Comments received on poems by Saleh Ben Saleh
Who am I
sorenbarrett said:
There was not only a heavieness but a sense of resignation to this poem.
September 25th, 2024 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
There was not only a heavieness but a sense of resignation to this poem.
September 25th, 2024 20:48
Who am I
Cassie58 said:
I felt a heavy weight reading your lines dear Saleh. Life has a habit of throwing pot holes as we journey through. I have always found therapy in penning poetry. Your stanzas are conveyed with much emotion and touched me.
September 25th, 2024 20:20
Cassie58 said:
I felt a heavy weight reading your lines dear Saleh. Life has a habit of throwing pot holes as we journey through. I have always found therapy in penning poetry. Your stanzas are conveyed with much emotion and touched me.
September 25th, 2024 20:20
A world of Deception
Cassie58 said:
Unwise to seek perfection, particularity in others, in a far from perfect world. Fine poetry Saleh. Flows well . Your poetry always a joy to read. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 17:41
Cassie58 said:
Unwise to seek perfection, particularity in others, in a far from perfect world. Fine poetry Saleh. Flows well . Your poetry always a joy to read. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 17:41
A world of Deception
sorenbarrett said:
Loved your rhym scheme in this poem. It was a delight to read.
September 14th, 2024 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Loved your rhym scheme in this poem. It was a delight to read.
September 14th, 2024 11:26
The haven of love
Cassie58 said:
So many images of nature thread through this beautiful poem. Dreamy in content, touches the heart of the reader. Fine stanzas Saleh. Have a wonderful Thursday.
September 12th, 2024 10:21
Cassie58 said:
So many images of nature thread through this beautiful poem. Dreamy in content, touches the heart of the reader. Fine stanzas Saleh. Have a wonderful Thursday.
September 12th, 2024 10:21
I hide my pain (lyrics)
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh, these lyrics are a beautiful expression of darkness and despair. This reader felt your words deeply. The pain is most evident in your chosen words.
September 11th, 2024 14:52
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh, these lyrics are a beautiful expression of darkness and despair. This reader felt your words deeply. The pain is most evident in your chosen words.
September 11th, 2024 14:52
I hide my pain (lyrics)
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad … I’m sorry you feel like that
September 11th, 2024 10:06
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad … I’m sorry you feel like that
September 11th, 2024 10:06
I hide my pain (lyrics)
sorenbarrett said:
A song of desperation and despair iswhat I hear in this poem that is nicely rhymed. Sadness and melencholy with a sense of darkness
September 11th, 2024 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A song of desperation and despair iswhat I hear in this poem that is nicely rhymed. Sadness and melencholy with a sense of darkness
September 11th, 2024 07:49
A stranger in foreign lands
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich tapestry of consciousness memory and existence. Your poem struck a chord.
Many thanks.
September 10th, 2024 08:21
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich tapestry of consciousness memory and existence. Your poem struck a chord.
Many thanks.
September 10th, 2024 08:21
The haven of love
sorenbarrett said:
Very beautiful images in this poem. They stimulate past memories and future dreams. Is well written and flows like a stream down the hill. As it flows it, waters the grass and the flowers until it ends at the lake in the valley. A beautiful poem.
September 9th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very beautiful images in this poem. They stimulate past memories and future dreams. Is well written and flows like a stream down the hill. As it flows it, waters the grass and the flowers until it ends at the lake in the valley. A beautiful poem.
September 9th, 2024 06:30
The beauty of night
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved the night and its splendor. When young I remember being able to see so many stars, before light pollution. your poem speaks to the splendor of the heavens and so speaks to my heart.
September 8th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved the night and its splendor. When young I remember being able to see so many stars, before light pollution. your poem speaks to the splendor of the heavens and so speaks to my heart.
September 8th, 2024 06:05
The beauty of night
Cassie58 said:
For as long as I can remember I have been a star gazer Saleh. There is much to see and ponder on in the black velvet night sky. The silence makes it a perfect experience. Wonderful description in your lines. A poem very much enjoyed dear poet.
September 7th, 2024 11:53
Cassie58 said:
For as long as I can remember I have been a star gazer Saleh. There is much to see and ponder on in the black velvet night sky. The silence makes it a perfect experience. Wonderful description in your lines. A poem very much enjoyed dear poet.
September 7th, 2024 11:53
Exploiting life
Cassie58 said:
Words so nicely conveyed. Much wisdom contained in the lines.
a narrow mind will only end behind an iron gate.
We have one life, one chance to live it and live it well and in my opinion to do so with caring.
Nice work Saleh.
September 6th, 2024 12:28
Cassie58 said:
Words so nicely conveyed. Much wisdom contained in the lines.
a narrow mind will only end behind an iron gate.
We have one life, one chance to live it and live it well and in my opinion to do so with caring.
Nice work Saleh.
September 6th, 2024 12:28
Exploiting life
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom about the passing of life and its stages and how to react in each. Very nicely written with good rhyme and good flow.
September 4th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom about the passing of life and its stages and how to react in each. Very nicely written with good rhyme and good flow.
September 4th, 2024 06:03
The Common Butterfly
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh. I love butterflies too and though they have been scarce in my garden this year, we are beginning to see more of them. They are an absolute delight, as is your beautiful poem. They have a spiritual meaning for me. So delicate and pleasing to see.
September 4th, 2024 04:11
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh. I love butterflies too and though they have been scarce in my garden this year, we are beginning to see more of them. They are an absolute delight, as is your beautiful poem. They have a spiritual meaning for me. So delicate and pleasing to see.
September 4th, 2024 04:11
The Common Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a beautiful animal. I love butterflies. Here I see one with a 66 on its wings, another as big as a a large salad plate and my favorite the iridescent blue. Nicely done
August 31st, 2024 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a beautiful animal. I love butterflies. Here I see one with a 66 on its wings, another as big as a a large salad plate and my favorite the iridescent blue. Nicely done
August 31st, 2024 09:22
Situations
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said and organized in rhyme these sayings of good advice. Each rings true and are so well said
August 30th, 2024 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said and organized in rhyme these sayings of good advice. Each rings true and are so well said
August 30th, 2024 09:44
Life & Death
sorenbarrett said:
A careful construction and organization of rhyme in this beautiful piece. It is truth in poetry
August 30th, 2024 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A careful construction and organization of rhyme in this beautiful piece. It is truth in poetry
August 30th, 2024 08:20
A game no one can play
Dan Williams said:
Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than once. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than once. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:01
A game no one can play
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a powerful and meaningful write Saleh! It really made me think. Loves a game, we cannot play it, or we\'d be played. Then what is love? A dream? Once again; Nice job Saleh, keep up the good work! 🌹
August 25th, 2024 23:16
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Such a powerful and meaningful write Saleh! It really made me think. Loves a game, we cannot play it, or we\'d be played. Then what is love? A dream? Once again; Nice job Saleh, keep up the good work! 🌹
August 25th, 2024 23:16
A game no one can play
Cheeky Missy said:
Playing with matches was forbidden, yet too many of us were either caught in the act or else accidentally found after we\'d toyed with the taboo, burned as they knew we must be.
August 25th, 2024 16:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Playing with matches was forbidden, yet too many of us were either caught in the act or else accidentally found after we\'d toyed with the taboo, burned as they knew we must be.
August 25th, 2024 16:49
A game no one can play
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh, so true love is not a game. You can’t stop or start it at your own choosing. This poem story flows so well and is nicely rhymed. A pleasure to read. Have a wonderful Sunday.
August 25th, 2024 11:21
Cassie58 said:
Dear Saleh, so true love is not a game. You can’t stop or start it at your own choosing. This poem story flows so well and is nicely rhymed. A pleasure to read. Have a wonderful Sunday.
August 25th, 2024 11:21
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