Comments received on poems by Amara Carys
Why I Check My Food
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know your age but this one is incredibly clever and wonderfully cute. The use of Belladonna and Oleander are ingenious while all the while you maintain a great rhyme and wonderful meter. I loved this one that on the one hand sounds so innocent and child like but on the other is written with an adult mastery. Brilliant! A fave
January 30th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know your age but this one is incredibly clever and wonderfully cute. The use of Belladonna and Oleander are ingenious while all the while you maintain a great rhyme and wonderful meter. I loved this one that on the one hand sounds so innocent and child like but on the other is written with an adult mastery. Brilliant! A fave
January 30th, 2026 04:04
Still on No Man\'s Isle
sorenbarrett said:
A well worded poem that speaks to an existential question of who one is and where one stands. Nicely penned
January 30th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A well worded poem that speaks to an existential question of who one is and where one stands. Nicely penned
January 30th, 2026 03:51
No Man’s Isle
sorenbarrett said:
Inside pressures mound up in this write where it seems an explosion is imminent and that scarification as a ritual vents inside turmoil. Nicely written
January 29th, 2026 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Inside pressures mound up in this write where it seems an explosion is imminent and that scarification as a ritual vents inside turmoil. Nicely written
January 29th, 2026 03:08
Wonder
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed reading this again, am sure it was on yesterday, still worth more than one read.
February 4th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed reading this again, am sure it was on yesterday, still worth more than one read.
February 4th, 2025 10:46
Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy questions that have different answers depending who you ask. Well composed in free form it oozes a dissatisfaction with the present state of the world. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy questions that have different answers depending who you ask. Well composed in free form it oozes a dissatisfaction with the present state of the world. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:48
Wonder
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece highlighting the injustices in society that are still a plenty today, everyone has the right to all mentioned but somehow the last line, i am not sure that has ever existed. Really enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:40
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece highlighting the injustices in society that are still a plenty today, everyone has the right to all mentioned but somehow the last line, i am not sure that has ever existed. Really enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:40
Dreams sometimes
Amara Carys said:
thank you so much! your comment is really appreciated and motivating for me!
July 31st, 2024 08:19
Amara Carys said:
thank you so much! your comment is really appreciated and motivating for me!
July 31st, 2024 08:19
Dreams sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
Dream on in beautiful and peaceful slumber. A wonderful thought and a good write
July 29th, 2024 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
Dream on in beautiful and peaceful slumber. A wonderful thought and a good write
July 29th, 2024 13:26
