024 12:33
Cassie58 said:
Fascinated by mountains and the people who want to conquer their heights. They are driven to reach the top of the world. Beautiful and foreboding. Great work Saleh.
August 13th, 2024 12:33
The Silent Giant
sorenbarrett said:
Mountains majesty stands out in this magnificently worded wonder of beauty
August 13th, 2024 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Mountains majesty stands out in this magnificently worded wonder of beauty
August 13th, 2024 08:43
Out of guilt
sorenbarrett said:
This one reads so well and caries its message all the way to the end. Nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
This one reads so well and caries its message all the way to the end. Nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 14:34
Good Deeds
Cassie58 said:
Kindness is such a fine attribute Saleh, and easily remembered too. Not one of us is without sin. Remorse is acknowledging that and hoping we are forgiven for any hurts we have been responsible for. Another fine write from you.
August 11th, 2024 16:42
Cassie58 said:
Kindness is such a fine attribute Saleh, and easily remembered too. Not one of us is without sin. Remorse is acknowledging that and hoping we are forgiven for any hurts we have been responsible for. Another fine write from you.
August 11th, 2024 16:42
Good Deeds
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write or statement of where one stands regarding kindness and ones actions even of regret. Nicely stated.
August 11th, 2024 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write or statement of where one stands regarding kindness and ones actions even of regret. Nicely stated.
August 11th, 2024 14:00
Rosa
Cassie58 said:
The red rose, a symbol of love. Beautifully poetic Saleh. I have a red climbing rose in my garden. It is called Dublin Bay. At the moment it is in full bloom. Happy Saturday.
August 10th, 2024 10:57
Cassie58 said:
The red rose, a symbol of love. Beautifully poetic Saleh. I have a red climbing rose in my garden. It is called Dublin Bay. At the moment it is in full bloom. Happy Saturday.
August 10th, 2024 10:57
Old School Vs Youngblood
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better the energy and enthusiasm of youth or wisdom and treachery of age.
August 8th, 2024 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
Which is better the energy and enthusiasm of youth or wisdom and treachery of age.
August 8th, 2024 08:07
Relationships
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of great flow and meaning
August 7th, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of great flow and meaning
August 7th, 2024 10:05
The truth about War
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message that deserves more readers. Just as in life itself this message of wisdom goes unheeded. Nicely done. Sorry I missed this earlier.
August 7th, 2024 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a message that deserves more readers. Just as in life itself this message of wisdom goes unheeded. Nicely done. Sorry I missed this earlier.
August 7th, 2024 03:47
All people are Gifted
Cassie58 said:
Another fine poem Saleh. Your stanzas filled with wisdom. Your words much enjoyed poet.
August 6th, 2024 23:13
Cassie58 said:
Another fine poem Saleh. Your stanzas filled with wisdom. Your words much enjoyed poet.
August 6th, 2024 23:13
All people are Gifted
sorenbarrett said:
There is always someone better. Humility is the best rout. It is the most realistic. A great write
August 6th, 2024 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
There is always someone better. Humility is the best rout. It is the most realistic. A great write
August 6th, 2024 11:24
The beast within
sorenbarrett said:
Duality of man or at least undesirable aspects of each man. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Duality of man or at least undesirable aspects of each man. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:44
The hummingbird made me wonder
Dan Williams said:
Nice take on one of the amazing things around us if we just take the time to look. You obviously have. Nice work.
August 4th, 2024 23:40
Dan Williams said:
Nice take on one of the amazing things around us if we just take the time to look. You obviously have. Nice work.
August 4th, 2024 23:40
The hummingbird made me wonder
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The hummingbird made me wonder” by Saleh Ben Saleh
Watching the hummingbird sucking up its food is a fascinating sight. The bird is full of confidence and poise. It maintains its posture, staying at the right height and distance from the flower. It beats its wings just to stay on the spot, as a helicopter hovers. It does not barge into the flower, or it will damage it and spoil what it is looking for. Notice how it folds its feet and keeps its body in balance while hovering. A machine can hardly have such grace. As for finding a wife, many birds build nests and wait for a mate, but not all of them are lucky in this. However, like other creatures, they have hope. For it is this that helps to ensure the reproduction of the species. This instinct is hardwired in all species. Soman Ragavan. 4 August, 2024.
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August 4th, 2024 06:11
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “The hummingbird made me wonder” by Saleh Ben Saleh
Watching the hummingbird sucking up its food is a fascinating sight. The bird is full of confidence and poise. It maintains its posture, staying at the right height and distance from the flower. It beats its wings just to stay on the spot, as a helicopter hovers. It does not barge into the flower, or it will damage it and spoil what it is looking for. Notice how it folds its feet and keeps its body in balance while hovering. A machine can hardly have such grace. As for finding a wife, many birds build nests and wait for a mate, but not all of them are lucky in this. However, like other creatures, they have hope. For it is this that helps to ensure the reproduction of the species. This instinct is hardwired in all species. Soman Ragavan. 4 August, 2024.
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August 4th, 2024 06:11
The hummingbird made me wonder
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful little creatures I see different ones and sometimes they come indoors buzzing around from room to room. A delightful poem
August 3rd, 2024 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful little creatures I see different ones and sometimes they come indoors buzzing around from room to room. A delightful poem
August 3rd, 2024 08:56
The hummingbird made me wonder
Cassie58 said:
So very nicely composed. Lovely verses Saleh. The lines flow beautifully. All good wishes.
August 3rd, 2024 08:56
Cassie58 said:
So very nicely composed. Lovely verses Saleh. The lines flow beautifully. All good wishes.
August 3rd, 2024 08:56
The Death of the Albatross
sorenbarrett said:
People are a destructive species and we leave a great deal of trash. A great message to this poem.
August 2nd, 2024 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
People are a destructive species and we leave a great deal of trash. A great message to this poem.
August 2nd, 2024 16:07
The Death of the Albatross
Cassie58 said:
We have much as a species to learn. We haven’t got a clue when it comes to living alongside other species. So much damage done to creatures of the ocean and land as well as our avian friends. Heartfelt words, deeply felt Saleh.
August 2nd, 2024 11:41
Cassie58 said:
We have much as a species to learn. We haven’t got a clue when it comes to living alongside other species. So much damage done to creatures of the ocean and land as well as our avian friends. Heartfelt words, deeply felt Saleh.
August 2nd, 2024 11:41
True Poets should be Proud
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and inspired message here. How many times some catch the meaning of a poem while it sails over the head of others. Yes the rue mark of art is communicating what is inside and others feeling the emotion within. Brilliant!
August 1st, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and inspired message here. How many times some catch the meaning of a poem while it sails over the head of others. Yes the rue mark of art is communicating what is inside and others feeling the emotion within. Brilliant!
August 1st, 2024 07:48
The sweet side of love
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem has several good lines.
July 30th, 2024 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem has several good lines.
July 30th, 2024 19:22
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